Galactic Council Tortured Human Child So We Burned Their Worlds!

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Komentáře • 501

  • @zeta138
    @zeta138 Před 4 měsíci +550

    Xenos: hurt a child
    Humans: I hereby sign the death warrant of an entire world and consign a million souls to oblivion. May Imperial Justice account in all balance; The Emperor Protects. Initiate Exterminatus

    • @mightyspatula5500
      @mightyspatula5500 Před 3 měsíci +33

      " I hereby sign the death warrant of an entire world " I love that line

    • @lucianfrostbane
      @lucianfrostbane Před 3 měsíci +9

      The audio for it works so damn well. The almost robotic tone of it. The accent definitely works

    • @Grim-Thesis
      @Grim-Thesis Před 3 měsíci +8

      I got sad hearing the story… until I read this comment. “The blood of martyrs is the seed of the imperium”

    • @flaxtube322
      @flaxtube322 Před 3 měsíci +4

      Ave, Imperator. Fire.

    • @falconcorbin3830
      @falconcorbin3830 Před 3 měsíci +1

      Fuck yeah bro!

  • @captainhuntank7963
    @captainhuntank7963 Před 4 měsíci +774

    Aliens: *tortured a child of humanity*
    Humanity getting the warcrime weapons: *COWABUNGA IT IS*

    • @WolfeSaber9933
      @WolfeSaber9933 Před 4 měsíci +16

      Plasma guns? I came up with a weapon, based on a real idea, just reworked, that'll nuke those aliens to extinction in a single blast.
      And I came up with the weapon as a replacement for MACs in Halo to fight the Covenant with.
      The science, you just need to have 19.2 tonnes of material at 50% the speed of light to do the same amount of damage as a 3,000 tonne slug going just 4%. Both cases, you produce a thousand times more energy than the Tsar Bomba, as a gun.

    • @TonklinFallen
      @TonklinFallen Před 4 měsíci +10

      Make sure everyone has their Geneva Checklist.

    • @tiefblau2780
      @tiefblau2780 Před 4 měsíci +5

      You do not mess with offsprings of any species

    • @youthere6896
      @youthere6896 Před 4 měsíci +2

      i like to see some of your stories on Netflix myself

    • @WolfeSaber9933
      @WolfeSaber9933 Před 4 měsíci

      @@youthere6896 Got a revision of Space Battleship Yamato on Deviantart. Just the world building elements.

  • @pietervanderzwaan4295
    @pietervanderzwaan4295 Před 4 měsíci +694

    Aliens: hurt a child.
    Humanity: hippity hoppity, the galaxy will be our property.

  • @earlenriquez810
    @earlenriquez810 Před 4 měsíci +164

    Aliens: *Tortured a child*
    Humanity: roses are red, as small as a fern; You tortured a child....
    THEN LET THE GALAXY BUUURN!!!

  • @peaceguy5993
    @peaceguy5993 Před 4 měsíci +249

    Alien: kills child
    Humans: BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD, SKULLS FOR THE SKULL THRONE

    • @phantomwraith1984
      @phantomwraith1984 Před 4 měsíci +18

      KHORNE DEMANDS BLOOD! *HE WILL RECEIVE YOURS!*

    • @TheCrusaderKing
      @TheCrusaderKing Před 3 měsíci +1

      Thou shalt not suffer the Xeno to live!

    • @larryselkirk426
      @larryselkirk426 Před 2 měsíci +1

      @@TheCrusaderKing : Typical religious nonsense.

    • @TheCrusaderKing
      @TheCrusaderKing Před 2 měsíci +2

      @@larryselkirk426
      Not a fan of 40k I take it?

    • @JSmith99
      @JSmith99 Před 2 měsíci

      Humans have done worse themselves. No alien can match man's inhumanity to man.

  • @dominicmorales6800
    @dominicmorales6800 Před 4 měsíci +466

    Demons run when a good man goes to war.

