University of Michigan Essays (YOUR ONE STOP GUIDE!!)

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  • čas přidán 20. 08. 2024
  • University of Michigan Essays (YOUR ONE STOP GUIDE!!)// University of Michigan essays have it all, and this video is the University of Michigan essays your one stop guide to ace this application. My favorite is the University of Michigan community essay because it asks students to talk about their identity while also defining what community means to them. The UMich community essay can be about pretty much any community you belong to but this University of Michigan essay should focus on your contributions. Umich essays also ask the why us prompts. For these U Michigan supplemental essays, you want to focus on how you see yourself living and learning at their institution. How to write the umich supplemental essays is the guide you will receive in this video. As a college essay coach, I work with students on how to write umich essays, and the umich essay prompts are my favorite because once you write these you can use them to recycle content for so many other schools.
    Remember, the Michigan supplemental essays focus on you, who you are to others within community and why Michigan. The University of Michigan also places a lot of emphasis on the common app essay. This essay should be complementary to the why this college essay and community; however, make sure to craft a why us college essay that showcases a little of you and a little of them. Your supplemental essays should really have a lot of research backing them. Michigan supplemental essays and the why umich essay, in particular, is asking students to go beyond the Wolverine brand and tell them why they are the best fit for you. Take your time writing the university of Michigan supplemental essays, and if you want expert guidance reach out to Write Your Acceptance!
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Komentáře • 48

  • @WriteYourAcceptance
    @WriteYourAcceptance  Před rokem +1

    Any questions on your Michigan supps? Comment Below!

    • @JohnthePixelizedGuy
      @JohnthePixelizedGuy Před rokem +1

      Hey I'm currently working on my essays and I was wondering if you would be willing to look them over and give some critiques

    • @WriteYourAcceptance
      @WriteYourAcceptance  Před rokem

      @@JohnthePixelizedGuy hi thanks for watching. For pricing and availability please email thedrjosie@gmail.com

    • @lordturki7387
      @lordturki7387 Před 9 měsíci

      CAN I APLLAY ON THE SPRING ADDMISSION (ELECTRICAL ENGEERING)

    • @WriteYourAcceptance
      @WriteYourAcceptance  Před 9 měsíci

      @@lordturki7387not sure. That you can check on common app or ask the college directly. Here’s their major website for moth info though-
      ece.engin.umich.edu/academics/undergraduate/prospective-undergrad/why-ee-ce/

  • @minkibeak5806
    @minkibeak5806 Před 10 měsíci +2

    Just started writing. Very helpful! Thank you so much for the tips on the "hard" community essay! I always thought I had to include something related to my ethnicity, but I was able to think more creatively!

    • @WriteYourAcceptance
      @WriteYourAcceptance  Před 10 měsíci

      Awesome! Thanks for watching...what are you considering for the community essay?

    • @minkibeak5806
      @minkibeak5806 Před 10 měsíci +1

      @@WriteYourAcceptance I was thinking maybe my asian community or a senior community, as I wanted to study geriatric medicine so I volunteered in senior homes and nursing homes throughout my hs career.

    • @WriteYourAcceptance
      @WriteYourAcceptance  Před 10 měsíci +1

      sure that sounds promising. I would make it personal, start with a line about how your community is one you’re an outsider of - because of your age…then zero in on a specific anecdote with a resident there and lessons and your role
      Good luck

    • @minkibeak5806
      @minkibeak5806 Před 10 měsíci +1

      @@WriteYourAcceptance Ok thank you!

  • @dryeraseboredom3645
    @dryeraseboredom3645 Před 9 měsíci +2

    Prompt #2 specifically asks about the schools and their curriculums. Would an essay about a student run group at UM motivating my learning apply?

    • @WriteYourAcceptance
      @WriteYourAcceptance  Před 9 měsíci

      Hi, I would do a combo of both the program/ course(s) and then a student group/ research opportunity...you can do your interests both within and beyond the classroom and how you will advance/ deepen your intellectual pursuits

  • @shubhampatel64
    @shubhampatel64 Před 10 měsíci +1

    What is the difference between your role within the community and what you do? Like what would I write for my role compared to what I would write about for what is is I do?

    • @WriteYourAcceptance
      @WriteYourAcceptance  Před 10 měsíci

      It might not be different…sometimes it conflates other times you can be a translator for elderly patients but you role within the community feels like a bridge connecting patients to better care…so the latter reads more philosophical. Some roles/ responsibilities don’t really leave work for that so no worries if it’s the same

  • @rohangiri2989
    @rohangiri2989 Před 8 měsíci +1

    i really need a guidance at this point of my life regarding my college application. i do not have sufficient money to ay for college application fees and my college is not ready to support me with the fee waiver. I am now limited to apply for only 2 universities including michigan. I only got one shot and i have prepared drafts of my common app essay and supplemental essay. it would be very helpful of you if you could guide me regarding my essays

    • @WriteYourAcceptance
      @WriteYourAcceptance  Před 8 měsíci

      I am sorry you are in a bind. If you have any specific questions you want me to answer, please comment below. And good luck!

  • @teachnib7888
    @teachnib7888 Před 9 měsíci +1

    Can I use bullet points for writing University of Michigan why us essay?

    • @WriteYourAcceptance
      @WriteYourAcceptance  Před 9 měsíci

      I would not write this in bullet points. They are asking for about 500 words so I would make this an essay format.

