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  • čas pƙidĂĄn 8. 01. 2022
  • When you have an audience there is always a voice inside of you asking the question "what will they like" and most of the time that's a really toxic thought for a creator. This video I believe is pure in the sense that I did it for myself and I liked it. Hope you like it as well
    All the artwork featured was created by / kungfudi3033
    (go tell her how talented she is)
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    🔰Before You Judge Someone by illneas
    If we wrote a poem about your childhood
    could we go and live there?
    A poem about lost balls
    toy soldiers
    and endless summers
    If you are afraid of growing up
    we can hide in a verse about morning cartoons and cereal
    If you hate your job
    we can play hide
    and never actually seek
    When you feel lonely
    you can live again your coziest snow day
    Let's write a verse about how much we hate adults
    and let's hope that time stops
    Let's write about boys that know how to feel
    and girls that don't wear pink
    until the illusion of identity shatters like our dreams
    This poem isn't about regrets
    or wasted potential
    This poem is our new home
    with pillows from your sofa
    With verses about hugs and your friends
    Let's write a verse about the times you cried
    and how it shaped you
    Let's create stories about bravery and bruises
    and how the bullies of the world
    will always be afraid to look you in the eyes
    Let's live in a poem about old bikes
    scraped knees
    first kisses
    and forgotten lullabies
    Childhood was never about carelessness
    or unlimited possibilities
    Just the ability to make kinder worlds
    If we wrote a poem about a stranger's childhood, would you go and live there?
    you might write about friendless mornings
    or wasted potential
    Lines about unrequited love
    Maybe you'll have to rhyme violence with innocence
    Can you create metaphors about visible and invisible scars?
    The smell of alcohol and the echoes of screams
    Be prepared to write verses about death
    or verses about rape
    Your story might include first breaths in the war
    Or last breaths anywhere in the world
    Bear in mind that you might write about the broken
    that became worst than their parents
    Or about the broken that never met their parents
    We design societies about fairness and balance
    but we seem to forget that our adulthood
    is affecting someone else's childhood
    We walk this earth convinced this game will never be fair
    even though we never tried to fix it
    But between the horror and the tenderness
    There are the few people that were dealt a bad hand
    and managed to change the narrative
    The people that refused to become bitter
    when everyone expected them to
    The brave souls that created something out of nothing
    We are in this together but each one of us is playing a very different game
    Some people carry heavy shadows
    Some people play against greater odds than you
    and win
    These people when they smile
    the universe smiles with them
    Before you judge someone,
    think about that

Komentáƙe • 294

  • @illneas
    @illneas  Pƙed 2 lety +130

    Hey all, I have a second channel called "a kid with a camera", I make similar content with a more experimental perspective but with the same passion, check it out if you want.
    czcams.com/users/akidwithacameraorjustillneas

    • @SnarkNSass
      @SnarkNSass Pƙed 2 lety +3

      Subd n Belld âœŒđŸ»

    • @cuauhtemocmorisco3493
      @cuauhtemocmorisco3493 Pƙed 2 lety +2

      Where can we submit our writings?? Cuz some of us want to share it with others but don't have time to edit like you do and i personally would like to share what i write and hopefully give it to you so that you can edit it and make it even more perfect.

    • @raulflores8964
      @raulflores8964 Pƙed 2 lety +3

      I really like this poem by far one of my favorites

  • @its_leyl.a
    @its_leyl.a Pƙed 2 lety +457

    "Before you judge someone, think about that." This reminds me of a quote in the great Gatsby, "before you judge someone, just know that everyone in the world hasn't had the same privileges that you have had." It's very interesting that childhood is what affects your entire adulthood and at the same time, your entire adulthood affects someone else's childhood. I hadn't realized that until this poem. THIS IS YOUR BEST POEM YET. Everything you create always finds a way into my heart. PLEASE KEEP IT COMING.