    • @catlovers5497
      @catlovers5497 Před 4 měsíci +17

      Doctor who. Demons Run when a good man( the doctor) 😊😊❤❤❤goes to war. I love doctor who❤❤❤❤

    • @kagato23
      @kagato23 Před 4 měsíci

      Except thanks to the bad Ai it’s clear the alien specifically goaded him into this unsanctioned act of war to justify total war. He puts all of humanity into an uncertain dangerous future by ensuring this personal Vendetta, however justified, is now a species wide attack leading to conflict. Even if there’s a part 2 this man is an easily manipulated idiot that might get lucky.

    • @bloodrinker
      @bloodrinker Před 3 měsíci

      @@catlovers5497 for a sec i first thought of tf2 medic because he outsmarted the devil in the comics because i didnt fully process your reply

    • @Frogcatyyy
      @Frogcatyyy Před měsícem +2

      That quote goes hard ngl

  • @sonicfighter64
    @sonicfighter64 Před 4 měsíci +81

    Aliens: tortured child
    Also aliens: why do I hear boss music?

    • @Grim-Thesis
      @Grim-Thesis Před 3 měsíci +3

      Cause artorias heard the call and came from the void for justice 😂😂

    • @cpob2013
      @cpob2013 Před 3 měsíci +6

      Why are the stars singing in latin

  • @MalumNecessarium
    @MalumNecessarium Před 4 měsíci +205

    There is nothing scarier than a man with no one left to lose

    • @peterhall8572
      @peterhall8572 Před 4 měsíci +2

      Protective Mother or vengeful Father, Which Is Scarier?

    • @crayonchomper1180
      @crayonchomper1180 Před 4 měsíci +3

      The vengeful father will hunt his target to the ends of the universe and cares not for his own safety, only to make his target pay with their life for daring to harm his children

    • @MalumNecessarium
      @MalumNecessarium Před 3 měsíci +3

      @@peterhall8572 protective mother usually breaks in case of loss, and goes berserk.
      Vengeful father is always calculating, and will go to any lengths to make his target suffer
      Then again, “man” is used as a shortened “human” here, not as a sex-describing term, so vengeful mother is quite probable too

  • @freybrand1617
    @freybrand1617 Před 3 měsíci +59

    Xenos: *butchers an innocent child*
    Humanity:"ABANDON REASON. KNOW ONLY WAR!"

    • @rolandmiller5456
      @rolandmiller5456 Před měsícem

      Well you killed an innocent child. Most people would not let that go.

  • @doublejace
    @doublejace Před 4 měsíci +133

    "I accept these burdens as the Imperium bleeds. I accept these burdens knowing no fear. I accept these burdens as an Angel of The Emperor. I sheathe my form in this second skin, this veil of machine muscle and false nerves. I stand firm against the alien, the mutant, the heretic I grant no mercy, I give no ground. With humility I bear the Imperialis. A symbol of loyalty unbroken. With reverence I receive actuation, awakening the armour's spirit. With pride I wear the symbol of my chapter and join my brothers in war. I am IRON. I am WRATH. I am DOOM."

  • @Iluvantir
    @Iluvantir Před 4 měsíci +501

    "I fear all we have done is to awaken a sleeping giant and fill him with a terrible resolve."
    Geneva Checklist: check. Weapons: check. Rage: CHECK.
    Let's go...

    • @oldman2364
      @oldman2364 Před 4 měsíci +12

      Isoroku Yamamoto

    • @robertbrackin6836
      @robertbrackin6836 Před 4 měsíci +4

      Forget Rage fury is better.😈

    • @rommelstar1
      @rommelstar1 Před 4 měsíci +2

      There would be a laser rifle behind every space rock.

    • @larryselkirk426
      @larryselkirk426 Před 4 měsíci

      Yep. The Yadarins are the sleeping giant in this story.

    • @robertbrackin6836
      @robertbrackin6836 Před 4 měsíci +8

      @@larryselkirk426 No the humans are the sleeping giants in this story.

  • @jeremywenham3211
    @jeremywenham3211 Před 4 měsíci +54

    “I am the right hand of vengeance, and the last living thing you are ever going to see… God sent me.

    • @Grim-Thesis
      @Grim-Thesis Před 3 měsíci +1

      Is that quote or you???? I’m probably dumb but I gotta make sure cause that’s good

    • @jeremywenham3211
      @jeremywenham3211 Před 3 měsíci +3

      @@Grim-Thesis it’s part of a quote from Babylon 5.

