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  • @daledrakewriter4912
    @daledrakewriter4912 Před 3 lety +144

    I am glad you all like this so much because I am writing a novel of it right now due out at the end of the year. Johnny goes questing all across a demon apocalypse world searching for the spear of destiny. The very spear that pierced Christ side. In order to save mankind from lucifer and all the minions of hell. Some of this work is taken from the book call it a little taste of much more to come.

    • @tornadospin9
      @tornadospin9 Před 2 lety +5

      I am a devote practicing Catholic and I love this story. If you have any questions about Catholicism that you need answered while writing this story, feel free to ask

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 Před 2 lety +3

      @@tornadospin9 shhhh me to.

    • @draztiktunez7104
      @draztiktunez7104 Před 2 lety +4

      @Dale Drake dude you are an amazing writer . I love your take on Heaven and Hell and the mythos behind it and the universe you created I really loved the Hells Creek series hope to see more of that . You create really engaging characters , and paint a very vivid picture . Do you have any actual novels out for sale yet and also do you need artwork for your stories? Anyway keep it up dude your talented for real.

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 Před 2 lety +2

      @@draztiktunez7104 I have two books out a book of shorts and a novel called Blood Heritage. That I wrote some years ago

    • @nrg6245
      @nrg6245 Před 2 lety

      Lol it reminds me of Supernatural!!! I love it.

  • @t0nicss867
    @t0nicss867 Před 3 lety +42

    This may be the resurgence of actually good creepypasta's. Fucking crazy

    • @billboardfire5837
      @billboardfire5837 Před 3 lety +1

      Mcp has kept his content a mixed pool of great and meh. It's because there are only so many great CP writers these days . Honestly I appreciate though it make the ones that are good stick out.

    • @t0nicss867
      @t0nicss867 Před 3 lety +4

      @@billboardfire5837 you took the words out of my mouth, it's either god tier "Penpal", "Psychosis", or "a favor for a favor" level of content. Or it's "7.5 spooky scary diarrhea inducing rules my new prostitute job has me following"

    • @GageMason
      @GageMason Před 2 lety

      @@t0nicss867lmfaooo true

  • @GlitchedMuse
    @GlitchedMuse Před 3 lety +52

    To anyone wondering, Et Ex Diaboli means And From The Devil

  • @daledrakewriter4912
    @daledrakewriter4912 Před 3 lety +112

    This is part 1 of one long story part 2 tomorrow night.

  • @only1luv
    @only1luv Před rokem +3

    Im a BIG fan of Dale Drake. The narrations are also very very good. 👍👍👍👍

  • @DeadHorse84
    @DeadHorse84 Před 2 lety +1

    "Yeah. You said that."
    *Chills*

  • @artOVtrolling
    @artOVtrolling Před rokem +1

    Me when at an interview when the potential employer asks about my weaknesses. “I’ve always had a big heart. It’s my greatest strength… but also my greatest weakness…” I never do get called back.

    • @docop8926
      @docop8926 Před rokem

      is this the second messiah story?

  • @daledrakewriter4912
    @daledrakewriter4912 Před 3 lety +58

    OK I got told off by someone on the last Broken Messiah. So here we go this story is very adult themed and you may hear some naughty words and extreme violence. Which is just the way I like them and I hope you all enjoy the hell out of it lol.

    • @theraventrickster9825
      @theraventrickster9825 Před 3 lety +8

      Yeah, yeah, yeah. Poor peeps who can only handle G - PG13 ratings. Constantine rocked and was full of F bombs and violence. Keep up the great work! It's been Hell waiting for part 2 of this, now waiting for part 3 is going to be worse.

    • @fire_rises
      @fire_rises Před 3 lety +4

      I liked it a lot. Camt wait for for part 3

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 Před 3 lety +5

      @@theraventrickster9825 You won't wait long it's out tonight lol

    • @dsm4462
      @dsm4462 Před 3 lety +2

      Mr Drake, you’re a talented writer.

    • @vanessaashford9203
      @vanessaashford9203 Před 3 lety +4

      seriously? People get mad about adult content in *horror* of all things?? I'll never understand this mentality, like it's a genre that's literally all about being disturbing (although in all seriousness, the US has got to be just about the only place in the world where grown ass adults are still *disturbed* by "cusses" lmao), would they rather it just all be people resolving their differences peacefully and civilly and no one gets hurt?? lol

  • @christinestreeter8566
    @christinestreeter8566 Před 3 lety +5

    DAMN!! That was something else Dale Drake!! This story is coming together nicely!! My heart is literally pounding right now from the fantastic narration by MCP (💚) and the story as it unfolded. Wow can’t wait for the next installment. ThNk you both for bringing us such great stories. 💙

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 Před 3 lety +2

      You are always welcome. This is my favourite universe and will soon be a full novel.