    • @pushparahi5681
      @pushparahi5681 Pƙed 2 lety +3

      Wow

    • @illneas
      @illneas  Pƙed 2 lety +21

      That's really interesting, thank you for watching it Leyla, it means a lot

    • @farrah9748
      @farrah9748 Pƙed 10 měsĂ­ci

      * this world tries its hand to destroy an artist ⛬ crush a poet in the wave 🌊 ⛬ đŸ—ș 💔 ⛩ đŸ€·â€â™€ïž 🎄

  • @SMSSV265
    @SMSSV265 Pƙed 2 lety +191

    "We can play hide and never actually seek " hit home when your 20s feel so heavy that you want to runway somewhere far ..far not in the terms of place but in the terms of time..to the time when everything was seemingly perfect if you now see it ..Childhood
    Now that I remember it maybe I too lived a few days without anxiety and apprehension that now seems impossible ..Thank you for the poem n giving words to these feelings ❀

    • @illneas
      @illneas  Pƙed 2 lety +9

      Being in my 20s, I can confirm that it was written for that feeling. Thank you for watching

  • @DemetriPanici
    @DemetriPanici Pƙed 2 lety +83

    *"Just keep in mind: the more we value things outside our control, the less control we have." - Epictetus*

    • @meraabdelmageed881
      @meraabdelmageed881 Pƙed 2 lety +1

      Can you explain it more?😅

    • @louxjoh
      @louxjoh Pƙed 2 lety +5

      @@meraabdelmageed881 It's actually kind of simple, if we try controlling things that we can't control, we would gonna end up feel more incapable...😊

  • @MusicByKanak
    @MusicByKanak Pƙed 2 lety +36

    " We can play hide and never actually seek. " that hit so damn hard.

  • @ianstevenson1324
    @ianstevenson1324 Pƙed 2 lety +128

    I’m so proud of how far you have come illneas. Never lose the fire that you have.

    • @illneas
      @illneas  Pƙed 2 lety +16

      Thank you for following the whole journey

  • @alifewithpoetry
    @alifewithpoetry Pƙed 2 lety +51

    “we design societies about fairness and balance, but we seem to forget that our adulthood, is affecting someone else’s childhood” - This is an intense verse, that should be plastered all over the world. Adults may fail to remember their childhood, when we are focusing on adulthood and our responsibilities in society. We never truly forget it, but there are times it becomes a distant memory. Or perhaps we lock it in that vault for various reasons/shadows. This is a beautiful reminder of how fragile childhood really is. How fragile adulthood is. How fragile the cycle of life is. We have the power to positively change the next generation. As a Mother, and human, I’m deeply grateful for this poem. Thank you my friend. ♄ This is beyond powerful. Beautiful work all around, as always. ✹

    • @illneas
      @illneas  Pƙed 2 lety

      Thank you for watching T

  • @athenenoctua75
    @athenenoctua75 Pƙed 2 lety +41

    This is beautiful because it is true.
    Everybody can write about flowers and butterflies to escape the pain,
    but it takes a lot of courage to accept the scars and shadows life can cause to a soul.
    Respect.

    • @illneas
      @illneas  Pƙed 2 lety +2

      Take care friend â˜ș

  • @cassiaomia7584
    @cassiaomia7584 Pƙed 2 lety +5

    "but we seem to forget that our adulthood is affecting someone else's childhood"
    So deep!

  • @manieshbehera
    @manieshbehera Pƙed 2 lety +9

    I was cutting onions while listening to this, don't know if I'm crying from the onions or this tough words association

  • @lOovekurOo
    @lOovekurOo Pƙed 2 lety +54

    so I actually cried listening to this one, i was not expecting that, but god you create the most beautiful videos! your words struck a chord in me, and i'm really glad you were able to create this for you

    • @illneas
      @illneas  Pƙed 2 lety +1

      Damn, thank you for sharing this

  • @seemranhoro
    @seemranhoro Pƙed 2 lety +18

    You never really understand a person until you consider things from his point view until you climb in his skin and walk around in it.

