@@rabbithole1983 I have been a huge fan of Dr. Who! But after Christopher Eccleston 2005 David Tennant 2005 - 2010 Matt Smith 2010 - 2013 I kind of lost my passion for the show. My kids were big fans too and we went to conversations, great show!
i am a human being capable of doing terrible things i am a human being capable of doing terrible things i am a human being capable of doing terrible things *RUN* *intense music*
Something I’ve noticed with all of these stories is that humans are too peaceful and too, well, everything we’re not. Humans will by nature look to dominate and would never wait till we got sanctions before we built warships or fortified everything. It’s a common doctrine to match any ship amount of ships with the same.
Not always. There are plenty of nations who adopted isolationism until outside factors forced them to change. Humans are complex but we do strive to be better and often just be left alone.
There are stories were we pretty much took what we saw and made better. And even chose to attack instead of waiting. One of my favorites is when a world is about to get attacked by an insectoid race that already obliteratad others. And the inhabitants wwre one of few that treated us with respect and the humans chose to answer with a simpe "we are coming."
Imagine you're one of the richest people ever and now because of this council you are not allowed to make the kind of money you were telling if a aliens came in and made our 1% start spilting everything with us evenly they wouldn't put everything they had into finding a way to kill them to they can get there power back
next is the story of the human black ops team that quietly removes those that started all this. humans i can see being a force for good but i can never see them as saints.
@@Wastelandman7000 Even if he dislike his quote today, I have to agree with Reeves quote "you can't be a lover if you are not a warrior" and also the quote I heard Jordan Peterson say "you have to be dangerous and be able to control it to be a good man. Otherwise you are just harmless."
All these AI stories are very generic and soulless. They have only surface appeal. A skilled author could weave a compelling story upon these plot bones.
@@FriendlyNeighborhoodNitpicker AI "smells" High adverb and adjective count. Lack of specificity Lack of dialog The phrase "indomitable spirit" Weird lapses in logic Weird changes of state, (they were winning, now they're losing, now they're winning again) No author attribution That's a handful of clues that the story is AI written.
@@malcolmanderson6735 oh I know about the story, I thought you were talking about the narrator. I thought you were saying the narrator was AI in your original comment. The story, certainly.
“The EDF-Earth Defense Force” To save our mother Earth from any alien attack From vicious giant insects who have once again come back We'll unleash all our forces, we won't cut them any slack The EDF deploys!
"Humans share one unique quality. They build communities. If the Narns or the Centauri or any other race built a station like this, it would be used only by their own people, but everywhere humans go, they create communities out of diverse and sometimes hostile populations. It is a great gift and a terrible responsibility, one that cannot be abandoned." D'Lenn, Minbari Ambassador to Babylon 5
There isn't a government on earth whose actions and/or intentions lead me to believe for a moment that we would enter the galactic stage with such benign, self-restrained and well reasoned motivations, actions and goals. Human governments have, without a single exceptions that come to mind, shown a strong drive towards amassing power, lying to their constituents, betraying agreements whenever convenient and ignoring the slightest modicum of virtue (except for its' appearance) at all times. They have all, nearly without exception, devolved into self-serving power structures bent on the subjugation of the population under their control. The best government is the least government. I do not stand with the libertarians who claim to need no government at all but I stand with many of the founding fathers of the United States (who would be appalled by what has become of their country) who professed to believe that the least amount of government was the best. We would enter the galactic arena as a scourge upon the stars, if not immediately, then shortly after with the entrenchment of our position and our solidifying of our bureaucratic presence in the halls of galactic power. I shutter when I consider what would happen to the galaxy if we as a species are unleashed upon it.
There seems to be a rush of these "Kumbaya" stories at present.... I wonder, is it one AI poster using multiple accounts, or multiple users using the same AI program to generate them ??? Not that I want every story to be a blood and guts battle scenario, but the field of Science Fiction is broad enough that so many stories do not have to end in a lecture on togetherness and a group hug... This story started off well enough, but started to come apart about two thirds of the way through. The "climax" was definitely suffering from EDS.....
"Do we have any friends?" "No." "Any allies still willing to abide by our treaties with them?" "Not a one." "Good. We can fire in all directions at once, then!"
Nice story beginning scenario! I look forward to seeing more forthcoming installments. One minor criticism though, there were some misused words ; however,a good proofreader would catch and correct these errors .
Time to show the aliens why humanity is on TOP! Bring back the glory days of war, battle, and never ending conflict cause that's probably 80% to 90% of our history!
So... someone (or something in case of a generator) had beaten the last few years of european/atlantic politics into a very didactic story... I'm laughing far too much.
VERY well written story. It would be nice if we were uniformly like this story. We are unfortunately at a time of a rightwing rise. But the youth of the world are very open minded in contrast to old guard till struggling with inevitable change.