  • @willy.c3234
    @willy.c3234 Před 2 lety +4

    We need more, this story is so thrilling,I will be following the whole series 100%

  • @Nameless00Soul
    @Nameless00Soul Před 2 lety +2

    Incredibly interesting! Dale and MCP continue to impress.

  • @rocklobster2929
    @rocklobster2929 Před 3 lety +4

    Your music, sound effects, and narration are exquisite

  • @saralinnea9716
    @saralinnea9716 Před 3 lety +2

    I love when you read the patrons names at the end my favorite is the Prozac and pancake appreciation society💀

  • @skyler.a7288
    @skyler.a7288 Před 3 lety +4

    does anyone else find it very sweet how he always shouts out his wife's tea shop ,i find it so heart warming

  • @AG-en5y
    @AG-en5y Před 3 lety +2

    I am stoked for part 2. Great job!!!

  • @TheRowdyyOne
    @TheRowdyyOne Před 3 lety +2

    Wow what a good story. I could almost imagine the whole thing in my minds eye 👁 like a movie playing out in my head. Loved it.

  • @gavinlawson4103
    @gavinlawson4103 Před 3 lety +1

    This is superb, both the story and MCP's reading, can't wait for the next installment!!!

  • @punkyreggaeparty8786
    @punkyreggaeparty8786 Před 3 lety +1

    Another great read! Thank you, MCP. Stay well.

  • @colebrua6030
    @colebrua6030 Před 3 lety +3

    Really diggin this story, keep up the good work

  • @Michellee970
    @Michellee970 Před 3 lety +5

    By God, that was incredible! Please, please, bring us more!

  • @lavenderotaku2481
    @lavenderotaku2481 Před 3 lety +1

    “No. Fuck *you.* “
    That’s why I love these damn stories.

  • @DrTrench
    @DrTrench Před 3 lety +1

    Love this set up can't wait for more!

  • @user-us2rr7cd3x
    @user-us2rr7cd3x Před 3 lety +3

    Yay loved this one! One or my fav narrators out there! Keep it up. Love me the longer ones too...cant wait for the next part

  • @garenkinoguhyt7088
    @garenkinoguhyt7088 Před 3 lety +2

    Awesome story line

  • @williambarr6072
    @williambarr6072 Před 3 lety +1

    This was awesome I hope there is more of the story

  • @eryn9242
    @eryn9242 Před rokem +2

    These stories are perfect for a smoke and a meal on my porch, keep up the writing and you sir keep up the perfect narrations you do so well, До Свидания и спокойной ночи мой друг

  • @user-qs1wp4vx7m
    @user-qs1wp4vx7m Před 3 lety +3

    So happy for this part 2

  • @puertoricanpapi1356
    @puertoricanpapi1356 Před rokem +1

    Prozac and pancake appreciation society. Lmao

  • @jrcicirello
    @jrcicirello Před 3 lety +1

    I truly hope this will be a series. What a fantastic bit of writing and your performance was EXCELLENT!!!

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 Před 3 lety +3

      Have you heard the other one called Broken Messiah

    • @jrcicirello
      @jrcicirello Před 3 lety +2

      @@daledrakewriter4912 no, but will listen to it now. Thanks for the referral.

    • @jrcicirello
      @jrcicirello Před 3 lety +2

      @@daledrakewriter4912 wish I had listened to this one first. Now the Broken Messiah Et ex Diaboli makes more of a story. Thanks for the referral.

  • @joshquivey6990
    @joshquivey6990 Před 2 lety

    Stories like this are what keep me coming back time and again to this channel, and I've held it up as an example of what today's horror can be.

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 Před 2 lety +1

      Damn. Thank you lol.

    • @joshquivey6990
      @joshquivey6990 Před 2 lety +1

      @@daledrakewriter4912 My pleasure. If there's anything I can do to help you out with this or another project, I'd be quite interested in discussing such!

  • @crushone1
    @crushone1 Před 3 lety +2

    You are always great with biblical stories! This has to have a continuation.🤔😁

  • @3RAN7ON
    @3RAN7ON Před 2 lety +2

    13:41 the word "attache" pronounced
    ahh tah shay

  • @jimmyjohnson6232
    @jimmyjohnson6232 Před 7 měsíci

    Love this series

  • @kikiblair5132
    @kikiblair5132 Před 2 lety +1

    Guy literally bit a ghoul. Lolm

  • @christiangraham4579
    @christiangraham4579 Před 3 lety +2

    Damn so far so great!

  • @TheBaconStrip
    @TheBaconStrip Před 3 lety +5

    Dale Drake and Mr Creepypasta have really been doing a "HELL" of a job!

