Copywriting Exercise & Critique - How To Write Insanely Better Headlines

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  • čas přidán 26. 08. 2024
  • Write Better Headlines That Capture Attention & Get Clicks
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    It’s estimated that 8 out of 10 people will read your headline copy… but only TWO of them will actually click through to read the rest 😱
    So what’s the difference between the 6 that bounce and the 2 that stick around?
    Well, more than likely, it all comes down to how CAPTIVATING the headline was.
    If your headline can effectively pique curiosity, speak to the audience, open an enticing loop, or otherwise HOOK & ENGAGE your reader…
    Then your chances of getting a click increase dramatically!
    Which sounds great… but HOW can you actually write better headlines that will land you in the “click-worthy” category?
    In this tutorial, I’ll let you look over my shoulder as I critique 5 headlines on the fly - what made them great, what left me wanting more and what would make them even more powerful?
    I’m about to break it all down for you, so YOU can start crafting headlines that are too captivating to scroll past…
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Komentáře • 88

  • @sbotango-copywriter1960
    @sbotango-copywriter1960 Před 2 lety +30

    3-Step Formula To Write Hot Headlines 🌶
    1. Hook Attention (By using fear, joy, controversy, nostalgia, FOMO, or by promising desired results)
    2. Open a Loop ( pique curiosity, leave them hanging to have an inclination to read more)
    3. Target your Audience ( If you sell to anyone, you are selling to nobody)

  • @alexmathewmendoza
    @alexmathewmendoza Před 2 lety +15

    Definitely continue doing these recaps, Alex. These are very helpful!

  • @ankitkushpoul4765
    @ankitkushpoul4765 Před 2 lety +8

    Headline is crucial part of any copy but you can't create headline out of thin air, it's not a creative process.
    Best headline doesn't comes from thinking out of thin air.
    Best headline comes from research:
    1. Who are their target 🎯 customers, weather it's for beginners, intermediate or advance.
    What's their purpose of learning dance?
    They want to dance on their birthday party, dance competition, anniversary party or dancing is their hobby etc...
    Which type of dance they want to learn?
    Free style, Hip hop etc...
    What are their struggles or pain point ?
    - They have stage fear, they're fatty etc...
    It's for which age group?
    Children, Teenagers, mothers, couples etc...
    2. Awareness Level
    3. Market Sophistication Level
    4. What's their USP?

  • @ames550
    @ames550 Před 2 lety +4

    I think what's missing upfront for the writer is knowing who the target is. And what media this ad appeared in. The media would give major clues on how to talk to the target; psychographic
    and demographic. Also, the ad doesn't mention the type of dancing options offered.

  • @MerchYDuw
    @MerchYDuw Před 2 lety +3

    Please keep making these videos. The real life examples are so helpful!

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  Před 2 lety +1

      Glad you like them! Thanks so much :)

  • @PrincessSachiko
    @PrincessSachiko Před 2 lety +2

    I saw another video of yours a while back that had detailed critiques like this, so I'm glad you made a new one! These types of videos are super helpful because they're so specific. Thank you!!

  • @ataberdi2064
    @ataberdi2064 Před rokem +1

    I just wamted to chime in and say what a fabulous lesson Alex!❤

  • @goodluckfelix5444
    @goodluckfelix5444 Před rokem +2

    thanks, this will help top my game a bit

  • @shivamrohilla1496
    @shivamrohilla1496 Před 2 lety +2

    Really helpful. Great insight to know what different types of phrases are doing to the audience psyche.

  • @unboxingtrailer4584
    @unboxingtrailer4584 Před 2 lety +3

    I was waiting for it🥵💕

  • @iamchadwill
    @iamchadwill Před rokem +1

    I subbed because this is what i need to learn copywriting, live critique and examples seem hard to find!
    (hoping this will help you target me as an audience)

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  Před rokem

      Woohoo! Happy to have you with us 👏

  • @pandorofortes4568
    @pandorofortes4568 Před 2 lety +2

    Thank you so much, your videos are so helpful and amazing

  • @chrislc267
    @chrislc267 Před 2 lety +2

    This was super helpful and great to know your thought process and why some things worked or didn’t. I would love to see more!!