    • @hellacoorinna9995
      @hellacoorinna9995 Před 3 měsíci +4

      "They are behind me, _you_ are in front of me."

    • @darklordchauncy
      @darklordchauncy Před 3 měsíci

      ​@@hellacoorinna9995If you value your lives, be somewhere else.

  • @michaelrogers4120
    @michaelrogers4120 Před 3 měsíci +31

    Xeno- Torture a human child
    Humanity - right, where did we put that Geneva Checklist?

  • @johnrussell1881
    @johnrussell1881 Před 4 měsíci +101

    The Yadaruns must be made to pay for their many outrages. I look forward to hearing the rest of the story.

  • @918guy
    @918guy Před 4 měsíci +114

    take a shot everytime you hear "slag", "glass", or "ash". 😂

    • @angelmatiastorres
      @angelmatiastorres Před 4 měsíci +3

      Why?

    • @AndrooUK
      @AndrooUK Před 4 měsíci +5

      At least the fate of the galaxy doesn't constantly hang in the balance, and there isn't constant tension throughout even when the character is drinking beer and taking a dump.

    • @PiesAndPasties
      @PiesAndPasties Před 4 měsíci +4

      Or click of his mandibles.

    • @popcornfrind
      @popcornfrind Před 3 měsíci

      my liver

    • @hellacoorinna9995
      @hellacoorinna9995 Před 3 měsíci

      "FARarakla;aa yerrrrhhhfukkkfukkin fuukk yerhrhan nawwtt muhhh mudhhhduuhhh..."
      *vomiting noises off-screen*
      "RARgh libbeeeh tiinglressshh..."
      *thud*

  • @adamwitt8160
    @adamwitt8160 Před 3 měsíci +17

    Alien: Perform's vivasection on human children
    The father: I am going to glass your home planet, Tie you in your own entrails and March you to court.
    This is why we need dad's in a house. He also kept it very professional all things considered...

  • @tacticallawyer
    @tacticallawyer Před 3 měsíci +16

    "We have arrived, and it is now that we perform our charge. In the fealty of the God-Emperor and by the grace of the Golden Throne, I hereby sign the death warrant for this entire world and consign a million souls to oblivion. May the Imperial justice account in all balance. The Emperor protects."

  • @peterhall8572
    @peterhall8572 Před 4 měsíci +19

    When Humans walk into the jaws of Death , We walk back out with his gold teeth in our pockets

    • @helpmelearnto
      @helpmelearnto Před 3 měsíci +1

      Oh, I like that one. Just call me Snafu.

  • @Tang0Fox1
    @Tang0Fox1 Před 3 měsíci +34

    So they chose the Geneva Checklist? Alright then.

    • @AaronCMarron
      @AaronCMarron Před měsícem +1

      Aliens don't know Geneva

    • @andreatomasi3755
      @andreatomasi3755 Před měsícem +1

      ​@@AaronCMarronthey do now. and the checklist is only getting longer

  • @rancidmarmot1994
    @rancidmarmot1994 Před 4 měsíci +107

    Loved the story, but I definitely agree with the others. It not only needs but deserves a part 2.

    • @paoloviti6156
      @paoloviti6156 Před 4 měsíci +2

      I agree fully with you: this story really deserves part 2 because I liked very much 👍👍👍

    • @kagato23
      @kagato23 Před 4 měsíci

      It needs a rewrite by a human.

  • @lyromata
    @lyromata Před 4 měsíci +292

    Great story. Definitely needs a part 2

  • @burger918
    @burger918 Před 4 měsíci +45

    Douglass is basically space John Wick.💀

  • @SnowBlowerNoBlower
    @SnowBlowerNoBlower Před 4 měsíci +80

    I like the story. It needs a part 2, a 3, a 4, and a 5.

  • @dashwhatchamakalit
    @dashwhatchamakalit Před 4 měsíci +34

    We love our spawn, more than we love our boats.
    See what happens when you mess with our boats?
    That's just the opening act if our offspring are messed with.

