Fixing Five Nights at Freddy's : The Movie

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  • čas přidán 5. 12. 2023
  • Though enjoyed by fans, Critics & newcomers to the IP struggled with FNAF The Movie. Let's have a go at changing that! I hope you enjoy.
    Disclaimer: Movie footage used in this rewrite essay is owned in it's entirety by the copyright holder. STAG makes no claim of ownership and uses this footage under the means of fair use for transformative commentary and entertainment purpose. Please support the filmmakers and creators of the FNAF movie by streaming Five Night's At Freddy's where available. Thank You.
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Komentáře • 311

  • @michaelamartin371
    @michaelamartin371 Před 6 měsíci +257

    Problems: Not that much screentime of the animatronics trying to get into Mike's office and try to kill him, and the only animatronic attacking for most of the film is Foxy but overall I give it a minus A but if these problems were fixed, then it would be a A plus.

    • @flarestriker2005
      @flarestriker2005 Před 5 měsíci +18

      Mike was just sleeping most of the time. I know damn well I wouldn't be sleeping in a pizzeria full of possessed animatronic animals, I'd be wide awake with a weapon nearby. I do hope they'll improve with the 2nd film, considering we will most likely get the Toy Animatronics and the horror potential with them(Especially Mangle and Puppet) has to be utilized!

    • @CobbleBompster
      @CobbleBompster Před 5 měsíci +6

      I feel like the fort scene was unnecessary and should have probably been replaced with what you’re talking about.

    • @Big_Fat_
      @Big_Fat_ Před 5 měsíci +1

      For me it’s a d+

    • @tamainewolfe2138
      @tamainewolfe2138 Před 5 měsíci +2

      I mean the movie was based on the books and in the books we barely see the animatronics so in my opinion it’s good

    • @Jadenette11111
      @Jadenette11111 Před 5 měsíci +2

      *CUPCAKE*

  • @TheKaijuKing54
    @TheKaijuKing54 Před 6 měsíci +216

    I definitely prefer how you made Garrett’s disappearance take place within the pizzeria instead of some random camping site. I also love how you inserted more of the game’s version of Michael’s backstory with him scaring Garrett away with the animatronics, causing him to feel personally guilty for his brother’s disappearance. Your take on William Afton was really good as well! Though, I do have some issues with this rewrite. One of them being that Golden Freddy doesn’t do anything and is only slouched in a corner in one scene. (At least he rides a cab in the official movie.) However, I still think that this rewrite is great in its own way regardless! Great job!

    • @BurningFlamesofDivineDragon
      @BurningFlamesofDivineDragon Před 6 měsíci +4

      I think the random campsite was a reference to how a few of the kids in the games were kidnapped outside the pizzeria in the games. Also from what I understand there will be two more FNAF movies as stated by the actors. What I would like to know in the movie is how Mike didn't know anything about Freddies in the actual film? Was it because he and his sister had recently moved there or was it something else?

    • @TheKaijuKing54
      @TheKaijuKing54 Před 6 měsíci +4

      I see where you’re coming from. However, even with that being said, I still think that the story of the film would benefit from Garrett’s disappearance taking place at Freddy’s. I mean, we know that Mike’s camping trip took place in Nebraska, which is not where Freddy’s is located. So why would Afton (someone who would normally do his kiIIings in Freddy’s) decide to kiII a kid in a random forest in another state? What was he even doing there? Sure you can theorize that it was “Afton’s first kiIl” or a “planned personal attack” but if that really is the case, you can still have all that take place in Freddy Fazbear’s. It makes the story feel a lot more connected and less convoluted that way.

    • @BurningFlamesofDivineDragon
      @BurningFlamesofDivineDragon Před 6 měsíci +2

      @@TheKaijuKing54 Well I'm convinced that Mike and Abby's dad is the movie version of Henry. If this is indeed the case then just like the game chances are Garrett being kidnapped was probably due to Afton's jealousy of his business partner.

    • @Pygargue00fr
      @Pygargue00fr Před 5 měsíci

      When it comes to Mike and the movie in general, it's a lot more closer to Scott's original intentions back when fnaf 4 had come out and the first novel trilogie was beginning to be made. From Mike not being an Afton, to Vanessa essentially being a growned up Elisabeth. (In the Silver eyes Trilogie, Afton had only one child, Elisabeth, who he had both mentaly and physically abused, much in the way it was implied in the movie, to the point she essentially became just like him)
      The puppet being male was also a fact brought up in fnaf 2 "Save him" wich can again be a direct comparaison to the movie. (most likely was gonna be Samuel in the games like in the books, before Charlie took her brother's place and Scott went full Human robot mode) As for Micheal being responsable for the death of his brother and trying to find closure for it. Yeah. That's in the movie too.
      The decision to turn Mike Shmidt into Micheal Afton was most likely a last minute change from Scott. He said once he redconned one thing, and my guess was that redcon was his original vision of the storyline. The one he had in mind before rewriting everything for Sister Location.

    • @Pygargue00fr
      @Pygargue00fr Před 5 měsíci

      @@BurningFlamesofDivineDragon that is so gonna be the case, it's Sister eyes lore but with different characters.

