Existence (Original Creepypasta)

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  • čas přidán 12. 09. 2024
  • Original Story So . . . not sure if this turned out to be scary or depressing . . . maybe it's neither, but whatever the case, it's interesting at the very least! Thanks to everyone for being so supportive! :D
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    Jorge Mendez at 12:47 -ish

Komentáře • 382

  • @harley6438
    @harley6438 Před 8 lety +21

    I liked the background. especially at the end when she becomes clear and he starts glitching

  • @LuckyVine
    @LuckyVine Před 10 lety +34

    I had NO idea these were all college students until 18:55 when the narrator said he owned a house with three other guys. Until then I just assumed they were anywhere from elementary to high school students.

    • @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam
      @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam  Před 10 lety +6

      Lucky Vine Hmmmm, interesting, I suppose that does kinda change the dynamic/tone of the story XD

    • @galaxybear4136
      @galaxybear4136 Před 9 lety

      I read it at first, then went to look for a reading, i automaticly thought of my second grade class when reading it.

    • @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam
      @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam  Před 9 lety +2

      Galaxy Bear I mean . . . I guess the grade doesn't really matter that much, so although I could go back and change the story to include the information earlier, I'm not sure how necessary it is XD Do you think I should change the text version?

    • @LuckyVine
      @LuckyVine Před 9 lety +3

      It's not really that important. It just caught me by surprise. No big deal. XP

    • @VictorRobotov00
      @VictorRobotov00 Před 7 lety

      Same here. About the exact same point too haha. I agree though, that it's not vastly important, just kinda stood out for some odd reason.

  • @nikkidominique4034
    @nikkidominique4034 Před 10 lety +4

    man. that was just sad and creepy at the same time. just a neverending cycle of losing yourself, losing your humanity. amazing work. well earned sub (:

  • @kodiakjester
    @kodiakjester Před 9 lety +21

    He needs a hug. Lots of hugs. Also waffles. Waffles are good too. But mostly hugs...

  • @marcusdranz
    @marcusdranz Před 9 lety +77

    The work's original title: "An Otaku Meets An Actual Girl"

    • @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam
      @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam  Před 9 lety +9

      Lol, wut?

    • @insomniaczombie8942
      @insomniaczombie8942 Před 8 lety +4

      bahahahahahaha true tho!

    • @Olivia-hi5rd
      @Olivia-hi5rd Před 7 lety

      Omg XD yesssss

    • @AnneAndersonFoxiepaws
      @AnneAndersonFoxiepaws Před 6 lety

      Marcus Dranz oh I know an original Liam Vickers creation regardless of who narrates it and this is Liam to the core, if there's any passing resemblance to a Japanese? Folk tale, believe me, it's superficial because I think I've been listening to Liam so long that everything just shouts ScarystorytimewithLiam! at you from every line. These days with everything on the Internet, I'm sure everyone who writes, or does graphics is bound to have had exposure, both conscious and subconscious to lots of other authors, artists etc. Every artist is influenced to a greater or lesser extent, to things they have seen or read. I think that the bigger the Internet gets the less able people will be to pin down both positive and negative influences on their work or even themselves. I don't know the thing that was mentioned, but I can tell you that I was doing housework today with this creepypasta playlist on and Within seconds, without even having recognised the voice, I knew that after (when was it? ) 3, 4 years? That I was listening to a Liam Vickers Story and I have had similar happen with other narrators of Liam's work. I can do the same with mamy contemporary and historical classical authors, and just like I know Thomas Hardy or Clive Barker (lotsa scope there) I know vintage Vickers! (Yeah that's you Liam...you must be a tad vintage by now? Surely? ?).
      Nah its 100% Vickers but like I said, I could write a short story tomorrow after watching a McDonalds advert and a couple of the elements might come through in the story if I was hungry, I am specifically thinking of one ad in particular which had the song 'Rythm of the Night' and you see an urban fox...probably eating a happy meal but the image and the song stick in my mind, but the short story wouldn't be based on McDonald's even though the fox element and the idea of a pulse at night from the song were directly, though not consciously as a result of the ad. Disclaimer: I don't buy McDonalds in any form but I did like that imagery!

  • @MSOGameShow
    @MSOGameShow Před 10 lety +18

    "I would just have to try again tomorrow and the next day."
    And the next day. And the next day. And the next day. And the next day. And the next day.
    Phone call for you, Mr. Plankton!
    And the next day. And the next day.

  • @plantemor
    @plantemor Před 10 lety +16

    'A single shade of gray'
    I see what you did there XD

    • @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam
      @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam  Před 10 lety +1

      Haha, not quite intentional, but I'll take it! XD

    • @plantemor
      @plantemor Před 10 lety +1

      Scary Story Time With Liam Ssssch! It was totally on purpose 'wink wink' xD

    • @plantemor
      @plantemor Před 9 lety +1

      ***** destiny!!!!

    • @wreathofpalmaria
      @wreathofpalmaria Před 9 lety

      silja lin You are now cursed for reading one of my comments to avoid the curse copy this message and post it one 5 other CZcams comments that do not contain it

  • @libirose8357
    @libirose8357 Před 10 lety +8

    I really love you stories; they're terrifying, but I love them

  • @BoRaiChoWins
    @BoRaiChoWins Před 10 lety +6

    you have a great voice for reading creepy pasta, you do a great job putting so much emotion into it. I think it is your reading style that makes these stories good.

