Undertale Comic Voice Over- Thanksgiving

Eeeeyup, I've hopped onto the Undertale bandwagon (despite never playing the actual game...I really should do that) and have made my first ever Voice Over for a comic (made by Dragonith on deviantart). Not necessarily my best work, but I like it nonetheless. What about you guys? Wanna throw me a bone and leave some bone-a-fide constructive criticism in the comments?
Comic by Dragonith: dragonith.deviantart.com/art/U...
Music (Bonetrousle and Megalovania) from Undertale, made by Toby Fox

[@justinrichard927]

0:17 - SAAAAAAAAANS!!!!

[@hermionejeangranger6540]

No dislikes!

[@ShadowElite217]

lol