  • @SydeLeaderRay
    @SydeLeaderRay Před 5 měsíci +23

    That lead into "I always come back" was perfectly fine. I wish the movie did it this way.

  • @BurningFlamesofDivineDragon
    @BurningFlamesofDivineDragon Před 6 měsíci +79

    I feel that Abby was really important to this film. She is the reason Mike gets the job and was able to communicate with the kids even before Mike took the gig. Also, her drawings were very important in revealing a lot of details. Not so sure I'd call Abby a plot device that means someone or something useless throughout the film. Abby was anything but that however, this is just me. I can't wait for the second FNAF film for the movie timeline. I'd give the film an 8/10.

    • @Ben-zg8xk
      @Ben-zg8xk Před 4 měsíci +2

      she drived the plot forward. Mike needs to realise to cherish what he has with abby instead of chasing garett

    • @Ethan_Cubed
      @Ethan_Cubed Před 4 měsíci +4

      @@Ben-zg8xk he did. its called character development. did you not see the third act of the film????

    • @Ben-zg8xk
      @Ben-zg8xk Před 4 měsíci +3

      ⁠@@Ethan_CubedYeah that’s what I’m saying. That’s the point of Abby to the plot

    • @Ethan_Cubed
      @Ethan_Cubed Před 4 měsíci +2

      @@Ben-zg8xk oh I didn't realise you were talking about the plot. I thought you meaning Mike STILL needs to do these things lok

  • @Crepis
    @Crepis Před 6 měsíci +60

    Scott hire this man for the next movie

    • @stag9327
      @stag9327  Před 6 měsíci +14

      I'll take that job 🤘

    • @Ethan_Cubed
      @Ethan_Cubed Před 4 měsíci +1

      oh please no

    • @hassanfahar3866
      @hassanfahar3866 Před 3 měsíci +3

      @@stag9327 If you can make the fnaf Movie 1 sound like an actual terrifying horror movie then Boy i can only imagine what kind of script you would be able to come up with if you would actually be hired

  • @chasered
    @chasered Před 6 měsíci +95

    As much as I enjoyed the actual flick I must admit this serves much better as a movie adaptation of the fnaf story
    Bravo! Truly a great rewrite

    • @stag9327
      @stag9327  Před 6 měsíci +14

      Very kind of you to say! Had a blast with fnaf, looking forward to my next rewrite if folks keep enjoying them 😊

    • @LuisLopez-mx3er
      @LuisLopez-mx3er Před 6 měsíci +3

      Judging by this video I still have high hopes for the sequel cause I know Scott is working on improvements.

    • @juliabp6057
      @juliabp6057 Před 6 měsíci +2

      Incredible on how the fans would manage to make a better FNAF adaptation than the game's own creator, lol

    • @Ethan_Cubed
      @Ethan_Cubed Před 4 měsíci

      bro...in this version the animatronics barely even show up.

    • @strikebomber2944
      @strikebomber2944 Před 2 měsíci

      @@Ethan_Cubedthat makes them scarier. it’s called the jaws effect

  • @yumiyo6244
    @yumiyo6244 Před 5 měsíci +14

    I like what we got. But I love how you made Garret disappear in the pizza place. It just makes the job more meaningful to the film and how Mike scared him using the animatronics which can somewhat parallel to the games.

  • @GingyPreston
    @GingyPreston Před 6 měsíci +17

    I like that people are taking their creativities to make it better and cooler, and Making more “Easter eggs” but how it came out is how scottt wanted it, how he wanted it to be shown to the fans.

  • @jonibologna8514
    @jonibologna8514 Před 6 měsíci +102

    Justice for doug. Aside from the lack of a matpat cameo mention (very important) love this concept.

    • @stag9327
      @stag9327  Před 6 měsíci +22

      I'm sure I'd squeeze MatPat in the diner scene 👀...but I still stand by Doug. Justice for Doug!

    • @jonibologna8514
      @jonibologna8514 Před 6 měsíci +5

      @@stag9327 hoping he'll make a return in the inevitable sequel

    • @flarestriker2005
      @flarestriker2005 Před 5 měsíci +4

      @@jonibologna8514 Imagine Doug being the lawyer for Fazbear Entertainment, perhaps that'll explain why they're still in business no matter what lmao.

  • @EZ-Flix
    @EZ-Flix Před 5 měsíci +13

    10:41 breaking bad transitions in FNaF is wild

  • @onemoreminute0543
    @onemoreminute0543 Před 6 měsíci +145

    I personally think that the movie was a solid 7/10 in its own right, but there's definitely things I would have changed.
    I mean, not having Mike be Williams son in the story removes that complex relationship we've been so fascinated by in the games. Vanessa was meant to take on that role, but it was barely explored.

