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Alien Princess Lost All Hope, Until Humans Secret Fleet Saved Her | HFY Sci‐Fi Story
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Alien Scrappers Stunned By Ancient Human Supercarrier More Advanced Than Anything! | HFY Sci‐Fi Stor
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Aliens Called Her a Primitive Human AI... So She Hijacked Their Mothership | HFY Sci‐Fi Story
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Aliens Laughed At The Ancient Warship, Until They Realized Humans Built It! | HFY Sci‐Fi Story
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Aliens Shocked When Humans Are Invincible To Their Weapons! | HFY Sci‐Fi Story
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All Hope Was Lost, Until Humans Secret Fleet Joined The War | HFY Sci‐Fi Story
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Every Alien Laughed At The Pathetic Human Ship, Until... | HFY Sci‐Fi Story
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Everyone FEARED The Unknown Race, Except The Humans! | HFY Sci‐Fi Story
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Galactic Council Shocked by Earth's Oceans | HFY Sci‐Fi Story
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Galactic Empire Killed Human Dog, So We Warned Them: Run! | HFY Sci‐Fi Story
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Human Answers A Distress Signal On A Destitute Planet | HFY Sci‐Fi Story
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Humanity's Berserk Warriors Turn the Tide on Varion 7 | HFY Sci‐Fi Story
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Humans Live on EARTH?! | HFY Sci‐Fi Story
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Only The So Called Angry Humans Came To The Rescue | HFY Sci‐Fi Story
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NEVER Anger Humanity! | HFY Sci‐Fi Story
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The Day We Surrendered To The Humans | HFY Sci‐Fi Story
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The Day We Surrendered To The Humans | HFY Sci‐Fi Story
They Killed Every Human, But Then Earth's Arctic Chamber Super Soldiers Awoke | HFY Sci‐Fi Story
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They Killed Every Human, But Then Earth's Arctic Chamber Super Soldiers Awoke | HFY Sci‐Fi Story
They Terrorized the Galaxy, Until HUMANS Fought Back! | HFY Sci‐Fi Story
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They Terrorized the Galaxy, Until HUMANS Fought Back! | HFY Sci‐Fi Story
Trylar Empire Quickly Regrts Killing Human Girl! | HFY Sci‐Fi Story
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Trylar Empire Quickly Regrts Killing Human Girl! | HFY Sci‐Fi Story
When Aliens Regret Giving Humans Technology | HFY Sci‐Fi Story
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When Aliens Regret Giving Humans Technology | HFY Sci‐Fi Story
Why Humans Avoid War ? Aliens shocked Humans Rocked Part 2 | HFY Sci‐Fi Story
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Why Humans Avoid War ? Aliens shocked Humans Rocked Part 2 | HFY Sci‐Fi Story
Never ever Mess with a Human Sniper
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Never ever Mess with a Human Sniper
Only The Terrifying Humans Came To The Rescue
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Only The Terrifying Humans Came To The Rescue
1 Human Soldier vs 500,000 Aliens | HFY sci fi Story
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1 Human Soldier vs 500,000 Aliens | HFY sci fi Story
Alien Cry Tears of Joy When Humanity Saved Them | HFY sci fi Story
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Alien Cry Tears of Joy When Humanity Saved Them | HFY sci fi Story
Alien Princess Lost All Hope, Until Human Soldier Saved Her | HFY sci fi Story
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Alien Princess Lost All Hope, Until Human Soldier Saved Her | HFY sci fi Story
Aliens Don't Have the Human Book of Sun Tzus Art of War | HFY sci fi Story
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Aliens Don't Have the Human Book of Sun Tzus Art of War | HFY sci fi Story
Aliens Regret Everything After Humans Unleash Their Secret Weapon | HFY sci fi Story
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Aliens Regret Everything After Humans Unleash Their Secret Weapon | HFY sci fi Story
Earth's Toughest Student Astonished Classmates with Deathworld Tales | HFY sci fi Story
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Earth's Toughest Student Astonished Classmates with Deathworld Tales | HFY sci fi Story
Galactic Council Shocked: So THIS Is A Human Warship | HFY sci fi Story
zhlédnutí 363Před 19 hodinami
Galactic Council Shocked: So THIS Is A Human Warship | HFY sci fi Story

Komentáře

  • @mikewarfel7511
    @mikewarfel7511 Před 15 hodinami

    What has the "Barbie girl" face got to do with the story? Just cheap click bait marketing. It was a good story cheapened by pronunciation, silly sex orientated marketing, confusing story time line.

