they seem to say the ships shape in a lot of these being aerodynamic or faster but the shape of a ship in space has nothing to do with travel speeds. It wouldn't matter if it was a square or a cigar shape it would move at the same speed. It's the engine that matters.
Yes, theoretically this is true, but cosmoc dust and micrometeors will hit frontal, and with the involved speeds will gain devastating kinetic inpact energies. An aerodynamic vessel only needs heavy armor shielding mainly around its nose section.
Wow. Please learn about "Mary-Sue". Your story is so full of them that you repeat the same vignette over and over until that's all there is. Just a note" I seriously wanted to read the entire story, I made it to 12:26 before I gave up. That said, you had a lot of interesting elements, but it's formulaic and, frankly, clunky. If you REALLY want to learn to write, get a copy of "Beginnings, Middles, & Ends" by Nancy Kress.
So the Gorevac have already overwhelmed Mars. But humans have enough time to develop technology to defeat them? Did the invaders just stop then? Why did they not just keep pushing through? Also, the fixation of these stories on the flat plane of the solar system tends to get tiring. It exists in 3 dimensions. Why would they attack Mars first instead of just going for Earth directly?
Good thing totally alien computers were compatible with ours. Id like a pc based on something like this. A single solar system based war with capital ships and fighters and bases. Have the aliens invade a human star system and the humans do what they did here...fight back...reverse engineer alien tech.....go on missions both ground and space. Push the enemy back. A sequel would be about the humans traveling to the aliens solar system to take the war to their homeworld.
There exists no such thing as AI; this story is a perfect demonstration of the fact. I am more comfortable with naming it a Virtual Intelligence: VI. 🚀🏴☠️🎸
Trash level story. If you start retrofitting ships when the attack is already underway, you're F-ed, doubly so when you're trying to turn a freighter into a frigate. At that point, you're better off loading supplies and people and make a run for it in the hopes of seeding a new colony somewhere. Then the blinding of the sensors... interesting how they know where the sensor arrays even are on an alien ship. and OFC the hail mary last second save tech... while the enemy is in the star system... dude, your timelines make no sense anywhere, at all.
Its the same thing over and over again, theme, battle, odds etc. AND, all women it seems. What BS!!! I give this one a thumbs down!!!!!! Good Grief!!!!!!!
Another story using the "Template"
The “message” marches on
Not worth the time to listen to long enough to realize it's not worth the time to listen to.
First off, who the hell names an exploration vessel "Vindicator"?!
DEI at its finest, we know how this AI is set up
they seem to say the ships shape in a lot of these being aerodynamic or faster but the shape of a ship in space has nothing to do with travel speeds. It wouldn't matter if it was a square or a cigar shape it would move at the same speed. It's the engine that matters.
Exactly! Clearly written by an A.I An "Artificial Idiot", We successfully clone ourselves
Yes, theoretically this is true, but cosmoc dust and micrometeors will hit frontal, and with the involved speeds will gain devastating kinetic inpact energies. An aerodynamic vessel only needs heavy armor shielding mainly around its nose section.
She led the attack in darkness when the sun was switched off for the night!!!
One super-realistic point is that all of the military commanders are women, just exactly as one would expect.
Wow. Please learn about "Mary-Sue". Your story is so full of them that you repeat the same vignette over and over until that's all there is. Just a note" I seriously wanted to read the entire story, I made it to 12:26 before I gave up. That said, you had a lot of interesting elements, but it's formulaic and, frankly, clunky. If you REALLY want to learn to write, get a copy of "Beginnings, Middles, & Ends" by Nancy Kress.
Thank you I get it I won't waste my time❤
I stopped at 13:00
Yeah these AI channels just turn our whole species into the Mary Sue of species.
I made it to 15 minutes before Mary-Sue overcame me.
This story was most palpable. Especially each and every single turning point.
So the Gorevac have already overwhelmed Mars. But humans have enough time to develop technology to defeat them?
Did the invaders just stop then? Why did they not just keep pushing through?
Also, the fixation of these stories on the flat plane of the solar system tends to get tiring. It exists in 3 dimensions. Why would they attack Mars first instead of just going for Earth directly?
Good thing totally alien computers were compatible with ours. Id like a pc based on something like this. A single solar system based war with capital ships and fighters and bases. Have the aliens invade a human star system and the humans do what they did here...fight back...reverse engineer alien tech.....go on missions both ground and space. Push the enemy back. A sequel would be about the humans traveling to the aliens solar system to take the war to their homeworld.
Sure like to use the word "palpable" quite a bit.
That's quite palpable! The new drinking game!!! 🍻
4000 quatloo's the humans cannot be contained!
There exists no such thing as AI; this story is a perfect demonstration of the fact. I am more comfortable with naming it a Virtual Intelligence: VI.
🚀🏴☠️🎸
It started looking like independence day with the plots, didn't seem original
I hate these AI channels, it's like whack-a-mole trying to block these channels.
Independence Day?
My thoughts exactly
thats some serious case of poor writting , not the worst one I've seen but its still pretty bad.
Obviously written by some AI. I'll pass.
It is total drivel Glaring plot holes
Trash level story. If you start retrofitting ships when the attack is already underway, you're F-ed, doubly so when you're trying to turn a freighter into a frigate. At that point, you're better off loading supplies and people and make a run for it in the hopes of seeding a new colony somewhere.
Then the blinding of the sensors... interesting how they know where the sensor arrays even are on an alien ship.
and OFC the hail mary last second save tech... while the enemy is in the star system... dude, your timelines make no sense anywhere, at all.
Its the same thing over and over again, theme, battle, odds etc. AND, all women it seems. What BS!!! I give this one a thumbs down!!!!!! Good Grief!!!!!!!