Valley International Prep - "The Diameter Of A Bomb" & "Countdown To A School Shooting"

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  • čas přidán 7. 10. 2015
  • Get Lit - Words Ignite hosted the 4th Annual Classic Slam at the LATC & Wilshire Ebell…the largest youth classic poetry festival in the nation. Forty high school teams performed their finest classic & spoken word poetry. Valley International Prep took home the gold, Alhambra won the "Shorty" round, and Khamal from Cleveland was the top-scoring poet! Join the #LiteraryRiot at www.getlit.org!
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Komentáře • 79

  • @LaurenLD0
    @LaurenLD0 Před 2 lety +246

    "If there isn't time to acknowledge a problem, there won't be time to fix it."
    PREACH

  • @addiee14
    @addiee14 Před rokem +108

    "It's a beautiful day."
    Chills.

  • @andrewdoesguard
    @andrewdoesguard Před 11 měsíci +30

    Let’s count together 1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8-9-10-11-12-13-14-15
    Why are we counting? Because that’s the amount of times my highschool went into lockdown in the span of 4 years!
    Let’s count again
    1-2-3-4-5-6-7
    What are we counting? THE AMOUNT OF PEOPLE MY SCHOOL COULDNT PROTECT.

  • @phoenixwing5133
    @phoenixwing5133 Před 6 lety +287

    I'm tempted to start a slam poem club at school now.

    • @reader_and_med_stud9940
      @reader_and_med_stud9940 Před 5 lety +17

      Please do it! I would have given anything to have one during my school days.

    • @sparrowwestlake7267
      @sparrowwestlake7267 Před 4 lety +5

      You should try!!

    • @brynnagrace-
      @brynnagrace- Před 2 lety +4

      It's cool if you did. It's okay if you didn't.

    • @xlawliipop
      @xlawliipop Před rokem +5

      I hope you did.
      And if not, that's okay. Write anyway. Reach out to the youth in your area with help from the community.
      Or just be the light you can be for yourself right now. 💖

    • @prince.of.mushrooms
      @prince.of.mushrooms Před rokem

      Do it.

  • @harpykrates
    @harpykrates Před 4 lety +175

    i’ve listened to this five times already and i get chills every time holy

  • @Alex-sv2bi
    @Alex-sv2bi Před 4 lety +91

    This hits hard for me. 6 weeks ago my school had a bomb shooting threat. I'm scared for my life everyday. I wish everyone could see this

  • @lindascoon4652
    @lindascoon4652 Před 7 lety +84

    I used to read the diameter of a bomb when I was young. I found it sad and the beauty of it laid in that sadness. its not the same when the voice is happy and disassociated and the words are sad.

  • @tuesdayafternoon13
    @tuesdayafternoon13 Před rokem +49

    I am so very proud of my daughter ❤️ excellent ladies just excellent can't wait to post every single one... BRAVOOOO!!!

    • @emily.toombs
      @emily.toombs Před rokem

      Is one of these amazing people your child? I saw a clip reposted in a reel and came to find the entire video. I have to say that I am absolutely gobsmacked. I truly believe that this is the best thing that I’ve ever seen come out of any HS performance.

  • @sienna4706
    @sienna4706 Před rokem +19

    1:02 is when their poem starts guys xxx

  • @myabarr
    @myabarr Před 5 lety +55

    the ending gave me chills

  • @emily.toombs
    @emily.toombs Před rokem +24

    This should be mandatory viewing for everyone and anyone who had anything to do with the American education system. Full stop.

  • @melv.1112
    @melv.1112 Před 8 lety +103

    That gave me chills.

  • @peterjakobsen4715
    @peterjakobsen4715 Před rokem +10

    This needs at least 342 million views....

  • @kassie5055
    @kassie5055 Před rokem +16

    Hits hard. I’ve been on lockdown 4 times this year one time with a shooter

  • @dawnc8224
    @dawnc8224 Před rokem +8

    This is insanely powerful. It moved me to tears.

  • @L0st_F10w3r_b0y
    @L0st_F10w3r_b0y Před 6 měsíci +2

    I am doing this poem for a (school) competition this year, simply because I’m so tired of adults not doing anything. I am scared for my own life at school because of the uprise in school shootings. It’s my worst fear. I have MULTIPLE plans for any place I could be during a shooting for how to get out. There is so much I could say, but I hope that one day I can feel ok going to school and not fearing that I will die that day. My prayers go to any and all survivors, victims, and loved ones of the victims of school shootings. Stay safe yall.