    • @tomslawyer
      @tomslawyer Před 5 měsíci +3

      It was never confirmed that Mike was William's son. Everyone got that from a coloring book with cryptic notes that had zero meaning. It was a way to spice up an activity journal so that people would buy it

    • @onemoreminute0543
      @onemoreminute0543 Před 5 měsíci +14

      @@tomslawyer"It was never confirmed that Mike was Williams son."
      *Father, it's me Michael...*

    • @sunday7972
      @sunday7972 Před 5 měsíci +1

      YEESSS, if they made Mike an Afton it woulve also be more meaningful the reveal that William Afton was a murder

    • @DJmathcat
      @DJmathcat Před 5 měsíci +6

      @@onemoreminute0543 I guess he's never played the games😂

    • @Glitchberry
      @Glitchberry Před 5 měsíci +2

      @@onemoreminute0543

  • @buzzytrombone4353
    @buzzytrombone4353 Před 5 měsíci +16

    The only think that I would fix with this rewrite is that if Garrett was stuffed into Freddy, then he should be the one to convince the other animatronics to befriend Mike and keep him company even though Mike wouldn't initially know why they'd do this until he would realise that the smell of blood is coming from them and he puts two and two together. That way the aspect of the animatronics being children instead of mindless monsters can be kept in the story and be a more emotional kick in the heart when the audience learns who Freddy is.
    Also I would add Michael Afton into the story as someone who works at the same time as Mike, keeping a watchful eye out for him whilst he's sleeping, with Michael knowing that he used Mike's legal name for his own purposes of getting into Freddy's without being affiliated with William, giving the bit with William looking at Mike with a suspicious look more weight.

    • @worthybutter2004
      @worthybutter2004 Před 19 dny

      Huh. So in your version, Mike Schmidt and Michael Afton are two separate people?

  • @sinnamonroll2780
    @sinnamonroll2780 Před 4 měsíci +7

    This is a good re-write. More animatronics but still a good rewrite. This vid just proved that Scott should have hired fans or at least writers who are fans to adapt it to the screen. This just also shows that a live action FNAF series would have done the story more justice tbh .

  • @Pygargue00fr
    @Pygargue00fr Před 6 měsíci +20

    Trully a more grounded, horrific yet simple approch to the movie with is essentielly what we would have been all expecting yet with enough twists to make it untertaining.
    My only change would be to re-enact "Die in a fire" while keeping your dialogue for Afton. Seeing the spirits of the childrens corner theirs killer and ultimately causing his death would have made it even better!

    • @CourtRobGray
      @CourtRobGray Před 3 měsíci +1

      I think that should be saved for the last movie like they did for the fourth closet, where all the animatronics realized that Afton was the killer. It would be so much more impactful for the film audience as they all realize this is the last movie of the trilogy.

  • @konstantinosanifantis9544
    @konstantinosanifantis9544 Před 5 měsíci +6

    My guy, that Afton monologue was BY FAR the coolest thing in this vid, you make him seem way more threatning that what he was in the movie and not originally wearing the yellow bonnie suit while making his entrance really proves that point

  • @pianomation6256
    @pianomation6256 Před 6 měsíci +28

    With refining, this could have potential to be better than what we got for sure!

  • @theslime3495
    @theslime3495 Před 6 měsíci +15

    They should hire you as the script writer for the second Fnaf movie.

    • @stag9327
      @stag9327  Před 6 měsíci +3

      I'll take that gig 👀

  • @VuddyProductions
    @VuddyProductions Před 5 měsíci +15

    this is great, keeping a lot of aspects of the actual movie intact while making it more centered around freddy's itself

  • @flarestriker2005
    @flarestriker2005 Před 5 měsíci +8

    I would've honestly kept the opening scene from the original movie but I do love this rewrite though! Both the original movie and the rewrite are amazing! Hopefully the 2nd movie improves on the horror aspect.

  • @_Akiraaaa__
    @_Akiraaaa__ Před 5 měsíci +10

    Although the movie did give a whole new story and was pretty decent in its own way..
    I loved this version where the horror aspect and the lore is very heavy, staying somewhat true to the original games. Shining the aspect of the possessed animatronics and the looming threat of the yellow rabbit, I really like your version on the movie, really sad though that Doug didnt make it, nor did Abby which removes quite a chunk of possible storyline, other than that it was great

  • @xavieraspuru2505
    @xavieraspuru2505 Před 4 měsíci +4

    There are a ton of good ideas in this version! Although Afton original monologue in the suit was great, these alternate lines are really cool (Also the phrasing of the "I always come back" line was definitely better in this version because it actually made sense in the context it was said in, and it also didn't feel forced). I'm not the biggest fan of the building being burned down, but henry making an appearance is a really cool idea definitely should have been in the original ending. The extra references are also sick, like the drawing of the crying children and the Freddy music box, which should have 100% been in the movie. Also, Garretts disappearance is a lot better. It's not really the fact that it's at Freddy's that makes it better, it's just the fact that its more interesting and actually makes sense why garret was killed. It's not flawless though, because: 1. The excess gore details aren't really necessary, 2. Abby not being a part of the movie just makes it feel like it is missing an integral part of its story, and 3. Golden Freddy is highly underused (like in the go movie), and the complete removal of any tease of the puppet is kind of strange. Overall, while it has its flaws, this version of the movie brings in some great ideas and improves some of the original concepts. I think it is really cool original take on the movie!

