Forever a curse (DEMO)

A demo for a song we've been working on...
LYRICS:
FOREVER A CURSE
In this place,
I feel so alone.
The words I wrote,
still in my mind...
I cant help but see,
This pain is too much,
I cant help but feel,
The sorrow in me.
The hope inside,
It feels so false,
Im drifting through life,
Like there is no time to.....
Come with me,
And feel my pain,
I've just gotta to say,
I need your hand,
And if you love me,
You'll understand,
These thoughts in my mind....
FOREVER A CURSE
All my life,
Ive made mistakes,
Its them that I hate,
I just cant take.
My reflection I see,
The evil in me,
I wish for a chance,
You had never seen me.
But now Im gone,
By my own right,
And now I know why,
i'll never be free... from... YOU,,,,
Come with me,
And feel my pain,
I've just gotta to say,
I need your hand,
And if you love me,
You'll understand,
These thoughts in my mind....
FOREVER A CURSE
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well for me a bit too silence :)

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it's not bad...but i am not impresed