The Personal Statement That Got Me Into EVERY IVY LEAGUE
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- čas přidán 15. 06. 2024
- The Personal Statement That Got Me Into EVERY IVY LEAGUE
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In this video, I'm going to be revealing the exact personal statement that got me no Ivy League rejections and giving you a step by step outline on how to craft your own unique personal statement so you can stand out to admission officers.
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0:06 - Introduction: Challenges of College Admissions
0:16 - Misconceptions about College Essays
0:29 - Revealing a Successful Personal Statement
0:35 - Offer of Full-Length Course Giveaway
0:43 - Sharing the Personal Statement
0:59 - Reading the Personal Statement
1:07 - Breakdown of the Personal Statement
1:19 - Common Application Prompts Overview
1:27 - Tips on What to Avoid in Personal Statements
3:02 - Step 1: Self-Reflection and Exploration
3:08 - Identifying Key Themes
4:03 - Core Values and Beliefs
5:20 - Understanding Different Essay Approaches
6:34 - Considerations for Using Metaphors
7:01 - Example of Using a Metaphor in an Essay
8:39 - Crafting an Effective Introduction and Hook
9:49 - Different Approaches to Writing Hooks
10:51 - Building the Introduction
12:51 - Structuring Body Paragraphs
16:20 - Outline of Body Paragraphs
18:16 - Tips for Seamless Body Paragraph Transitions
21:34 - Example: Personal Statement Body Paragraphs
23:43 - Writing an Effective Conclusion
24:54 - Key Elements of a Conclusion
This is just a very tiny snippet of my story. I’ve been gate-keeping this for years, but I want to do my best to help all of you❤
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I love your videos so much and was wondering if you could share your common app application with your classes, extracurriculars, etc.
Girl u are seriously the best love u!!!
What advice would you give to any Central American students trying to get into an Ivy League
I really need your help out
How can I get into ur group sections 😢
From Africa
your personal statement was sooo beautiful, i was actually with my mouth open by the time i read the last sentence 😮😮 you're so talented girlll
coming from an incoming harvard student: this video is so insightful!
i literally had the exact same approach with my own personal statement and our themes were identical as well! (perseverance through adversity + love for learning) great vid!
"My Everyday Life with an Economist Monk" is my essay topic.
Monk + curiosity+ resilience/peace+ leadership
I chose it because I'm volunteering in ISKCON, and my mentor there is a monk who was previously an economist/banker. I've learned a lot from him. Should I write about this? Also, please give me tips for my essay.
Thanks to you I got into Oxford University ❤ thank you
I’m SO proud of you❤
Really?? Congratulations to you!
That's my dream schoooooll :))
@@severussnapeytp715 if you need any advice on what to do that helps you get in let me know :)
Do. Not. Delete. This. Ever.
Nah she needs to delete this before anyone else sees
@@dylandoggettgames8017 why?
@@emiomg_ so we can beat everyone :)
@@user-vi6nq6ic8d faxs ima save this video for when i graduate
a tear dropped after the last sentence of your personal statement
Omg can't believe you actually posted a video like this, really helpful thanks Elise 😭😭
I love you advice. You are so underrated, I swear! Your tips actually work
Your mom would be so proud of you ❤ God bless you for these tips!
Really a great help. Keep up the good work 👍
This was so helpful, especially my upcoming junior year! Thank you! :)
You are so inspiring! I’m already an undergrad in my home country but hopefully I can apply to an Ivy League college for my masters! Thank you!
This video is very helpful, thank you for posting it!!!!
thank you so so much for this video, it's so helpful!!!
You have helped me out a lot, thank you so much!
Bless you! This definitely was of great help
i love everything about you man you're an icon 💗
Thank you so much for posting this!! ❤
Thank you!! This helped a lot!
I have been incredibly lucky to have found you and your channel. This video gave me the much needed assurance that, with a good essay, it CAN be possible to get into my dream college. Thanks a million for this video!💕
Usefulll and amazing tips thank you so much u really helped me throughout my ADmission process, super happy and grateful cause I found you🥺🥺🥺🥺
Superb. Appreciate you share this. May you filled with joy ❤
im forever thabkful for this. thank you
you know that you motivate me so much
i love your videos!
I really loved your content
Thanks for sharing your experience with us, you're so kind
The best guide I found on the internet is you.
thank you so much for this elise
Thank youu, I love you
This is just what I need
Alternate title: How to Commodify Your Personal Values and Sell Your Soul to Academia feat. English Composition
exactly
Hi Elsie, please do a video about your routine, I admire it and want to learn how you make it work for you, much lovexx ❤
Thank you so much ❤
Thanks!