  • @heathervg52
    @heathervg52 Před 8 lety +53

    THIS IS MY FAVORITE POEM & RESPONSE EVER!

  • @faithjones1193
    @faithjones1193 Před 6 lety +23

    fuck this was immensely powerful and executed so well

  • @Limerant_Evangeline
    @Limerant_Evangeline Před rokem +5

    I’m thirteen.
    I’ve gone to the same, small, catholic school for the past eight years.
    We’ve gone under lockdown THREE times within those eight years…
    edit: Ninth year.

  • @Phinaslovelylife
    @Phinaslovelylife Před 5 lety +41

    I told my mom my fav colors are ink black and blood red and she said "That's scary" but no to me "it's beautiful"

  • @harrystyleslover2158
    @harrystyleslover2158 Před rokem +7

    i looked for this video for 45 minutes.

  • @SP4CERIO
    @SP4CERIO Před rokem +6

    Good morning South California! **Mashed up words**, Over-all, It’s a *beautiful day!*

  • @bookishgirlie...
    @bookishgirlie... Před rokem +8

    I'm going to say this at school at the end of the year

  • @nikkibabyblue2000
    @nikkibabyblue2000 Před rokem +9

    Wow amazing your words and emotion brought me to tears what a wonderful way to spread a word

  • @ajlabastida3553
    @ajlabastida3553 Před 6 lety +15

    Goosebumps.....

  • @jocabedvp5087
    @jocabedvp5087 Před rokem +5

    This gave me chill. 😢

  • @azucenapacheco9015
    @azucenapacheco9015 Před 8 lety +15

    still gives me chills

  • @oStuffx
    @oStuffx Před 2 lety +9

    Gah dam this shit is mind blowing and genius. Incredible.

  • @nathalyajoseph3364
    @nathalyajoseph3364 Před 5 lety +19

    Loved it and portrayed the process perfectly

  • @Julzvern-bf4cb
    @Julzvern-bf4cb Před rokem +3

    You ladies should go on AGT absolutely incredible you would win

  • @alianna8381
    @alianna8381 Před 8 lety +15

    I am speechless

  • @GreyAutumnLeaves
    @GreyAutumnLeaves Před 11 měsíci +5

    I’m scared of school shootings. It’s one of my biggest fears. Not only me dying, but all of my friends. Even if I was 100% safe I’d still be scared for my friends. I’m scared of texting the friends who’s numbers I have a getting no answer. I’m scared of seeing on the news, “This many children were killed, this many teachers were killed. Here’s who died:” and they all be someone I’m friends with, or that one kid I saw in the hall laughing with his friends, or that group of kids who would sing Burger King ads all the way to lunch, or that one acquaintance that gave me a pencil, or that one kid that sent me a death threat, or that one teacher that was an absolute female dog to me. I don’t want them to die. I don’t want anyone to die. I don’t want to go to the bathroom in the middle of class and be stuck in there- that’s why I hate going to the bathroom at school. Especially the bathroom in the main hall. It’s right outside of the lunchroom with two or three stalls, easy to check, not easy to run from. I don’t want to text my friends and family final goodbyes. I already know what I’d text to them. To my parents? Hi! I’m at lunch right now and I just wanted to tell you a few things. I’m sorry for all the things you had to put up with from me. Know that I love you so, so much. Thank you for being amazing parents to my sister and I. We are blessed to have you. :)
    To my friends that I have the numbers of? Hi. This is an awful situation we’re in and I just want to tell you guys that no matter any disagreements or issues we have, I love y’all to pieces. I wouldn’t be where I am now if it wasn’t for y’all.
    To my best friend? Hi, (name). If I don’t make it, I want you to know that you have me a lot of hope and I hope I did the same for you. I love you, and I want you to live a full, happy life if I’m gone. (Then I’d confess my feelings for her and apologize for never telling her all this time even though she had admitted hers)
    I’d also text my cousins to tell my dad’s side of the family I love them and my grandma to tell my mom’s side of the family I love them. We shouldn’t have to think about these things. We shouldn’t have to be scared to go to the bathroom. We shouldn’t look around the room for the nearest defense items and escape routes if the one we had all practiced is blocked, just in case it happens. We shouldn’t make jokes about American public schools with the song Pumped Up Kicks in the background, the video saying, “American public schools vibing to this song:” The nearby high school had a shooting threat a few months ago. My friend’s sister goes there along with many other innocent kids. This world is cruel and I’m freaking sick of it.

