Galactic Council Shocked When A Human Pets The Galaxy's Deadliest Predator! | HFY Sci‐Fi Story
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How many times does Antares die in this story? LOL
Why can't you write a bloody story that follows a narrative? The fella is a prisoner, then tames a giant monster, then gets the captors to agree to release the other prisoners, then suddenly the monster is nowhere to be seen he's back in a cell and a human fleet is in orbit and attacking and he's trying to escape the cell he's back in somehow 😂. This is just ridiculous. Just try reading your own bloody story before posting and checking it follows a coherent narrative 🙄
Ai hasn't been perfected yet.
Should proofread before posting.
@@ecomtomcat exactly. So the people who run the channel should be checking the work
Sam Altman's crap AI wrote this 😂
Well, what do expect when you subjugate a species that pets monsters? F**k around and find out!
Is Antares on his ship? Or is he on the ground? He can’t be in both places at once! 🤦🏼♂️ Have someone proofread your stories before posting them. This story makes no sense the way it’s being narrated. And what happened to the beast Nicholas tamed?
Returd AeI
Was this written by an A.I.? It is like 3 or 4 stories all jammed together using common phrases and has 2 endings. At the very least it needs a real editor to go through it and then you could at least have a mediocre story.
this story was awful. poorly conceived and all over the place. and as usual using the same lines over and over. Like is claws tore at the arms of is chair, it seams as tough every enemy his sharp lizard like claws and no respect for furniture. Or how about "the beams tore through the enemy armor like it was made of paper". don't we se this like in every story? continuity matters
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