"Echoes" | Creepypasta Storytime
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"Echoes of the past don't need to follow us into the future." That's a great line, and one I need to try and remember.
I loved that line too
Yeah.
Yeah, same here.
Dude, this story is one of the best stories I've ever heard narrated.
Really? It was awful. All you heard was ramblings from a drunk Vietnam vet and his cuck neighbor. There wasn't any twist like Car Salesman to wrap up. There was nothing horrific about this story.
Really...? Reality is the best story you ever heard...?
This comment physically hurt me...
@@nonusbusinissus5632 so if you have any better narrations, why not share it.
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@@nonusbusinissus5632 Damn someone's comment revealing their own standards, physically hurt you, man that's sad.
This hit home for me. My dad was drafted into Vietnam. He went through a lot. And put me through a lot. He finally saw a professional and started getting help a couple years back. I’m proud of him for doing that, but some injuries can never truly be healed, his or mine.
My father wasn't a vet, but he was a very vile, violent drunk with no one else to take his rage out on but his kids. What you said about some wounds never healing hit home for me. Because even though I'm 33 now, and he's in his 70's, I still think of all the shit he did to us every time I look at him.
My father wasn't a vet, but he was a very vile, violent drunk with no one else to take his rage out on but his kids. What you said about some wounds never healing hit home for me. Because even though I'm 33 now, and he's in his 70's, I still think of all the shit he did to us every time I look at him.
@@Mr.Plant_man now that he is in his old age he has “mellowed” out a lot, and has tried to rebuild relationships. It’s is great for my kids to have that kind of relationship with him, and he tries at times to reconnect with me too. But it is hard to impossible to over look the 30 plus years of experiences that we have had. You are a bit younger than me but we are old enough to be able to take a good look at who we are and compare ourselves to our fathers. I know I couldn’t imagine treating people the same we he did, let alone my own children. But our experiences gives us the opportunity to be the fulcrum by which the future becomes a better place.
Kudos to the author. The character Jack was so visceral I couldn't stop listening. The narration definitely helped to make him 3D. Incredible story..thanks for taking the time to share this story!
Sometimes you narrate stories that really have value in the telling and listening to.
The monsters that live in our heads are real and they're more terrifying because of this than anything an author can dream up.
Those who have friends or family with 'issues' will undoubtedly concur.
I apologize for the length of my comment, but my husband is a Vietnam vet, and this really hit home for me!
This story was so beautifully written and perfectly narrated that I became so absorbed, I didn’t realize I was crying until I notes the water spots on my top! As the wife of a Vietnam veteran, I can attest to the authenticity of the pain and rage Jack experiences as a result of his time in Vietnam. My husband was drafted in the early 70’s, and he still struggles with his experiences today. Like Jack, he was a naive young guy, raised by a widowed dad in a religious home in a small town in Iowa. He was comfortable with guns, but only for hunting for the main course for dinner. He was older than the average draftee, because his # wasn’t called until he had worked his way into his senior year at college. The Navy agreed to defer his tour until he graduated, and in less than 2 months he was an Ensign in the Navy and a Naval Intelligence Officer assigned to work with South Vietnamese informants on patrol boats on the Saigon River. The one time he spoke about his war experience in depth with me, he talked about the close friendships he shared with the SV men who risked everything to help our men, and how devastated he was when the US left them behind, knowing they’d most likely be executed by the NV within days of the American troops departure. And he explained how horribly he was treated upon his return as well. His first wife once and told me, “The man I put on that plane to Vietnam was not the man who came home. He looked the same, but that was all.” He came home with medals for bravery, as well
as a deep sense of rage and torturous guilt that he struggled to control for years. By the time I met him, he had retired from the Navy and had learned to manage his anger, but despite the fact that it’s been over 50 years since he came home from the war, he still has nightmares. I can tell he’s back there by the way he moves in his sleep. He usually wakes up with a gasp, I’ll ask him if he’s ok, and sometimes he’ll share his dream. They usually involve boarding enemy boats and searching the dark areas below deck for SV prisoners or NV soldiers or tracking the enemy after they landed their boats and moved inland. He will be crawling in a dark tunnel or searching a village after dark when he comes face to face with a NV soldier and the barrel of his gun inches from his nose when he wakes up! Somehow or another, he manages to fall back to sleep, but I usually lay there for awhile, trying to wrap my head around the horrible reality of his wartime experience and do my best to support him when it all comes back to haunt him.
