Copywriting Tutorial: How To Write The Headlines That Don’t SUCK

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  • Copywriting Tips For The 5 Levels of Customer Awareness
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    One of the biggest mistakes a copywriter can make is using the SAME hook and headline for every single audience.
    Think about it: the way you capture the attention of a random scroller-by on Facebook is very different from how you’d present an offer to your most loyal subscribers.
    Today I’m talking about how to write headlines the RIGHT away, based on the 5 Levels of Customer Awareness.
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Komentáře • 175

  • @paulchris9031
    @paulchris9031 Před 2 lety +5

    I've been writing for a while & since I started following you on your social media platforms, I can say my copy has become better. I send my copy to a friend whenever I write one to get a feedback and he says my copy has become CLEARER, DESCRIPTIVE and EMPATHETIC.
    Thank you 😊.

  • @mdirfan-lr5wr
    @mdirfan-lr5wr Před rokem +2

    It's a masterpiece. literally !!!!

  • @Jonkings07
    @Jonkings07 Před 2 lety +5

    The ultimate video where you get to understand all the customer journey, sales funnel, customer awareness. It's been years since I had questions about it and thanks to your video, I finally get it

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  Před 2 lety

      Awesome! Thanks so much for watching!

  • @chrislc267
    @chrislc267 Před 2 lety +4

    I’m actually blown away by how informative this video was. Even down to realizing I never knew how to find those ads on Facebook and how easy it is!

  • @kathleenmukheibir8205
    @kathleenmukheibir8205 Před 4 lety +13

    Watched this specific video now for the first time. I really enjoyed that you took everything you'd said in the first part and applied it in a practical way at the end. It just made everything that much more understandable. I'm really loving your videos! I've learnt a lot from them.

  • @taniyashaikh2500
    @taniyashaikh2500 Před 3 lety +3

    Have been binge watching your content and just wanted to say that I've been a freelance content writer for 3 years completely blind to this whole other world of copy💜 thankyou

  • @vishalinarayanan4340
    @vishalinarayanan4340 Před 4 lety +12

    Just when I was struggling with this... Thank you Alex! You give us such quality content, and I can't thank you enough for all your kind efforts!

  • @sherry143ish
    @sherry143ish Před 3 lety +15

    This is insane! Thank you, Alex. I have been thinking to switch my career, and fortunately, I have come across your videos. I definitely get high when I write something, and you have really given me a nudge to consider and pursue Copywriting! I became an active follower of your videos just in a day's time. Thankful to you

  • @matthewsager925
    @matthewsager925 Před 4 lety +8

    Going through the ad pyramid was VERY helpful!!! Thank you for your in-depth breakdown!

  • @joltofjulia1322
    @joltofjulia1322 Před 4 lety +5

    Printing, laminating, going on wall. Ty!

  • @stupidpopsicle
    @stupidpopsicle Před 3 lety +31

    *5 Level of Customer Awareness*
    01 Totally Unaware - Stories, Secrets & Education
    [ What is that you want them to know? ]
    02 Problem Aware - Pain, Solution, Benefits
    [ What's the problem you want them address? ]
    03 Solution Aware - Social Proof, USP
    [ How are you different/ the best/ trustworthy? ]
    04 Product Aware - Scarcity, Incentive
    [ Why should they act now? ]
    05 Very Aware - Offer
    [ What do you want them to do? ]

  • @mfaizan2792
    @mfaizan2792 Před rokem

    looks like you’ve alex’s been working out!
    boulder shoulders, queen!

  • @wallacebankley3384
    @wallacebankley3384 Před 10 měsíci +1

    Your comments Alex are such an impression of who you are, what a beautiful study, inspiring us Alex Cattoni with you&others

  • @gabriellepelkey4428
    @gabriellepelkey4428 Před rokem +1

    Not me going to buy a lark water bottle after this video 😅 lol i’ve been binging your content the last couple weeks and you’re amazing! Thank you for all the insight 😊

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  Před rokem

      Haha love that! Thanks for watching :)

  • @gaddafayub8603
    @gaddafayub8603 Před 3 lety +4

    On point, the pyramid really makes things easier. Thanks.

