Gaz And Pye - Everlasting Circle Of Sorrow (Demo)

Note: This is just a demo,
The concept is what we're trying to show here!!
Comments welcomed with open arms
Lyrics:
Can you set me free now, from this world i know.
I felt so helpless, when you closed the door.
All that i wanted, was to be with you.
but i'm alone now....
does it make you understand,
How my mind feels empty
yet... I feel so lost in this.
Everlasting circle of sorrow
Will there ever be tomorrow
In this everlasting circle of sorrow
Is this finally the end?
Da da daaaa da da da etc.
Will i find the answers, that i'm searching for,
Coz everytime i see you, i need you more and more. Endless echoes, they make you hard to find.
I'm still alone now.
Will you ever understand?
That my mind's empty.... Yet again i'm lost,
in this.....
Everlasting circle of sorrow
Will there ever be tomorrow
In this everlasting circle of sorrow
Is this finally the end?

[@kompi93]

Remove the "Da da daaaa da da da etc." and make the piano/keyboard come more forth at that part. I think it might sound better right there. Other than that, pretty good! A little short, but it worked. Can't wait to hear more! :)

[@gazbg123]

@sozosmichael You have my absolute blessing!!
You my friend WILL make a great job of it, oh i know :)
It unfortunately will have to be completely re-created because this was recorded on pyes ps3 and it broke so we've lost the entire backing track :'(
But i'll help in whatever way i can ;)

[@SozosMichael]

This, if executed correctly, can become a hell of a song. May I cover this remarkable piece of music?