  • @swarali2904
    @swarali2904 Pƙed 2 lety +16

    I don't know what to say...
    Thank you for sharing this with us, illneas!

    • @illneas
      @illneas  Pƙed 2 lety

      ❀❀❀

  • @bumble_does_things7137
    @bumble_does_things7137 Pƙed 2 lety +6

    Exuse me?! 27 hours?!.. How am i gonna make it

  • @githala_manisha
    @githala_manisha Pƙed 2 lety +15

    I've no words left to explain how I felt watching this. You put your raw emotions and made this amazing piece. Really thought provoking. Keep going my friend you have the ability to stir up feelings nobody has ever thought of.

    • @illneas
      @illneas  Pƙed 2 lety +3

      Thank you for taking the time to watch it

  • @ainnabihah2114
    @ainnabihah2114 Pƙed 2 lety +16

    i was thinking about this topic just now, and this appeared in my subscription feed , couldn’t wait đŸ€
    loved your work x

    • @illneas
      @illneas  Pƙed 2 lety

      Thank you for sticking around

  • @lorenam.2410
    @lorenam.2410 Pƙed 2 lety +12

    You are so talented. I gotta say I wasn’t expecting that, but this is officially one of my favorite poems. Thank you for making these amazing videos that truly capture the beauty of the world in such a profound way.

  • @cami855
    @cami855 Pƙed 2 lety +1

    "some people play against greater odds than you and win
    These people when they smile
    the universe smiles with them" illneas

  • @yarahilal6544
    @yarahilal6544 Pƙed 2 lety +15

    Strange as it is, I can’t help but see connection in this world at some times. I have been thinking and writing about childhood and how it shapes us as adults for a while now. Your poem couldn’t tackle this topic in a more beautiful way.
    Thank you for your inspiring, thought-provoking content

  • @remnongbri
    @remnongbri Pƙed 2 lety +33

    Illneas!!!! This poem is to put simply brilliantly-beautiful, I know that you take all these videos you put up as well, I really admire your work from the moment I saw one of your works and lastly just wanna say that you're an inspiration to me in terms of being creative.
    ~thank you.

  • @triloization
    @triloization Pƙed 2 lety +12

    Thank you for this great example of your ability to touch the heart of strangers with your art. I am always looking forward for a new video from you and it warms my heart to see them. So thank you for what you are doing.

    • @illneas
      @illneas  Pƙed 2 lety +1

      Thank you stranger

  • @jupiter2492
    @jupiter2492 Pƙed 2 lety +8

    This is such a beautiful poem, it's really amazing. As a person who has mixed feelings about their childhood, i really loved it.
    Amazing work, keep writing, keep creating.❀

    • @illneas
      @illneas  Pƙed 2 lety

      We all have mixed feelings, I think I relate with the 1st and 2nd part of the poem, the poem wasn't meant to divide anyone

  • @byjso
    @byjso Pƙed 2 lety +3

    Beautiful poem! There are over 7 billion people on this earth, each one with a unique story. How different would this world be if we were slower to judge and quicker to listen.

  • @human_7_
    @human_7_ Pƙed 2 lety +3

    This poem......... I am speechless. Would just like to thank you for touching my soul with these words. I felt each and every word of it.

  • @hungrymusicwolf
    @hungrymusicwolf Pƙed 2 lety +3

    This poem actually brought me to tears, I didn't think I could from a poem. I suppose I was proven wrong.

    • @illneas
      @illneas  Pƙed 2 lety +1

      That's such a compliment, thank you

  • @snehalsaju3085
    @snehalsaju3085 Pƙed 2 lety +1

    This got me glued from the very first line and I bet this was the best I've ever read.