  • @6xArcaNumx6
    @6xArcaNumx6 Před 8 lety +6

    I don't understand the slow comments. This was the perfect ghost story told at the perfect pace. This is how a true ghost story should sound and unfold. This has to be one of my favorites of all time. A true ghost story is supposed to slowly lure you into a slow maddening melancholy of uncomfortable horror and this does it magnificently. Well done sir this will go into my favorite category and I will listen again and again.

    • @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam
      @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam  Před 8 lety +3

      Well thanks a lot! Differing opinions, I suppose! I think both sides have a valid point, and I certainly think I have improved my writing since this story :3 I believe, despite what they say, the true gripe about this story is that it is overly-reliant on heavy words and is less "slow" than it is "drawn out in the wrong places." I think we can all agree these are valid criticisms, and ones even I notice looking back. I gladly take the negative feedback to heart, and hope to improve, but I also appreciate that nice folks like yourself see this story as the fun, imperfect tale of spooks it is ^_^ I can't do everything right, but if the narrative works for most people out there, who the heck cares if I used the word "melancholy" one too many times, haha XD

  • @angryangler2249
    @angryangler2249 Před 8 lety +2

    This is my favorite creepypasta of all time. Thank you for doing it.

  • @rachel_v_k
    @rachel_v_k Před 8 lety +3

    This story is awesome! You always have such incredible original ideas. I continue to be impressed with not only your stories, but your complete presentation of them, i.e. narration and music. 😁😁😁

  • @luckxxterra2132
    @luckxxterra2132 Před 8 lety +12

    what a vicious circle. wow

  • @jacobp.4369
    @jacobp.4369 Před 8 lety +1

    The story may have been slow, but I felt that was what needed to be done for the full effect to take place. Realizing what was going to happen and listening to it play out was amazing. Stories like these that shake my very existence are what I live for, and this one was well narrated, so I thank you for that.

  • @simonlover43
    @simonlover43 Před 10 lety +2

    You write your own stories, write music, play piano, have a gorgeous voice, you're super cute, and the best part: You love creepypasta!! You're just like, perfect.

  • @psychoklarise
    @psychoklarise Před 10 lety +5

    This gave me chills, nice job :D

  • @cokeMONSTERps3
    @cokeMONSTERps3 Před 10 lety +46

    This reminded me alot of the anime Another. I liked this story.

    • @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam
      @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam  Před 10 lety +2

      Cokemonster I'm so glad! Thank you!

    • @stefimakrydakh7474
      @stefimakrydakh7474 Před 9 lety

      Cokemonster and i thought i was the only one... it does have the same feel though...

    • @SneakySkitz0
      @SneakySkitz0 Před 7 lety

      I was thinking the same thing and was about to say it lol

    • @Enzy.
      @Enzy. Před 7 lety

      Cokemonster yes yes yes u u same I watch the same anime

    • @TheBiggerGG
      @TheBiggerGG Před 7 lety

      Cokemonster Yeah, the stories are kind of similar which only makes me like this story more since another is my favorite anime. 😄

  • @Kenny-ot4yx
    @Kenny-ot4yx Před 8 lety +1

    Fantastic and absolutely incredible story. I loved every second of it! Anyone who said they got bored just has a short attention span. The only thing wrong with it is the fact that it isn't longer.

  • @QuilloManar
    @QuilloManar Před 9 lety +6

    I'd be freaking grateful that I was this entity that no-one could see, I'd be like, "WOO! I can walk around naked now!"

    • @Velvetzienz
      @Velvetzienz Před 9 lety +3

      XD and I would go to the apple store and be all like "heck yeah I stole everythin"

  • @uoenoit8061
    @uoenoit8061 Před 8 lety +11

    this isn't creepy its just sad

  • @Therealbro7show
    @Therealbro7show Před 10 lety +3

    That was a real great story! One of the best ones out there in fact. This would make a great movie. I'll definitely make this one.

  • @annazoehenning6863
    @annazoehenning6863 Před 10 lety +1

    Dude, I freaking love your channel!! I'm in love with your voice and I love the stories you read on here!!

  • @lanog40
    @lanog40 Před 10 lety +5

    I feel like this sometimes.
    The feeling of despair leads to extreme measures.
    My arms hurt:/

    • @hughjanuss5963
      @hughjanuss5963 Před 10 lety +1

      You shouldn't feel like that. You have no reason to! Don't cut or self harm. Things always get better, but you've gotta try. Don't give up, bro!

  • @lissyounit11
    @lissyounit11 Před 8 lety +48

    like a description of depression ...

    • @KuvaPefo
      @KuvaPefo Před 8 lety +4

      +Lissy Ikr?! I'm like "wow this sounds so familiar.."