*Highlight only the important points*
Me: Highlights everything.
Thank you so much ma'am. It was super explicit. ❤
I love ❤️ u for this
even though i'd love for her to stay lowkey because i'm not an altruist at all SHE DESERVES SO MUCH MORE AUDIENCE BECAUSE GIRL? you're amazing ❤
Could you make a video on your study methods and how realistic we should set our goals based on how much we study?
Bet that the admission officers cried as much as I did while reading her essay.
I cried as well
she said not to use a sob story, but she did a sob story....
@@r22gamer54 yes, but she also noted how she overcame that situation which is more important
@@r22gamer54 She is one of the strongest women I have ever seen
@@artsymie7231 Exactly
I might get into Stanford or Harvard because of you
Great video! Was your essay a response to the first question?
Hey, Love your video!
What prompt should I select if I take the chronological approach and discuss multiple life events?
" personally in my personal statement "
Thankyouuu soo much elise for your this incredible efforts to get this amazing information to us I'm soo thankful to you ....harvard is my dream university and i genuinely want to go there which is nearly a impossible dream to become true from where i belong to but thats okay i believe on myself and my lord nothing is impossible...again thankyouu my girll thankyouu soo much ...😭❤️🌷🧸🎀🙌🏻
Hi Elise, is it necessary for us to take the most rigorous academic subjects even if some don't align with our passion?
i did the survey but i still didn't get the written course
Is it possible to incorporate 2 metaphors instead of 1?
girl, I've watched this many times and it really helped me a lot, I was wondering If there is a limit for numbers of words for application. Btw, thanks again>
650 words is the limit I think
What is the prompt for this essay?
Can it be used for uk unis?
I absolutely appreciate you and i love watching your videos , but there's a question i would love to get answered that how did u figured it out yourself was it natural that u wrote or do u know something only few poeple know ?
I wrote this at 2am while I was in bed. Late night thoughts
For step one, I really recommend Berne Browns list of values!!
What’s that? Pls Explain!!
@@kaaviyaminumoorthi if you look it up, it’s pretty much a list of morals/valies of yourself that you want admissions officers to know. So, what I saw people do and what I’m doing now, is underlining the one that fit w m the most and that I want them to see about me, without mentioning them ofc
@@emmasophpi ohh kk
tysm!!!
@@emmasophpiI've a doubt. How can I tell about my core values to Admission office, without mentioning them. Any idea?
Elise can you help me an example if my theme is the passing of my grandma and music (ps. She thought me karnitick music
You mind if I ask what A levels you took?
girl's a organic super computer lmao
em chào chị. Em đang là sinh viên năm 2 tại 1 trường đại học ở Việt Nam. Em muốn học các trường ivy leaguage thì em phải apply hệ bachelor hay hệ master ạ. Và có học bổng không ạ. Em cảm ơn chị
Stats reveal pls 😭
Hello, madam
I am a computer science graduate and want to study masters in computer science or Cybersecurity.
So, which portion of ur personal statement should I correct in order to make it fit for my case? Please dont ignore my question!
hey elise, I filled out the form for your course multiple times but didn't get a response
How to write an essay as a renaissance person 😭😭😭plzzzz
Hi Elise! Really sorry if this is an intrusive request but would we be able to see some more monthly income transparency vids? The newest ones that you made went down recently!
hi! i removed them because I want my focus to be more on impacting others rather than personal income
@@ultimateivyleagueguide That makes a lot of sense I understand! Sorry again for the request :)
tips on freshman year of high school??
do the very best in your classes, and try to take challenging ones if you can. if your school offers honors/advanced classes, take those! also join extracurriculars (sports, school clubs, some outside of school things like volunteering). overall just take school seriously but have fun too :)
don't take advice
the personal statement is blurry… so i can’t read it
Hey, I just discovered you through a YT recommendation. Awesome video. You're also very attractive. Awesome! Hope we meet in irl one day 😎
Why am I watching this if I’m not a student anymore 😂
What if somebody copies her personal statement??
Admissions will detect it
bruh i was gonna write about my love of post its but now it’s gonna look like i was copying you - do you think i should still write it?
i was going to talk about how hoarding post its displays my love for ideas bc i’m applying as a phil major
Why don’t you show use your common app🤦🏾♀️
The personal statement is really blurry so I don't have the opportunity to see it like everyone else in the comments 😥
Screenshot and amplify
stats
Buttt your personal statement is not visible clearly
use 720 resolution
bro thats not fair your mom died 😭
w personal statement🤌🤌🤌🤌😭😭😭👏👏👏👏
i cant read the personal statement because its too blurry for some reason 🥲