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  Před 2 lety

      Awesome! Thanks so much for watching :)

  • @ames550
    @ames550 Před 2 lety +5

    The writer needs to know the target audience to write to their interests, their passions, and as much as possible to begin to write. I wouldn't even waste time starting without information.

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  Před 2 lety +1

      Oh for sure! That's where my H.O.T. Headline guide comes in handy :) I recommend everyone who participates in these challenges use the free guide to help their writing. This video is just my critique of those headlines!

  • @bethmetro8761
    @bethmetro8761 Před 2 lety +3

    Heck yeah! These exercises rock!

  • @desirepenn5812
    @desirepenn5812 Před 2 lety +1

    Love the “Dirty Dancing” reference! So cute!!♥️

  • @johnmajoris9141
    @johnmajoris9141 Před 2 lety +2

    Great job Alex. Thanks!

  • @HarryJonHairMakeup
    @HarryJonHairMakeup Před 2 lety +4

    Love this Alex, sooooo helpful. ❤️

  • @shizanizam2348
    @shizanizam2348 Před 2 lety +2

    Really informative and helpful. Thank you Alex for the wonderful effort!

  • @GirishVenkatachalam
    @GirishVenkatachalam Před 2 lety +1

    Thanks for this live example

  • @fathulbariofficial
    @fathulbariofficial Před 2 lety +1

    Loved it!! That review just made bunches of things clear. Thanks for the value you have provided 😊

  • @niroeduigho
    @niroeduigho Před 2 lety +1

    Thanks Alex 🥰

  • @havalmarshal9221
    @havalmarshal9221 Před 2 lety +1

    Hey Alex, it's good to see you getting better on CZcams congratulations👏, can you make a video about your experience with using common bad words for clients,

  • @user-sl9bb6ij9g
    @user-sl9bb6ij9g Před 2 lety +1

    Thanks!

  • @SmartHobbies
    @SmartHobbies Před 8 měsíci

    Very helpful. I use your advice to make better CZcams video titles and CTAs within the videos. Thank you.

  • @elrafas2366
    @elrafas2366 Před 2 lety +1

    1:55 _Will be Alex a standing dancer?_
    _I like to dancing too. I really want to say that my first video I watched here on the channel Akex was ''Your routine while traveling''. It was really pump the vibe, such as that I haven't seen in some of the content creators related to entrepreneurship, market and finance that i follow. It'll be awesome see more like that. Gave me ideas that video, and inspiration_

  • @sana_saint
    @sana_saint Před rokem

    Thank you Alex for sharing your knowledge with so many of us 💙🤓

  • @souhityogupta7704
    @souhityogupta7704 Před 2 lety +2

    Was thinking about your upcoming content ... and here it is !!! 💖💯🥰

  • @AmritaMishraPerformances
    @AmritaMishraPerformances Před 2 lety +2

    This was an amazing video! Super helpful 😁

  • @izzatie
    @izzatie Před 3 měsíci

    After looking at the headline, I think I too wanna join the class to be able to tick tockin😂😂😂😂

  • @meghaadlakha6923
    @meghaadlakha6923 Před 2 lety

    Am I the only one who likes Alex's video before even watching it!😍😍

  • @maxineperkinswordsmith
    @maxineperkinswordsmith Před 2 lety +1

    Loved this. Very helpful!!!👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾❤️

  • @richardbakker7133
    @richardbakker7133 Před 2 lety +1

    Love the video. Thanks for the informative vid

  • @geminispark2026
    @geminispark2026 Před 2 lety +1

    "Become One With The Beat"
    This course will take your moves to the next level using tools that will allow you to learn how to adjust your personal dance style to any genre of music on the fly! >>Start Course

  • @pennypenny376
    @pennypenny376 Před 24 dny

    Fabulous! What is your thought process behind "taking it to the next level"? I want to really lock in this approach.

  • @lalitha.
    @lalitha. Před 2 lety +1

    It is a value bomb as usual✨
    Can you make a video on how to get copywriting clients for B2B ?