    • @channonanzaldo331
      @channonanzaldo331 Před 8 lety +1

      +Myk Muchowski same!!

  • @CasCanGAME101
    @CasCanGAME101 Před 9 lety +29

    Oh cool i always wanted to re-watch Another

    • @stefdkonline2
      @stefdkonline2 Před 8 lety +1

      +NoahKitsune not exactly the same. In another everyone can see the dead person they just dont know who it is, but it has kinda the same feel

    • @smokeemifyougotem9662
      @smokeemifyougotem9662 Před 8 lety

      ik orignal creepypasta my ass

    • @PrimateProductions
      @PrimateProductions Před 8 lety +1

      Well, you ARE an ass..if you think that this story and that one is exactly the same then you are a moron as well. The only thing at all that they have in common is that there is a dead person in a classroom..other than that there is nothing even close to being the same between the two..people who have simple minds and are not able to think past that one similarity has issues...but please by all means enlighten me and feel free to point out how else the stories are exactly alike if you will..I would love to hear it...to accuse someone of lying about writing an original story is pretty shitty so I think rather than just casually blabbing out a comment like that you should at least be able to back it up..and if you cant, then....well, that kinda makes you a prick.

    • @AngryK1tty
      @AngryK1tty Před 8 lety

      +Gina Powell BURN, damn you are on fire.

    • @smokeemifyougotem9662
      @smokeemifyougotem9662 Před 8 lety

      Gina Powell still a rip off idea

  • @BlaqueCzar
    @BlaqueCzar Před 9 lety +3

    Well done, and great story choice 
    Edit: Wait, you wrote this? That puts you on a whole other level and tells me I have to upgrade my writing skills, subscribed!

  • @HardCoreGameFilms
    @HardCoreGameFilms Před 9 lety +1

    This story... I don't know, it gives me an uneasy sense of.. familiarity.
    The feeling of eerie isolation and despair as he faded from existence.... It all feels relatable somehow..
    Amazing~

  • @gundamnduke0
    @gundamnduke0 Před 10 lety +5

    the classroom, the girl, the desk. this makes me think of "Another", the anime

  • @wiki400
    @wiki400 Před 8 lety +16

    This is the exact plot of the anime "Another"

    • @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam
      @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam  Před 8 lety +6

      +Imme Wik This comment always weirded me out . . . because . . . well, haha, it's really really just not. After getting this same thing so many times, I finally watched that series (which was quite enjoyable I might say) . . . and our narratives really share no similarities. I suppose they are both about a dead student in a classroom? That's honestly the only thing I can possibly find that makes them slightly resemble each other. "Another" focuses on a class trying to figure out who among them is actually already dead (and not even the dead person knows it's them), and people keep dying of freak accidents until they find and kill that person . . . my story focuses on a malevolent apparition in a school that steals one person's existence and trades it for its own. That person, in turn, then takes the place of the spirit and repeats the cycle with a new victim. I' . . . I mean, please PLEASE tell me what I'm missing here, but I just don't see a single similarity there, let alone, "the exact plot." My brain genuinely hurts trying to comprehend why people keep saying this. Please help.

    • @prettylady438
      @prettylady438 Před 8 lety

      +Scary Story Time With Liam sorry I must say I'm one of the guilty one that reminded me of that anime. I think it should be a good thing as it was a very popular horror anime but I must say it only reminded me of it from the beginning and the rest it's totally different from the rest.. Thank you for sharing this keep up the good work I love your stories and narrations.. much much appreciate.

    • @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam
      @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam  Před 8 lety +1

      +Michelle Sacdalan Ah! Okay! So it's only the beginning! I can definitely see that, actually! They do appear quite similar in like . . . The first few paragraphs. Before, ya know . . . The story actually happens, haha. Guess most people can't be bothered to listen to the rest of the story before prematurely commenting, though! Thanks so much for clearing that up!

    • @NinjaDinosaur321
      @NinjaDinosaur321 Před 8 lety +2

      i don't think 'exact' means what you think it means

    • @okay...9671
      @okay...9671 Před 7 lety

      Not quite...

  • @thedyingunicorn
    @thedyingunicorn Před 10 lety +8

    awesome! i am so glad i found your channel :)

    • @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam
      @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam  Před 10 lety +2

      Woooo! Me too :D

    • @natelee7283
      @natelee7283 Před 10 lety +4

      Scary Story Time With Liam
      i love your readings youre awsome almost as awsome as porn lol

    • @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam
      @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam  Před 10 lety +1

      Nate Lee DUDE WHAT?!?! No freaking way! You don't mean that, haha XD That is probably the greatest compliment I've ever received, hahahaha!!! XD XD

    • @natelee7283
      @natelee7283 Před 10 lety +1

      lol ty

    • @phoenixamaku5551
      @phoenixamaku5551 Před 9 lety

      Scary Story Time With Liam WHEN ARE YOU COMING OUT WITH MORE STORIES!

  • @RCT3Crashes100
    @RCT3Crashes100 Před 10 lety +1

    I think basically the girl is a spirit, and each time she takes in pieces of someone else's soul, she becomes more 'complete', and that's why people notice her more.