  • @dawnmiller-yacovetta1061

    Goosebumps. Breaks my heart.

  • @carmenthebookworm2393
    @carmenthebookworm2393 Před 4 lety +8

    Literal. Chills.

  • @MrEGudde
    @MrEGudde Před rokem +1

    Wow. This gave me chills! Great Job!

  • @kylernotkiller
    @kylernotkiller Před rokem +1

    I love this video. More teachers should understand this.

  • @daughterofhades6806
    @daughterofhades6806 Před 10 měsíci

    Literal chills!

  • @Lovekaylapls11
    @Lovekaylapls11 Před rokem +4

    Oh my god this is so good

  • @jillianmedin
    @jillianmedin Před 2 lety +3

    Oh wow

  • @user-bj1cn8qh2h
    @user-bj1cn8qh2h Před 4 lety +9

    1:00

  • @am_small
    @am_small Před rokem +9

    can anyone transcribe what's being said at 1:09 please i gotta know

    • @zoebell9839
      @zoebell9839 Před rokem

      Right

    • @L0st_F10w3r_b0y
      @L0st_F10w3r_b0y Před 6 měsíci

      I am doing this poem for my UIL competition this year, it’s all mashed up words but what their all saying is
      “Good morning Southern California! It’s hot in LA, temperatures reaching almost 90, overall, it’s a beautiful day”

  • @madelinewalls8549
    @madelinewalls8549 Před rokem +1

    Wow

  • @drivingatruck3270
    @drivingatruck3270 Před rokem +1

    holy shit

  • @j_g9724
    @j_g9724 Před rokem

    #afkgang

  • @67ChevyImpala
    @67ChevyImpala Před rokem +1

    I showed this to my mom and she asked me what the point of this is

    • @shandihuddleston2167
      @shandihuddleston2167 Před rokem +5

      That is the point right there...

    • @ahooveryourmom
      @ahooveryourmom Před rokem +3

      Don’t stop showing this to people it’s powerful and people even the uniformed and ignorant need to learn and be educated.

  • @ethanwheathin4457
    @ethanwheathin4457 Před 6 lety +4

    OOOoooOOf

  • @mikek3951
    @mikek3951 Před rokem +1

    And now I know what’s wrong with youth

    • @wobbles1149
      @wobbles1149 Před rokem

      ?

    • @JeshuaSquirrel
      @JeshuaSquirrel Před rokem

      We are trying to prepare students for the 21st century using a 19th century education model.

    • @SupermarketSam374
      @SupermarketSam374 Před 10 měsíci +1

      What? That we actually speak up about what happens? Sorry that you prefer to stay thinking about unicorns and rainbows but we actually like to prepare for real life. I’m shaking from this comment. What exactly is wrong with expressing things in a non violent way? I guess hiding our feelings until we blow up is the only way you’ve learned to cope, but we’re learning from your generations f ups.

    • @mikek3951
      @mikek3951 Před 10 měsíci

      @@SupermarketSam374
      Thank you for the laugh.
      More funny on who you blame.
      And by your comment I’m guessing your young and think elders ruined your world but maybe in a few years you’ll understand my comment.
      I could of agreed with them.
      I could of said it feeling sad for them.
      Sometimes I forget that people here can be 5 years old or 100 and vast majority read comments and see them
      For what they think they mean and not what they are.

    • @SupermarketSam374
      @SupermarketSam374 Před 9 měsíci

      @@mikek3951 I’m sorry, what about “I understand what’s wrong with youth” is positive, or not mean. This is a video of young women doing amazing poetry, and you had to bring negativity into it. Tell me one way your comment is positive. Because as far as I see it, this is unacceptable.

  • @akida2765
    @akida2765 Před rokem

    Wtf is thid

    • @wobbles1149
      @wobbles1149 Před rokem +1

      Pretty self explanatory

    • @stingraii
      @stingraii Před rokem +1

      slam poetry

    • @akida2765
      @akida2765 Před rokem

      @@wobbles1149 sorry loud noises are hard to process

    • @JeshuaSquirrel
      @JeshuaSquirrel Před rokem +1

      ​@@akida2765 I understand. This is three students describing the psychological neglect and isolation many students face that lead to mental illness and, in some cases, to some students becoming shooters at the school.

    • @JeshuaSquirrel
      @JeshuaSquirrel Před rokem +1

      To help comprehension around the loud voices, there is a closed caption option on the video. That often helps me.

  • @LanesInsane
    @LanesInsane Před rokem

    Wow