    • @illneas
      @illneas  Pƙed 2 lety +2

      ❀❀❀

  • @charliejones3119
    @charliejones3119 Pƙed 2 lety

    This poem reminds me of how many broken people I've met and how kind and lovely they were because of the pain they went through they took that pain and turned it into kindness because they couldn't see someone else go through pain they just wanted to fix it because they don't want someone else to feel so broken as they do

  • @MrManoish
    @MrManoish Pƙed 2 lety +2

    man oh man, your chanell realy took a turn! when you post videos about your own stuff ITS WAAAY POWERFUL!!! "If you wrote a poem about your childhood, could we go and livre there?" YES! THATS THE STUFF! Keep on the good work, play hard! Your chanel has showed me so much poetry, your video about the "Blue bird" was the first time i saw it and it made me cry, truely.
    You inspire me to make my own poetry videos, blessings from Brasil! Keep on the talent!

    • @illneas
      @illneas  Pƙed 2 lety

      Thank you for sticking around

  • @SangeetaSharma-um3ll
    @SangeetaSharma-um3ll Pƙed 2 lety +5

    We just instantly clicked with every verse of poem you present here.
    This was so powerful and moving.
    Thank you for the poem and thank you for the visual representation❀

    • @illneas
      @illneas  Pƙed 2 lety

      Damn this means a lot, take care ❀

  • @harshpal2255
    @harshpal2255 Pƙed 2 lety +2

    "We walk this earth convinced this game will never be fair even though we never tried to fix it"
    This line..

  • @grainofsand4176
    @grainofsand4176 Pƙed 2 lety +1

    ..."but we seem to forget that our adulthood is affecting someone else's childhood..," I will take this with me to preschool job and you touching me, touches them 💜🙏 beautiful work. The images, and the voice add so much to the reading of an already beautiful poem. Love the artwork- the sculptures, the rain on windshields, the children......💜

    • @illneas
      @illneas  Pƙed 2 lety +1

      Go change the world, one smile at the time ^^

  • @Saturns48
    @Saturns48 Pƙed 2 lety

    I love the imagery in this piece. The sketches, clay figures, paint, camera film are all in a room that is really the hidden part of a person, and no one not even the owner of this room have entered in a long time. This poem feels like returning to the room, opening the door, looking at everything inside and feeling like it was you, but a version of you you don't remember or feel slipping away. I feel this poem and the imagery capture the passing of time and how a person could reflect on that passing...really beautiful and thought provoking❀

  • @fay2684
    @fay2684 Pƙed 2 lety

    When I feel low ...i try different things to do....try to watch motivational videos... nothing works. In the end i always come back to your videos... trust me it has healing powers. Thank you ILLNESS â€ïžđŸ˜­

  • @evolarity
    @evolarity Pƙed 2 lety

    Very well said, and I'm truly moved! Perhaps the greatest act of courage is to show the world your scars. And when we see the world through the poet's scars, we not only
    understand the world better, but we also learn new ways to feel it. I mean, the world exists to be understood, but perhaps the best way to understand it is by seeing it through people's scars. Great words!

  • @bcpersonalprofessional687

    I really liked the shift in the poem where it talks about the different layers of childhood in terms of trauma and darkness, it adds an amazing layer to the poem. It also reminds me how we wouldn’t be able to appreciate joy and victory without loss and sadness. This poem connected to some inner child in me. Thank you for this video. I really admire the channel and hope it keeps on growing. I also started poetry yesterday and I hope to experiment with it more :)

  • @srijitasingh5524
    @srijitasingh5524 Pƙed 2 lety +1

    illneas, thank you so much for not doing this thinking "will they like it" and doing this for yourself. what hits home for the creator also hits home for the viewer, and this one has hit heart. liking would be a lesser word- i love this poem, and the way you presented it. i'm sure the universe is smiling with you!

