"Broken Messiah: Retribution" | Creepypasta Storytime
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Hope you like this one. Sorry it took so long, had long covid. I am currently working on the next Hellbound. Shouldn't be to much longer.
Ahh, your writing is amazing! When this series is over, and you were to turn it into a book I'd def get it, this and hell bound are my favorites!
@@peskygoat4293 Thank you. I think I am Gona break the novel up and put them on the channel for the original fans.
Ah my new favorite Creepy pasta Writer
It’s amazing you should get in talks with some animators this would be a badass Anime or something
@@YAKUZA7759 thank you.
MrCreepyPasta, your voice is spectacular. I'm in love with this series and hellbound. Mr. Dale thank you for the beautiful writing and marvelous story.
Glad you liked it still much more to come and Hellbound very soon a couple of weeks at the most. Depending on my editor, lol.
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Hell yeah ! The Dale Drake stories are easily in my top favorites . Amazing writing and narration . I love the Broken Messiah series , Hell Bound , Hells Creek , The Family , lol all of them . Mr Drake is gifted esp with supernatural stories , and thank you M.C.P for all the great narrations .
Mr Drake your stories are reminiscent of Heinlien future history stories. I can never wait for what is to come next. Mr. CREEPYPASTA top notch music and narration. Until next time.
Huge thunderstorms going in here in glorious NZ, and I'm listening through this again because its bloody awesome and you bring it to life like one of Gabriels Chosen. Thanks for an excellant job as always MrC, Cheers. Lee.
Hellbound is my favorite creepypasta series ever, this one is not too far behind it
This series just keeps getting better.
Two amputated thumbs up on the narration.
Dale Drake! Yassss this. Tysm for the next Broken Messiah! You have several series' that I am following closely and just love how they are interconnecting!
Well I like the broken Messiah series at the same time they’re so infrequent I think MCP Really needs to do a recap at the beginning of every new episode because I forget what happened beforehand
Can’t count how many times I’ve fallen dead asleep to your stories thanks 🙃
1:16 I heard that shovel scraping in the background. Who're you boutta bury Mr.CreepyPasta?,??
This might be my fav 2022 creepypasta
I hope it gets to the point where he fights all the sins, he already kill gluttony
Huh. I’m glad Father Micheal got some humility scared into him. I wanted to punt that man into the sun SO badly, but now I do feel bad; and also slightly happy that he actually has a heart.
ALSO OH MY GOODNESS. THE CAPTAIN OF THE SHIP. AA. I’m so happy about that refrence, I can’t even.
Yeah father Michael just popped up in this one I wasn't expecting him to be honest lol.
Downloaded Chilling and it’s great! Could even lock my phone and still listen.
What a cliffhanger
So does this take place in the same universe as Hellbound? Cause I remember a certain demon there being mentioned who isn’t a big fan of Lucifer
Thank you for this well written series
Oooooh I suspect Rapheal may come out of that up coming talk at the very least missing a body part. Perhaps a wing or two. Making deals with demons and devils are a no no.
Yeah I haven't written it yet but I have a feeling it's not going to go well lol.
@@daledrakewriter4912 Then we'll just have to wait patiently for the next part with giddy anticipation. All the while ribbing Rapheal to write a darn good apology speech in the mean time. lol
@@ZedMazaus480 Johnny may just take his head off. Before he can explain lol.
@@daledrakewriter4912 Lmao! True.
Dale is a absolutely amazing writer!!!
Well thank you.
I just purchased your book can’t wait to read it!
I've been looking forward to this!!
I can't wait for the next chapter cuz this story is awesome keep up the great work!
you know im hearing alot about this chilling app lately might have to check it out here soon! good video as always mrcreepypasta!
This is brilliant!
Definitely a bit of Berserker in there but your own work is still awesome though Mr. Drake. ❤️
Absolutely love this series can't wait for more
I really like this series, great narration
loved this one hope to see more
Finally one of my favorites! I love the Broken Messiah, Hell Bound, The Family, and the Hell Creek
Hellbound coming soon just after I fix my leaking shower lol.
I really love The Masterson Chronicles (Hell's Creek) it's driving me crazy with the cliffhanger ending. All and all I love your work Dale.
Hey you're finally awake.
Damned stormcloaks.
I've been waiting so long for another Broken Messiah - Excellent story!
Sorry for the long wait. Hope it was worth it for you.
@@daledrakewriter4912 it certainly was, as a Roman Catholic I find this storyline fanating
Me too
Worth the wait. Ready for more
Won't be as long next time lol
This was awesome I have been waiting so long for this.
Well there you go lol. Hope you enjoyed it and it was worth the wait.
@@daledrakewriter4912 It was totally worth the wait.
Props Homie ✌🏻🐵✌🏻,been waiting patiently ✌🏻🐵✌🏻
So awesome. Can't wait at all for the next chapter
Better get busy writing them then lol. Just got to wrap up the 4th Hellbound first.
Dale’s stories are amazing!
Asmodeus bromance confirmed.
Yeah, I’m gonna need the next part ASAP!
Very nice loving this story
YES I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THID
Can't wait to hear more.
This one is creepypasta devil may cry and i love it.
Yo I been waiting for the next one
What a cliffhanger can't wait for the next one
💚Amazing as always,Dale. I can't wait for Hellbound!!🖤 I think that I'm gonna restart from the beginning with this one tonight.