11:46 things on or orbiting On the Dark Side of the Moon are only hidden from people on earth. A fleet hanging out on the Dark Side of the Moon would be right out in the open to anyone looking from pretty much anywhere else in the solar system or to or to anyone nearby who has powerful enough sensors or solar systems to see earth and its Moon.
emerged from the dark side of the moon? so like...they were on display for the entire universe, but hidden from humans on Earth? :P Gotta love AI stories.
This is a well played out plot for a movie. This needs to be published for a movie so that the new directors and movie design crerws can have their fair involvement in a grand story line that could fall in order of Star Trek or Battlestar Galactica.
EDF! EDF! EDF! HELL NO that name reminds me of one of the most cursed military organizations in gaming history. In every single mission from the first to the last TENNO HEIKA BANZAAAAAAIIIII THE BEST TACTIC period. Someone who actually have brain somehow can't climb the rank to be at least a colonel, on the other hand, some muscle brain dude who deserved the rank of a private managed to get the rank of supreme commander. The alien starfighters swarm the player location close enough for shotgun to be effective, the AA defense weaponry of choice: radar guided missiles from self-propelled launchers not even a half click away. Where do those AA guns go? IDK, the in-game event set in 2010's, so you definitely can't cut those cold war era AA guns off the arsenal as the obvious evidence of enemy air power in both shape and form were witnessed across the globe, yet EDF refuses to drag those archaic AA guns out and deploy them as the proper countermeasure, well, because why not, bipedal mechs are way cooler.
Great commentary. Reminded me of either Star Trek or a Stellaris Playthrough. I hope Humanity becomes futuristic with Roman esque features as seen in this picture, or space Vikings as seen in Endless Space 2 Vaulters Artwork. Either way they would show off the two best cultures in our history as a species
Everyone is a critic. Maybe instead of looking for reasons to dislike something, find something to enjoy. Nothing of relavance is really added from the criticism of all these successful authors with published works of their own. Its a youtube video.
So happy that I finally found a narrator that Im happy with. Its very hard for me to find one that doesn't get on my nerves with bad pronunciation and over acting. THANK YOU. THANK YOU. THANK YOU.🙌
Personally I'm starting to despise this trope of humanities rapid advancement scaring aliens. I think that if a highly advanced humanity is desired, using either the idea that humanity was able to keep its secrets and/or occupy a particularly barren region of the galaxy (allowing for humanities development in a literal vacuum, with nobody to scare until a proper reveal... also never be sorry for your puns), or the idea that humanity was actually one of if not the first, to be on the scene, is better. The whole thing about rapid advancement in a story where computers exist is the rate of advancement once computers get involved, not to mention the rate of advancement we have seen prior to computers (for example, something like 99.9999% of tools ever invented or improved by man, have done so within living memory and for 99.99999999% of humanities existence, we had *ONE* tool.). The problem with councils at some stagnant level is that there is no way all the groups would just agree to that kind of crap. Some might sign onto a treaty (look at the ccp and what it says about the climate, or Japan in the 1930s straight up lying about the size of their ships), but they will forever be trying to one-up the others. That every other race in a setting seems to plateau at some arbitrary level far below what humanity will get to (which only seems to exist for the sake of the humans in the story), long before humanity even invents gunpowder or gets to the stars... Is just asinine. It can work if you have a single controlling entity e.g. the Goa'uld from Stargate SG-1 in the early seasons. It just doesn't work with a setting that involves either computers as commonplace or some kind council. Especially if there is some type of council for the aforementioned reason. addendum: If you look at some of the estimates for how long the universe will be able to exist in a state not too dissimilar from what it is right now, we are far closer to its beginning then its end. By end I mean a time before heat death and proton decay, but after the period we are in now where star formation is commonplace. (sure the universe itself won't end with the end of star production and star production itself will only peter out over time, the time after stars cease to be born, will be a very different universe than today. So I use that as a cutoff. If you don't use a similar cutoff, you then have us far far far closer to the beginning than the end. For context proton decay _might_ happen in something like 15,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 years (I am 100% serious, though I might be off by a zero or two in either direction) I can think of some exceptions to this, where the rapid advancement works, but they are all highly contrived and this isn't one of them. (E.g. humanity being ludicrously late to the party) The core meaning of the Copernican Principle is that we are not as special as we might like. (More specifically it means that the area of the universe we are in, is not any more special than any others, we do not have some privileged view that nobody else does. Thus it follows that we are no more special than any other intelligent life that might exist until proven otherwise.)
