How to Describe a Process Diagram [IELTS Writing Task 1 Band 9 Guide]
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In this video, I’m going to show you how to describe a process diagram in IELTS Writing Task 1. Here's the diagram used in this video: The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.
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0:00 Overview Paragraph
02:40 Details Paragraph 1
05:40 Details Paragraph 2
10:58 Introductory Paragraph
11:32 Summary
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The diagram displays the manufacturing process of sugar produced from sugarcane.
For sugar production, the process includes seven main stages like harvesting, crushing, purifying, evaporating, separating, and finally drying and cooling takes place. The final product produced is sugar.
Initially, the sugar canes are grown up to 12-18 months. Then, the harvesting is done. For the harvesting process, two methods can be used, it can be done manually or by a harvester. Then, the harvested canes are crushed through a crushing machine to extract the juice from the canes. Following this, the juice is filtered using a limestone filter. The juice is then condensed by using an evaporator where the juice turns into a syrup.
Finally, the syrup is moved across a centrifuge where the sugar crystals are separated from the syrup due to the high pressure produced by the centrifuge. Lastly, the sugar crystals are dried and cooled for the final product to be formed. Therefore, the dried sugar crystals are formed.
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The harvested canes are then crushed in a mill to extract the juice, which is later on purified using a limestone filter. Next, the purified juice is boiled in a evaporator to remove water, which concentrates it into a syrup.The syrup is then poured into a centrifuge where is cool and dry
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It is a linear process consisting of four main stages : farming, crusing,separating and drying
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That was very informative and helpful! Thanks a lot. But I have a question. I thought, after watching several videos of how to write task1, we are not allowed to add more information not provided in the picture, based on our own knowledge. For example, how do we know it separates by speed in the centrifugation step? Or in the evaporation part, how do we know it separates water? Are we allowed to express those ideas that are not directly supported by the pictures?
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The first step is to grow sugar cane and it takes about 12 to 18 months for it to mature. After it has fully grown, it is harvested either manually or mechanically. The manual method involves farmers removing the leaves first and then chopping the canes, while the mechanized method uses machine to cut the canes directly
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The given diagram details the process of producing sugar from sugar cane.
Overall, it is a linear process consisting of four main stages: farming, crushing, separating and drying.
The first step is to grow sugar cane and it takes 12 to 18 months for it to mature, which is the longest stage. After it has fully grown, it is harvested either manually or mechanically. The manual process involves farmers removing the leaves first and then chopping canes, while the mechanical process uses a specialized vehicle to cut canes directly.
Having been cut, the harvested canes are crushed to extract the juice, which later on is purified by using a limestone filter. Next, the purified juice is boiled in an evaporator to remove water, resulting in syrup. The syrup is then poured into a centrifuge where it is spun at a high speed to separate sugar crystals. The last stage is to dry and cool the crystals and the end product is sugar.
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good explaination mam. but it is mentioned that the leave s are removed first. but the fact is that the leaves are not removed. it is the way of harvesting sugarcanes. the root portions are left without cutting. the sprouts will grow again. and Also by using machines, it can be seen that the root portions are left withour removing it.
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Thank you so much for the explanation, great vídeo ! Could anyone tell me with another synonym for the word “ linear “ In the sentence it is a linear process ?
Why do u want another word?
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From what I know Linear process is any process which has a starting and an ending point
So you can say instead of Linear process
A direct Procedure
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Good lesson. There is another term that can be used instead of separating. Since the separating is one of the last steps and it can be used by anyone it is a good help, but "processing or extracting stage" will be probably more eloquent?
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