  • @Selloca
    @Selloca Před 9 lety +8

    *Whispers* Notice me senpai

  • @jaybuzzton453
    @jaybuzzton453 Před 8 lety +20

    I believe a few moments of browsing on Tumblr gives you a very similar effect to what befalls the narrator
    (^8

  • @toniirobinsongrant
    @toniirobinsongrant Před 9 lety +2

    This really caught my attention and dragged me in. I love original and origin stories. The amount of time spent making this is obvious. The way you exaggerated the details of the despair you were feeling. It gave me a headache and that's a good thing since I'm weird and love pain so on a serious note I absolutely love it and you just earned another subscription. Also you should try and get in touch with CreepyMcpasta maybe you two could do a colab and then my life could be complete. Just needs a lot more food. ☺😷☺✅✔☑😱☺☺

  • @SuperHaloreach4ever
    @SuperHaloreach4ever Před 10 lety +1

    Wow that was awesome. And the music at the end of the video and the smoky effect switched to the other kid was great! Subcribed!

    • @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam
      @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam  Před 10 lety +1

      Haha, thank you! I'm so glad someone appreciated that little ending :D And Awwwww Yeeeaaahhh! Welcome aboard!

  • @Gloocifer
    @Gloocifer Před 10 lety +2

    My most favourite creepypasta of all time. Subbed.

    • @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam
      @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam  Před 10 lety +1

      Thanks man! So glad you liked it! :3 And thank you even more for the sub! I hope I can continue to write stuff you enjoy ;) You're awesome!

  • @azerayrose1343
    @azerayrose1343 Před 7 lety +1

    This one is a sad one, just by looking at the little girl she takes the life you cling to, you slowly become what she use to be and felt what she felt. Its a bit creepy but a little more depressing, its a good story. :)

  • @blairwitch63
    @blairwitch63 Před 9 lety +2

    Just subbed because I don't want to be erased!! :-O Seriously though, Awesome story!! You described the despair almost too well, making me feel it too. It kinda reminded me of the Japanese horror movie, Cairo where a city was overrun with ghosts because of the internet and when someone came into contact with them they fell into a similar despair before becoming ghosts themselves. Anyway this is the first story I've heard from you and I look forward to hearing many more! :)

    • @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam
      @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam  Před 9 lety +2

      Awesome! Thank you so much! ^_^ Glad to have ya on the team! Yayyyy stories! XD

  • @Y0uKnowMyName
    @Y0uKnowMyName Před 8 lety +2

    well, someone needs a hug.
    I can't imagine how hopelessly depressed the author was when they wrote this.

  • @AnneAndersonFoxiepaws
    @AnneAndersonFoxiepaws Před 6 lety +1

    I like all Liam's stories. He does have a soft spot for tainted, otherworldly Femmes Fatal! Ah Liam, Your leading ladies are always dangerous creatures-I think you do a terrific job of turning these, sometimes pretty loathsome, but misunderstood, girls into attractive anti-heros...I could see you falling for Lisbeth Salander in the Girl with the Dragon Tattoo trilogy! The dangerous, damaged, unconventionally beautiful heroine is right up your street. It makes for really original characters and possibly is how your stories appeal to so many people, I think it shows that you don't judge on first impression and that acceptance that everyone is different is what makes you and your work so appealing.
    Uhoh, I had forgotten what a little charmer this one was (not!) Xx

  • @N3RDYG0GGLES
    @N3RDYG0GGLES Před 9 lety +1

    This story was so sad, honestly it would be horrible for that to happen.
    Though the thing of the class not knowing someone existed reminded me a little of a horror anime called "Another", which is pretty damn creepy especially towards the end. Would recommend it to anyone who liked this story, but don't watch the last few episodes at night.

  • @anthonygallagher8926
    @anthonygallagher8926 Před 10 lety

    I don't know what I was expecting with the title, but this really did freak me out, nice touch with the video changing at the end btw

  • @SuprememessageNG
    @SuprememessageNG Před 10 lety +4

    My charger for my laptop is broken, and the one thing I knew is that I would spend the rest of my time watching your videos until the battery ran out. Your stories are brilliant and should be more popular than they are.

  • @frootloop4149
    @frootloop4149 Před 8 lety

    i know these are supposed to be creepypastas, but goddamn this one had me laughing the whole way through. especially when you were trying to be all somber and melancholy saying things like "i felt the happiness drain from my body". seriously, i know comedy wasn't your intention, but thanks for this.

    • @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam
      @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam  Před 8 lety +2

      +frootloop Lol, dat bitting sarcasm doe XD They can't all be scary for everyone, as I'm sure you understand :3 Perhaps try another one on my channel, I guarantee I'll get ya with one of 'em ^_^

  • @NikoPikoo
    @NikoPikoo Před 10 lety +3

    This was really good! How long was it and how long did it take to write? Subbed.

    • @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam
      @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam  Před 10 lety +2

      Hey thank you :) It is about 11 pages long and took me about 2 hours to write (I wrote it while waiting for a delayed flight at the airport, haha) :D It probably took longer to edit it and rework some details, but the basic structure took about that long ;) Thanks for the sub man!

