“Broken Messiah Deals with Devils” | Creepypasta Storytime
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Look out for The City of Midnight coming soon.
Man, I have to say... I started with Hellpoint and have made it through this whole series (Broken Messiah, Masterson, Hellpoint) multiple times... thank you so much for the AMAZING stories! Keep it up! Can't wait for the next one 👍🍻
@@CZcamsForKicks I've done the same. Hellbound was an amazing tie in. All the stories are a pure gift i look forward to
@@ZombieGraciewho knows. Well i do lol
I love these stories. I have enjoyed them all. I'm glad to hear this one. MCP does an AWESOME job narrating them.
Ok this may sound bad.. but your stories make my balls explode every single time
Dale Drake is one badass writer. You've wrote some masterpieces. Thanks for another one my Friend.
You MrCreepy Voice are a work of Art yourself awesome narration as always Brother
Appreciate it pal.
@Rorschach 0007 like Ernest Hemingway my man or the Luke Hemingway that writes stories on here
@@TheStuart-of-Cosby1aa😊
@@daledrakewriter4912 Awesomeness Mr Drake. I've Spent the day Re Listening to these Works of Art. Thanks again my Friend, You do some mighty fine work
Masterpieces? Of what?
Abashed the Devil stood and saw how awful goodness is.
Well, this did not disappoint. Great work. I Can't wait for City of Midnight,I've got to say I hope we catch up with Mr.Davis.
Dudes been hitting it hard with Bonesaw Vic yesterday and Broken Messiah today!!! This is one of the best narrators out there, appreciate u bro!
Still patiently waiting for that showdown between Johnny Masterson and Christian Davis
Which ones have Mr Davis in them? I heard them a long time ago, but can't remember
@@hockeyman8799ablestories called hellbound
@@hockeyman8799ableHellbound. There's a story that happens before it but I can't remember which
Bro this was MY FIRST CREEPY PASTA THAT I LISTENED ALL THE WAY THROUGH THIS WAS AMAZINGGGG
I literally just finished Retribution, amazing timing. 2 hours to go!
Excellent name I wish I'd thought of that, also this whole series is 🔥 not long now!
I JUST finished all of these AND the Masterson Chronicles and I want MORE!! I'm so excited for the book and I TRULY cannot handle my excitement about it. I definitely will need notification ASAP about it. I've been searching EVERYTHING to get something about it. I usually don't try very new things or uncompleted things but this was a very happy surprise!!
The tie ins here are just insane
I'm glad this continued ❤
I thought the Masterson Chronicles were over. So glad that I was wrong
Every time the phrase “Spear of Destiny” is spoken I hear it in the voice of Lucifer from the movie Constantine.
A great one and I can see how a demon of lust would want things to go back to how they where before the fall.
Sheer brilliance!
yes! Today's alright
I would love to hear some new tale's from the gas station, that's what really got me into creepy pastas to begin with
I'm sure he's working on the final book on Audible. We're all waiting patiently with excitement!... Well I am anyway.
@@kevskikane so they're all on audible now there's nothing further going to be dropped on here? I wouldn't even know where to start on audible
@@Ipo_Ooped_Maself I think that depends on if the author continues the series or not, as while the mainline stories have all been done on Audible for a while now (it's actually because of some weird exclusivity thing with Amazon and how and where writing that is sold through there is distributed through other media, iirc), every so often the author releases a one-off for MCP to read on the channel, I think especially to promote further work on the series. That being said, I also haven't kept up on what is on Audible now, so it's possible that the series *is* over now, but I'm not sure,
@@vanessaashford9203 appreciate the info. Just to clarify are you referring to the gas station series or the Masterson Chronicles? I really should just subscribe to audible and see what's there
@@Ipo_Ooped_Maself they're not. There's one more to go. I follow him on twitter and he keeps getting asked about it on there etc and he said he tries to get it recorded during the day.
Once again top shelf all the way. Everything about your channel is what makes scary stories great
Outstanding narration and an excellent story man I feel for poor Raphael Johnny drove him nuts lol this is a masterpiece thanks
Ok this story ended up being way better than I expected hoping there is a part 2 and 3 and 4.
Have you listened to part 1,2,3,4 because I think this is the 5th maybe 6th of this series.
@@daledrakewriter4912 where are they
@@PaulosTheGamerAll here on this channel
@@daledrakewriter4912I’m also wondering, so MrCreepyPasta narrated up to this part of the series… Is there any parts following this series? This is such an inconclusive ending to the story and it’s driving me insane
Masterson is back!!