    • @illneas
      @illneas  Pƙed 2 lety +1

      Maybe it's smiling at you too, thank you

  • @a.l_caneli
    @a.l_caneli Pƙed 2 lety +1

    Really liked the lines "some people play against greater odds than you and win/ These people when they smile/the universe smiles with them" - it's really comforting for some reason, even more so at times when you feel powerless about helping other people when you barely manage to make it through the day (if that makes sense) - loved everything about this video: the poem, the voice of the narrator, the music, and the shots and editing đŸ˜ŠđŸŒ»âœš

    • @illneas
      @illneas  Pƙed 2 lety +1

      Thank you for watching it, it means a lot

  • @payton3980
    @payton3980 Pƙed 2 lety +6

    “Childhood was never about carelessness or unlimited possibilities, just the ability to make kinder worlds.”
    I’m 25 now and when I look back I remember the feeling of carelessness as a kid and the feeling of invincibility that I could do anything. I think about how back then the adults in my life weren’t teaching me about the carelessness of childhood, they were just trying to show me an improved version of the world they grew up in. Trying to make a kinder world.
    Now I’m a preschool teacher and I realized I’m not teaching kids about being careless or that the world has endless possibilities. I just try to show them how to be kind to their friends, I teach them about sharing, and how to acknowledge their emotions when they lose control of them. But to them they’ll grow up with the same feeling of carelessness and optimism as if that’s what their childhood was about, not knowing what the adults were doing above their line of sight.

  • @Jef785
    @Jef785 Pƙed rokem

    “That became worst than their parents,” - “but we seem to forget that our adulthood is affecting someone else’s childhood” I was listening to this casually, you’ve a nice voice, but you really peaked my interest when talking about growing up, when you reached the second quote I went from whatever state i was in into an immediate burst of tears. You’ve made the best words to make us feel empathy towards those we consider not equal to us,
    Idk maybe im just restating the obvious, anyways I wanted to thank you for being so raw, this was an intense poem, thank you for writing it

  • @susanass4373
    @susanass4373 Pƙed 2 lety +3

    Wow, that's a wonderful poem! I'm glad you give us the privilege of seeing it. Some risks do beautiful things ... it touched me deeply. I love this experimental work!

    • @illneas
      @illneas  Pƙed 2 lety +1

      Thank you for giving it a chance

  • @beccagutierrez5809
    @beccagutierrez5809 Pƙed 2 lety +4

    Now, this has become one of my favourites. You always know how to reach the viewer's emotions. I really needed this, though. Keep doing wonderful things, Illneas! ✹

    • @illneas
      @illneas  Pƙed 2 lety +1

      Thank you so much for watching

  • @faustpederisi
    @faustpederisi Pƙed rokem

    Damn dude, those cello lines, discoence chords, piano and voice, excellent work!

  • @8dhanarajnongmaithem105
    @8dhanarajnongmaithem105 Pƙed 2 lety +2

    *_FOUND THIS CHANNEL BY ACCIDENT AND THE BEST ACCCIDENT I HAVE EVER MET._*

  • @maridani01
    @maridani01 Pƙed 2 lety

    this has become my favorite youtube chanel since i discovered last year, just so much humanity in your words

  • @le3659
    @le3659 Pƙed 2 lety +3

    This was such a lovely poem❀

  • @charlottechang
    @charlottechang Pƙed rokem

    Thank you for creating these wonderful poems. Your beautiful words, in some way, calmed the murky waters in my heart and cleansed it turquoise.

  • @michaelonwuamaegbu1637
    @michaelonwuamaegbu1637 Pƙed 2 lety

    This is so good, my God. You’re a legend to me. Gifted poet

  • @korrus1004
    @korrus1004 Pƙed 2 lety +3

    Thank you

  • @SMSSV265
    @SMSSV265 Pƙed 2 lety +2

    Still 2 hrs left !...cant wait 😭

  • @jiji.1038
    @jiji.1038 Pƙed 2 lety

    This one's my favourite of yours by far. It just speaks a lot. Every word. 💜

  • @Kevin-jc1fx
    @Kevin-jc1fx Pƙed 2 lety +1

    This is so deep, beautiful and profound. Congratulations @illneas, this is your most beautiful piece so far and I believe there are better ones to come. It's a pleasure to witness your journey and see your poetry evolve as you grow and mature in all aspects.