  • @ladarius82
    @ladarius82 Před 9 lety +4

    This story reminds me of the show "Another" (anime)

  • @heathermchaney7896
    @heathermchaney7896 Před 7 lety +1

    Thank you! Well done; reminiscent of Poe's The Telltale Heart. I'm a die hard fan of Edgar Allan Poe and the style of your prose is just as pleasing to read...especially with the word "hideous", leaves the reader to use his imagination to interpret the images, as only one's own mind could create. Well read as well!!

  • @Bigdog10110
    @Bigdog10110 Před 9 lety +1

    Right away when i heard your voice I push subscribe. You did an amazing Job narrating this story. Keep it up :3

  • @lhodges8106
    @lhodges8106 Před 9 lety +1

    By far best creepypasta ever! Ive always been terrified of something but could never put my finger on what it was exactly but this story portrays it

    • @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam
      @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam  Před 9 lety +1

      Sigmund Fraud Well thank you very much! Glad you liked it! :D

    • @lhodges8106
      @lhodges8106 Před 9 lety +1

      Scary Story Time With Liam give me more

    • @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam
      @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam  Před 9 lety +1

      Sigmund Fraud Haha, you got it, man! I've got plenty of original stories like this one on my channel :) If you liked this one for it's kinda longer, more fleshed out story line, I would recommend "Design" or "Yellow Halogen," both of which are multi-part horror series I spent months writing . . . but if you just liked this for the spookiness, I've got plenty of shorter ones as well :)

  • @Nejilee4ever
    @Nejilee4ever Před 7 lety +2

    Subscribe or be Erased lol. This had me curious, then crying, then shocked. This was a GREAT one! I'm already subscribed, so I'm good xD. Bravo!

  • @tabbythenightmarecollector5838

    There's a glitch in the Matrix! :P

  • @dragonlordd7894
    @dragonlordd7894 Před 10 lety +2

    Wow...just epic. Where do you come up with this stuff? Lol so good.

  • @mariri6068
    @mariri6068 Před 7 lety

    Dude this one was so good. The way you described how he was feeling almost made me feel that way, good job :)

  • @miles2419
    @miles2419 Před 8 lety

    I like how it gets passed on from one person to another, instead of like, multiplying

  • @sethwallace7666
    @sethwallace7666 Před 10 lety +1

    Wow, nice job, unexpected ending there! :D
    Just wondering though.... When did the whole process start? Who was the first to get this despair and "unexistence", and where did they get it from? Is passing it on to someone else the only way to ever get rid of it? Sorry if I took this story a little too seriously, lol, but the whole idea of the story is just so interesting....

    • @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam
      @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam  Před 10 lety +2

      Seth Wallace Well thanks man! :D I know this is a lame response, but that's kinda part of the mystery :) If you want a fully fleshed out horror story in which everything is explained in the end, check out a story I wrote called "Design" :D It has a similar premise of setting up a seemingly supernatural situation like this, but it's got backstories, origins, character development, plot twists, and all kinds of good stuff like that ;) It's 6 parts, each around 30-40 minutes long, so you can bet it's quite the story . . . really a book at that point :)
      czcams.com/play/PLRY5gdjkXM_umeU_G_UeepR7LY4uu3Pbn.html If you're ever bored enough :3

    • @sethwallace7666
      @sethwallace7666 Před 10 lety +2

      Okay, thanks, I will be sure to check it out, that is, if I ever get the time, lol....

  • @Grimsowerart
    @Grimsowerart Před 6 lety +2

    But why did he lose hope? I mean yeah the loss of interaction would suck, but what about all the stuff you could do with no consequence? Hop on any plane, play any game, kill someone with no blame. Out of rhyme. Anyway the possibility are endless. Anything you want it's yours. Maybe after awhile it would get boring but not for at least a year or two. Then you do the whole pass it on thing. Of course I understand the "hatred consumed me" thing but still.

    • @walterbrink5391
      @walterbrink5391 Před 2 lety +1

      The one characteristic of the average Liam fan. Will never commit a crime on his own terms, but when given the ability to do it with no consequence, will not hesitate. A I myself an attributed to this.

  • @Kittyz1
    @Kittyz1 Před 10 lety +1

    Man I love your stories you got a sub from me Plz keep up your awesome story telling :3

  • @lynbreheney5512
    @lynbreheney5512 Před 8 lety

    Great story, I kind of agree with some other comments that there was a bit of repetitiveness but I suppose it's difficult to describe such hopelessness. But it had a solid ending which I didn't think it would, excellent writing :-)

  • @uniquevalentine4469
    @uniquevalentine4469 Před 10 lety

    I watch a lot of scary thing this was in suggested SOO happy I found you your voice makes it nice and creepy as well :3

  • @coolman22383
    @coolman22383 Před 10 lety +2

    Todo list:
    1.Become human
    2.Get rid of or get away from person i became (so they dont try and get revenge)
    3.Make shiv
    4.Shiv the bitch that stole my life and make her life hell

  • @Poopoopeepee925
    @Poopoopeepee925 Před 10 lety +1

    Nice narreration u sir have earned a new sub loved the pasta to

  • @xinyib5763
    @xinyib5763 Před 8 lety

    Pretty good for a beginner! I hadn't really gotten chills, but I feel like if it had a little extra... I dunno...? but it was good. It wasn't cringey, at least XD

  • @AnneAndersonFoxiepaws
    @AnneAndersonFoxiepaws Před 6 lety

    Aaaargh!! I have been subscribed since before you were born lol...plus approx. 7+ hours into your future because I am still in the UK lmao XD!