@@whyjnot420It's frankly ridiculous that a new interstellar species defeats galaxy spanning alien empires. Unless that new interstellar species is the viltrumites, I'm not buying it. The Hugo award winning book The Dark Forest (A part of THE THREE BODY PROBLEM) had a better view on this sort of situations (MAJOR SPOILERS) A single alien probe, not even one thousandth the size of an alien ship in an armada of a thousand ships singlehandedly annihilated humanities entire thousands strong space fleet in less than an hour. Then a lone alien while singing threw a paper sized weapon in our solar system that flattened our entire solar system into 2 dimensions, destroying all life present there.
@@ace_the_race9340 Yeah. It is a fun idea to play with, just as with almost any underdog story but there are just so many problems with it. Also the larger the hurdle for the underdog to overcome the more problems there are.
@@ace_the_race9340 Addendum: There was one HFY story I came across a little while back that had a similar trajectory in its story. The dynamic was reversed though. In the story, it was a human probe, with humans being the far more advanced group. It was a fun little short that was only serious about one group being far far far more advanced, then had fun with the rest. The writer obviously had no delusions of grandeur.
@@whyjnot420And these stories forget humans differences and drive to survive even at the expense of others. In the aforementioned book (MAJOR SPOILERS) Even when an vastly advanced alien armada was on its way to Earth, All of earths governments rejected the notion of sharing all their technologies for humanities advancement when faced with nation defence. They also banned fleeing the solar system as "The Inequality of survival is the worst kind of Inequality" and would cause widespread societal disruption and any who tried to flee the solar system or tried to develop related technologies would be hunted down and executed. Civilians would active attack and sabotage spaceport that could allow humans passage to space to escape and even fired at orbital human cities as they could be turned into arks for interstellar travel. And finally traitors of all kinds lurked, some indirectly caused the deaths of billions. I see these situations as closer to the truth.
imaage may be ai. one of the soldiers in frount row has a strange issue with his helmets plume, and the one in frount seemingly has an extra finger. If its not, give credit. If it is, state so
I really enjoyed this story and very much appreciate all the work you do to bring stories such as this to the Internet through your channel. Your channel is one of very few to which I have subscribed. Now that said, the transcript/subtitles in this story could really use an editor. I mention this because sometimes I cannot use the audio narration and therefore have to rely on the subtitles as I did in this case. - Is it Thul or Thule or Thal because the subtitle spells it all three ways? Same with Rakian or is it Recian? And at least once it uses Thularekian. - At various points in the story it should be: rifts, not riffs; pacts, not packs; pariahed, not paryed; reins, not rains; rein, not reign; deterrence, not deterrents; dissent, not descent; and deep-seated, not deep seeded. - The story should probably not have used populous (meaning densely populated) but something else like population (inhabitants) otherwise the meaning is a bit off but this is minor compared to the other issues. Only mentioned because I posted about the other issues. - A bit of punctuation would help with reading the transcript/subtitles And I apologize ion advance if I am somehow sounding like a pedantic grammar nazi. I definitely do not intend to do so. I just hate to see errors impact the quality of a good/great story, book, or speech.
Thank you for everything! I will try do to better to satisfy all of us! Thank you for support and advices! Glad that you are one of my subscribers! Enjoy! 🍻
The narration is actually not bad at all, but the story itself? Apparently the person (or machine) that primarily wrote this, never heard of the concept of show don’t tell. This is like a high school students summary of a book series, but written with better grammar. There seems to be something of a disconnect though, or should I say major inconsistency? Twice it said that the council, watching the humans military build up, was basically afraid, concerned, rethinking its actions. And then the humans deploy their fleet and the council is surprised! Didn’t see it coming! Taken aback by the plucky humans suddenly developing a fleet out of nowhere! Except a few paragraphs before they knew about the fleet, knew about the military buildup; and a few paragraphs before that they also knew about the war mongering and knew about the military buildup. The story is just full of circles and circles and circles.
No kidding. My 'to watch' list exploded to over 600 videos a month because of this AI spam. And worse, 90% of them are constantly repeating ideals of unity and cooperation. Makes me think this is some liberal morality advertising instead of AI testing as I first thought.
@@TheDurid1 What annoys me is that they all seem to subscribe to the same school of thought of philosophy of thought of the Department of Redundancy Department 😡😤 For the love of God man, the English language has more than 50 words and stop repeating yourself!
Great stirring story...almost: way too much "highest ideals of FairPlay, and equity among species was consistently used portraying humanity as the ultimate arbiter of enlightened leadership among all the other races in the galaxy...judging from conditions right now here on Earth I doubt without some sort of "uplift" my species intellect is capable of living up to....but a good story nevertheless!