  • @Aefray
    @Aefray Před 3 lety

    I like it. Left us wanting though 😩. Look forward to the next installment. 😀

  • @jabbarmuhammad7529
    @jabbarmuhammad7529 Před 3 lety +3

    Hell of a good story

  • @hellocreepypastasfans2224

    Nice Mr. CreepyPasta

  • @Sentinel_of_armageddon

    Best narrator in the business.

  • @gabemesa3921
    @gabemesa3921 Před 3 lety +1

    This was really cool

  • @Chopped_2_bits
    @Chopped_2_bits Před 3 lety +1

    MMOORREEEE. I NEEDD MOREEEEE

  • @mikephil8337
    @mikephil8337 Před 3 lety +2

    Amazing can't wait for part 2

  • @lovellhorrors1586
    @lovellhorrors1586 Před 2 lety +1

    Is it even possible for someone's teeth to itch?

  • @kuchiman69
    @kuchiman69 Před 3 lety +3

    Isn't there a prequel to this? Seem to remember something about Johnny's parents getting killed by a demon and he as a little boy killed the demon they had tied up?

  • @3RAN7ON
    @3RAN7ON Před 2 lety +1

    17:32 the word "respite" pronounced rest-pit

  • @TheSpecialGrade
    @TheSpecialGrade Před 3 lety +1

    This was extremely interesting especallly the lore

  • @H0RR0R_HANG0VERZ
    @H0RR0R_HANG0VERZ Před rokem +1

    SO 👏 FU€KING 👏 GOOD 👏

  • @wizardtxtmsg
    @wizardtxtmsg Před 3 lety +1

    dude really sad "damn boy you thicc"

  • @jaybiggsthegreat5990
    @jaybiggsthegreat5990 Před 3 lety +2

    Never experienced itching teeth and don't think I want too so one priest a day or maybe none just to be safe😂😂😂😂😂😂

  • @spoomftheimmortal4960
    @spoomftheimmortal4960 Před 3 lety +1

    *Bites ghoul* oh how the turns have tabled 🤣😂🤣

  • @ditto8883
    @ditto8883 Před 3 lety +1

    Let’s go a new video!

  • @cincylaw14
    @cincylaw14 Před 3 lety +1

    God that was good. Ahhhmeeennn

  • @SisuGirl
    @SisuGirl Před 3 lety +1

    Well, damn, Dale Drake. 🔥This is one helluva well-written story. I know there are plenty of Narrators & Authors who do not care for my comments, but is there a reason to offer false compliments when a story is written incredibly poorly and/or the narration is filled with mispronounced words or are unable to capture the essence of the Author’s words & ideations.
    To me? There is nothing more frightening than Catholicism, Exorcisms, Demons, & the lot. Yes, I believe “The Exorcist” was not only the best, but also the most horrific book/movie I’ve ever read/seen. I think that you tapped into that (in)famous book & MCP, as always, performed this to the highest of standards.
    Again, I know I absolutely critique CPs/Horror at a high level of scrutiny. This? Just remarkably well done. I truly loved the two of you working together to create an incredible terror-filled ride.
    Great work, Gentlemen! Bravo!
    ~Laryssa~

  • @Talon-6
    @Talon-6 Před 3 lety +1

    I really liked this story... love it

    • @user-bi9ik8vs1r
      @user-bi9ik8vs1r Před 3 lety

      I​have attached my updated version of the document with the o on your side but I have to storrs it up with my self in writing to see if it has been done

    • @user-bi9ik8vs1r
      @user-bi9ik8vs1r Před 3 lety

      Power of love will be again and longer in last few years when I have to the best of all my love

    • @user-bi9ik8vs1r
      @user-bi9ik8vs1r Před 3 lety

      Love is love amazing love. In majestic years old

    • @user-bi9ik8vs1r
      @user-bi9ik8vs1r Před 3 lety

      I believe that true sense life together

    • @user-bi9ik8vs1r
      @user-bi9ik8vs1r Před 3 lety

      Much more than to wait for the next couple of year out

  • @MansaVibez
    @MansaVibez Před 3 lety +1

    Great

  • @theneet9528
    @theneet9528 Před 3 lety

    finallly

  • @mlhlite74able
    @mlhlite74able Před 3 lety

    Great start, You have my permission to continue 😉

  • @AustinAllenRaney
    @AustinAllenRaney Před 3 lety +2

    This Ghost rider approves of this Message!
    🕶️🌑

  • @ScullyPopASMR
    @ScullyPopASMR Před 3 lety +1

    Hey Mr. Pasta 🤙

  • @bisonjoy70
    @bisonjoy70 Před 3 lety

    MORE MORE MORE OF THIS STORY, PLEASE

  • @GredelsRage
    @GredelsRage Před 3 lety +2

    I almost stopped listening...so glad i didn't

  • @jackeilhigh
    @jackeilhigh Před 3 lety

    Jonny ……Jonny….. 🎶
    Eating…… sauger…. 🎶

  • @earndoggy
    @earndoggy Před 3 lety +1

    Why don't they just fill a tub full of holy water and dump the thing in it?