  • @leelachatterjee4610
    @leelachatterjee4610 Pƙed 2 lety

    From childhood to adulthood and from adulthood to old age---stages in the cycle of life. When we're adults, we have no time to reminisce about our childhood. But in old age,childhood comes back with more joy and happiness. This is the beauty of life.
    li

  • @mkscripturient6898
    @mkscripturient6898 Pƙed 2 lety

    this is one of my new favorite poems ever!! this is so touching and meaningful. thank you for this thoughtful masterpiece đŸ€

  • @itsmyytaccount8498
    @itsmyytaccount8498 Pƙed 2 lety

    Illness, this is genuinely a wonderful poem. It brought tears to my eyes reading it even without the music. And I am very critical of poetry, generally. You are an artist. Thank you for this beautiful art.

  • @kiyutsoldier
    @kiyutsoldier Pƙed 2 lety +3

    this was beautiful ❀

    • @illneas
      @illneas  Pƙed 2 lety

      ❀❀❀

  • @ralucagindea8689
    @ralucagindea8689 Pƙed 2 lety +2

    Gosh, this poem is purely fantastic! đŸ„°

  • @sayyednaqvi7973
    @sayyednaqvi7973 Pƙed 2 lety +1

    This is just beautiful, I feel like a kid now that I am sobbing my eyes out.
    Keep going dear, you are doing a phenomenal job.

    • @illneas
      @illneas  Pƙed 2 lety

      ❀❀❀

  • @devrim-oguz
    @devrim-oguz Pƙed 2 lety +3

    I need this

  • @Nyc9104
    @Nyc9104 Pƙed 2 lety +3

    Amazing work!

    • @illneas
      @illneas  Pƙed 2 lety +1

      ❀❀❀

  • @tharakaram9843
    @tharakaram9843 Pƙed 2 lety +8

    I have trimmer my nails yesterday so I bitting my lips 😁

  • @juliaisabella3000
    @juliaisabella3000 Pƙed 2 lety

    I have read a lot of poetry and you might be one of the greatest poets who ever lived. I have never heard of you until now and it is such an honor to read your beautiful work. I'm just laying here in my bed completely moved to tears at every single video.

  • @idislikemints
    @idislikemints Pƙed 2 lety +1

    I was waiting for this to drop since you mentioned it.
    But this is a lot better than I expected. I really enjoyed it.

    • @illneas
      @illneas  Pƙed 2 lety

      Thank you for watching it

  • @siminlayeghi1928
    @siminlayeghi1928 Pƙed 2 lety

    im sure thats the best thing ive heard in a very long time. healing and beautiful.

  • @karimnoueihed6527
    @karimnoueihed6527 Pƙed 2 lety

    This is simply genius; the words, the visuals, everything. Always create art for yourself and people who appreciate will certainly love it. The more subjective and personal art is, the more powerful. I have been using CZcams for years and this is the first time I write a comment on a video, simply because this video is absolutely amazing. Best of luck with your future works.

  • @BrianCjamu
    @BrianCjamu Pƙed rokem

    One of the greatest inspiring poems i ever heard.
    I can imagine how the world could be if the half of the World had time to listen to these kinda poems đŸ€đŸ€

  • @dhruvduhan6265
    @dhruvduhan6265 Pƙed 2 lety

    I have never heard anything more beautiful than this poem.

  • @aleksinako5006
    @aleksinako5006 Pƙed 2 lety

    I was bullied before in middle school,but i have understand a lot from people and a lot from people that don’t know the truth behind someone that are bulling.So life is not about people that abuse you with words,these people are worth it.Life is short so keep going being someone wise,someone really intelligent because we need this kind of a people in this world,just smile and keep going😱😭.