  • @WendiGonerLH
    @WendiGonerLH Před 4 měsíci +13

    Humanity wants to live in peace. It’s up to the xenos whether that means we live *alone*

  • @piratehunter1
    @piratehunter1 Před 4 měsíci +12

    If we ever unlock ftl travel I truly hope that we go in hope for peace....but carry weapons that will make the very stars cry out in fear.

  • @halfxhalfx8282
    @halfxhalfx8282 Před 3 měsíci +9

    Strong ship + a commander with nothing to lose = doom of xenos

  • @OtakuMan05
    @OtakuMan05 Před 4 měsíci +102

    Plot twist: The Yardiran Fleet isn't here to make war, they're here to seek a peaceful resolution. Sirius was acting on his own and their Empress had no knowledge of his actions until it was too late. She has come to offer her own head as recompense, knowing that if a war of vengeance breaks out between them, best case scenario is that one of their species survives but just barely. She wants the bloodshed to end on both sides and is here to beg for the end of the cycle of vengeance between them.

    • @nosotrosloslobosestamosreg4115
      @nosotrosloslobosestamosreg4115 Před 4 měsíci +31

      We don't care! We see, we go "pew, pew!", we happy.

    • @Shadowm572
      @Shadowm572 Před 4 měsíci +15

      If that’s the plot you want go read the rest of the Ender’s Game Series.

    • @WolfeSaber9933
      @WolfeSaber9933 Před 4 měsíci +11

      ​@@nosotrosloslobosestamosreg4115No, theirs go pew pew, while ours' go, BRRRRRRRRRTTTTTTTT

    • @Grinch34
      @Grinch34 Před 4 měsíci +8

      Just send Doom Guy and Master Chief with a fuq-load of space Marines and Primarch Space Marines.

    • @avukovic84
      @avukovic84 Před 4 měsíci +6

      Foolish Yadaruns think Imperium negotiates with xeno filth 😁

  • @TheBeastCH
    @TheBeastCH Před 4 měsíci +10

    The war lasted for decades. Admiral douglas didn't live to see it's ending. His sucessor, Admiral Laura Grant, was the one to order the glassing of the last Yaderan-occupied planet, causing the race to go extinct, within the following two weaks, as the remaining ships of the Yaderan fleets were taken out one by one. No call for surrender was accepted, or even responded to. Other species had offered to come to aid the Yaderans, or shelter their refugees. Every time they did, the Humans glassed two of their worlds, told them to surrender and hand over any Yaderan refugees they shelter, or share the fate of that species, or share their fate. Most backed down. And those who didn't, were hunted until they were extinct or surrendered unconditionally. Out of the 4 species that stood by the Yaderans, only the Vakhulan outlived them, to find themselves enslaved by the Humans, and used for labor in asteroid mines. Their militaries disolved entirely, their governments forced to bow to human law, they were allowed to keep their planets, in exchange for a 30% cut of their entire planetary economic output, and manpower for the asteroid mines, to mine out the metals and minerals to build even more warships, even more planet-busters...
    The peace-treaty between Humanity and the Galactic Council, after the extinction of the Yaderans, quickly summarized and simplefied, ammounts to this: Humans get all the planets, resources and technology from the Species they defeated, no longer respond to Galactic Council Law, and the council promises to never again turn down a formal Demand from Humanity, no matter how ridiculous, and if a Member of any species ever fucks with Humans again, Humanity has the right to wipe that species from the stars.
    Or to summarize it even further: "You fuck with us, fuck you and die"

    • @kagato23
      @kagato23 Před 4 měsíci

      Yeah, the aliens ships were undetected until they were already over planets, and everybody has orbital bombardment tech. The war lasts 3 weeks, over 50% of humanity’s planets crippled beyond the ability to aid in the war within the first 6 hours. Douglas, having responded to the news of the attack by wasting invaluable time talking to the empty grave set up for his son, was summarily shot by his lieutenant as the casualty reports began coming in. Though Grant didn’t know it, he’d have reached for his own sidearm and done the deed himself if she hadn’t been faster. The aliens plan to goad an idiot who never should have been given command of so much as a bus to as a complete success. The galactic council mourned as a race they could not stop from waging a justified total war (after all, the humans had just killed far more than a few children, to the point that the total number of human children killed to this point could be considered a rounding error of the larger number) annexed the entirety of human territory and gained massive amounts of reasources… and an abundant source of food. The council now had a very real risk of being subsumed entirely as their most dangerous member grew beyond the power of any to control. Scholars believe that over-reliance on AI had eroded human judgement in the millennia before the total war, explaining how somebody as easily fooled and impulsive like Douglas was ever given a command.
      So humanity became remembered as the doom of the galaxy. “HFY” became a popular meme on the Galactic Wide Web. “Humanity, fuck you.”

  • @nohaxgaming6283
    @nohaxgaming6283 Před 3 měsíci +8

    For a human there is no such thing as overkill.

  • @blackheartgaming6121
    @blackheartgaming6121 Před 2 měsíci +4

    Theres no need to wonder where your god is cause hes right here and hes fresh out of mercy

  • @comentnine1574
    @comentnine1574 Před 4 měsíci +47

    Like the artwork especially the armour.

    • @oledahammer8393
      @oledahammer8393 Před 4 měsíci +4

      Very "40K" inspired. A good thing!

    • @Zesty_gojo
      @Zesty_gojo Před 4 měsíci

      I think it's AI but I don't know but still that ship and armour is fire

  • @alistairdiren5790
    @alistairdiren5790 Před 4 měsíci +30

    Yadirans where lucky a certain ship carrying a certain Spartan was not around.

    • @Banthisyoutube-zs6sx
      @Banthisyoutube-zs6sx Před 4 měsíci +4

      Dun dun dun dun dun........dun dun dun dun dun!!!

    • @Grinch34
      @Grinch34 Před 4 měsíci +3

      Prepare to Drop! 😂

    • @voyagingwithvincent1994
      @voyagingwithvincent1994 Před 3 měsíci +5

      Or a certain Doomslayer.

    • @jmallon7354
      @jmallon7354 Před 3 měsíci +5

      *the unsc forward unto dawn, flanked by salamanders space marine battle barges exits the warp and slipspace*
      Aliens:*proceed to violently shit themselves out of pure fear*
      Humanity: time for you to die!

    • @DudeTaylor-cx5zb
      @DudeTaylor-cx5zb Před 3 měsíci +2

      Or a space marine

  • @markl4593
    @markl4593 Před 4 měsíci +7

    Poor little Tommy. Think of the children….the children!

  • @dartmart9263
    @dartmart9263 Před 2 měsíci +3

    So they sent a ship captained by a compromised father who can no longer see things without emotional tainting? LOL

  • @bengraves9416
    @bengraves9416 Před měsícem +2

    Great story! You’re giving me great writing tips! 💕

  • @nobigbiggalo9964
    @nobigbiggalo9964 Před 4 měsíci +18

    For the love of God, man, give us more. The story needs to be told in full detail. Please finish the whole story it's awesome.

  • @reginaldwright247
    @reginaldwright247 Před 2 měsíci +2

    I really, Really Like this story.
    Please continue with the saga of Earth making the Galaxy PAY-FOR-WHAT-THEY'VE-DONE!

  • @madmanx1662
    @madmanx1662 Před 4 měsíci +8

    Really nice! I truly appreciated this audio while getting some chores done! 😅

  • @armaggedon390
    @armaggedon390 Před 4 měsíci +8

    *sighs*
    Grabs Geneve checklist.

  • @neilwesley3516
    @neilwesley3516 Před 4 měsíci +21

    Excellent, thank you. Part 2 ?
    💯👍

  • @user-st9dy8in7j
    @user-st9dy8in7j Před 3 měsíci +3

    Aliens: kills human child
    also Aliens: why do hear the so cald FORCHET SUN
    Humanity: wheres the Geneva check list

  • @tr66tr66
    @tr66tr66 Před 4 měsíci +64

    Needs a part two

  • @cpob2013
    @cpob2013 Před 3 měsíci +2

    "Is it morally correct to start a war over a few thousand captured citizens? What about one citizen? We have set an upper limit of one thousand i now propose a lower limit of one. Imagine if we were at a market and i were trying to offer you a dollar for any amout of potatoes between one and one thousand, wouldnt that be absurd?"
    "Men are not potatoes"
    "So you would go to war over a single man held captive? Consider that a war may cost the lives of many more of your people."
    "One or one thousand, you fight"
    "Very good, the number is irrelevant. It is a matter of principle. Of citizens right of sovereignty. The state is obligated to enforce the rights of its citizens, down to the individual."

    • @dartmart9263
      @dartmart9263 Před 2 měsíci +1

      Sometimes some men are potatoes. FJB

  • @derekdrake8706
    @derekdrake8706 Před 4 měsíci +6

    If the bugs wanted to win, to truly defeat humanity, they should just ignore them. One world gone, big deal, bugs don't care about eggs. The empress could have broadcasted to the galaxy that the scientist was acting alone, even if he wasn't, and that the bugs are willing to offer peace.
    See, that would really piss humans off. No war to vent their anger AND it shifts the moral high ground to the bugs, if humans attack they'll be seen as the bad guys. Humans NEED that moral high ground to justify their atrocities, otherwise they go limp as a wet noodle lol.

  • @timjinn2441
    @timjinn2441 Před 2 měsíci +1

    Rules of war and engagement aren't something to hold the enemies of humanity back
    They're there to prevent the most horrific shit that humanity has ever done during the past wars

  • @CaptainKPG
    @CaptainKPG Před 4 měsíci +38

    That intro is wild

  • @gilbertsandoval1888
    @gilbertsandoval1888 Před 4 měsíci +3

    Great story! Thoughly enjoyed the end , would look forward to seeing part two!

  • @robleary3353
    @robleary3353 Před 4 měsíci +9

    Glad I found this channel!. Nuff said.

  • @SupCom78
    @SupCom78 Před 4 měsíci +10

    i like the story thx for uploading it and pls the next part.

  • @tazy095
    @tazy095 Před 4 měsíci +10

    I like this story need a part 2

  • @Faiadenza
    @Faiadenza Před 2 měsíci

    Just discovered your channel. A glass of wine, excellent story after excellent story, I am the happiest human in the universe right now.

  • @tommykramer8206
    @tommykramer8206 Před 2 měsíci +2

    and don't even think about hurting our dogs!

  • @shimmyking4
    @shimmyking4 Před 2 měsíci

    Aliens: Torture a child
    Humans: *Checks the Geneva Convention* don't say shit about Xenos!

  • @Daniel19184
    @Daniel19184 Před 2 měsíci

    Aliens: flee for your lives
    Humanity:a new power is rising to war
    Me: uses the one ring to bring the destruction of the yardairans

  • @Conscript83
    @Conscript83 Před 4 měsíci +9

    If this were true we would be so far ahead as a species. If only we could come together like this and protect our children at any cost regardless of race, religion or nationality.

  • @Lucullus15
    @Lucullus15 Před 2 měsíci

    Aliens: tortures a child then hears a wave of Human rage rushing torwards them

  • @mikebowen3315
    @mikebowen3315 Před 2 měsíci

    Aliens torture a human child
    Humans: is that banjo music I hear?

  • @TheTektronik
    @TheTektronik Před 4 měsíci +15

    You came up with yourself? This is great.

    • @Marveryn
      @Marveryn Před 4 měsíci +5

      all the story are from a redict. some are good and some not so good

    • @kerbango1
      @kerbango1 Před 4 měsíci +2

      The channel.owner who post these isn't very selective about which stories to read. most aren't finished. Annoying but appreciated

    • @kagato23
      @kagato23 Před 4 měsíci

      This is ai written

  • @gregoryjohnston9854
    @gregoryjohnston9854 Před 4 měsíci +1

    Great story. Definitely looking forward to a sequel.

  • @pfhgjk0
    @pfhgjk0 Před 2 měsíci

    I've always enjoied stories where Humanity is 'reserved' - until it isn't. I enjoyed your story.

  • @OneJazzKid
    @OneJazzKid Před 4 měsíci +6

    I xannot stress it enough. colossus!!; we really need one !!

  • @kevinmcclure7551
    @kevinmcclure7551 Před 4 měsíci +5

    Great story, please write a part two

  • @Fellwinter
    @Fellwinter Před 4 měsíci +1

    Stories like this crack me up.
    Fiction: Humanity would never let a human child be tortured.
    Reality: Many Afrikan children died so you could get that mobile phone/PC. Collective Meh.

    • @Rebellions
      @Rebellions Před 4 měsíci

      Nobody fucks with us *but* us. Its quite simple.

  • @TemplarsatAcre
    @TemplarsatAcre Před 4 měsíci +3

    I agree we need a part two. We cant just leave the story here.

  • @wildcard9786
    @wildcard9786 Před 2 měsíci

    "I have begun death, destroyer of worlds."

  • @Grombrindal91
    @Grombrindal91 Před měsícem

    Sounds like a story from the 18th Legiones Astartes. The Salamanders don't fuck around with defending children.

  • @conroytr
    @conroytr Před 4 měsíci +3

    Great story. I really liked it .😊

  • @Ba.Fi.
    @Ba.Fi. Před 4 měsíci +6

    Nice one.

  • @timbindle
    @timbindle Před 4 měsíci +2

    I like the story definetly needs a part 2.

  • @Englishwithteacher-wj3ct
    @Englishwithteacher-wj3ct Před 4 měsíci +2

    Awesome story. I really enjoyed it

  • @Enderwave22
    @Enderwave22 Před 3 měsíci

    1:15 Man, they're lucky there wasn't animal cruelty involved. Or
    “For every drop of my pup's blood, we destroy three worlds.”
    “You're insane!”
    “Ten worlds.”
    “You can't-”
    “Twenty. Seven.”

  • @jamesgroce3125
    @jamesgroce3125 Před 3 měsíci

    Pretty sure we're watching this story on TV every night since October 7, 2023.
    The good guys have the flag with the blue and white.

  • @Phaoray
    @Phaoray Před 4 měsíci +7

    Yeahhh, so this guy went and started a war with another race, and somehow doesn't get court marshaled. He also somehow gets to dictate to the galactic council what 'deal' humanity is willing to cut. Did the writer forget to mention that Douglas is the Emperor of Earth or something?

    • @sablevo
      @sablevo Před 4 měsíci +1

      Worse. The fact that he got the recon assignment despite the obvious conflict of interest speaks to a hideous amount of politicking and influence peddling in a starfaring navy. And he even has time to play marine.

    • @Banthisyoutube-zs6sx
      @Banthisyoutube-zs6sx Před 4 měsíci

      ​@@sablevoi would suggest looking into the US war with the barbary pirates and how the president at the time put his finger on the scales by sending a 1700's version of a diss track to the pirates leader.

    • @kagato23
      @kagato23 Před 4 měsíci

      It’s obvious to actual human readers (though probably not to the ai that wrote this) that the scientist COUNTED on Douglas being this predictable. He knew he was coming, yet a single ship is there to defend an apparently high value target. The “they didn’t think anybody would do it” doesn’t track because they knew somebody who would. This was a juicy bait to justify a total war, what with the humans having genocided far more children then they ever did. That’s why he’s completely nonplussed through the whole thing and why the invasion has already begun. It’s going according to the aliens plan.
      And the idiot who the aliens could easily predict just got put in charge, and while worlds burn under attack by ships undetected until they were already in human space, he wastes time jerking off over his dead sons empty grave, the absolute shithead.

    • @raptorep
      @raptorep Před 3 měsíci

      Public orders and REAL orders are two different things, You don't send a stealth battleship ship full of aggrieved parents to "Recon" the species that tortured their children to death. The Recon mission "orders" was a psyop to achieve surprise.

  • @dben842504
    @dben842504 Před 4 měsíci +18

    Disappointed no part 2 conclusion. If they are going to be like this I will quit watching and subscribing.

    • @the_creator4793
      @the_creator4793 Před 4 měsíci

      Seriously, they all do this

    • @S6261
      @S6261 Před 4 měsíci +1

      Maybe because it isn't written yet and you just need to have some patience for a part 2?

    • @georgebooth586
      @georgebooth586 Před 3 měsíci

      ​@@S6261 There is a simple answer to that: don't start incomplete stories.

  • @_Umbrael_
    @_Umbrael_ Před 2 měsíci

    This sounds like the type of shit I'd pull in Stellaris for some random diplomatic incident.

  • @argentofox2567
    @argentofox2567 Před 2 měsíci

    Damn that was epic! Is there a part two or more for this story?

  • @timothypoyer8445
    @timothypoyer8445 Před 4 měsíci +4

    I liked the story. Is there another part?

  • @omnikitsune3895
    @omnikitsune3895 Před 3 měsíci

    I hope this story continues. I want to hear what happens in the battles to come and whether the Yadarans are defeated or if Humanity finally meets its match. It will be interesting to hear and see. As well as the fallout afterward.

  • @avukovic84
    @avukovic84 Před 4 měsíci +2

    And that's how you get Imperium of Man...

  • @hermittao
    @hermittao Před 3 měsíci

    Your stories resonate, and draws me in. Thank You

  • @narrowmarinenocommentary6633

    POV; humans pull up with the undead Death Corps of the Krieg and an infinite amount of Ultramarines

  • @Smokejensen212
    @Smokejensen212 Před 4 měsíci +1

    I didn't come for the video, but the ART!

  • @brendanmcconnell4680
    @brendanmcconnell4680 Před 4 měsíci +6

    A sudden finish tho.

  • @hardworkerforlife4081
    @hardworkerforlife4081 Před 3 měsíci

    I liked the story. Humanity first

  • @regyoung1351
    @regyoung1351 Před 2 měsíci

    ❤ I liked the story. Please continue writing.

  • @billcomerford3021
    @billcomerford3021 Před 4 měsíci +9

    Commander Ivanova? Straight from Babylon Five. A bit of plagiarism.

    • @erroneous6947
      @erroneous6947 Před 4 měsíci +7

      Get a dictionary. Naming a character the same name as another ip isn’t plagiarism. Stealing the other story is. Maybe grow up. Touch some grass.

    • @kagato23
      @kagato23 Před 4 měsíci +1

      It was ai written. Of course it plagerized.

  • @davidmcneill7403
    @davidmcneill7403 Před 3 měsíci

    I like the story. Would like a part 2.

  • @styxxanaxkolasi879
    @styxxanaxkolasi879 Před 4 měsíci +1

    Lol love these stories but in all reality our world leaders would probably be the ones selling people/children to aliens. Like how they sell them among theirs friends.

  • @mb6ooo
    @mb6ooo Před 3 měsíci

    I liked each and every of your stories, keep going!❤

  • @cpob2013
    @cpob2013 Před 3 měsíci

    Cerberus isnt just an organization or the people behind it, Cerberus is an idea.

  • @David-wc8ze
    @David-wc8ze Před 4 měsíci +4

    I like the story.

  • @marlonowens7282
    @marlonowens7282 Před 4 měsíci +2

    Looking forward to other episodes

  • @falloutrains2641
    @falloutrains2641 Před 4 měsíci +1

    Geneva Convention? More like Geneva Suggestion

    • @raptorep
      @raptorep Před 3 měsíci

      it's never a warcrime the first time. ey Canada?

  • @BMrider75
    @BMrider75 Před 4 měsíci +3

    It's an okay outline, but needs a decent editor to shape it.

  • @alexanderking3008
    @alexanderking3008 Před 3 měsíci

    Aliens find out we were only tolerating the fact they aren't made in gods image

  • @dennisharrison9207
    @dennisharrison9207 Před 3 měsíci

    I so enjoyed the story. Is there part two? 👍

  • @SergioMollari
    @SergioMollari Před 3 měsíci

    This story isn't finished. No rewards for work left undone.

  • @dandruff2865
    @dandruff2865 Před měsícem

    When A Good Man Goes to War - Steven Moffat
    Demons run when a good man goes to war,
    Night will fall and drown the sun,
    When a good man goes to war.
    Friendship dies and true love lies,
    Night will fall and the dark will rise,
    When a good man goes to war.
    Demons run, but count the cost;
    The battle's won, but the child is lost.

  • @slowguy56
    @slowguy56 Před 4 měsíci

    Most well written story of this type that I've seen.