    • @Wizardjones69
      @Wizardjones69 Před 4 měsíci

      better he saying: *stupid kids, stupid in life, stupid in death, i see you all in hell* then the springlocks crush him inside to death

  • @Flash_Man_Studios
    @Flash_Man_Studios Před 5 měsíci +9

    I actually love this
    i guess one thing I can think of right now is maybe there should be a scene that establishes what the springlocks are so that the spring-trapped scene doesn’t feel random, but that’s a pretty simple part to put in, other than that I think it’s really great, I love Afton’s monologue at the end, man I kinda wanna do a short animation of it lol

  • @Mesadly
    @Mesadly Před 6 měsíci +7

    18:58 so well delivered

  • @Valox
    @Valox Před 5 měsíci +2

    This was really enjoyable, I will say I prefer the ending in the actual movie to yours, and I think having Garrett be Golden Freddy rather than Freddy would have been better as a parallel to Springtrap. Overall, good job.

  • @taifuskies3889
    @taifuskies3889 Před 5 měsíci +6

    Im actually fine with what we got in the movie but I have to admit this script is amazing!

  • @michaelafton2494
    @michaelafton2494 Před 5 měsíci +4

    wow the voice acting is amazing that's cool most of the stuff you add are great the most thing I want in this movie that mike revealed to be michael afton btw Keep up

  • @TeaCatGuyDev
    @TeaCatGuyDev Před 5 měsíci +8

    This rewrite was actually really good just some slight adjustments I would make one of them being when the yellow rabbit turns around to look at mike with red eyes instead of red they could be purple and then maybe for a slight redesign of William at the beginning of the movie instead of his shirt being white it could be a light purple color or lavender so that would kind of show people that they are probably connected before the William reveal scene.

  • @superultimatexlrfire462
    @superultimatexlrfire462 Před 5 měsíci +4

    I prefer the Garrett subplot we got in the movie, and I can't handle scrapping Doug. And on record, Jason Blum had said Scott specifically wanted the movie made for the fans above anyone else. And this one has even more easter eggs that'd need someone to understand the franchise and fan media for it than the actual movie.
    An interesting concept, but I prefer the movie we got.

  • @coleishere
    @coleishere Před 5 měsíci +4

    yo this rewrite is sick
    i especially like how the whole "aunt" angle is removed from the story.

  • @user-jp7qn8ye9j
    @user-jp7qn8ye9j Před 6 měsíci +12

    This is amazing but i think their 1000% gonna make this movie more understandable in the sequels (i hope so)

    • @stag9327
      @stag9327  Před 6 měsíci +4

      I'm genuinely really looking forward to the sequel!

  • @itsjustchris2866
    @itsjustchris2866 Před 6 měsíci +14

    Currently in the process of rewriting the fnaf script (I'm at page 140 as of writing this), I'm glad to see other people are taking the initiative to fix this overtly disappointing film.

    • @juliabp6057
      @juliabp6057 Před 6 měsíci +6

      It’s incredible on how that fans manage to produce something better than the game’s creator himself, lol

    • @itsjustchris2866
      @itsjustchris2866 Před 6 měsíci +1

      @@juliabp6057 It's genuinely baffling

    • @sirsnek3933
      @sirsnek3933 Před 6 měsíci +3

      @@itsjustchris2866 movie was stil good tho

    • @itsjustchris2866
      @itsjustchris2866 Před 6 měsíci +1

      @@sirsnek3933 I give it a solid 6 out of 10

    • @sunday7972
      @sunday7972 Před 5 měsíci +1

      @@sirsnek3933it was meh for me but everyone has their own opinion on the film so yeah

  • @cawsomeaolin
    @cawsomeaolin Před 6 měsíci +5

    noooooooo you removed the awesome fucking opening credits sequence

    • @Butwhythough881
      @Butwhythough881 Před 6 měsíci

      The opening credits pretty much give away the mystery of the missing children and the suspense of the “yellow rabbit.” If the pixel art was used later as a visual reference while Vanessa confesses Afton’s motivations and actions to Mike, then it would be more fitting.

  • @Dark-sx3bd
    @Dark-sx3bd Před 6 měsíci +4

    I’m actually making my own rewrite of this film, this is what’s happening:
    - The dynamic of Mike and Abby as I think it works.
    - Vanessa comes into the story after Mike’s friend (Probably gonna write this part out) goes missing after taking the nightshift, theres a scene dedicated to him going up against the robots.
    - William sneaks around as a shadow like figure, having the robots do his dirty work like luring Abby.
    - William doesn’t actually get into the spring-lock suit until much later at the end, he reveals himself as himself to Mike, and with an axe too, not a knife. (Vanessa doesn’t do the shooting thing in this script)
    - When the robots turn on William, he destroys them fnaf 3 style allowing the ghost kids to come after him.
    - Along the way, he takes Abby and hold her hostage, eventually, they end up in the safe room where William puts the suit on, as the characters confront each other, Abby kicks the suit a little to hard causing the spring-locks to go off, William demise happens.
    - As a bonus, if I had to write you tubers into this script, MatPat would be a crazy guy, and Cory would still be the Taxi Driver.
    - Also, paving way for a second film, Henry would appear in a post credit scene, he simple comes in, looks at William then leaves (Still deciding on this)
    - the bite of 87 is shown in a flashback as one of Mike’s friends explains to him about.
    - Mike also would know of Fazbears and would be skeptical about the job, not asking it at first, but eventually does for Abby.
    - the dream sequences do happen, but on a much smaller scale and aren’t as focus on (Gonna change this for sure to include more)
    Now these are the things I want to incorporate into my script and saying this now, it’s either gonna have one more rewrite, or two, cause I feel like adding some like the dreams Mike had more things and cutting out things like the bit of 87 flashback, what do you think, I’ll watch your vid and even incorporate thing you think would work.