  • @Ryawa_Shpoora
    @Ryawa_Shpoora Pƙed 2 lety

    This to me, is one of the purest pieces I have ever come across of.
    From the bottom of my heart I would like to write to you only these two simple words :
    THANK YOU!

    • @illneas
      @illneas  Pƙed 2 lety +1

      This means a lot to me, thank you

  • @Mookiethedog
    @Mookiethedog Pƙed 2 lety +1

    Man oh man this hit me to my core

    • @illneas
      @illneas  Pƙed 2 lety

      ❀❀❀

  • @ranomasyr3317
    @ranomasyr3317 Pƙed 2 lety

    It made me speechless with a million feelings and few ideas đŸ„ș♄

  • @jordan82514
    @jordan82514 Pƙed 2 lety

    Easily one of my favorites, it blows my mind that you wrote it. Its up there with lets raise children who love the unloved things. It made me feel seen and understood when you wrote about those with unfair and damaging childhoods as I couldn't entirely relate to the first half of the poem.

  • @anapantic5289
    @anapantic5289 Pƙed 2 lety

    A wonderful piece of art. Love it ❀

  • @awaisqarni24
    @awaisqarni24 Pƙed 2 lety

    Oooh my God...what a consequence...i was tired of the tug world nd scrolling sadly...nd found this...what an amazing poem...it is really a time for me that nature is pushing to become a bad nd tug persone like the rest but something inside me is saying no to that push...nd it's really encouraging when i listen to this poem....to try to make something out of nothing...

  • @hierophant4882
    @hierophant4882 Pƙed 2 lety +2

    This is beautiful 💜

    • @illneas
      @illneas  Pƙed 2 lety

      ❀❀❀

  • @lonidobmeier5498
    @lonidobmeier5498 Pƙed 2 lety

    This piece is phenomenal. Are you published? Can I obtain a book of your work? I have adored your Bukowski pieces for years! I work in children's mental health- tiny souls that have been through more trauma and pain than most "normal" adults could even imagine. This piece shook me. ACES incarnate. Thank you for this! đŸ–€đŸ–€đŸ–€

  • @frankuar
    @frankuar Pƙed 2 lety

    hey Illneas, i guess thoughts like these are poems. and how do you fight the fear of a judge?
    I write poems and thoughts too and I always near to share them to the world, near to share the liquid waste in my mind, the shadows growing, the unstable breath and the words changing. I swear one day I will. Meanwhile I could only listent to your indirect voice pretending that is mine. I't just, not fair. I would have a voice too.
    So thank to you. Really, really thank you. This not imagination: you give the artists the desire to go on. So I go on, and I swear, go on you too! Don't give up. This is my favorite poem of yours.

  • @mariammedinaborges5900
    @mariammedinaborges5900 Pƙed 2 lety

    Thanks for your work and the work of those who inspired you and supported you on this. 💕

  • @emiliete221
    @emiliete221 Pƙed 2 lety

    I don’t know whether I should be comforted or utterly devastated by the tenderness you always manage to sew behind bruising words

  • @cami855
    @cami855 Pƙed 2 lety

    Thank you for this beaautiful piece.

  • @dhartidoshi7782
    @dhartidoshi7782 Pƙed 2 lety +1

    childhood was never about carelessness or unlimited possibilities.
    Just the ability to create kinder worlds.
    Kinder worlds we all deserve. Kinder worlds we all can create but choose not to.. Not for ourselves and for others..
    Thank you for creating this masterpiece for people who can be in the middle of both extremes and choose kindness at the end.

    • @anandjain9835
      @anandjain9835 Pƙed 2 lety

      ❀❀❀

    • @illneas
      @illneas  Pƙed 2 lety

      Thank you for watching^^

  • @jasmijnschepers3739
    @jasmijnschepers3739 Pƙed 2 lety

    This is the most incredible poem I've read in my entire life. From you and from everyone else.