  • @mikemartinez3244
    @mikemartinez3244 Před 10 lety +1

    That was an extremely good story wow you're good

  • @CultivateAwareness
    @CultivateAwareness Před 8 lety +9

    Lol, the plot of the anime another.

    • @PrimateProductions
      @PrimateProductions Před 8 lety +2

      The only similarity is that there is a dead person in a classroom and that is where it stops....how could you possibly say that the plots are the same when they only have one thing in common and it ends there? Maybe you did not actually pay that much attention to the two stories or something?

    • @AngryK1tty
      @AngryK1tty Před 8 lety

      +Gina Powell I understand your frustration with the self acclaimed experts on CZcams. But I would like to offer you a piece of friendly advice. Don't get me wrong, I love every comment I've seen you post on this video, I'd just like to warn you. Trying to get across to these people is beyond frustrating, so much so that you just might drive yourself crazy trying. People with any form of intelligence are severely outnumbered by slack jawed morons on this website. I just hope you don't drive yourself insane trying to get them to see the error of their ways.

    • @AngryK1tty
      @AngryK1tty Před 8 lety

      +Gina Powell Anyways, toodle-oo! :)

    • @CultivateAwareness
      @CultivateAwareness Před 8 lety +1

      Laughable. It saddens me to live in a world of over-entitled millennials proclaiming themselves as intellectuals while arguing about mundane things such as series and shows. If this is where the quality of intelligence shines, then I'd prefer to be stupid.

  • @gustavosanchez1146
    @gustavosanchez1146 Před 8 lety +1

    Wouldn't be terrifying if this was part of life...? You have your normal life, as used to, but all of were condemn to go through this once or many times during our life? That you'd never know if the person you live with, you partner, your girlfriend, boyfriend, whatever is actually he/she? If he/she won this battle or lost it?
    A fight that noone can prepare you win..? A common unspoken thing that noone talks about to not attract it to their lives?

  • @thedyce612
    @thedyce612 Před 10 lety +2

    Damn, is this what depression feels like?

  • @dragonsforbreakfast3572
    @dragonsforbreakfast3572 Před 10 lety +2

    Awww she just needed a hug.

    • @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam
      @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam  Před 10 lety

      Haha, yeah, let's go with that ;)

    • @dragonsforbreakfast3572
      @dragonsforbreakfast3572 Před 10 lety

      I actually wrote a story similarish to this. You can read it if you want. www.teenink.com/poetry/free_verse/article/692017/The-Void-VoidSinger/

  • @songd7466
    @songd7466 Před 7 lety +1

    Is it a coincident that I watch this video at 3:00 pm in the afternoon? Since the video is 30 mins long it would end at 3:30 pm...

  • @chibidevi6146
    @chibidevi6146 Před 10 lety +1

    Oh my glob!loved it ^_^ especially the ending

    • @elevformandaba
      @elevformandaba Před 10 lety

      yay! Adventure Time! :D yeah he's really an awesome writer and narrator :P

    • @chibidevi6146
      @chibidevi6146 Před 10 lety

      That he is xD

  • @TheProtronic
    @TheProtronic Před 8 lety +2

    Damn, got some cheese with that wine? It's about time he got off his ass stopped moping around his room feeling sorry for himself. Let that be a lesson to all you emos.

    • @AngryK1tty
      @AngryK1tty Před 8 lety +3

      You're a tool. It's also "cheese with that whine"

  • @belindasoh
    @belindasoh Před 9 lety +2

    Expected story but still good. Well done to whoever wrote the story.

    • @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam
      @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam  Před 9 lety +1

      Haha, dang it! XD I write all my own stories, so I'm glad you liked it . . . And maybe I'll make something less expected in the future XD Thanks for watching!

    • @belindasoh
      @belindasoh Před 9 lety +2

      Haha I couldn't have wrote it any better so good job Liam! Guess i just watch too many horror movie? haha *Shrug*

    • @urbabygirl4993
      @urbabygirl4993 Před 9 lety

      +Scary Story Time With Liam I like the fact that you write all your own stories :) They are all good, too!

  • @desicatz
    @desicatz Před 8 lety +1

    god this just went on aimlessly. i couldn't even finish it. how could a story start off so interesting and end up so boring and loooong?

    • @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam
      @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam  Před 8 lety +2

      Haha, a common problem people seem to have with this one. I've gotten much better since this story, I assure you XD Better pacing all around :3

    • @desicatz
      @desicatz Před 8 lety

      Scary Story Time With Liam I'm sorry it just didn't make it for me. I'm glad your writing is getting better.