  • @snehalkarjodkar934
    @snehalkarjodkar934 Před 4 lety +1

    Thank you. The example of Larq for the pyramid really cleared the concept.

  • @rozaroz5259
    @rozaroz5259 Před 2 lety +1

    ALEX, you're second to none. A HUUUUGE THANKS!

  • @user-we7bm2wp7g
    @user-we7bm2wp7g Před 9 měsíci +1

    Thanks a lot for sharing your idea. Unlike the You Tube ad that interrupted your video - that particular commercial sounded to good to be true

  • @manajbanerjee8615
    @manajbanerjee8615 Před 3 lety +1

    Unexpected hook at the climax...very useful. 💯👍👍👍👍👍

  • @christiansanchez1578
    @christiansanchez1578 Před rokem +1

    This is very helpful! I should use this headline formula for sure ! Thank you Alex !

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  Před rokem +1

      Thanks for watching :)

    • @christiansanchez1578
      @christiansanchez1578 Před rokem

      No!! THANK YOU!!!!!!! Right now I’m running ads but I do see now I know why copywriting skills are so important!!!! That’s why my goal is develop this skill!!

  • @MisterLuckyLP
    @MisterLuckyLP Před 2 lety

    Yo I love the E-Mail Copy you´ve sent me. Puts a smile on my face and I can hear your voice when I´m reading it, especially with the personalized "Tobi" 3 times. haha Genius.

  • @andrinoel3487
    @andrinoel3487 Před 4 lety +1

    Best way to find the level of people I can target and how the different types of copy should be. Thank you

  • @upsurgeagency3593
    @upsurgeagency3593 Před 2 lety +1

    This was most helpful. You are a Godsend.

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  Před 2 lety

      I'm glad it was helpful! Thanks for watching :)

  • @93JMN
    @93JMN Před 2 lety +5

    Alex, you are so helpful! I'm just dipping my toe into copywriting and I'm so glad my friend told me about you. I suppose I'm a solution-aware member of your copy posse so wondering if any viewers can speak to whether or not Alex's CZcams videos alone are enough to build a strong copywriting client portfolio or whether we need more education and training? Thanks from a future copywriter :)

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  Před 2 lety +2

      Well I'm not a viewer, but I can certainly give you my thoughts! ;) I receive tons of messages from my CZcams community members telling me about the success stories they've had from watching these videos ALONE. So you absolutely can start and build a successful business from just watching these free tutorials.
      My paid content and courses are for 2 type of people:
      A.) people who need and/or desire a bit more guidance, direction & coaching as they get started.
      B.) people who want to receive feedback & critique on their work and join my community for it's other perks (such as job board access, credibility, access to high-level entrepreneurs, etc.)
      Hope that helps! :) GOOD LUCK

    • @93JMN
      @93JMN Před 2 lety +1

      @Alex Cattoni Ahh you responded! I can't imagine how busy you are so thank you so much for responding to a comment I left on a year old video! 😄 This is super helpful! You seem genuinely here to help us newbies shift into an exciting career and I, like so many others are so grateful to you 🥰❤ I also read you're a fellow Canadian so hello from Vancouver! ☺️

  • @duncanmacdonald9320
    @duncanmacdonald9320 Před rokem +2

    This is so helpful, clear and direct. I was totally unaware I had a problem with my writing style🙂

  • @ashleyburks4639
    @ashleyburks4639 Před 3 lety +2

    Loved this video so gosh darn much. Thankyou so very much strong intelligent lady/woman. Much love.

  • @wallacebankley3384
    @wallacebankley3384 Před 3 měsíci

    In case you missed it..Aside from this outstanding video Alex is the best copywriting ..2022 Digital MARKETING OF THE YEAR and most recent being awarded named Alex Cattoni GAME CHANGER INSPIRATION AWARD 2024

  • @loliejudecopy
    @loliejudecopy Před rokem

    Headlines are the hardest part for me to write. Thanks for sharing this! I've just downloaded the pyramid and can't wait to use it!!