    • @teachnib7888
      @teachnib7888 Před 9 měsíci +1

      @@WriteYourAcceptance so can I write in different paragraphs?

    • @WriteYourAcceptance
      @WriteYourAcceptance  Před 9 měsíci +1

      correct. if you go to my why us playlist, I read a couple samples and you can see the drafts. good luck!@@teachnib7888

  • @shreshtgupta9794
    @shreshtgupta9794 Před rokem +2

    the why us template costing $60 is messed up

    • @WriteYourAcceptance
      @WriteYourAcceptance  Před rokem

      Sorry you feel that way. If you have any questions I can answer let me know. Are you writing right now for tonight’s deadline??

    • @stupidgnome
      @stupidgnome Před 8 měsíci

      now 125$

  • @user-qo2hw3qb8d
    @user-qo2hw3qb8d Před 10 měsíci

    was wondering what tips would you give to someone who didn't have strong experiences with community or anything they identify with strongly that wants to take the approach of talking about their struggles with that lack of experience?

    • @WriteYourAcceptance
      @WriteYourAcceptance  Před 10 měsíci

      I would say that the goal would be to end up appreciating some sort of community at the end of that essay. It can start there but what’s the lesson, what have you done to building connections and form community. Remember you are essentially applying to be part of their community so saying I’m a loner and community is not for me won’t work IMO

    • @WriteYourAcceptance
      @WriteYourAcceptance  Před 10 měsíci

      Remember it doesn’t have to be a big community, it can be a group you meet with that’s four ppl with a common interest

  • @anthonytao3043
    @anthonytao3043 Před 9 měsíci +1

    Hi, im really having a hard time on doing research on umich’s professors and their classes and just have no clue on how to combine those stuff with my prompt2 essay. Any advice on this?

    • @WriteYourAcceptance
      @WriteYourAcceptance  Před 9 měsíci

      Hi first find the info. You want to let that guild you and how you structure the essay or at least that section. What’s the major you’re putting on common app?

    • @anthonytao3043
      @anthonytao3043 Před 9 měsíci +1

      @@WriteYourAcceptance I’m applying for philosophy and I’ve looked up on some most accomplished professors in the department and the classes they teach, but still feel like missing the details of those classes. Is there any way I can dig deeper? I just feel like I can’t reach the real core stuff and things I found online are mainly just general info

    • @WriteYourAcceptance
      @WriteYourAcceptance  Před 9 měsíci +1

      So if you have classes and professor names, I would google those plus the word syllabus to see if you can access their syllabus, get more specific language on what material and what thinkers/ writers they cover…then the more personal factor, for me, happens when students connect that info with something you’ve already learned or discussed in class…so bring yourself into the reasons why this class is of interest then go into maybe a student organization or a symposium that they hosted and show your interest intellectually, behind the classroom

    • @anthonytao3043
      @anthonytao3043 Před 9 měsíci

      @@WriteYourAcceptance Thank you so much!

    • @WriteYourAcceptance
      @WriteYourAcceptance  Před 9 měsíci

      you're welcome. Good luck! @@anthonytao3043

  • @prequelanimations539
    @prequelanimations539 Před 9 měsíci +1

    is it ok if theres a specific club in michigan that i want to go to and i say that in my why us essay?

    • @WriteYourAcceptance
      @WriteYourAcceptance  Před 9 měsíci

      yes of course! Remember the prompt is asking a little bit more on curriculum, and how you will access the educational resources there, so make sure to focus on that as well...but yes you can definitely bring in a student org and connect it to something you have done if it's kind of like a continuation of some service you have done already or explain why it is of interest. good luck!

  • @PD-bv2nu
    @PD-bv2nu Před 11 měsíci +1

    Could you share some inputs for the ROSS portfolio?

    • @WriteYourAcceptance
      @WriteYourAcceptance  Před 11 měsíci

      Happy to. Typically, there are a few essays. Which one in particular are you thinking about or give me some specifics as to your question...

    • @PD-bv2nu
      @PD-bv2nu Před 11 měsíci +1

      Could you share your thoughts on how to structure the a response to the first question on Business Case Discussion- what kind of problem could we choose, what exactly does business implication mean and what should the solution include ?

    • @WriteYourAcceptance
      @WriteYourAcceptance  Před 11 měsíci

      the first thing I would consider is your interest in business. What types of business or problems you see around you that you’d like to be a part of - especially of bringing about a solution. I’ve seen students do stuff on food insecurity in the community, about having tech support programs for the elderly, and language programs for immigrants
      would say that the most successful have been when a student anchors the topic/ issue on something they have done already or something that is part of their identity in some way.

    • @WriteYourAcceptance
      @WriteYourAcceptance  Před 11 měsíci

      @@PD-bv2nuI started response below - business implication - I need more context but I think it’s identifying what the business opportunity is when identifying a problem

  • @yashaleedhurandhar9474
    @yashaleedhurandhar9474 Před rokem +1

    Hi Dr Josie,
    I need help with my application. Could you please get back to me?
    Thank you

    • @WriteYourAcceptance
      @WriteYourAcceptance  Před rokem

      Hi thanks for watching. For pricing and availability please email thedrjosie@gmail.com

  • @GauravKumar-qw2em
    @GauravKumar-qw2em Před rokem +1

    I need help

  • @GauravKumar-qw2em
    @GauravKumar-qw2em Před rokem +1

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    @GauravKumar-qw2em Před rokem +1

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