  • @5TailFox
    @5TailFox Před 10 lety +2

    Forgot the proper name for this type of apparition. But I've heard legends about others just like it.

    • @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam
      @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam  Před 10 lety +3

      Really?! Woah! I had no idea! Now it seems like I'm an intelligent person pulling from folklore or something! If only, haha

    • @5TailFox
      @5TailFox Před 10 lety +1

      Yeah, there are lots of old stories about soul stealing, changelings like this one. Their methods are similar, but with slight tweaks...

  • @randombeotch32
    @randombeotch32 Před 10 lety +1

    I have such a twisted mind and This was amazing !!

  • @UnderTheRated
    @UnderTheRated Před 4 měsíci

    no subtitles :[
    anyways this was pretty good and at least the protagonist has a way out, unlike a lot of other stories
    still depressing as fuck though
    _I can't wait for another upload_

  • @pleasedontassignmyhandle

    I'm so interested in what would happen when or if he managed to consume this kid, and what would happen afterwards.
    If he did, what would he turn into? Would he consume all the memories and become that person and loosing all self-awareness in the sense that he wouldn't remember his own memories?
    If he did keep his memories, which would also ensure that the girl did as well, how would the confrontation between the two be?
    SO MANY QUESTIONS.
    A really interesting and mind-boggling story, though.

  • @PrimateProductions
    @PrimateProductions Před 8 lety +2

    I dont know why all of a sudden all these people are experts and critiquing your writing the way that they are...I am actually quite surprised and amazed...I am an ancient person most likely compared to most of the people in here commenting I would imagine and am and always have been an avid reader (and occasional writer..sorry I cant send you one of my critically acclaimed five novels but I am much to busy to get it out to you what with all the commenting and critiquing I have to do and maintain here on youtube!!). I am always amused (and often annoyed) by the number of "experts" you will find here on youtube on a variety of subjects and how they are always willing to point out everyone else's mistakes.
    Either the "author of the five novels that have all received great reviews" is just an asshole IRL or they are very young and arrogant, whether they have any room to be that or not. I agree with you though that as a mature adult they were extremely rude and if they truly were a professional writer and'or a decent person they would have commented with a little more tact I guess. I am very curious though as to whether or not you ever received your "graded paper back" from them and/or a copy of at least one of their novels, or at least the information to locate said novel so that you could take a gander at it yourself or at least establish if it even it exists (which I seriously am doubting)?
    So, though I do not claim to be an expert by any means, I do consider myself well educated and I have read a few things in my life (though LISTENING to stories is something new to me I will say...I think reading is one of my passions in life but I have only recently allowed myself to enjoy listening to stories be told) I have to tell you that your original stories are some of the scariest I have ever come across..after listening to many others for a period of time and then switching over and listening to yours I can see a distinct difference in the level of "fear inducing factors". As a matter of fact, I rarely find myself leaving a story feeling uneasy and unable to sleep like a baby but there have been a few of yours that have left me sucking my thumb and buried under the covers once I turn the lights out!! I have found that I can only do a few of yours and then must take a little break as not only do the plots induce a little anxiety but the awesome way in which you are able to draw a person in and make a story "real" to someone is overwhelming to me at times (a good thing). To be honest, this particular story is not one of my favorites that you have done and once you mentioned that it was a few years old i can see the the way your style has evolved and I just happen to enjoy the more recent stories a little better..not that I found a lot of faults with this one it is just not my thing. Just keep up the good work and dont let a few idiots ever discourage you though I am quite sure that you are above that. The population of people out there on the internet is vast and it seems more of the idiots speak up than anyone else.

    • @d3vil278
      @d3vil278 Před 8 lety

      yes

    • @tammyfav9454
      @tammyfav9454 Před 8 lety

      GINA Excuse. MY SPELLING LEGALLY BLIND WITH LOW VISION.
      HON I TOO AGREE AND PREACH THE SAME THINGS FOR THE PAST 8 YRS. THERE ARE JUST LITTLE GIRLS AND BOYS NOT YET OLD ENOUGH TO COMPREHEND YET. THE Older ONES ARE THOSE. A WASTE ON SOCIETY WHOS ONLY CONTRIBUTION IN THIS WORLD IS TO SIT ON THEIR EXPANDING BUTTS TYPING AWAY Critiquing THOSE WHO Accomplish AND THIS NARRATOR DID THE Writer JUSTICE. SPLENDIDLY WRITTEN AA WELL. CHAT WITH YOU LATEE

  • @chasnmark
    @chasnmark Před 10 lety

    Really interesting. You have great talent, keep it up.

  • @jakeg6935
    @jakeg6935 Před 10 lety +1

    The depth in this story was banana's

  • @zachsmith235
    @zachsmith235 Před 10 lety

    Do you write all of these? They r really good and its nice hearing things aren't on other channels

  • @shariahwarfield4462
    @shariahwarfield4462 Před 8 lety

    You are such a great writer . You know how to give me shudders. You are also a very sweet person you know how to take criticism very well😀

  • @BlueSkyCountry
    @BlueSkyCountry Před 7 lety

    Seems like he inadvertently joined in a supernatural game of tag and he is now IT.