  • @nourishedattiffanys
    @nourishedattiffanys Před 3 lety +1

    Wow, around 4:00 you unlocked something I never understood all these years in working in entrepreneurship. Thank you!

  • @sidekick3rida
    @sidekick3rida Před 8 měsíci +1

    USP = unique selling point

  • @compassionatepeercounseling
    @compassionatepeercounseling Před 6 měsíci +2

    Thank you Alex! The breakdown helped me understand how important it is for me to know exactly who I'm writing to and their stage they're in.

  • @16-alika2
    @16-alika2 Před 6 měsíci

    It's very helpful! Now I'm already get an inspiration, thank you, Alex❤

  • @superoverdrive8628
    @superoverdrive8628 Před 4 lety +5

    Very very helpful video Alex! I would love to see more of this type of over the shoulder videos 😀 One thing I cant seem to find is a good video on how to do a copywriting customer interview call, the actual call recorded to show how it works

  • @brunomushotoku1150
    @brunomushotoku1150 Před 3 lety +1

    Thank you very much. Ready to receive your guideline.

  • @hindu98220
    @hindu98220 Před 4 lety +3

    Thank you Alex ... I really need it.
    Don't disturb me i am watching your smiling important video

  • @rachelandersen4211
    @rachelandersen4211 Před 3 lety +2

    This was super helpful Thank you!!

  • @teoteodora5739
    @teoteodora5739 Před 4 lety +2

    This makes sooo much sense. Thank you!!

  • @user-di9fm3fj6t
    @user-di9fm3fj6t Před 3 lety +1

    Give transcribe version of your video in description with link would be better

  • @paulbacchus1015
    @paulbacchus1015 Před 4 lety +1

    Great, this is 100% helpful.
    Paul Bacchus esq

  • @ptnk-nguyenanhkhoi6652
    @ptnk-nguyenanhkhoi6652 Před rokem +1

    I really love the way you share and your energy. Thanks a lot, you've been very helpful

  • @bodenecruickshank5855
    @bodenecruickshank5855 Před 2 lety +1

    God you're a gem. Thank you for a lack of a better phrase.
    How would you manage content to a mix of an audience? You may have some new followers/ email subscribers that are totally unaware as well as existing product aware customers....

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  Před 2 lety +1

      Definitely! I like to follow a rotation when it comes to content to make sure I'm frequently bringing up my offers (but not too much). You can check out this video for my strategies: czcams.com/video/F17W3e04fY0/video.html

    • @bodenecruickshank5855
      @bodenecruickshank5855 Před 2 lety

      @@AlexCattoni Thanks Queen!!!!!!

  • @ulisesruiz7099
    @ulisesruiz7099 Před dnem

    1:40 Costumer awarness, eugene schwartz author of breakthrough advertising

  • @renatalewis6499
    @renatalewis6499 Před 4 lety +1

    Always majoring on giving value ! #contentqueen ! Loved this thanks for the tips❤

  • @thegemstonegallerytgg
    @thegemstonegallerytgg Před 4 lety +1

    Great Video ... keep it up ...your videos are so valuable for us..

  • @georgepaul7173
    @georgepaul7173 Před 4 lety +4

    Great visualization! It's been some since I read Breakthrough Advertising, after watching your video I want to pick it up one more time! Although a bit advance, this is one of the best books on copywriting. Eugene Schwartz also speaks about five different degrees of market sophistication and how to adapt your headline and copy accordingly. Could that be a future video someday? ;) I would love to see a similar visualization about it!

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  Před 4 lety +1

      I have done a video on it here! czcams.com/video/wiOKBMjDugM/video.html

    • @georgepaul7173
      @georgepaul7173 Před 4 lety

      @@AlexCattoni Awesome, thank you!

  • @user-ie3mg8mc9u
    @user-ie3mg8mc9u Před 7 měsíci +1

    Hey Alex!
    Could you make a vid how to write a winning Ebook? Actually in what order? Thank you!