Holy shit, man. I was….. I was not ready for this…. So very real, so very… relatable, I guess, for me. Sadly. I think this story hits as hard as it does because of just how on the nose it is. It’s a very accurate, shameless depiction of two extremely different generations, and the vast gulf between, while also being an almost uncomfortably true-to-form depiction of the reality of the human condition. I wouldn’t be surprised if the author wasn’t, at least in part, coming from personal experience. Visceral.
Edit: ha.. jokes on everyone who thought they were in for a lovely long-form creepypasta and got a swift kick in the uncomfortable bits instead. I’m certainly among them.
Thank you for warning me beforehand, I'll go ahead and skip this one! I'm not here for the feels, I'm here for the spooks!
This was amazing. Thank you for your exceptional narration of such a harsh, but lifelike glimpse into a war veteran's PTSD.
Heartbreaking tale. Masterfully written, and narrated. Thank you.
A dear older friend of ours just passed away. He had Alzheimer’s, his last year he relived his worse war days. I can’t even imagine the horrors he saw. I knew he had served, he told me he was airplane mechanic. His son told us he diffused bombs.
God rest his would sorry for your loss may he finally find peace
A family member of mine who also passed from Alzheimer's also experienced the same. He was a WW2 vet and lived through the fall of the Philippines and the Bataan march. It is a really rough thing to see and my heart goes out to you.
@@ADKwarriors may he Rest In Peace and I’m sorry
And it's amazingly crazy that our government really don't give two f**** about what they do to us
My Pawpaw passed with dementia and was in Japan in WWII and my granny would walk in the room & he would have a melt down trying to hide her from the enemy& getting injured or worse. It was awful. May your family friend fly high & find eternal peace.
Sounds so much like my dad. He doesn’t drink like that now but he won’t talk about it. All I know is he was in the Army, and Special Operations. After he came home his unit was called back up to train other soldiers in New York. Other than that I know nothing. Him and my uncle were both over there.
That's like my grandpa. Served in the navy during Vietnam and continued to after it was over. I think he was in for about 20 years. Highly decorated, the only thing I know is that he used to man the gun on one of those patrol river boats. I know it affected him bc he came back with tremors that he had until the day he died. He got a Forrest Gump style injury except instead of a bullet, he took a piece of shrapnel to the butt cheek. Got a purple heart. Other than that i font know nc us kids were told never to talk to him about
@@marahbaker8615 nothin good happened to our soldiers over there. Very bad experiences.
This is the best thing I've heard from you. My husband is a Vietnam veteran and some of the old man's stories were very familiar to me.
Thank you so much for the story! As someone who grew up in the seventies, I have heard these stories and all of the emotions that come with them many times. Masterful story and great narration! Bravo!
Damn... this is a flawed character done right! Also I love how the author made the protagonist a flawed person and not just some plot device to drive the story like I have seen happen. The concept of PTSD and cycle of violence was so well done and I was captivated by it. I remember getting chills, tearing up at some point when Jack talked about the war, and even scoffing at the protagonist and Jack alike. This was the concept of "grey" characters done right. Tbh I plan on using this as an example of what to do when I write a character!
Man I wish you did more long form content. Really appreciate you putting this out. Please do more long stories like this
This was amazing and I couldn't stop bloody listening, Jack was a prick and I hated him but at the same time I felt remorse for him and kind of understood some of his characters past, great story and what a gem
one of the best from grim rn i loved new fish but i liked the more realistic beginning of it thank god grim thought about making a pure realistic story with real human drama i hope he keeps making stuff like this
New fish....one of my favorites.. My property isn't normal is a great one too!
Casually drops a perspective warping banger. So. Good.
Probably my favorite none horror story to date. Amazing job.
when was the last time this channel posted a true horror story people didn't fall asleep to? Are there evrn stories like they were before? Seems writers just changed the direction...
@@abhabh6896 from what ive noticed, alot of authors just stopped writing or got deleted off of reddit, and the only other real horror stories are very short.
@@abhabh6896 yeah a lot of them are really bland and stereotypical too “oh it turned out my best friend was a bad guy” “oh the guide guy at the start was the monster” etc etc
Very early on I could tell this story was gonna be a good one. Edit: gahhhhhhly I was so right…holy profound messages layered so frequently it was near impossible to process all of them at the proper depth that they all deserved. WOW. This one is really really REALLY good
This isn't a "Creepy Pasta". This is one of the most powerful stories I've ever heard. It's real. It's... it's raw, it's ugly, it's bloody, it's, it's just... so REAL. I have PTSD. This is perfectly written & masterfully read. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ If you have any question about spending an hour listening to a story... DO NOT miss out on this one, this cat could very well be your next neighbor. OH! One last thing . . . Wobbly Pops. 😂
This is in my top 10 videos I've heard recently Thank you
I felt like I was sitting on the porch with em. I talk to veterans all day long for my job. This story is what I hear everyday. I’ve heard worse. I’ve cried with them. I’ve lifted them up, I’ve been an ear. Veterans, especially ones that have been to war, are one of the most neglected neglected humans on this earth.
