IELTS Task 2 Writing Band 9 Ultimate Guide 2024
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- čas přidán 9. 01. 2023
- Warning! You will get a low score when you write, “This essay will discuss…”. Learn the correct essay writing strategy for Task 2. To get more videos like this, use the code WRITE9, 10% discount here, www.aehelp.com/full-course/ Send your Task 2 essays for a free score estimate to writing@aehelp.com This video gives a clear introduction about IELTS marking for Task 2 essays and about the origin of IELTS English. When you understand the essay types, like persuasive writing, and the voices of the author, like 1st-person, and 3rd-person, you can confidently write a high-band essay your next IELTS exam. Each of the four marking criteria, Task Response, Coherence and Cohesion, Lexical Resource, and Grammatical Range and Accuracy are clearly discussed in this video; tips and strategies are provided for each of these to reach a band 9 level. The importance of advanced vocabulary is explained so candidates understand the words they need to focus on for good scores in their writing. All of this is clearly presented with a Band 6 essay which is corrected and upgraded to a Band 9 essay in real-time. Lots of tools and resources are provided for learners to enhance their writing skills for their upcoming IELTS exams in 2023 and after. Follow the instructions carefully and make sure to practice. Use the advice to help you comprehend the writing requirements. This lesson will help with fluent, natural, and complex language for your English writing. Enjoy. Follow us now on Instagram @ielts_aehelp
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Well, it is not hard to find an IELTS essay start with the template: "This paper will discuss ... , My writing will discuss ..." which is an absolutely terrible opening for a beginning.Not many examiners talks about this problem.
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Can you give me a better way to start the essay?
How about this essay will elaborate…?
@@lavanyaattili1995 With that opening u can get a band less than band 5.In fact, we need a good paraphrasing of the question rather than rewriting it.This only makes your become worse :(
I appeared for my exam a few days back. The writing paper was a nightmare for me the last 2 times I attempted. I had scored 6 and 6.5 consecutively. My morale was low. I required above 7. I happened to watch this video just once before the exam, and I scored a 7.5 with the tips you enilightened me with. Thank you.
excuse me, can you explain the sentence is " but decrease consumption HELPS " means ( in conclusion )
@@PhongLe-rx1yfit means people don't have to stop eating fast food for good, but they should simply eat less.( Fast food )
Tomorrow, I have a main exam. Could you please answer my question? Did you write an essay after watching this video ? Or just you watched it before sitting the exam ?
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Some teachers suggest that the way we write " r" is unacceptable if we write the curly way, please clarify.
Hi. I have another recomendations. at 18:10
“studies show” instead of “studies shows” to match the plural subject.
Use “the high number” instead of “the higher numbers” to avoid comparison and confusion.
Use “is” instead of “are” to match the singular subject “the high number”.
Use “exercising” instead of “excercises” to correct the spelling and the verb form.
Add a comma after “junk food” to separate the two independent clauses.
Is that correct?
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Thank you so much Sir! The way you explained each section, is very understandable and it has helped me a lot in the writing exam that happened a couple of days ago.
You are most welcome
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15:00 > Another problem to keep a balance in healthy food and some exercise can improve the body, not just to look good, but also to be healthy. Working out at the gym is tough to lose overweight, but they can do other activities instead of doing that, such as biking, hiking and doing exercises that can assist to develop the body. Some of the vitamins that a body needs, especially vitamin D.
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Now everything makes sense. Some mistakes mentioned were the advice of my language teachers at school 😅
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The video helped me! Thank you!
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Thank you soooo much
In body paragraph, the word after studies should be "show", because studies is a plural
This is amazing
This is a classic example of level 2 in HKDSE.
After correction,that’s much better.
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Wow, bunch of brilliant tips, thank you so my
True..
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thanks sir for a free content about writing that was more than just brilliant ,please continue to post more such related videos.Have a good rest of your day
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Thank you for the wonderful teaching. You've gained a new subscriber. Sir, I want to ask in the aspect of writing with the voices. I didn't fully understand the third person voices. Is it something like, "This essay will"?
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That's amazing, Congratulations!
It would be helpful if you could provide some insights as I have my exam next week. Also, any resources would be help.
Thanks in advance!
Always enjoyed writing just for the heck of it, not because I was taking some exam.
Also scored 115 on the TOEFL FYI.
Thank you
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I'm taking the CB IELTS test tomorrow, Inshallah this video will help me get a 7 in the writing part
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Thank you so much!! I didn’t practice writing at all and around an hour before my exam I went through this video and was able to score really well. Thank you once again ✨
what was your score?
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Thanks for all your great points but in fact the country that you are taking the exam really matters. In my country, Iran, unfortunately many examiners pay attention to academic and complex words. For example the band 6.0 that you read in the video will get 5.0 or even less in Iran
I think there should be an option that if we have any doubt in the correction of our writing, we can report it to IELTS center in UK and they recorrect the paper themselves.
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Congratulations
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Wish me luck sir 🤞🏼 for getting high band scores ✨
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In how many days you will get your ilets score? And when you can repeat your ilets?
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@@mdxnk124 we'll get our predictive score within 9-10 days but the actual score will get within 13-14 days and we can write ielts exam whenever we want if we have the money.
Hopefull
Did you get your score or not yet ? mine is next month and I'm a little nervous
Really appreciate! How about the LR criteria, sir? It seems that the vocabulary you used in the band 9 version does not reach to C1, C2 levels. So, is it necessary to add high-level and fancy vocabulary while we are writing?
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Glad it was helpful!
Thank you so much.
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thank u, sir! it was really understandable, but I could not image, that current essay really had band 6...
when I started to read, I thought that it had band 5 as maximum..
I really admire the portion Of Information You put in a single video and the way you described every minute of it, feels really connecting and understandable.
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I’ve got exam tomorrow, wish me luck!
What an explanation sir thank you so much
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Sir plz make more video like this .
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Amazing
I learnt a lot of knowledge from you during learning the IELTS thank you bro😄👍
I had no idea about the first, second and third person's voice which I have learned from this video. thanks a world.
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This video is helpful
thanks
Me always read and listen this classes improve my writting task one
Very good explanation,am learning a lot,thank you
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15:03 a second major problem. Thats good idea teacher thank you😅
when I look at the final writing there are some change of words or add than you correction writing such as : By before doing in the end of first body paragraph, at 2 paragraph correction to keep and final to keeping
‘ in my opinion, the main reason is that people do not have time to prepare a healthy meal for themselves mostly due to their busy work life , and fast foods are an easy option for them. Another reason is that , people prefer to sit on the sofa and watch TV all day long instead of going to gym and doing some exercises to improve their physical fitness levels.’ Is that correct?
But using "People" may be used to give an example of the people and "I" can be used for giving personal example or in both views when they say "Discuss both views and give your opinion" which technically means we have to discuss ideas of the third person's and give or own opinion hence "people and I"
Thank you Adrian
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Thank you for these details sir
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Just want to clarify. You've said that we can't combine first and third person voice, but in the essay we analyzed here is exactly this combination of voices.
And another question, is it necessary to write in the first person voice if in the essay question includes "To what extend do YOU agree?"
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Thank you sir, I've my exam tomorrow...hoping for the best!
what was your band score?
Great
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