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  Před 7 měsíci

      Unfortunately writing E-books is not my area of expertise!

  • @rhofiatulbadriyah4759
    @rhofiatulbadriyah4759 Před 3 lety +1

    thank you alex ! this is so useful :3

  • @farazmubeen2739
    @farazmubeen2739 Před 3 lety +1

    Awesome 👍

  • @manojkumarawasare3572
    @manojkumarawasare3572 Před 2 lety

    Hi Alex. Nice video. "You are a great guns"

  • @tuskerdaily3161
    @tuskerdaily3161 Před 3 lety

    Thanks for the videos. While I believe I write well, the one thing I absolutely suck at is writing a headline. Luckily, I found your videos and they're helping me understand that my mindset must be a wee bit different than it is when writing a 1,000-word article.

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  Před 3 lety

      Yes! So glad it's been helpful for you!

  • @ollitikkanen
    @ollitikkanen Před 2 lety +1

    Thanks Alex. Great videos!

  • @sagittariansage_2271
    @sagittariansage_2271 Před 2 lety

    This is gold. Thanks Alex!

  • @nolifenoboxing
    @nolifenoboxing Před 2 lety +1

    Brilliant

  • @jaydubriya8149
    @jaydubriya8149 Před 4 lety +3

    Can you make video on powerfull words and psychology behind it

  • @farooqazamjee1625
    @farooqazamjee1625 Před 3 lety

    very informative it will help a lot in doing the copy writing thing.

  • @jakefrosher
    @jakefrosher Před 6 měsíci +1

    Thanks❤

  • @michaelle5722
    @michaelle5722 Před 4 lety +1

    I wonder how you can get nice hair colour like that when quarantine...
    But awesome video like aways. I like the sneak peek from Monday

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  Před 4 lety

      hehehe right? Thank you!!! As for my hair, luckily it's stayed like this. lol.

  • @donnanovander7868
    @donnanovander7868 Před 4 lety +1

    This is a great exercise. Thank you so much.

  • @maryannegwuchukwu3285
    @maryannegwuchukwu3285 Před 2 lety +1

    Thank you very much Alex. I loved your ❤️❤️tutorials from the first time I came across them. You have really increased my desire for copywriting. My actual career is to be an economist but I believe that it wouldn't hurt anyone to learn both, am I right?😅😅

  • @kimyattasatchel213
    @kimyattasatchel213 Před 3 lety +1

    I can not Express just how amazing you are!!! I thank THE LORD for you😊

  • @thecopymap4605
    @thecopymap4605 Před 3 lety +1

    Hey beautiful! amazing video! can it be a mix between problem and solution aware?

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  Před 3 lety

      Hmmm, there may be a transition. But you'll find that if you really break it down, you'll land in one or the other!

  • @JayPendragonWatches
    @JayPendragonWatches Před 4 lety

    This was AMAZING! Thank you for so much free advice 💚✨

  • @gennylittletreats148
    @gennylittletreats148 Před 4 lety

    gold nugget! thx so much Alex

  • @thefitmoves
    @thefitmoves Před 2 lety

    Wow!! So helpful!!!!

  • @dhanashreegadhikar8281

    This is so helpful
    Thankyou so much!❤

  • @TerryGuzmanMartinez
    @TerryGuzmanMartinez Před 4 lety +1

    Thank you. I guess it will be very useful :))

  • @shakhzodmatyozov6190
    @shakhzodmatyozov6190 Před 4 lety

    Woww.... thanks for all-the info you share for FREE ; brilliant info that i really need

  • @rajkawel
    @rajkawel Před 4 lety +1

    The Pyramid really good

  • @vladislavvladimirov1002
    @vladislavvladimirov1002 Před 4 lety +4

    When you realize, that you already doing it without knowing! :D

  • @sivakumar6657
    @sivakumar6657 Před 4 lety

    Thank You Alex, Excellent Video

  • @user-wn9hl7qo9r
    @user-wn9hl7qo9r Před rokem

    thank you so much alex but can you direct me on how to access your tutorials for complete begginners like i dont even know which tools to download and where to practice my writing skills

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  Před rokem

      Hey! This playlist is a great place to start!
      czcams.com/play/PL56Rdybt5tTTiC3ZLIqAPIn_xtnnD243y.html

  • @2ksy462
    @2ksy462 Před 4 lety

    Thank you so much Alex!