    • @Dark-sx3bd
      @Dark-sx3bd Před 6 měsíci

      Also adding one more thing here:
      -More tension and even jump-scares would be focused on too.

    • @WarioWareFan01010
      @WarioWareFan01010 Před 5 měsíci

      What about the thieves?

  • @southerncoastproductions7587
    @southerncoastproductions7587 Před 5 měsíci +2

    Whenever someone says ''I fixed something'' 9 times out of ten they broke it further, I'll be the judge of if it was ''fixed''.

  • @G.N.F462
    @G.N.F462 Před 5 měsíci +2

    I really like this rewrite, especially making garrets kidnaping take place at Freddy's gives mike more of a connection to Freddy's. although if I were to add something in, I would add maybe explain why they never check the suit, although it is one of these thing in fnaf that really difficult to give good explanation for, well unless someone removed the bodies

  • @NaveDV
    @NaveDV Před 6 měsíci +6

    Man, I'm really happy with this video, I've been rewriting the film for a few weeks and I see that a lot of the ideas I had are similar to what's in the video I think this is cool, it shows that the fans have a common sense of what the film should be

    • @Dark-sx3bd
      @Dark-sx3bd Před 6 měsíci

      Yeah, but I still like the film and incorporating stuff from the movie and mixing it into the games

    • @NaveDV
      @NaveDV Před 6 měsíci

      @@Dark-sx3bd I also really liked the film, it was really fun and definitely the best birthday present I've ever received

  • @JohnnyCraver2024
    @JohnnyCraver2024 Před 2 měsíci +3

    This is basically your own version than a rewrite. And I love it

  • @skycreeper0173
    @skycreeper0173 Před 6 měsíci +6

    I really like this approach you did with the movie. There are some things that need some work such as Golden Freddy having a more prominent role. But I think it turned out great!
    But yeah, I’m surprised you saw Abby as a plot device. Looking back at the movie, she kinda does play out like that. I think if Abby had a more defined character arc and had more characterization, her character could have been better. But as it is, I really like Abby’s character.

  • @Thatkid367
    @Thatkid367 Před 6 měsíci +4

    I watched this yesterday and I looked for it today but I found it this video is so good

  • @BasementDweller_
    @BasementDweller_ Před 5 měsíci +4

    I like a good chunk of this rewrite but there’s a few bits that are just off. Like it’s better than what we got but I can’t put my tongue on why it feels off.

  • @Twigs_20
    @Twigs_20 Před 5 měsíci +8

    What the hell I actually love this so much the inclusion of Henry was very well thought out as well as the ending section with Freddy’s music box

  • @SCP-469
    @SCP-469 Před 6 měsíci +71

    See I would love this movie so much more if they didn’t CUT OUT ALL THE FLASHBACKS FOR NO REASON ( idc I’m still petty
    Edit: I just realised the animatronics are never stated to smell
    Edit II: I’ll be real, I like Garrett’s death more than the bite

    • @RenBenny35
      @RenBenny35 Před 6 měsíci +4

      Well.. the FNAF Movie has its own Lore. Just like the books

    • @SCP-469
      @SCP-469 Před 6 měsíci +1

      @@RenBenny35 None of these have anything to with the games this is movie stuff

    • @RenBenny35
      @RenBenny35 Před 6 měsíci +2

      @@SCP-469 just telling ye

    • @freedomwriter9688
      @freedomwriter9688 Před 5 měsíci +1

      Maybe cause this movie supposed to it own lore?

    • @SCP-469
      @SCP-469 Před 5 měsíci +2

      @@freedomwriter9688 the movie filmed flashbacks that they cut out I’m referring to those, where did you think I was talking about the games

  • @PandaSlothProductions
    @PandaSlothProductions Před 5 měsíci +3

    Afton’s dialouge goes so hard

  • @JotaroKujoGaming1989
    @JotaroKujoGaming1989 Před 6 měsíci +6

    how does this have such low views? this needs more attention! its a great vid too

  • @iLoveBread260
    @iLoveBread260 Před 5 měsíci +2

    I must admit that the springlock scene makes more sense here than the movie and is better

  • @caseyyoung000
    @caseyyoung000 Před 6 měsíci +17

    Why is this better than the actual movie though ❤so so good. I miss Doug though 😢😂

  • @Bass-ef3dr
    @Bass-ef3dr Před 5 měsíci +2

    The thing that i would i loved is William using more the springbonnie suit.
    Like for example, instead of golden freddy going for abby its william in the suit.

  • @Sonicfan2592
    @Sonicfan2592 Před 6 měsíci +6

    I love seeing these remakes (I have done a few remakes myself.)

  • @TopatTom
    @TopatTom Před 5 měsíci +2

    This is very underrated great work mate

  • @thetruckwashbathroomstudio2922
    @thetruckwashbathroomstudio2922 Před 5 měsíci +3

    This should’ve been the true fnaf movie, I was very disappointed in the movie we have gotten.

  • @PatrickWentzell-jd9gq
    @PatrickWentzell-jd9gq Před 13 dny

    " get out of that place find another
    job somewhere night guards have gone missing they were never found ! ! "

  • @kevintheyellowthing
    @kevintheyellowthing Před 4 měsíci

    this was actually pretty great, cant wait for you to do one on Five Nights at Freddy's 2

  • @PeteCalebandPuppets
    @PeteCalebandPuppets Před 4 měsíci

    This is FANTASTIC. I love this rendition of the story, and I got chills so many times. Even at the loss of Abby, I would've been happy with this as the movie.

  • @theficticion1231
    @theficticion1231 Před 5 měsíci +6

    As long as the Matpat cameo stays, then this rewrite is fantastic! Totally different take but I love it!

  • @chopstick3555
    @chopstick3555 Před 5 měsíci +2

    This rewrite is pretty good!

  • @KL8T0N_SLU2HIE
    @KL8T0N_SLU2HIE Před 6 měsíci +2

    I really hope we get some r rated extras for the dvd version

  • @insert12
    @insert12 Před 2 měsíci

    That's a really good script, the horror is really done well and I love how Garret was taken in the pizzeria instead of some random forrest in Nebraska. Even though it's good I think you should've given each animatronic more screen time, Foxy was the only one doing attacking while the rest of them just performs. I hope this channel grows big in the future👍

  • @user-xm9tx9ft1z
    @user-xm9tx9ft1z Před 5 měsíci +2

    This genuinely amazing

  • @MelodiTheMess
    @MelodiTheMess Před 5 měsíci +1

    This is great thank you this is what I hoped for 🎉

  • @peashooter1600
    @peashooter1600 Před 4 měsíci +1

    Heres an idea for this that could keep doug him being mikes lawyer whos with mike when hes trying to get a new job

  • @tisbutascratch9987
    @tisbutascratch9987 Před 5 měsíci +1

    I feel like the lack of Abby's character kinda destroys the tension and sad story of the animatronics also being children

  • @rifty9322
    @rifty9322 Před 5 měsíci +2

    Overall i enjoyed the movie we got. However i do see why people dislike it and i think this video 100% fixes alot of the issues with the film but remember this is scotts first film so dont be too mean harsh to him about it.

  • @subturisus
    @subturisus Před 6 měsíci +6

    bro you are really underrated hope you get more views

    • @stag9327
      @stag9327  Před 6 měsíci +3

      Thank you so much!!!

    • @kittesereten
      @kittesereten Před 6 měsíci +1

      bro you Always come back like springbonnie because i keep seeing you

  • @FredFredFaz
    @FredFredFaz Před 5 měsíci +2

    you gotta prewrite sequels bro this was good

  • @rexplayz720
    @rexplayz720 Před 3 měsíci +1

    Bruh, this is INFINITELY better than the original, and I so wish that this was it. So we'll done. I truly think this is what the movie should have been

  • @CourtRobGray
    @CourtRobGray Před 3 měsíci

    Excellent rewrite, my guy. My only problem was that the animatronics trying to get into Mike’s office, and them not having enough screen time, but overall, you succeeded at creating horror, unlike the actual movie itself. You had me shocked at the opening, and grossed out at the Jeff’s death and spaghetti transition. I hope you do a rewrite for the second and third movies coming next, so it could tie into the rewrite of this video.

  • @DCDPS
    @DCDPS Před 4 měsíci +1

    the movie is too much like a normal horror trope like movie without the scary horror vibes.

  • @azimuddin1890
    @azimuddin1890 Před 5 měsíci +2

    I’m planning on making my own rewrite on this film, but in a comic form.
    But I’m currently doing the Sonic.T.H.2 movie rewrite.
    Then I’ll be doing F.N.A.F.1-3 rewrite, which my rewrite isn’t ideal as the second and third game are based off of F.N.A.F.5 and 6.
    Then i’d improve F.N.A.F.1-7 + Fnaf World, then Sonic.T.H.4 Ep.3, and then finally the F.N.A.F.1 (movie) rewrite.
    So it may be a while.
    Speaking of the Sonic 2 film rewrite, currently I’m making a layout of the panels.
    The comic will start off a quick recap the first film, then the second film, or in this case, comic.
    This is the first time actually trying to do this so yee, it may not be great.
    But maybe I’ll remake/improve it in the future.
    When I get to the F.N.A.F.1 movie rewrite comic, it’ll probably be a better comic than the Sonic one.
    I have some ideas on how I would handle this, and it’s a bit more close to the original than your rewrite since it’ll keep all the characters.
    My focus will…
    - Flesh out, develop, give more screen time to each characters like Max, Vanessa, Abby, and Aunt James
    - Make the story longer so the story can benefit
    - Make the film less like other films and more atmospheric horror
    - Give more explanations
    - Give more lore like the m.c.i which I’m inspired by a fan remake of thie films intro that shows the newspaper
    - Not rely on gore as I don’t think it fits the franchise

  • @SPG69
    @SPG69 Před 25 dny +1

    Why is bro trying to rewrite peak fiction?
    (All jokes aside this sounds pretty epic, even if I’m perfectly fine with what we got)

  • @SCP-469
    @SCP-469 Před 6 měsíci +2

    2:33 NOOO MY GOAT

  • @supermario-vt2rg
    @supermario-vt2rg Před 6 měsíci +2

    In all honesty I like this as an idea on its own and would hope for something like it for the sequel, but I don't like the idea of taking abby away and some of the other characters, it would kinda make you feel less and some of those other characters brought likeability to the movie. I would have kept the premise but just changed the scenes like had more animatronic action, jumpscares and recreated the eerie feeling of the game. I would have changed the dream sequences where garret disappeared to freddys though instead of a forest.

  • @thenonfictionalexplainer952
    @thenonfictionalexplainer952 Před 6 měsíci +3

    That "general audience won't like it" thing is bull shit, I know plenty of people who weren't fnaf fans who liked the film

    • @stag9327
      @stag9327  Před 6 měsíci +3

      My mum went to see it too and she knows literally nothing about the film and she enjoyed it to! But the critics reckoned it was less accessible, which honestly I think was the critics saying "we don't get it". I wish the critics that reviewed the material actually cared about...you know...the material 😂

    • @thenonfictionalexplainer952
      @thenonfictionalexplainer952 Před 6 měsíci +1

      @stag9327 to be fair they have to review hundreds of movies a month

    • @stag9327
      @stag9327  Před 6 měsíci +2

      Oh God yeah it'd be exhausting, but I'm sure they enjoy it for the arts, ey?

    • @Josue_S_6411
      @Josue_S_6411 Před 5 měsíci +1

      They say the same thing about The Super Mario Bros Movie, except that's even more nonsense because everyone knows Mario.

  • @rice.7665
    @rice.7665 Před 5 měsíci +1

    God, I can’t have any original ideas

  • @The_Violated_Squirrel
    @The_Violated_Squirrel Před 5 měsíci +1

    Let this man direct the sequel

  • @slayermcrx7519
    @slayermcrx7519 Před 5 měsíci

    i was fully anticipating the jumpscare by freddy when his eyes started flickering. AND I STILL GOT SCARED BY IT, WTF MAN. great rewrite, that was very well written and i like how its more centered around being in the literal pizzeria instesd of a random camping trip. however, im curious as to which animatronic garrett wouldve been put inside of if the original missing children are still in their respective animatronics.

  • @Withered_cosplayz
    @Withered_cosplayz Před 5 měsíci

    Damnnn this was wayyy better then the original film!, good job!!!

  • @noobatom
    @noobatom Před 5 měsíci

    THIS IS AMAZING

  • @AtiShard16
    @AtiShard16 Před 6 měsíci +1

    This is amazing

  • @Rembli_Is_Real
    @Rembli_Is_Real Před 6 měsíci +16

    The movie is perfect the way it is, this video is just making it even more perfect

  • @Vaportiple
    @Vaportiple Před 5 měsíci

    This was really well done! I love that this can also be a film for those who don't know what Fnaf is. Really brings fans and horror enthusiasts together.
    If it isn't a bother (It may or may not come to fruition) Can I use some of your version to make my own version for a future video? I'd of course have you credited appropriately.
    I'm not sure if it will happen, mostly because the plan is to make a 90 minute - 2 hour audio film. (Ambitious, I know) but I think your version perfectly showcases what Fnaf 1 is. As a fellow Fnaf-Nut, I feel like I should also undertake the task of making a rewrite.

    • @stag9327
      @stag9327  Před 5 měsíci +1

      Absolutely go for it friend!

  • @LoganAnimates_Official
    @LoganAnimates_Official Před 5 měsíci +2

    “you can’t fix what isn’t broken”
    Master Oogway
    jk i literally have no idea who first said that :/

    • @stag9327
      @stag9327  Před 5 měsíci +1

      Oogway said it first. For sure, canon event.

  • @CaudilloTirania
    @CaudilloTirania Před 5 měsíci

    if the end you rewrite was the post-credit in the actual movie it would be awesome

  • @christiancardona7342
    @christiancardona7342 Před 6 měsíci +2

    Fnaf movie if it was canon

  • @LPR_Productions1
    @LPR_Productions1 Před 6 měsíci +3

    The only bad thing about this is that Doug couldn’t be in it

    • @stag9327
      @stag9327  Před 6 měsíci +2

      The sequel...Five nights at Doug's

    • @LPR_Productions1
      @LPR_Productions1 Před 6 měsíci

      lol thank you for taking the time to reply to a random person and hearting my comment it means a lot to me thanks@@stag9327

  • @tnmgamingch.1935
    @tnmgamingch.1935 Před 6 měsíci +2

    I think it's lack of spirits thing and jumpscares... but overall is good

  • @hassanfahar3866
    @hassanfahar3866 Před 2 měsíci

    IN 18:47 That line bro hits hard

  • @crystaldixon6787
    @crystaldixon6787 Před 23 dny +1

    I really enjoyed the movie. I love everything about it, but the end gaming of Afton could have been done better. But other than that, I really love the movie I even went and got the Mr. cupcake from the movie its awesome.

  • @1bigfishstudios
    @1bigfishstudios Před 6 měsíci +8

    You got a point Man you see I’m actually working on the five nights at Freddy’s movie myself, but rated R with a better story and connected to the games. I was wondering if you would like to join the process and you know help if you want 😊

    • @stag9327
      @stag9327  Před 6 měsíci +2

      Thanks friend! I'll pass up the offer this time as I've got a load of work on my end currently, but the fact you're committed to recreating the whole movie is an insanely ambitious feat that I wish you every success on!
      Keep creative 🤘

    • @Society.263
      @Society.263 Před 6 měsíci +2

      @@stag9327I kinda like the og movie

    • @1bigfishstudios
      @1bigfishstudios Před 6 měsíci +1

      @@stag9327 thanks Man just commented on one of my videos if you ever wanna be a part of it I plan to make this the best movie as possible. Thanks bro.😊

  • @TheMightyThings
    @TheMightyThings Před 6 měsíci +5

    Better than the og film, tons of changes from the original, i personally dont like the changes , i would rather just alter the scenes from the og, but generally without bias this version is pretty fine, 8/10

  • @onemoreminute0543
    @onemoreminute0543 Před 6 měsíci +2

    Yes my guy Doug is love Doug is life

  • @PeteCalebandPuppets
    @PeteCalebandPuppets Před 5 měsíci +1

    Okay, with there being a jerk older brother whose jealous of his crying little brother whose afraid of the animatronics, you can't blame me for thinking "oh, I know where this is going..."

  • @TheSameGoobyGuy
    @TheSameGoobyGuy Před 5 měsíci +2

    “Sadly, we’ll have to get rid of Doug…”
    *Dude’s about to lose a lot of subscribers.*

  • @RundownSD
    @RundownSD Před 5 měsíci +1

    fnaf if it was actually a horror movie

  • @BonnieThebunny7051
    @BonnieThebunny7051 Před 4 měsíci

    I would have kept William putting the mask on himself when he is being Spring locked‚ it's like he's accepting his fate and is ready to become one with the Spring Bonnie suit but I really liked this rewrite.

  • @isaiahcruz3260
    @isaiahcruz3260 Před 6 měsíci +3

    Hey, is it okay if I use this as a base for a script I'm working on?

    • @stag9327
      @stag9327  Před 6 měsíci +2

      Yea knock yourself out! Is it an original piece or a Fnaf script? 👀

    • @isaiahcruz3260
      @isaiahcruz3260 Před 6 měsíci +2

      @@stag9327 It's a FNAF script, I wanted to do an R-Rated version of the film, with some more elements from the games thrown in.

  • @rLordiya
    @rLordiya Před 5 měsíci

    I also wanted to Recreate the story inspiring by the past Blumhouse horror movies
    *Work in Progress*

  • @Conner_A
    @Conner_A Před 5 měsíci

    I was also thinking about making my own version of the movie. Should i make a video in it? It would be my very first video ever

  • @Joaozx14
    @Joaozx14 Před 4 měsíci

    Who is the soundtracks you used?

  • @juliabp6057
    @juliabp6057 Před 6 měsíci +3

    How i would fix the movie without changing its core plot:
    1- Add more screentime to William trough MCI flashbacks.
    2- Make Vanessa have small dialogues with her father across the movie.
    3-Make the plot of the invasion disconnected from Aunt Jane.
    4- Remove Aunt Jane completely from the movie.
    5- Make Garrett die outside of Fredbear's Diner instead of a random park.
    6-Less Cupcake.
    7-More creepy and disturbing scenes with the animatronics chasing Mike.
    8- Make Vanessa's character better.
    How i would fix the movie changing its core plot:
    1- Mike is an Afton.
    2- His little brother Garrett died in the bite of 83.
    3- Mike's brother is a ghost following him.
    4-William left Mike when he was little.
    5- Vanessa's brother is the blonde boy, who is Golden Freddy.
    6- Abby doesn't exist.
    7- Afton dies after Mike activates the springlocks inside the Springbonnie suit (just like what Charlie
    did in the first novel).

    • @BurningFlamesofDivineDragon
      @BurningFlamesofDivineDragon Před 6 měsíci +3

      Hate to tell you but the movie is a different timeline from the games or books as I understand it. So it doesn't need to match either of these things beat for beat.

  • @FiveNightsRemastered
    @FiveNightsRemastered Před 4 měsíci +1

    Hey man, could we work together on a film in doing?