  • @guyvalentine7258
    @guyvalentine7258 Před 15 hodinami

    Believe it or not i thought this was if not the best, one of the best stories from this channel i've seen yet. Stories from this channel normally bounce all over the place repeat entire sections Word for Word and bring dead people back to life. Recently i haven't not even been trying to listen to these stories from this channel. I just pull up not interested and hit that. But i thought i'd give it a try. Not the greatest story i've ever listened to but certainly not the worst. Quite often the stories from this channel the i try to listen to i don't even make halfway through before i get so disgusted with them i can't stand it anymore and give it a thumbs down and go to something else.

  • @user-vh1jj5ww7t
    @user-vh1jj5ww7t Před 15 hodinami

    I like the store very much think you

  • @garryhopkins5454
    @garryhopkins5454 Před 15 hodinami

    I swear these stories are getting worse all the time. Like someone already said, I think AI wrote this story.

  • @SKnight1968
    @SKnight1968 Před 16 hodinami

    88

  • @patofficial5077
    @patofficial5077 Před 18 hodinami

    is this story AI generated or just the narration and thumbnail?

  • @colinbrooks6290
    @colinbrooks6290 Před 19 hodinami

    88 👍🫵🏻

  • @ritasielicki6617
    @ritasielicki6617 Před 20 hodinami

    Language

  • @raggarbergman
    @raggarbergman Před 21 hodinou

    When I hear packled I get the image of the not so smart race from Star Trek NG. 😅

  • @allen3458
    @allen3458 Před 22 hodinami

    Call in the John wick fleet

  • @daleraney9456
    @daleraney9456 Před 23 hodinami

    I swear this/these AI don't know the difference between a galaxy and the universe. The problems faced in these stories leave an impression that they should affect the universe instead of being confined to just one galaxy. According to all of these stories, one galaxy out of the whole universe is just jam packed with various lifeforms. If it is that packed with life, humans should have encountered other species long into the past. Unless the theories are true and other species consider humanity taboo.

  • @KaySan666
    @KaySan666 Před dnem

    Why the F is the captain of the ship leading a rescue party down to the planet in the middle of a space fight? His job is makeing sure that there'll be a ship to evacuate the people.

  • @Fallenone8128
    @Fallenone8128 Před dnem

    Next part please

  • @The78bluedevils
    @The78bluedevils Před dnem

    88

  • @thetwotones232
    @thetwotones232 Před dnem

    Why are all of your stories the humans the good guys and the ones being oppressed why not make the humans the villains for once might make a good story

  • @baskervillebee6097

    Bioluminesent liquor? 😵‍💫

  • @emmanuelvalencia9613

    DrTaco the great!

  • @FireCharger09
    @FireCharger09 Před dnem

    Interesting title doesn’t seem to have anything to do with the story

  • @davidalvarez6262
    @davidalvarez6262 Před dnem

    I like the story! They are great to listen to while I take my walks. Gets my mind of the days troubles, thank you

  • @rosadoco
    @rosadoco Před dnem

    Using resolve and determination as punctuation. Clickbait titles are pissing me off

  • @user-fs5fs2zw2h
    @user-fs5fs2zw2h Před dnem

    What happened to the bear?

  • @ednorton7715
    @ednorton7715 Před dnem

    Is it Jacks or Jax

  • @YerbaMated
    @YerbaMated Před dnem

    Ai make part 3 to get views.. lol

  • @kennethabagis8392
    @kennethabagis8392 Před dnem

    Very good story. 88

  • @soldierscotty1959
    @soldierscotty1959 Před dnem

    Another weak story! A dissapointment! No one gets hurt. No reperiseales for their actions! WEAK AF!

  • @soldierscotty1959
    @soldierscotty1959 Před dnem

    You had a great plot, and ruined it! Piss poor story!

  • @rickeyjohnson8476
    @rickeyjohnson8476 Před dnem

    AI crap again

  • @jasperj3759
    @jasperj3759 Před dnem

    To many star trek names

  • @jobobFU
    @jobobFU Před dnem

    Am I missing something?????? The shear carnage? What carnage? What happened between the council taking a break and this shear carnage? Why are they even talking about some action that was never covered? Did HFY Sci-Fi Guy forget a chapter? What are they discussing as if some action happened? Dude I normally love your story telling but this is making me go back over and over again and unless I had a stroke while watching this I some how missed the action makes me a bit mad.

  • @projectTyrasa
    @projectTyrasa Před dnem

    Jaysus Feckin Slow down the Closed captions that Sheit ain't even Tryin to keep up with the Voice gettin all outta sync repeatedly and rapidly.