  • @chiamakaEmeti
    @chiamakaEmeti Před 3 lety

    Thanks so much Alex for the video, I know I have a flair for writing but don't really know how to go about it.....I really need help

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  Před 3 lety

      Awesome! Well you're in the right place to learn :)

  • @blakeclowser9987
    @blakeclowser9987 Před 4 lety +1

    Hey Alex Could you possibly made a more developed video on writing formula (for example G Halbert as you know would often write about one problem and rewrite it multiple times over to create a huge problem ie. his famous water add he converted not having filter water to cancer ... genius

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  Před 4 lety

      Hmm cool idea! I’ll noodle on this! Thanks!!

  • @MozammilMozammil-zq2wt

    Soooo informational video great

  • @mistpillar27
    @mistpillar27 Před 4 lety

    Beautiful, charming and successful .. You're a hidden gem. I hope I will get to meet you one day :)

  • @happysoul8281
    @happysoul8281 Před 3 lety

    Alex, I love you, lady! :))))))))) You are taking me close to my fullest happiness:)

  • @ketevannatsvlichvili5408
    @ketevannatsvlichvili5408 Před 4 lety +1

    This is an amazing video and I loved the over-the-shoulder part. It 100% made me question my water bottle and I may or may not be buying it. THANk YOU!

  • @bibipop3190
    @bibipop3190 Před 3 lety

    Thanks you for your content 😃

  • @glitterjutsu9291
    @glitterjutsu9291 Před 4 lety +1

    Great video! How do you know the customer’s’ awareness level about a brand or a product. Are there research tools that you use in your work?

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  Před 4 lety +2

      This generally just takes practice and study!

  • @anthony..1801
    @anthony..1801 Před 4 lety +1

    Good content

  • @__.rawat.ankit.__6637
    @__.rawat.ankit.__6637 Před 4 lety +3

    💛Learning from a beautiful girl...
    Makes learning more interesting.😄😄

  • @ieattunaeveryday
    @ieattunaeveryday Před 2 lety +1

    Crap. Now I want that water bottle.

  • @insertmusichere
    @insertmusichere Před 3 lety

    I’m interested to learn how to segment and target audiences into those levels. What measures do you use? For a Facebook ad, a Facebook pixel could help you determine whether someone is level 1-3 vs 3-5 but how to drill down further?

    • @thecopyposse5375
      @thecopyposse5375 Před 3 lety

      Great question! The type of product you're offering will definitely help you distinguish between a 1-3 or a 3-5 level. Chances are slim that you'll be writing for someone in the 1-2 level unless your product is a relatively new or breakthrough concept!

  • @abdullahnaveed4834
    @abdullahnaveed4834 Před 4 lety

    V helpful TYSM

  • @guchi1550
    @guchi1550 Před 2 lety

    I didn't understand what are you most? Beautiful honey or copywriter professor I'm confused 😕 because it is distracted me 😑 & I want to be a good copywriter. 🙄

  • @jaceyashcraft
    @jaceyashcraft Před 4 lety +1

    Hey Alex! I love this. Super informative. I’m looking to be a copywriter because I love writing and marketing and find this to be a way to marry the two. I actually have a question. I’m looking to get started now! Is a website required to get clients or do you think just a LinkedIn profile would be enough? Tons of people say different things and I’d love your take on this.

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  Před 4 lety

      Hey Jacey! I don't think it's needed. I didn't have a website when I started :) Use your social profiles to showcase as much authority as you can and get super specific on how you can help brands! I recommend you watch this playlist: czcams.com/video/J-DrYTgZ56k/video.html Good luck girl!