  • @MichaelWilliams-lo3ix
    @MichaelWilliams-lo3ix Před 2 lety +2

    Awesome

  • @bd29329
    @bd29329 Před 2 lety +1

    Great,,,really appreciateable,, 🤩🤩🤩

  • @prakshirawat7250
    @prakshirawat7250 Před rokem

    MORE VIDEOS ON THIS TOPIC

  • @sbotango-copywriter1960
    @sbotango-copywriter1960 Před 2 lety +4

    My Headline Versions 🤔
    1. Steal Any Party With These Dance Moves.
    2. Don't Learn These Dance Moves Unless You Can Handle People's Attention.
    3. Michael Jackson Would Envy You If You Can Master These Dance Moves.

  • @cynkin1
    @cynkin1 Před 2 lety +1

    Everybody Dance Now!

  • @eugenerider0701
    @eugenerider0701 Před 2 lety

    Hey Alex, I have a question:
    Copywriting is to use words and texts to provoke viewers to engage with your content.
    But we are image-animals right? We perceive pictures, graphics better than words.
    So how do I make better images to provoke my viewers? I think the spice is essentially the same, it's just a different medium.
    Either images, or videos. What are the skills of those?
    And do you know how to improve those? How to make better ad image, and better ad video?
    Copywriting is also important as well.

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  Před 2 lety +2

      Yes - copywriting and design go hand-in-hand. If design isn't your strong suit then I recommend hiring an expert to help you :) good luck!

    • @eugenerider0701
      @eugenerider0701 Před 2 lety

      @@AlexCattoni Is there a word for this? Like marketing design? Or graphics design? What should I search when I type on Fiverr to ask for professional help?

  • @qoet9761
    @qoet9761 Před 2 lety +1

    Can you please tell how many types of copywriting are there please.

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  Před 2 lety

      Not sure what you mean by "types" are you asking about niches you could write in? There are HUNDREDS! Here's a video to get you started: czcams.com/video/DAuqdy51M3E/video.html

  • @markzuckerbergvselonmusk
    @markzuckerbergvselonmusk Před 2 lety +3

    You are beautiful 😍 i love your face 😭😭

  • @loly9388
    @loly9388 Před 2 lety

    Hi alex!
    My level in English is actually B1
    I'm wondering if I need strong English to start copywriting.What do you think ?

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  Před 2 lety +1

      Nope! You can always choose to write copy in your mother tongue. If you want to write copy in English, then yes - you'll need to have strong English.

    • @loly9388
      @loly9388 Před 2 lety

      @@AlexCattoni thank you so much

  • @loly9388
    @loly9388 Před 2 lety

    Hi Alex,
    When I start practising by rewriting the ads I see in my own words , how will I check if my copy is good or not ?

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  Před 2 lety

      The best way is to ask a friend/mentor for an honest review!

    • @loly9388
      @loly9388 Před 2 lety

      @@AlexCattoni The problem is that I don't have any friends or mentors who know copywriting . Where can I find them.

  • @longtrinh2651
    @longtrinh2651 Před 2 lety +1

    I like this video

  • @spk2008
    @spk2008 Před 2 lety

    What is a USP?

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  Před 2 lety +1

      unique selling proposition

    • @spk2008
      @spk2008 Před 2 lety

      @@AlexCattoni thanks! And thank you so much for this helpful video.

  • @hadassahsalako6341
    @hadassahsalako6341 Před 2 lety

    Heyy Alex.
    How can I subscribe to your email list?

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  Před 2 lety

      you can subscribe here: www.copyposse.com ⚡️

  • @suigeneris860
    @suigeneris860 Před 2 lety

    Hi Alex!
    I have watched almost all videos on your channel and appreciating you for providing an incredible help at no cost.I would like to promote your channel (I am a blogger) but need your permission.Hope you will reply positively.

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  Před 2 lety

      Hi Sui! Thanks for asking. I would need some more info from you about this. Please email me at hello@alexcattoni.com to discuss!

  • @unboxingtrailer4584
    @unboxingtrailer4584 Před 2 lety +3

    I was waiting for it🥵💕