  • @Monopensador
    @Monopensador Pƙed 2 lety

    Spectacular and Inspiring, as always!

  • @introvertedjamaicanpoet3768

    Your poems inspire me to continue writing ✍

  • @ansh52922
    @ansh52922 Pƙed 2 lety

    You give words and rhymes to people who can't seem to find their own. Thank you.

    • @illneas
      @illneas  Pƙed 2 lety

      This means a lot, take care

  • @bepkororoti2559
    @bepkororoti2559 Pƙed 2 lety

    Melissa gives this reconsiliating and yearning touch which goes perfectly with your poems. She's the best :))
    Would love to hear Ineses voice again also...Lovely expression too.
    Keep up!

    • @illneas
      @illneas  Pƙed 2 lety

      I agree, this one has a new narrator, he is super talented as well, I hope you liked it

  • @ponchiborah411
    @ponchiborah411 Pƙed 2 lety

    This whole piece can be used to enact an amazing pentomime💓

  • @leillusion_
    @leillusion_ Pƙed 2 lety +2

    Still 22 h , *sobbing *

  • @Sh67817
    @Sh67817 Pƙed 2 lety

    This is absolutely brilliant and beautiful. I will write it in my diary along with my other favourite poetries. ❀❀
    Keep creating. 💙

    • @illneas
      @illneas  Pƙed 2 lety

      That's so cute, thank you

  • @devrim-oguz
    @devrim-oguz Pƙed 2 lety +1

    You got me up, and then hit me down so hard...

    • @illneas
      @illneas  Pƙed 2 lety +1

      Hehe underrated comment

  • @rahulranot8192
    @rahulranot8192 Pƙed 2 lety +5

    So beautiful

    • @illneas
      @illneas  Pƙed 2 lety +1

      ❀❀❀

  • @freddye8536
    @freddye8536 Pƙed 2 lety

    Probably the best poem I have ever listened to...

  • @marylinnik3115
    @marylinnik3115 Pƙed 2 lety

    You have such incredible talent! Never stop creating!

  • @kimdavid414
    @kimdavid414 Pƙed 2 lety +1

    Beautiful said an Amen

  • @rozaSkroza
    @rozaSkroza Pƙed 2 lety

    today, I'm sick to the bone remembering my childhood. I am deeply deeply scarred and wounded. I wonder, after so many years of trying, is it possible for a person to heal those wounds at all. it just seems we learn how to cope, but we never truly heal.
    thank you so much for yet another beautiful poem and work in general.
    I honestly think you are a gift to this world, because you share your gift with this world. love you đŸ€

    • @illneas
      @illneas  Pƙed 2 lety

      I hope you feel better

  • @melvindsouza6995
    @melvindsouza6995 Pƙed 2 lety

    Love the poem.. Makes my eyes swell up

  • @lovelysouls3382
    @lovelysouls3382 Pƙed 2 lety +1

    Whoooaaa that so cool illness...I have always loved listening to your videos...Iots of love

    • @illneas
      @illneas  Pƙed 2 lety +2

      Aww thank you so much

  • @txwhyxbeetsx4ever381
    @txwhyxbeetsx4ever381 Pƙed 2 lety

    Absolutely stellar work seen almost all this one hit hard af đŸ”„

  • @bivachoudhary
    @bivachoudhary Pƙed rokem

    I'm glad I found your channel.

  • @meursaultscourtroom8886
    @meursaultscourtroom8886 Pƙed 2 lety

    Wow, will need to turn it around in my head a few times. This went so many places both personally meaningful and universally poignant.

    • @illneas
      @illneas  Pƙed 2 lety

      Thank you for giving it a chance

  • @Andreluiz-dp2ho
    @Andreluiz-dp2ho Pƙed 2 lety

    So good. SO GOOD. Thank you.