I haven't listened to it yet but...YES YES YES. HELLBOUND WAS EXCELLENT AND THIS IS GOING TO BE AWESOME.
Enthralled. I'm absolutely enthralled. Bravo.
More please.
LETS FUCKING GO! one of my most favorite series by far!
Love love loved it! Thanks Mr.CreepyPasta
Awesome narration man! this series and many of the other story's really awesome
Looking forward to this story
Great story, Mr. Creepy Pasta!❤
I need more of this story, it needs to be completed
NO WAY BRO HOLY ASFDFASDGSDG. I apologize.. first Bonesaw Vic, THEN JONNY MASTERSON BROO.. Bro your channel is literally the worlds greatest alternative to Viagra..
Masterfully done!
C'mon johnny you gotta get up in that while the opportunity arises. I'm sure it'll be all good since you're about to partner with a prince of hell anyway.
Love these stories
I was surprised how much I liked this 👍🏽
Happy to see another installment in this series. Awesome. Love the biblical stuff, by the way.
Amazing
❤️ this .Encore Encore 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
Can someone tells me when this takes place? I thought the series was over after he settled down with his decreased wife's sister or niece
That was Jacob Masterson this is Johnny Masterson
I love this
This should be a movie🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Oh snap , Mr.Masterson is back for blood.
This would make an amazing RPG. Start by creating your own broken messiah gather thing in the world to make things like holy rounds and oils. Something a kin to Fallout and the Witcher would be amazing
Great story, but Asmo and Mamon's names got switched up when Raph was talking to Jonny at 42:04.
Thank you.
Broken Messiah yes!!!
Good to continue Dan Masterson saga
First off I wanted to say I’ve really been enjoying this connected universe. Superb character writing and connectivity throughout most, if not all of your work.
I do have a critique/question? In the previous part Johnny met Lust and introduced themselves and they go through a similar interaction again in this part.
Also Johnny goes throughout the first half of this chapter as if they have no idea which demon/entity they’ll be meeting where as to me I felt confused on why Johnny was confused shouldn’t he, know or at the very least have a high suspicion that it’s Asmodeus?
Again, love you work and I’m genuinely invested in the universe just seeking some clarity on why you chose this approach.🤎
Ok gotcha. Here we go the Broken Messiah started off as a series of short stories then I wrote a novel of the Broken Messiah this story is a splicing of the shorts into the timeline of the novel which I am going to let you guys listen to for free. So in this case some of the info from the shorts clashed a little with the novel. To be honest I got a little confused but the Broken Messiah as gone through so many twist and turns from shorts to full book that it got a little confusing there for a min. I try my best but nobody is perfect right. This writing stuff isn't easy to do also keeping track of character timelines and thinking up new stuff. I was also writing Hellbound, The Family, The Masterson Chronicles and Broken Messiah all at the same time. Hope this answers your questions and thanks for any support hopefully we can do better next time lol.
Thank you so much for the response and yes that makes perfect sense! Just some overlap due to a stitching together the story of sorts.
I don’t think this necessarily harms the story it was just a bit repetitive and I was wondering why the space was being utilized for the recap instead of extended character exploration and or world building, which you’re great at.
You’re a wonderful author and thank you for taking the time to write me back you are the writer though so please do as you see fit. I’m ecstatic for the ending of Broken Messiah 🤎
@@epichibi23 be a little while yet still a fair ways to go.
I've been watching you for years.
It's really cool to see you putting out a lot more stories,I hope you stay on a roll,I'm a big fan,I wish I had more money to prove it,a huge fan none the least
MAKE THIS A MOVIE
also we need more please 🥰
I'm calling it right now if I'm wrong I'm wrong I feel like we're about to get double-crossed I feel like something bad's about to happen if we give the spirit to so-and-so
My favorite stories are Dale Drake stories.
Got here just in time! 3 minutes to go :)
This seems to have a bunch of inconsistences with the previously established plot points in this one:
1. Why Masterson does not recognize that he is dealing with Asmodeus until basically told directly, when he already knows that Raphael made a deal with Asmodeus in the first place ?
2. Why does Asmodeus power remind Masterson only of Mammon, when just recently killed Beelzebub ?
3. Why does Raphael need the Spear to fight the other Princes, when the sword he empowered for Masterson was enough to deal with both Beelzebub and Lilith ?
4. And about the sword btw - didn't Raphael shatter it during their confrontation in the beginning ? Why Masterson still has it at the end ?
My goodness speak of the devil lol 2 of my faves with in 1 day??? Ugh!
I just recently started following this series does anyone know the chronology of it? Or is it like an anthology with different stories each time? I just finished “HellBound” and have been craving these stories. The author is brilliant.
Look in the description on this video they are listed in order there.
@@daledrakewriter4912 Roger that boss. Your stories are amazing, much respect and appreciation to your creativity my man.
That game looks like Skyrim n Steven King had a baby 😂
Gonna have to check it out.
Is this the second to broken messiah??? I have been keeping that story on a shelf for a good day.....
Check the description on this story for a playlist of the rest in order this is the 4 or 5th
@@daledrakewriter4912 thank you!!! I had been saving it for a rainy day, I started listening and was like 🤯 mind blown. Amazing work man!!! I'm going to listen this week when I have a 💩💩 day at work!! Thanks again 🖤 *****all in order that is*****
In the house of Asmodeus!
What was that video of a man taking care of this place and started going crazy? I remember there being this beast and him marking his territory at one point.
Bruh I love the thumbnail
Wait, so is this the end of The Broken Messiah story? After these 5 episodes I can't imagine it just ending like this.. What should I listen to next in this series? The Masterson Chronicles?? Hell bound? Please, lemme know brother. Thanks!
i know it has been a month since you left this comment, but the Masterson Chronicals and hellbound actually take place (in that order) before The Broken Messiah and should be listened to (at least in my opinion) before this. As for this being the end, thankfully that’s not the case, it just takes MrCreepyPasta a while to get through all his different stories which is why there has been no update in 6 months, i hope this helped.
@@jadendobbsare you sure there’s more? I can’t even find anything to READ as to there being more. Quite frustrating. If I can’t listen then I’d like to at least read it
I'm gonna look at the tea shop because I'm interested, but I most likely won't be able to order. I live in denmark, I live with my parents (not my house, as such I can't order things to the house without their permission), and I don't have enough allowance to spend it on tea unless it's some tea I REALLY want, but I like tea, so I'm gonna check it out regardless of if I'll be able to order or not!
Is there a part one to this?
Check the description
That's the saddest 1 I have heard. People suck
Is there a continuation of this series?
Is there more for this series
Does anyone have an update of when the next part will be released?
From the Land of NOD the Blood thirsty. Egypt has Shezmu.
Can you do Dancing alone by Mr. Outlaw. I think you'd be great at narrating it.
Sheer brilliance,!
Have we covered this series before? Is there more on this channel? Is there more coming? It’s a very good story
???????
Is there more to come to this ?
YESSSSSSSSSS
YESSS
So im new to this author, are the masterson's related? Like the cowboy and this hunter? And is hellbound another masterson?
You should make a jacket
Is there any more than deals with devils
I love this series but I am confused in hellbound Lucifer said that asmodeus was weak and couldn’t be on his level but if they are both fallen angels and asmodeus can do stuff like this then shouldn’t they be on the same level or at least extremely relative
Only just started this feels like John Constantine
Should listen to masterson chronicles and hellbound, they're all tied together.
Dale stop rolling twenties! Save some for the rest of the party damn.
I have no idea what that means but I hope it's good lol
@@daledrakewriter4912 Well, it's a Dungeon and Dragon's reference. Considering that 20 is highest possible roll with a single D20 dice - I think, this is supposed the praise ща writing quality )))
Now we wait until Xmas for the next one 😢
Xmas if you're lucky lol.
@@daledrakewriter4912 i opened the replies hoping you’d responded & hoping for good news, lol man you just broke my heart
@@FightingMECFSI was kidding be a lot sooner than that. Think you will enjoy the new City of Midnight why you're waiting.
@@daledrakewriter4912 i needed this smile this morning! Thank you! And yay!!!
is this after hell bound
👍
🖤
Thought it was Jacob
Totally NOT 40K
What happened to the Mastersons
It strikes me that Johnny Masterson is kind of a dick. And so is Raphael. Would it hurt either of them to just say please?
Hello there
Where's the newest one?
😂😂😂😂😂❤❤❤
Once a person dies and goes to hell there is no communication from God
Just commenting for the algorithm 🤍🖤
Love you bro❤
SEQUEL?
I wonder what Lilith is up to in this world...? 🤔❤️🩹
-Adam
Hey its me
What happened next 😳
freedom twlight is a cash grab
A little too excited for me. Startling read. Settle down, it's going to be ok.