  • @docop8926
    @docop8926 Před rokem +1

    how they get the girl/demon?
    isnt this the second one?

  • @stefanfoot3047
    @stefanfoot3047 Před 2 lety +2

    This is an awesome series. I just wish I watched them in the correct order haha. Im looking forward to future stories. I really like the post apocalyptic Diablo II vibes.

  • @clover2856
    @clover2856 Před 3 lety +1

    Here i was thinking this story took place in the wild west

    • @piggiebabe
      @piggiebabe Před 3 lety

      Yeah, I think the guy in the Wild West one is the grandfather of this one. Someone mentioned it in the last episode.

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 Před 3 lety +3

      @@piggiebabe yes Johnny is the great, great grandson of Jacob Masterson from Hell's Creek another demon hunter from another time.

    • @piggiebabe
      @piggiebabe Před 3 lety +1

      @@daledrakewriter4912 Thanks for clarifying that. You are one exceptionally good storyteller. 👍

  • @Geminiexceed
    @Geminiexceed Před 2 lety

    What's the reading/listening order?

    • @dsm4462
      @dsm4462 Před rokem

      Start with Hells Creek, then the Broken Messiah series, then The Masterson Chronicles. Hope that helps!

  • @GDooMCF
    @GDooMCF Před 3 lety +2

    Someone give me a resume of this one please?

  • @WindyBurns
    @WindyBurns Před 2 lety +1

    ♥️

  • @CezaMVO
    @CezaMVO Před 3 lety +2

    MCP answer me this tough guy, whose your favorite narrator? Getting the MCP cosign is big

  • @commandercomzmo1250
    @commandercomzmo1250 Před 3 lety

    Damn good sorry and damn who els is high right now lol

  • @thomaslowe4774
    @thomaslowe4774 Před 3 lety +1

    Attaché is pronounced AH-TAH-SHAY.

  • @joehartman5543
    @joehartman5543 Před 3 lety

    Reminds me of Bloodborne

  • @cameronjordan1516
    @cameronjordan1516 Před 3 lety

    30.32

  • @greatgallade
    @greatgallade Před 3 lety

    Fucking interesting

  • @kevinwalden4288
    @kevinwalden4288 Před 3 lety

    PLEASE TELL ME THERE'S MORE

  • @negligent_omnicide
    @negligent_omnicide Před 3 lety

    DemonLand! Weeeeeee!

  • @user-bi9ik8vs1r
    @user-bi9ik8vs1r Před 3 lety

    Broke down with the other people who is going to be able to get the funds in my

  • @robzembes
    @robzembes Před 3 lety +2

    E

  • @radamesboscolo
    @radamesboscolo Před 3 lety

    And all in un religion or matter to be..

  • @maestromike91971
    @maestromike91971 Před 2 lety

    I am Not bragging! I don’t really want this to me! But people say I look like Jesus? I went to prayer groups who , are mainly people who want to take your mom. And their ruthless. I had a full beard. And longer hair. 😆. They’re one I went to a service in the basement of the church mu sister went to.. it is a Catholic church and I was a Protestant proud we lived with other part of the family, as my parents passed away when I was pregnant a baby. So we went to different churches. We went to different Churches ..

  • @everettatkepgroovin
    @everettatkepgroovin Před 3 lety +1

    Did a 6th grader write this

  • @daytonroeleveld6002
    @daytonroeleveld6002 Před 3 lety

    My
    Kun c

  • @amtrakfan9125
    @amtrakfan9125 Před 3 lety

    I don’t speak Latin?

  • @issshanesmart8480
    @issshanesmart8480 Před 3 lety

    autistic not broken

  • @lordtadpole5th678
    @lordtadpole5th678 Před 3 lety +3

    If this guy was a legitimate voice actor. I'd of fired him along time ago.
    You can't take this guy's voice seriously.
    Change it for Your sake...

    • @Sasha-jo4tw
      @Sasha-jo4tw Před 3 lety +2

      his voice sounds fine and whats even the point of your comment? its his voice, what do you want him to do about it????

    • @reapersmind7162
      @reapersmind7162 Před 3 lety +1

      @@Sasha-jo4tw ikr what a tool

  • @xGojo_Satorux
    @xGojo_Satorux Před 3 lety

    E