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Ive watched all of your fnaf movie rewrite vidoes, and i have to say, i have been so invested in the story you've been writing, I enjoyed the fnaf movie but i wish this is what we got, i love this!

Oi, good stuff Stag! Here are some comments and concerns: I preferred the style of the previous two videos, where you spoke over pictures to give the audience an idea of what the movie might look like. That picture of the mechanic with an edited Freddy Fazbear head behind him is still imprinted into my mind as this interpretation's Henry. You did an exceptional job at setting the atmosphere in Part 1 and the Rewrite that I thought was lacking here. Hope to see more from you soon!

love the scene within the freddy fazbears pizza crime scene. I think an interesting part of the film could be another dream sequence as henry pieces things together, similar to the final dream sequence mike had in the first movie rewrite. this can go one of two ways, the first method could be basically another version of the first movie rewrite where the yellow rabbit speaks to victims of the mci to lead them to the safe room, except instead of garret it could be another child option 2 and the option i personally prefer can be through the perspective of charlie, looking through the window at the bullies who locked her out of the pizzeria, as she turns around she sees a dimly lit figure approaching her, unable to make out their features. until he grabs hold of her from her shoulders, revealing to be afton before henry wakes up in a cold sweat.

Maybe at the end, Henry can be snooping around Freddys for answers. When all of a sudden, a man and an Un-withered yellow rabbit costume. then we get the reveal that it is William when Henry and the rabbit are fighting, and henry knocks the head of the costume off.

It would be cool if this story would be intertwined with a story set in 2002 where the four animatronics are on the run, hiding in Mike’s garage.

That part 2 has to come out eventually right?

instead of Farah possibly turning dirty and leaving alex. I think alex should be taken away before Farah could reach him.

21:33 OH MAH GOSH ROACH!! (Love teh rewriting of the campaign<3)

i think its alright but tbh i prefer the main movie i mean that's scotts vision and after these movies he's gonna retire i hate that people complained about it which i can't blame them even i have complains but some complaints were just dumb like spending more time in the office or whatever but if you had that it wouldn't be a movie i do admit sometimes it can be dumb but it's a understandable story for anyone new watching or fans i think the problem with some people is they see the vhs horror version and wish scott would do that but that simply isn't scotts work I've been a fan of this series since the first game and do i complain about the later games? no i just genuinely enjoy the art the series and the music i think it's good i just don't like how some fans are nostalgia blind and just won't let go of the past the movie may not be perfect but it's a fnaf movie and we should appreciate that this series came so far after so many other mascot horror game failed

I played Sewer Shark on the SegaCD. At the time it was awesome, so wad C&C Music Factory's "make your own music video" game....I'm old.

Honestly wish to see the reactions of those old senators if they see modern day Mortal Kombat and DOOM

Love this! It's so funny to look back at how much those senators lost their minds at Night Trap when it's so tame compared to games today 😂

When is part 2 coming out

😂 ti's true tho

Loving the T shirt. I rember playing Leasure Suit Larry as a kid and How to Be a complete B*stard on the Spectrum ZX.

OK I know this video is like four months old but I just wanted to say something. I was disappointed with the movie it wasn’t good at all… I noticed that the animatronics in the movie just really do not look that old like in the games you got the sense of that these things have been sitting here for a very long time even in the phone call with phone guy he says that they haven’t had a bath in 30 years and he doesn’t blame the robots for being angry so you get the sense of that these things are extremely old, smell, and they also are dirty. Also haunted of course in the movie you really don’t get that sense at all because the robots just look too clean too polished and they don’t really look like they’ve been sitting in an abandoned pizzeria for that long. Even the pizzeria itself in the movie doesn’t look that old it just looks like a prop and yeah I know that’s what it is but it just didn’t have the same field as the first game. I don’t know that’s just my opinion..

Good video, like this format and the rambling makes it all the more for me, like im chatting with a friend about the crap in the gaming industry

People need to leave collabs in Fortnite cause at least they make sense. Yeah it's still for money but I mean in the lore the zero point shit itself and boom master chief vs goku. And I hate people who defend Vanguard saying people can't "have fun." Don't get me wrong the collabs are funny but when you market a game to be a realistic WW2 shooter expect people to find it realistic. Roblox games are more accurate than Vanguard. Indie games are the future and triple A is dead.

Nice video, as some criticism I think you could improve the structure of the video as I was left a bit confused what the point was sometimes as well as the changes in subject.

Love the rewrite, defo woulda loved this more than the garbage slop we got. I was also kinda hoping the interrogation scene of Milena woulda been more intense and shocking, especially considering how MW2019's was when they involved the main villain's family as leverage, even going so far as to shoot them, luckily the gun wasn't loaded.

That's a really good script, the horror is really done well and I love how Garret was taken in the pizzeria instead of some random forrest in Nebraska. Even though it's good I think you should've given each animatronic more screen time, Foxy was the only one doing attacking while the rest of them just performs. I hope this channel grows big in the future👍

Is this supposed to be your idea for a prequel to the movie or is it supposed to be a prequel to your rewrite of the movie?

The better concept would be about the creek and eventual release of Mechs to victory

HOW R U SO UNDERRATED 😫

Sound the same as starship trooper

IN 18:47 That line bro hits hard

This is basically your own version than a rewrite. And I love it

8:14 Somehow this scene does feel more impactful when Makarov doesn't tells us what this "one choice" is.

I like how your take Flips on the Dynamic we Fan usually have for the two men. The Fanon is that William is a Mess as a Familyman and A Shit ass Father who only really cares for his Job and Robots. While Henry is the Good Guy he’s the perfect man and dad.THE Guy do to say. While here its the opposite. Henry while he Means well he’s a rather Messy Dad and William while a bit Pushy is a pretty well meaning Father.not to mention that Henry’s friendhsip is rather Messy as well. It really shows how you can make Characters that can be multidimentional without being too stereotypish

If this is the director s cut version of cod as an upgrade i would be say ok yes now this is good because we haven't seen the director s cut verison of cod

stag, i dont know if you check your comments on these videos, but if you do see this is it okay if i use your phone call at the start of this video for my latest movie, i will credit you in any way possible, in the start and end thank you if you answer

So is this meant to be the sequel to the actual fnaf movie, or one to your rewritten version?

I like how it really shows the fact that William is a massively broken and thoroughly destroyed man…

Part 2 Please ❤😊

Excellent rewrite, my guy. My only problem was that the animatronics trying to get into Mike’s office, and them not having enough screen time, but overall, you succeeded at creating horror, unlike the actual movie itself. You had me shocked at the opening, and grossed out at the Jeff’s death and spaghetti transition. I hope you do a rewrite for the second and third movies coming next, so it could tie into the rewrite of this video.

The bite cannot b a springlock failure Cool video though

This is awesome, it makes so much sense. It deserves so much more!

"And that is how I failed you." the chills

Bruh, I Legit thought this was the actual script for the movie, this is flawless , 10/10

Should call the movie five nights with foxy fr

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I would lower the cussing a bit its seems overdone and unnecessary

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How long before this version gets made? ❤

I swear you're so underrated

1:52 is what I live for

Already so much better

Dude, you should take TLOU TV series approach and write a fan series on this new COD:MW reboot trilogy. Make it 1:1, but add a few major elements and some minor changes. Would be a great fan series for a future live action adaptation.

this was way better than the movie we got