  • @juergenwolf5476
    @juergenwolf5476 Před dnem

    this is a story , actually not a bad concept but the “Person” who wrote it has not much of a concept . Torture on the bridge , locations jumping , people fighting after they dies a traitor wants a meeting on a planet after he’s been under guard ………or maybe the 3 species have only a limited number of names ???

  • @papafrank7094
    @papafrank7094 Před dnem

    Stand up and don't automatically subscribe to the majority of these stories or watch the advertisers videos. Review of this publisher and this story: The repetition seems to be there just to increase the length of the 47 minute story. Over a full third (or perhaps more) is repetition. Poorly edited (if it was edited at all). I have noticed that in far too many of these AI stories that it seriously appears that someone just filled our a very short synopsis, clicked a button, generated the story, pushed it through a poor speech to text engine, generated the images that are barely story related, and then combined them. Then these stories seem to be uploaded without anyone checking the text generation or even listening to the story. I've been reading scifi since the mid 60s and always I am always on the hunt for good scifi with original storylines. I HATE to be so negative but this looks like just another way to push out a story to hopefully gain subscribers to get monetization turned on. For goodness sake, dont subscribe to these "publishers" to push out more of their lacklustre videos. There are multiple publishers doing this in the scifi genre. Possibly the majority are from one publisher. Ive never seen any of these publishers reply to the comments. Only 2 or so of these publishers make anything worth listening to. We can't call them creators because the AI is the creator of all of the content. Do yourself and this genre a favor. Don't subscribe unless the publisher makes a decent congruent story. So far, most of these AI channel's names start with HFY.

  • @steffannystad
    @steffannystad Před dnem

    I enjoyed the story. 77

  • @EngelinZivilBO
    @EngelinZivilBO Před dnem

    Well, lets see what ai has for us today 😂

  • @igoddard1
    @igoddard1 Před dnem

    I think AI not only reads this, it writes it too. The story repeats within itself, it rips off names and terms from a variety of other books and texts, Sci-fi and others. Like the Trill for example. It can only be a matter of time before these get removed on copyright grounds. The first couiple I listened to seemed ok but they are repetitive and actually get worse.

  • @loupiscanis9449
    @loupiscanis9449 Před dnem

    Thank you , ❤ 🐺Loupis Canis .

  • @PinkowskiIngo
    @PinkowskiIngo Před dnem

    What kind of crippled AI from Fiver has written this story?? I can write a better story, sitting on the toilet singing. Waste of my time

  • @marysmith-ps7uj
    @marysmith-ps7uj Před dnem

    Please stop with the sleeping giant phrase. That's only for 12/7/41.

  • @marysmith-ps7uj
    @marysmith-ps7uj Před dnem

    At some point, the humans needed to post their side of the narrative to the galaxy. And then send a message to all. F**k around and find out. Either come on peace to make friends, or leave in pieces!😮😮

  • @marysmith-ps7uj
    @marysmith-ps7uj Před dnem

    What planet's people would let all of their people be obliterated? Good grief, guys, look up and watch the Stargate series. Learn to write essays which will help you with structure. This thing was all over the place! 😮

  • @dochunnicutt6980
    @dochunnicutt6980 Před dnem

    Too many commercials I got sick of it and stopped listening

  • @naynaya3565
    @naynaya3565 Před dnem

    What AI is Used for this

  • @elessar60
    @elessar60 Před dnem

    This story makes no sense and it keeps repeating phrases. I thought the super soldiers were the super weapon.

    • @dserrao7188
      @dserrao7188 Před 23 hodinami

      Not only that, but why would the krill soldiers NOT fire as soon as they started coming out? Why not just shoot them all even before they opened? I couldn’t agree more, this story doesn’t make sense

  • @armandovanhaaren9823

    This story makes no sense 😕

  • @Larry065
    @Larry065 Před dnem

    88😊

  • @electrocresent
    @electrocresent Před dnem

    Oh for f**ks sake, I'm not even a third of the way in and I've heard about how the 'humans sent transport up, latched on, fought their way to the engines and blew the up' three f**king times. Please please edit or proof what you up load

  • @davidcaskey3665
    @davidcaskey3665 Před dnem

    Good story but I think if you would have tried really hard you could have squeezed a few more commercials in

  • @BradleyEvans-qd2fh
    @BradleyEvans-qd2fh Před 2 dny

    88

  • @rosadoco
    @rosadoco Před 2 dny

    Holy shi😊t! Part 2 anywhere? Much better narration, easier to follow.

  • @tygrr69
    @tygrr69 Před 2 dny

    88 Too overboard, Your protagonist is way too perfect. Fine for early teens, but too unbelievable for adult readers.