  • @space-cowgirl
    @space-cowgirl Před 9 lety +2

    what happens when the narrator and the girl are both classmates :o does he beat her up? does he get his roommates back? NEED PART TWO WITH LOTS OF FIGHTING PLS

    • @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam
      @ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam  Před 9 lety +2

      Haha, if you want a lengthy, multi-part story, I recommend my series "Design." It's all about fighting and supernatural shenanigans XD You can check it out on my channel :3

    • @laughingbuddha5427
      @laughingbuddha5427 Před 9 lety

      Scary Story Time With Liam DESIGN IS AWESOME!!!!!! So is Yellow Halogen. Dude all of your stories are ridiculously great! I have a skeleton of a story that I would really like to work with you on. Can we pow wow via email?

  • @randdompersons8751
    @randdompersons8751 Před 8 lety +1

    Damn if I had this chick in my class i would actually take notes if she stayed in the for the whole time.

  • @NinjaFrog65
    @NinjaFrog65 Před 8 lety

    Dude, this kid's stand is The World. She can move in the frozen time for so long. :P

  • @victorh.moreira5264
    @victorh.moreira5264 Před 7 lety

    5 minutes under the same condition I'd already be bitch-slapping everyone screaming "Look at me!"

  • @hiitsmelaila103
    @hiitsmelaila103 Před 7 lety

    this made me cry cause this is what I go through everyday

  • @xXTheLoneWolfXx100
    @xXTheLoneWolfXx100 Před 9 lety +1

    (The sound is gone.
    The life is gone.
    The color is gone.
    The memory is gone.
    Where did I go?
    Where did you go?
    Where did this go?
    Where did that go?
    Idk where I am.
    Idk what happened.
    Idk when it came.
    Idk when it left.
    A man came first.
    A woman came second.
    A boy came third.
    A boy came fourth.)

  • @starsnatcher4659
    @starsnatcher4659 Před 7 lety

    Awesomely Creepy video, made me subscribe!

  • @hellishwerewolf7798
    @hellishwerewolf7798 Před 9 lety +5

    Was the girls name Junko Enoshima?

  • @nutmegthedoge5481
    @nutmegthedoge5481 Před 7 lety +3

    this could be a very good love story XD

  • @Chris-ff4ve
    @Chris-ff4ve Před 8 lety +3

    Tag. You're it.

    • @loganlafoe9021
      @loganlafoe9021 Před 8 lety

      I actually would have attacked the hell out of girl and yelled, NO! My humanity!

  • @ronway7280
    @ronway7280 Před 7 lety

    Well written and superbly read!

  • @elizabethgaspodnetich9676

    Good story! Just keep swapping the bad around like a cold! It was a good story, although not at the top of my list but good none the less. I have a lot of these to watch so I am sure I will find some more scary than others. You have an awesome channel by the way!!

    • @PrimateProductions
      @PrimateProductions Před 8 lety

      Elizabeth, how nice to see you here..I had no idea we had this interest in common!

    • @elizabethgaspodnetich9676
      @elizabethgaspodnetich9676 Před 8 lety

      Gina Powell Well hello to you!! I do enjoy a good story, and some of them are pretty awesome. I could listen to the stories for days before I finally lose complete track of time! I am a true lover of all things scary, suspenseful and paranormal. Good to see you again!

    • @PrimateProductions
      @PrimateProductions Před 8 lety +1

      +Elizabeth Gaspodnetich myself as well...i too tend to not even realize that hours have passed while listening to these. i do enjoy the longer ones much more than the short ones generally

    • @elizabethgaspodnetich9676
      @elizabethgaspodnetich9676 Před 8 lety

      Gina Powell I fell asleep one night while listening to some of the scary stories, and had some horrendous dreams!! I do that a lot and I don't recommend it!!

  • @vampymouse4238
    @vampymouse4238 Před 7 lety

    at the end when the picture changed I KNEW IT WAS GONNA BE THAT KID!!!! he had the biggest frown

  • @wreathofpalmaria
    @wreathofpalmaria Před 9 lety +1

    did you see the true form of despair?

  • @itinerantmercenary6988
    @itinerantmercenary6988 Před 10 lety

    What did we learn today, kids?
    Look not long into the abyss, lest the abyss look back into you.
    AAAAANNNNNDDDD
    Beware when fighting monsters, lest a monster you become. Great Story.

  • @Copperhead347
    @Copperhead347 Před 7 lety

    12:47 song by Jorge Mendez. Which one is it?? I am having the hardest time finding it. It's not sleepless nights, even though that's what's listed.

    • @Copperhead347
      @Copperhead347 Před 7 lety

      Found it for anyone else wondering. "Fall" by Jorge Mendez

  • @walterbrink5391
    @walterbrink5391 Před 2 lety

    People who do night shifts: Night shifts ain’t that bad.
    People who do night shifts: