This is really good! I loved the colors in his mind, and the heartbeat in the background. It built a really good atmosphere. My only slight criticism is the constant cutting in the first scene in his mind. I felt that the shots were a little too short and it was kinda rushing to show the person talking instead of the one listening. Other than that it was great! Good stuff
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Also, I really appreciate the constructive criticism! I've noted that issue as well (I need to work on pacing a bit).
Just found your channel, love what I’ve watched so far!
Nice work guys! glad to see you back
Thanks!
Hey! Good job!
Hope to see some young CZcamsr doing film analysis on your films one day.
God, that would be my dream!
Glad to see you again.
It's been a while, hasn't it? :-)
This is really good! I loved the colors in his mind, and the heartbeat in the background. It built a really good atmosphere. My only slight criticism is the constant cutting in the first scene in his mind. I felt that the shots were a little too short and it was kinda rushing to show the person talking instead of the one listening. Other than that it was great! Good stuff
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Also, I really appreciate the constructive criticism! I've noted that issue as well (I need to work on pacing a bit).
holy shit you’re back!
I am! And I plan to stay! 😁
Noice
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