It's frankly ridiculous that a new interstellar species defeats galaxy spanning alien empires. Unless that new interstellar species is the viltrumites, I'm not buying it. The Hugo award winning book The Dark Forest (A part of THE THREE BODY PROBLEM) had a better view on this sort of situations (MAJOR SPOILERS) A single alien probe, not even one thousandth the size of an alien ship in an armada of a thousand ships singlehandedly annihilated humanities entire thousands strong space fleet in less than an hour. Then a lone alien while singing threw a paper sized weapon in our solar system that flattened our entire solar system into 2 dimensions, destroying all life present there.
Yes we get the point there's a faction within the galactic alliance that wants to kick out the humans I think you've made that point way too many times
These channels were good when they plucked from the Reddit page of HFY and narrated themselves (although I'm not sure this channel ever did). Now it's just AI garbage narrated by an AI. Boring.
I've noticed this a lot with these stories. I'm wondering if it has something to do with the AI Voice programs. Maybe they struggle with properly reading the text when punctuation is involved? I remember the old Microsoft Voice program always struggled with punctuation back in the day.
While a reasonably decent short story, many of the issues/comments were basically repeated several times. The story could have been done in about 10 minutes.
Fun stuff but I find myself lost and stop following the story I'm listening to. Seems to go in circles and nothing more. I'm bored with it now and walking away. Too bad, I had high hopes but it seems to have fallen flat. Keep working on it. Bring life to this scroll and it will become noteworthy.
These absolutely reek of AI generated. Like if you're gonna be lazy and use AI, at least give us some credit and make sure that the AI narrator is not reading obvious grammar mistakes that would have been caught by even someone in the 10th grade.
There is no dark side of the moon. This story is sloppy. Quite a few times phrases were misused. 'Second guess' is used as 're-evaluate' and so on. Very repetitive too. Pulp.
Very good story , It’s kept me up 2-3 nights now listening. ! Love. Them
Glad you liked it! ❤🙏
Council must have been mostly Democrats.
Damn! How many times did you listen to it? lol.
@willarth9186 what a dumb comment Foxbreather
@willarth9186 what a dumb comment Foxbreather
Demons run when a good man goes to war
Doctor Who
I like the simplicity of the statement: Run.
Borrowed from Dr. Who, U.K.
@@rabbithole1983 I have been a huge fan of Dr. Who! But after Christopher Eccleston 2005
David Tennant 2005 - 2010
Matt Smith 2010 - 2013 I kind of lost my passion for the show. My kids were big fans too and we went to conversations, great show!
It reminds me of when General McAuliffe told the Germans 'Nuts!' During the Battle of the Bulge
i am a human being capable of doing terrible things
i am a human being capable of doing terrible things
i am a human being capable of doing terrible things
*RUN*
*intense music*
Something I’ve noticed with all of these stories is that humans are too peaceful and too, well, everything we’re not. Humans will by nature look to dominate and would never wait till we got sanctions before we built warships or fortified everything. It’s a common doctrine to match any ship amount of ships with the same.
Not always. There are plenty of nations who adopted isolationism until outside factors forced them to change. Humans are complex but we do strive to be better and often just be left alone.
Thats what makes us the inheritors of the stars, our supremacy to every species
Thats what makes us the inheritors of the stars, our supremacy to every species
There are stories were we pretty much took what we saw and made better. And even chose to attack instead of waiting. One of my favorites is when a world is about to get attacked by an insectoid race that already obliteratad others. And the inhabitants wwre one of few that treated us with respect and the humans chose to answer with a simpe "we are coming."
Most people do not understand that professional soldiers do not want to go to war. They see all the horror and suffer the most.
I lost track of how many crossroads and turning points there were.
I did too. Met Bugs Bunny in Albuquerque.
Its a fictional political narrative. Or fictional political genre
“Together for managed democracy…”
FOR SUPPER EARTH
Amen Brother
🌎🌏🌐🌍🌐🌏🌏🌐🌍🌎🌐
iO
Imagine you're one of the richest people ever and now because of this council you are not allowed to make the kind of money you were telling if a aliens came in and made our 1% start spilting everything with us evenly they wouldn't put everything they had into finding a way to kill them to they can get there power back
next is the story of
the human black ops team that quietly removes those that started all this.
humans i can see being a force for good but i can never see them as saints.
Well, when you're up against even worse xenos, saints wouldn't be as useful as a few extremely competent sinners.
@@Wastelandman7000 Even if he dislike his quote today, I have to agree with Reeves quote "you can't be a lover if you are not a warrior" and also the quote I heard Jordan Peterson say "you have to be dangerous and be able to control it to be a good man. Otherwise you are just harmless."
Fair...
I got to give the AI credit. It's getting better by the week. I was 80% through this very long story before I realized this is AI trash
What gave it away? This one had me fooled,.
All these AI stories are very generic and soulless. They have only surface appeal. A skilled author could weave a compelling story upon these plot bones.
@@FriendlyNeighborhoodNitpicker AI "smells"
High adverb and adjective count.
Lack of specificity
Lack of dialog
The phrase "indomitable spirit"
Weird lapses in logic
Weird changes of state, (they were winning, now they're losing, now they're winning again)
No author attribution
That's a handful of clues that the story is AI written.
@@malcolmanderson6735At least the narrator was human. Just needs better stories.
@@malcolmanderson6735 oh I know about the story, I thought you were talking about the narrator. I thought you were saying the narrator was AI in your original comment. The story, certainly.
“The EDF-Earth Defense Force”
To save our mother Earth from any alien attack
From vicious giant insects who have once again come back
We'll unleash all our forces, we won't cut them any slack
The EDF deploys!
EDF! EDF!
to save our mother earth from any alien attack!-
EDF! EDF!! E. D. F!!!!!
EDF deploy
Wait until the original EDF (Electricité De France) sues them for name theft.
Don't you mean nato?
I love these stories that show humanity powerful and positive force for good
"Humans share one unique quality. They build communities. If the Narns or the Centauri or any other race built a station like this, it would be used only by their own people, but everywhere humans go, they create communities out of diverse and sometimes hostile populations. It is a great gift and a terrible responsibility, one that cannot be abandoned."
D'Lenn, Minbari Ambassador to Babylon 5
This story says the same shit like 40 times.
it's ai generated slop. Dude who made this video probably didn't even spend 5 minutes proofreading it.
Doesn't matter if you're one planet, a system spanning empire, or a galaxy spanning federation. We will welcome you to the rice fields accordingly.
Standing alone against a galaxy of enemies
Too much idealism, not enough realism.
Maybe they should have shown up in battle ships. Say Hello. And back up the offer with fire power, and with battle drone carrier ships.
There isn't a government on earth whose actions and/or intentions lead me to believe for a moment that we would enter the galactic stage with such benign, self-restrained and well reasoned motivations, actions and goals. Human governments have, without a single exceptions that come to mind, shown a strong drive towards amassing power, lying to their constituents, betraying agreements whenever convenient and ignoring the slightest modicum of virtue (except for its' appearance) at all times. They have all, nearly without exception, devolved into self-serving power structures bent on the subjugation of the population under their control. The best government is the least government. I do not stand with the libertarians who claim to need no government at all but I stand with many of the founding fathers of the United States (who would be appalled by what has become of their country) who professed to believe that the least amount of government was the best. We would enter the galactic arena as a scourge upon the stars, if not immediately, then shortly after with the entrenchment of our position and our solidifying of our bureaucratic presence in the halls of galactic power.
I shutter when I consider what would happen to the galaxy if we as a species are unleashed upon it.
It'll be Warhammer 40k Great Crusade all over again... But without our all-mighty Emperor of Mankind...
And we are back to “bristling with weapons”. All that is missing is “prowess”.
If it wasn't for the slip up over the proper time scale i might have thought it was written by a human hand. Good job ai
There seems to be a rush of these "Kumbaya" stories at present....
I wonder, is it one AI poster using multiple accounts, or multiple users using the same AI program to generate them ???
Not that I want every story to be a blood and guts battle scenario, but the field of Science Fiction is broad enough that so many stories do not have to end in a lecture on togetherness and a group hug...
This story started off well enough, but started to come apart about two thirds of the way through. The "climax" was definitely suffering from EDS.....
Nope, it's just that ChatGPT 3.5 3.5 turbo, 4 and etc all write in th same style, forcing morals and other garbage into stories.
sounds like the whole story line for babylon 5.
The Interstellar Courts sound like the United Nations ...
"Do we have any friends?"
"No."
"Any allies still willing to abide by our treaties with them?"
"Not a one."
"Good. We can fire in all directions at once, then!"
1:07 When we're done with them, there'll be no history left to preserve.
Nice story beginning scenario! I look forward to seeing more forthcoming installments. One minor criticism though, there were some misused words ; however,a good proofreader would catch and correct these errors .
Did someone say “we were born to inherit the stars”? XD
This sounds like it would make for a very good short story animation.
The first 5 minutes could be a good novel
War crimes go brrrrr
Time to show the aliens why humanity is on TOP! Bring back the glory days of war, battle, and never ending conflict cause that's probably 80% to 90% of our history!
You think we're dangerous when we are on your side... how much worse do you think it will be when we are your enemies?
Amen brother!
Pretty damn terrifying...
what can we say humanity is resourceful unorthdox in its ways sometimes but if it works it works
If mechs and mobile suits gets involved things will be crazy
So... someone (or something in case of a generator) had beaten the last few years of european/atlantic politics into a very didactic story... I'm laughing far too much.
Are you having a stroke? I can’t understand anything you are saying.
I got a funny add the moment when they left their final statement. Get you Oscar Mayer hotdog.
I really want to know if this is different story each video or like a continuous episode
Repeat ourselves
Determination, determination. Determination, determination, determination, determination.
I wonder how many times Tapestry, and Tantalizing would have appeared in it as well.
VERY well written story. It would be nice if we were uniformly like this story. We are unfortunately at a time of a rightwing rise. But the youth of the world are very open minded in contrast to old guard till struggling with inevitable change.
10:10
🎶OH WE ARE THE VALIENT INFANTRY🎶
11:46 things on or orbiting On the Dark Side of the Moon are only hidden from people on earth. A fleet hanging out on the Dark Side of the Moon would be right out in the open to anyone looking from pretty much anywhere else in the solar system or to or to anyone nearby who has powerful enough sensors or solar systems to see earth and its Moon.
Another crossroads
Nice sci-fi fairy tail.
Mean while we are still trying to nuke the Earth.
Is there an order to watch these videos?
emerged from the dark side of the moon? so like...they were on display for the entire universe, but hidden from humans on Earth? :P
Gotta love AI stories.
great story loved it
This is a well played out plot for a movie. This needs to be published for a movie so that the new directors and movie design crerws can have their fair involvement in a grand story line that could fall in order of Star Trek or Battlestar Galactica.
EDF! EDF! EDF! HELL NO that name reminds me of one of the most cursed military organizations in gaming history. In every single mission from the first to the last TENNO HEIKA BANZAAAAAAIIIII THE BEST TACTIC period. Someone who actually have brain somehow can't climb the rank to be at least a colonel, on the other hand, some muscle brain dude who deserved the rank of a private managed to get the rank of supreme commander. The alien starfighters swarm the player location close enough for shotgun to be effective, the AA defense weaponry of choice: radar guided missiles from self-propelled launchers not even a half click away. Where do those AA guns go? IDK, the in-game event set in 2010's, so you definitely can't cut those cold war era AA guns off the arsenal as the obvious evidence of enemy air power in both shape and form were witnessed across the globe, yet EDF refuses to drag those archaic AA guns out and deploy them as the proper countermeasure, well, because why not, bipedal mechs are way cooler.
19:18 WE WERE BORN TO INHERIT THE STARS!
I love the thumbnail of the vid.
Sounds a lot like current situation with Russia.
Nice!
Great commentary. Reminded me of either Star Trek or a Stellaris Playthrough. I hope Humanity becomes futuristic with Roman esque features as seen in this picture, or space Vikings as seen in Endless Space 2 Vaulters Artwork. Either way they would show off the two best cultures in our history as a species
DUDE, where do you get your art?
It's made by me, i do have copyrights for the art, why?
Everyone is a critic. Maybe instead of looking for reasons to dislike something, find something to enjoy. Nothing of relavance is really added from the criticism of all these successful authors with published works of their own. Its a youtube video.
Thank you 🙏
Carbon copy what is going on today amongst earth’s countries
So happy that I finally found a narrator that Im happy with. Its very hard for me to find one that doesn't get on my nerves with bad pronunciation and over acting. THANK YOU. THANK YOU. THANK YOU.🙌
I despise the word diverse. Way overused.
Personally I'm starting to despise this trope of humanities rapid advancement scaring aliens. I think that if a highly advanced humanity is desired, using either the idea that humanity was able to keep its secrets and/or occupy a particularly barren region of the galaxy (allowing for humanities development in a literal vacuum, with nobody to scare until a proper reveal... also never be sorry for your puns), or the idea that humanity was actually one of if not the first, to be on the scene, is better.
The whole thing about rapid advancement in a story where computers exist is the rate of advancement once computers get involved, not to mention the rate of advancement we have seen prior to computers (for example, something like 99.9999% of tools ever invented or improved by man, have done so within living memory and for 99.99999999% of humanities existence, we had *ONE* tool.). The problem with councils at some stagnant level is that there is no way all the groups would just agree to that kind of crap. Some might sign onto a treaty (look at the ccp and what it says about the climate, or Japan in the 1930s straight up lying about the size of their ships), but they will forever be trying to one-up the others. That every other race in a setting seems to plateau at some arbitrary level far below what humanity will get to (which only seems to exist for the sake of the humans in the story), long before humanity even invents gunpowder or gets to the stars... Is just asinine. It can work if you have a single controlling entity e.g. the Goa'uld from Stargate SG-1 in the early seasons. It just doesn't work with a setting that involves either computers as commonplace or some kind council. Especially if there is some type of council for the aforementioned reason.
addendum: If you look at some of the estimates for how long the universe will be able to exist in a state not too dissimilar from what it is right now, we are far closer to its beginning then its end. By end I mean a time before heat death and proton decay, but after the period we are in now where star formation is commonplace. (sure the universe itself won't end with the end of star production and star production itself will only peter out over time, the time after stars cease to be born, will be a very different universe than today. So I use that as a cutoff. If you don't use a similar cutoff, you then have us far far far closer to the beginning than the end. For context proton decay _might_ happen in something like 15,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 years (I am 100% serious, though I might be off by a zero or two in either direction)
I can think of some exceptions to this, where the rapid advancement works, but they are all highly contrived and this isn't one of them. (E.g. humanity being ludicrously late to the party)
The core meaning of the Copernican Principle is that we are not as special as we might like. (More specifically it means that the area of the universe we are in, is not any more special than any others, we do not have some privileged view that nobody else does. Thus it follows that we are no more special than any other intelligent life that might exist until proven otherwise.)
@@whyjnot420It's frankly ridiculous that a new interstellar species defeats galaxy spanning alien empires. Unless that new interstellar species is the viltrumites, I'm not buying it. The Hugo award winning book The Dark Forest (A part of THE THREE BODY PROBLEM) had a better view on this sort of situations (MAJOR SPOILERS) A single alien probe, not even one thousandth the size of an alien ship in an armada of a thousand ships singlehandedly annihilated humanities entire thousands strong space fleet in less than an hour. Then a lone alien while singing threw a paper sized weapon in our solar system that flattened our entire solar system into 2 dimensions, destroying all life present there.
@@ace_the_race9340 Yeah. It is a fun idea to play with, just as with almost any underdog story but there are just so many problems with it. Also the larger the hurdle for the underdog to overcome the more problems there are.
@@ace_the_race9340 Addendum: There was one HFY story I came across a little while back that had a similar trajectory in its story. The dynamic was reversed though. In the story, it was a human probe, with humans being the far more advanced group. It was a fun little short that was only serious about one group being far far far more advanced, then had fun with the rest. The writer obviously had no delusions of grandeur.
@@whyjnot420And these stories forget humans differences and drive to survive even at the expense of others. In the aforementioned book (MAJOR SPOILERS) Even when an vastly advanced alien armada was on its way to Earth, All of earths governments rejected the notion of sharing all their technologies for humanities advancement when faced with nation defence. They also banned fleeing the solar system as "The Inequality of survival is the worst kind of Inequality" and would cause widespread societal disruption and any who tried to flee the solar system or tried to develop related technologies would be hunted down and executed. Civilians would active attack and sabotage spaceport that could allow humans passage to space to escape and even fired at orbital human cities as they could be turned into arks for interstellar travel. And finally traitors of all kinds lurked, some indirectly caused the deaths of billions. I see these situations as closer to the truth.
imaage may be ai. one of the soldiers in frount row has a strange issue with his helmets plume, and the one in frount seemingly has an extra finger. If its not, give credit. If it is, state so
Xenos, Behold The Power of The Imperium of Man
cool one here thumbs up
I usually hate AI and "auto voiced" stories, I am absolutely Blitzed right now and I wanna hear about humans beasting!!!
I really enjoyed this story and very much appreciate all the work you do to bring stories such as this to the Internet through your channel. Your channel is one of very few to which I have subscribed. Now that said, the transcript/subtitles in this story could really use an editor. I mention this because sometimes I cannot use the audio narration and therefore have to rely on the subtitles as I did in this case.
- Is it Thul or Thule or Thal because the subtitle spells it all three ways? Same with Rakian or is it Recian? And at least once it uses Thularekian.
- At various points in the story it should be: rifts, not riffs; pacts, not packs; pariahed, not paryed; reins, not rains; rein, not reign; deterrence, not deterrents; dissent, not descent; and deep-seated, not deep seeded.
- The story should probably not have used populous (meaning densely populated) but something else like population (inhabitants) otherwise the meaning is a bit off but this is minor compared to the other issues. Only mentioned because I posted about the other issues.
- A bit of punctuation would help with reading the transcript/subtitles
And I apologize ion advance if I am somehow sounding like a pedantic grammar nazi. I definitely do not intend to do so. I just hate to see errors impact the quality of a good/great story, book, or speech.
Thank you for everything! I will try do to better to satisfy all of us! Thank you for support and advices! Glad that you are one of my subscribers! Enjoy! 🍻
It's written by an AI not a person
All i need to know is: the art in the video, who's is it.. and am I able to get it as well?
It's all made by me with copyrights on...u can take it but if you want to post it somewhere, give me credits! Have a nice day!
sounds like what Russia thinks of themselves.
Sauce?
EDF!!!
indomitable spirit, we won the stars we will win all the stars when elon musk goes to mars
The narration is actually not bad at all, but the story itself? Apparently the person (or machine) that primarily wrote this, never heard of the concept of show don’t tell. This is like a high school students summary of a book series, but written with better grammar.
There seems to be something of a disconnect though, or should I say major inconsistency? Twice it said that the council, watching the humans military build up, was basically afraid, concerned, rethinking its actions. And then the humans deploy their fleet and the council is surprised! Didn’t see it coming! Taken aback by the plucky humans suddenly developing a fleet out of nowhere! Except a few paragraphs before they knew about the fleet, knew about the military buildup; and a few paragraphs before that they also knew about the war mongering and knew about the military buildup.
The story is just full of circles and circles and circles.
These A.I. generated AND narrated stories are really annoying me, cluttering my feed unnecessarily.
No kidding. My 'to watch' list exploded to over 600 videos a month because of this AI spam. And worse, 90% of them are constantly repeating ideals of unity and cooperation. Makes me think this is some liberal morality advertising instead of AI testing as I first thought.
@@TheDurid1 What annoys me is that they all seem to subscribe to the same school of thought of philosophy of thought of the Department of Redundancy Department 😡😤
For the love of God man, the English language has more than 50 words and stop repeating yourself!
This sounds like the EU!
This guy is good. Wish he was on Audible.
Great stirring story...almost: way too much "highest ideals of FairPlay, and equity among species was consistently used portraying humanity as the ultimate arbiter of enlightened leadership among all the other races in the galaxy...judging from conditions right now here on Earth I doubt without some sort of "uplift" my species intellect is capable of living up to....but a good story nevertheless!
So refreshing to hear a clear human read and put feeling into a story rather than BS AI
It's an AI story and narrator
EEEEE DEEEEE EEEEEEEEEF!!!!!!
It's frankly ridiculous that a new interstellar species defeats galaxy spanning alien empires. Unless that new interstellar species is the viltrumites, I'm not buying it. The Hugo award winning book The Dark Forest (A part of THE THREE BODY PROBLEM) had a better view on this sort of situations (MAJOR SPOILERS) A single alien probe, not even one thousandth the size of an alien ship in an armada of a thousand ships singlehandedly annihilated humanities entire thousands strong space fleet in less than an hour. Then a lone alien while singing threw a paper sized weapon in our solar system that flattened our entire solar system into 2 dimensions, destroying all life present there.
Dark side of the moon? Really? This felt like an AI made up story.
Repeat
Yes we get the point there's a faction within the galactic alliance that wants to kick out the humans I think you've made that point way too many times
I’ve went through about 30-40 of them
And there it is. Prowess.
Ho hum. This one has shown itself to be just another collection of predictable clichés.
Новиопия aah fiction
Good story but bad pacing, it repeats a lot, like a hell of a lot.
Oh such inclusion! Oh such diversity!
Scuse me, Im gonna puke.
ChatGPT is writing sci-fi now? Garbage
Much of it is. Especially since a lot of them seem to be some morality advertising campaign than trying to make a good story.
These channels were good when they plucked from the Reddit page of HFY and narrated themselves (although I'm not sure this channel ever did). Now it's just AI garbage narrated by an AI. Boring.
Seems like propoganda of a socialiat bent...hmm?
Probably is
SciFi Guy, punctuation! Ever heard of it?
I've noticed this a lot with these stories. I'm wondering if it has something to do with the AI Voice programs. Maybe they struggle with properly reading the text when punctuation is involved? I remember the old Microsoft Voice program always struggled with punctuation back in the day.
A lot of rah rah like a Texas snake hunt, those poor snakes, if only they knew Texans don't run, barf.
Are we talking about SCOTUS?
OMG you are funny😂
The narrator sounds like Joe Biden
While a reasonably decent short story, many of the issues/comments were basically repeated several times. The story could have been done in about 10 minutes.
childish scenario
Fun stuff but I find myself lost and stop following the story I'm listening to. Seems to go in circles and nothing more. I'm bored with it now and walking away.
Too bad, I had high hopes but it seems to have fallen flat.
Keep working on it. Bring life to this scroll and it will become noteworthy.
The galactic council sound exactly like Space democrats!
These absolutely reek of AI generated. Like if you're gonna be lazy and use AI, at least give us some credit and make sure that the AI narrator is not reading obvious grammar mistakes that would have been caught by even someone in the 10th grade.
Is this Israel vs. International Court of Justice?
Boring, huge buildup but nothing happen.
There is no dark side of the moon.
This story is sloppy. Quite a few times phrases were misused. 'Second guess' is used as 're-evaluate' and so on.
Very repetitive too.
Pulp.
Too Utopian to be believable
Obviously earth was not led by americans
Did joe biden narrate this story?
You shut your face!
The kangaroo court reminds me off the trump trials