Go for it I love writing Broken Messiah.
I am judge justice and executioner
@@bloddybow That's damn right.
7:07 Bruh you know Raphael wants to KILL Johnny 🤣
One of my favorites
I need more of this
Do more of this story please would love to hear it
Moooooooore I neeeeed mooooooooore!!!!!!!
Great story.
Awesome Narrator!! 👍🏽🙂
😱 omg one of the best creepypastas I've heard in a while!!!! Would love to hear more!!! Is this a sequel or beginning?
There are 3 more of these.
This is actually the 4th in the Broken Messiah series that Mrcreepypasta has narrated. He has a Dale Drake playlist and I HIGHLY recommend the HellBound and the Masterson Chronicles series' as well!
I can't wait for the next one
Have you heard the other 3
Yes sir I have amazing truly.
Sounds like a title of a video game.
Lol it does give me a Metal Gear Rising Revengence vibe.
@@YAKUZA7759 never played that game, any good?
@@TheAngelinahuang yes it’s one of my favorite video games of all time and my favorite Metal gear game
Could you please add this to the Spotify playlist xx
We need MORE …. LoL 😝
Mcp,good series. Can you do more! Yee
FUCK YEAH!🤓 I've been wanting for another chapter of the Broken Messiah
Nothing like some good old fashioned Christian mythology horror.
I NEED MORE!!! 🥺 P-p-p-please!!
In the meantime, I guess I’ll go check out some of Drake’s other stories!! ❤
Thanks for speaking that ad fast as an auctioneer.
As a 30 year old man it creeps me out every time you say "hello kids" or "goodnight kids" 😂 please stop
Bwahahaha right?! I'm 44!
Please find the rest of the story
I love this series, but I'm confused. What is the difference between Johnny Masterson and Jacob Masterson? Are they related in some way?
Johnny is Jacob's grandson or great grandson, not sure which.
So was this demon disguised as a resurrected Lilith?
Yeah lol
Broke messiah is one of my favorite series but it's like a real bad relationship. You don't ever know when the next episode will drop or if it ever well but when it does it is an hour of pure heavan on earth
Damn that made me laugh so hard lmao.
Is there going episode of this series
Can someone give me the order to listen to broken messiah in and where do I start as far as all the series?
Is there gonna be another episode)
Yaaaay!
Yaaaay indeed lol
When is the next one coming out?
Can someone help me know what order do I watch this in? Sorry
Pls don’t make us wait till next year for the next part
I will try lol
Can someone tell me which videos follow this storyline? I'm lost and feel like I missed a few things. I've listened to all of hellbound and I think I've listened to all of the masterson chronicles, though that's where I find I've missed a lot of content
This series the broken Messiah is set in the same universe as The Masterson Chronicles which is a prequel to Hellbound and this series the Broken Messiah is the sequel to Hellbound it was Mr Christian Davis that set off the apocalypse in b
Broken Messiah and Johnny Masterson is the great,great grandson of Jacob Masterson from The Masterson Chronicles. There are about five or six of The Broken Messiah all here on the channel.
@@daledrakewriter4912 okay so it seems like I did get the whole plot. Maybe I just didn't want the series to end lol
It hasn't there is so much more Broken Messiah coming and Mr Davis will be back.
@@daledrakewriter4912 fr? That's amazing
❤️
Is this guy not doing any more?
Raphael will betray the pope in the next episode, Raphael is also trying to end the world
I'll be there
Is this the apocalypse?
So I'm crying sol I'm gonna see if this helps
Is there a part 5
Coming soon.
@@daledrakewriter4912 this is one of the greatest stories I've ever heard great job brother
And now we wait......😐
Ukrainian horror story’s / urban legends would be awsome to hear
Can anyone tell me the order of the Broken Messiah series? Is this the fourth installment?
Exactly? And how I Jacob and Jonathan related?
Is this a series and am I missing parts
Three more before this one.
Dale Drake has several series ongoing right now that all interconnect. This is Broken Messiah, the 4th one that has been narrated. HellBound, Hells Creek, the Masterson Chronicles, and eventually even The Family are turning up in each other's stories. Mrcreepypasta has a Dale Drake playlist that has them all! Check them out, they are awesome!
@@crystalpasta Well thank you.
@@daledrakewriter4912 oh you are quite welcome. Thank YOU for sharing your talent and art with us!
elden ring and creepypasta time
Not played it yet. Massive Skyrim fan. Do you think it's for me ?
is this the third?
AAA shit right here
Is this the last one?
Nope
@daledrakewriter4912 so on this story where would this fit?
@@notusgodwind4512 sorry this is the last one so far.
This is something I find a bit odd about religious horror. It implies that things like the witch trials were justified. It implies that bigotry and hatred towards other religions is actually sanctioned by the Divine, and that other gods were all false. And it implies that most people, who have done nothing wrong by modern moral standards (guilty for things like being gay, wearing polyester, or knowing about Christianity but not wanting to worship Christ), either are in hell or will go to hell. That said, it's a great story.
In other words the way it was for recorded history up until early 1900s
Is that really the end.. disappointed
Only the end of this part the story will continue.
@@daledrakewriter4912 Thank you
Does the Xbox come with a free taco?
low brow huh.
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