    • @jaceyashcraft
      @jaceyashcraft Před 4 lety +1

      Alex Cattoni Thank you so much for the quick response and free resources. It means a lot to me! Keep doing what you’re doing! This channel is awesome and extremely helpful.

  • @MontasserAH
    @MontasserAH Před 2 lety

    Hi Alex, and thank you for this great video.
    Question: what do I do when I want to address multiple levels of audience?

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  Před 2 lety +2

      A few options. You could run separate Ads and have different landing pages, etc. that you would segment different audiences (recommended). Or you can address both levels in your copy - just be aware that it might be more difficult to really hone in.

  • @LonleyCopy
    @LonleyCopy Před 2 lety +1

    Interested in your course when availble are u on Facebook

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  Před 2 lety

      I am on Facebook! You can get my 8-week copywriting coaching course here: copyposse.com/launchfiles/

  • @Small_Bot
    @Small_Bot Před 3 lety

    Can u please recommend a book for being a professional copywriter..
    Btw love your content🔥💐

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  Před 3 lety +1

      Hey! I have a couple of book recommendation videos on my channel :) check out this one - czcams.com/video/vQkzcEGhGUg/video.html

  • @aryavratsingh3835
    @aryavratsingh3835 Před 3 lety

    Is it with me or ad library option has vanished from Facebook...

  • @nanayvirtues9761
    @nanayvirtues9761 Před 2 lety

    Hi Alex! thanks for this, but I entered my email to get the copy of Headline Writing Pyramid & Guide but I didn't receive it.

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  Před 2 lety

      Oh no! I'm so sorry about that. Please send my support team an email: hello@alexcattoni.com
      And they will make sure you get a copy!

  • @praiseayomide2697
    @praiseayomide2697 Před 4 lety

    AWESOME

  • @Innerfulfillment1111
    @Innerfulfillment1111 Před 4 lety +1

    How do I gain a greater understanding of my audience?

  • @jibrilobodoeze6095
    @jibrilobodoeze6095 Před 3 lety

    There is something am trying to understand Alexa
    I already understand that these are different headline formulas for different levels of market awareness.
    My question is, can we apply these formulas in writing a sales page/letter by flowing down from totally unaware down to very aware?
    Does it work that way too?

  • @ahmedwaleed6054
    @ahmedwaleed6054 Před 4 lety +1

    i am the first who commented here and the fourth viewer

  • @hris9214
    @hris9214 Před 3 lety

    Hi Alex! New subscriber here. Would you recommend using this pyramid to cold sell / email clients my copywriting skills? I know a lot of brands (in my country anyway) that aren't aware that there are people like us who do copywriting for them :)

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  Před 3 lety

      Welcome! Yes you absolutely could do that

  • @luisalinaas7840
    @luisalinaas7840 Před 4 lety

    Hi, I'm new in tech copywriting, can you tell me what do you think about this copy:
    GoTouch Basic 3.0
    Whether you have a business conference and want to be more passionate about your presentation, or a class and want to interact more with your students, or even a lunch with investors and want to show them clearly your ideas, that could be the product just for you. GoTouch Basic 3.0 is a device that makes you feel comfortable with your ideas.

  • @foofooblenda734
    @foofooblenda734 Před 3 lety

    do you have the new baffled baby 2.0

  • @VickiBee
    @VickiBee Před 4 lety

    Usually, on FB they just say "Don't scroll past this..." which, frankly, gets on my nerves, but I'm in a Copywriting class that teaches professional copywriting and he told us "it's not creative writing." He's been a Copywriter for over 25 years.
    I'd rather they be a LITTLE more creative than "Don't scroll past this" and BIDEN'S writing team is pathetic. That's not \who he is. He doesn't beg for things outright.
    I wish I could persuade people to give money, but I never understood grassroots until recently. But I digress.
    I could use something more creative than a person saying "Don't scroll past this."

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  Před 4 lety

      I agree with you! Honestly people start to just glaze over the things that are over-done. Creativity can go a long way in writing copy that convert well!