I always felt so terrible for the vietnam vets who were forced to go to the most horrific corner of the world and live through hell, be forced to do the most horrible things someone could do, just to come home to being spat on and treated like monsters
I owe you my childhood. It was terrible tbh but you and creepsmcpasta both picked up all the trauma and shit then threw it right out the window and I owe you guys everything for that. Keep narrating, and to the authors keep writing. Most of these story's are 1000 times better than any horror film I've ever watched and you all are so very talented. Thank you for 10 years mcp. I couldn't thank you enough.
43 minutes in and I've been in tears three times. Holy shit this one hits me in the memories.
I cried twice as well. Just finished it, and kind of left with a vaguery of depression
I felt nothing....this isnt a horror story at all...
@@abhabh6896 Maybe not in the traditional sense, but for some of us it does elicit terror, even if not horror.
47:44 that part really hits hard
the way vietnam vets were treated when they got home was genuinely appaling
they were just kids that got shipped across the world to fight in a pointless war and all they got when they came home was a bunch of hippie parasites attacking them.
truly vile
Wow, best story this year for me, no eldritch horror, no paranormal, and still all the horror you can dream of. Thank you 🙏
This is such a well written story! Very profound and meaningful. Not the typical creepy Creepypasta, which was actually a nice unexpected change.
Also, I'm a Kent State graduate. I heard the mention of the KSU shootings and my ears perked up. Than relized today is May 4, the 53rd anniversary, as I'm listening to this. Weird coincidence there... o.O
Awesome story. Currently seeking therapy for my past as a bullied child and Iraq war veteran so I can better navigate through my future.
Superb story, flawlessly narrated. Can't wait for more.
Awesome story! It's refreshing to hear a non-horror story from you from time to time. Great job!
It was pretty horrific.
Wow!
Just F*****g Wow!!
That was Amazing. Your best narrative yet. The range of emotions that I went through listening to this, what a Rollercoaster. Thank you.
I loved this story..it's become one of my favourites. Tragicly beautiful and horribly true.
Love the idaho refrence, was falling asleep and jolted awake to "planted potatoes in idaho..", thought it was my imagination
Wow. That was the best story that you’ve ever narrated in my opinion. Thank you.
The line “we don’t need he’ll…this is enough” was sooooo good
That story brought tears to my eyes, I always wondered how I would fare in a war and thank the gods, I didn't have to find out.... A thought provoking story.....
I had to keep myself from crying while listening to this story. I love this story it touched my heart deeply.
Vietnam had more victims than could've ever been documented. 😥😥 The atrocities they experienced, without ANY support is heartbreaking.
This story…. Man if anything ever could reach a person who has ptsd… it’s a good story like this
I like how they show the two characters in the story on the screen... I know that sounds dumb but it's pretty cool to know what they look like.
Anyone else notice how they're closed looks similar to each other's. 👀
I love your narrations man, your inflection and cadence of story telling is mesmerizing. Keep doing what you do.
Absolutely fabulous work, I love this story, I had a good friend who's dad was so much like Jack. Great story
Such a great story. Thanks for the narration!
Excellent! By far, the best narration and story I have heard.
" I am not Ben, I will give you what you're looking for. " bro chills bro !!
Damn I don't know what exactly I was expecting with this story, but it blew everything out of the water. Thanks for sharing this one with us MCP
I'm out of town for work for a week, so a hour long creepypasta makes things so much better :3
Wow. Just wow. My dad says he was a Marine tow truck driver but...??? Thank you daddy. Thank you to those that, are and will be our protectors. Respect.
Great story
Hell yes it was!
Great story
2nd that
Not gonna lie I was expecting some delta green type stuff to start happening the whole story, but I'm kinda glad that wasnt the case! Really well told story
I was putting myself in the narrator’s shoes, I got pulled out of it when Jack asked “You got a girlfriend?“. I’m gay. And it’s always anxiety inducing when people ask me this, especially older people, especially older men. Trying to determine in a split second weather this person seems like a threat or not. Having to decide whether it’s OK to just say, “no, I’m gay actually, but I don’t have a boyfriend either” or to just deliver the half truth of “no, I don’t have a girlfriend.” And leave it at that. It was strange and unexpected when we found out that Jack’s son was gay. Still processing the emotions his story made me feel.
