Before i say what I want to say, keep in mind that this is a series I would be interested in watching, and I would like to see you improve at certain parts. I dont want to hate on you or anything because this is not something deserving of hate. I'll give you some points to how this series can be improved and gain traction and maybe get the attention it deserves. 1. It would be nice to have som sort of intro where you describe who you are, and what your challange is. this is to grab the attention of the viewer and help them understand what they,re watching. (Keep in mind that this could be as little as 10 seconds or as long as a minute, but be careful to not make it too boring) 2. It would be appropriate to end the video after some sort of advancment has been made, like beating the eye of cthulhu or another boss. This is to reward the viewer for staying, and watching the video progress towards an end. (If you need multiple days of recording to get the preffered ending it will be worth it instead of rushing out a video after one session) 3. I need to point out the editing... It was actually well cropped and it was fun to just hang on to your conversations. Yet there is still something missing, some sentences to grab the viewers attention. This would be neccessary to show your progress throughout the video by marking the progression with certain sentences. This will probably come naturally as you talk with your friends and tell them what's happening. I am just saying this to help you, and it's of a kind heart. Keep it up, and i'll look forward to see the improvement :) Good Luck!
@@Breadinator4200 aaa, okay, do as you wish, it's your channel after all, and i have nothing to do with it at all. I suppose we will meet again sometime. :)
Before i say what I want to say, keep in mind that this is a series I would be interested in watching, and I would like to see you improve at certain parts. I dont want to hate on you or anything because this is not something deserving of hate. I'll give you some points to how this series can be improved and gain traction and maybe get the attention it deserves.
1. It would be nice to have som sort of intro where you describe who you are, and what your challange is. this is to grab the attention of the viewer and help them understand what they,re watching. (Keep in mind that this could be as little as 10 seconds or as long as a minute, but be careful to not make it too boring)
2. It would be appropriate to end the video after some sort of advancment has been made, like beating the eye of cthulhu or another boss. This is to reward the viewer for staying, and watching the video progress towards an end. (If you need multiple days of recording to get the preffered ending it will be worth it instead of rushing out a video after one session)
3. I need to point out the editing... It was actually well cropped and it was fun to just hang on to your conversations. Yet there is still something missing, some sentences to grab the viewers attention. This would be neccessary to show your progress throughout the video by marking the progression with certain sentences. This will probably come naturally as you talk with your friends and tell them what's happening.
I am just saying this to help you, and it's of a kind heart. Keep it up, and i'll look forward to see the improvement :)
Good Luck!
Thanks for the feedback but this is most likely going to be a one off video. I appreciate the feedback a lot though.
@@Breadinator4200 aaa, okay, do as you wish, it's your channel after all, and i have nothing to do with it at all. I suppose we will meet again sometime. :)