This is the reason your narrations are the best the subject matter is always on point… Cheers mate
Wow as always big brother you did justice to a nuther one perfect emotion...had me in tear.there when recounting his son! Blessings..and as always RESPECT!
Anyone just love this one to the point of having it repeat at times.
Umpf, there's nothing better then a good story when I'm working
thank you for posting this. It’s such a coincidence because of what I’m currently going through with a loved one. So this one hit home. Thanks again man. Been a supporter for 5 years now. Sending love.
No monsters no killers nor evil gods ....just an old man with a past
Haven't found myself submerged in a creepypasta since highschool. Not a knock on your narrating skills, just kinda phased out of it. This was great
Nothing more horrifying than what man can do to each other.
So Jack finally left that shitty gas station at the edge of town 😂🥳 Im so happy for him!
You struck a nerve and a heart string with this one, Mr. Creepypasta. I am still serving, and the echos are very much with me and they are still loud.
Amazing, this tells the story of many cases of cross-generational suffering in the U.S post-Vietnam
To what do we owe the pleasure of a 1 hour creepypasta narration ?.
❤
Wow... this was a really great story.
Reminds me of my dad.. WWII, Korea and first part of Vietnam before he retired one messed up man meaner than a rattlesnake.
Awesome story kept me on the edge of my seat hanging on every word
Cried so hard and started to laugh...
Never ceases to amaze what reminds me of humanity at its worst and best.
Theres still beauty in it all!
Lawd, my favorite narrator doing an hour-long exceptional creepypasta about my favorite historical subject. A true windfall!
This was not what I was expecting but wow!!!!! It nearly made me cry, and the message hit home hard. Thank you.
Loved this story and as always you narrated it fabulously , thank you .
I love Nam stories.
This is an incredible story!!
Highly recommend, you won't regret it. ❤
Great story. It was one of those ones that could actually be true. It's sad how true it is. Veterans of all types are never the same after their service.
And you’ll never know what you’d be like without it.
@@alexalexander1772 absolutely but you do have to wonder would you be better or worse.
This was really good. One of the best I have heard in a long time.
Enjoyed the story! I love the long one. Good job!
I needed this! Thank you for this. I know im.some guy you don't know, but man this, this was much needed. MRCREEPYPASTA YOU THE MVP
This was a HEATER bro! Keep up the great work and glad to be apart of the Mr.CreepyP gang.
Best written story I’ve heard you do. Your narration made it absolutely shine!
Amazing story! Sitting on the edge of my sit the whole time! Could be a great movie ❤
Wow...wow....wow.!!! Such a great story, and wonderful storytelling....thank you!!!
Man, this was just a downright great pasta, and an excellent reading. Fantastic work as per usual, Mr.
10 minutes in and this is already one of the best ones I've heard you do in a long while, MCP.
The horror isn't some monster or unknown entity, the horror is us...
Amazing writing. I had to stop cleaning and sit and listen
Wow. That hits me in the feels. You almost made me cry, kid.
Holy crap! Your skill really shines on this one. You truly are a master at your craft!!! Your narration really compliments this amazing story.
Absolutely awesome story the rawness of it had me glued to it
Ho-lee shit. Was just looking for something longer to fall back asleep to… Boy, was I wrong. Did not see this coming. Wonderfully done. I’ll be mulling this over for a couple days. Re-listening at some point also. Incredible story & message. Good image to go along w/ it btw!
This reminds me of old school MCP where the stories caught you and didn't let go
There's a little bit of Jack in each of us, there's a whole hell of a lot of Jack in every alcoholic
Author knows his shit about soldiers and history. That's kinda rare tbh
beautiful & haunting story and beautifully told, as well, thanks to the whole team for cooking it up so nicely ❤🌙
Not gonna lie this story is amazing I didn't realize is was going to be over this fast
I didn't hurt her.
Jack proceeds to choke his wife.
This is a great story- hooked me right away. Awesome narration too. Much thanks!
This is easily one of the best stories I’ve listened to
the best creepypastas are rarely about the supernatural or the things that go bump.. they're about the human experience
Everybody has demons, even if they are suppressed to the point where they are (temporarily) hidden.
One day, they will arise again. The best we can do is hope we have the strength to defeat them when they come
Solid story and well narrated.
I am at 23:57 and boy jack is the exact reason I never could live in the usa. Like walking on eggshells even though he is a fictional character. He is just so unpleasant. Suburban american boomer veteran with an unpredictable personality is my worst nightmare. Idk if he is just complex and shit, and traumatized. He's just icky. I love it.
Epic narrated story, one of the best you've done. Thank you and respect to the author