Let's Rewrite The New Prophecy
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- čas přidán 20. 06. 2024
- I have a love/hate relationship with New Prophecy, mostly because I feel like it didn't live up to it's potential. Let's try changing some things and see how we like it!
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I like the idea of shifting around the point of view in each of the books between the various travelling cats. It opens up a lot of opportunity to explore the characters more and make their relationships the center of the narrative. (I mean, their relationships besides just Feathertail and Crowpaw's thing and Stormfur's unsubtle crush on Squirrelpaw.) It was interesting to get a point of view outside of Thunderclan from Stormfur in Moonrise and the books really could have benefited from making that point of view swapping a formula instead of a one-off to make Feathertail's death more tragisad. I also like your point about saving Brambleclaw until the end strengthening the will-he-won't-he aspect of his legacy with Tigerstar.
And can I just say that using Mothwing's point of view in Moonrise instead of Leafpools is INSPIRED? One of the biggest tragedies about New Prophecy is how underdeveloped and underwhelming Hawkfrost is as a villain. None of the central characters have anything to do with him directly until the second to last book, and then he doesn't actually do anything antagonistic until the very end. He's a criminal waste of a good character, and fleshing him out by making the storyline where he manipulates Mothwing's destiny for his own gain the focus of Moonrise instead of a subplot Leafpool learns about secondhand would go a long way towards making his threat feel more palpable.
shinkoryu14
When u wanna state your opinion but accidentally comment the entire declaration of Independence 😂😂
Bailey Lawson lol
This video was published 2 days ago yet somehow it says your response was typed 5 days ago? Something seems fishy on this island!
shinkoryu14 yes!! Why do hawkfrost as a villain when all we know about him (besides the fact that he’s a tom and is in riverclan and mothwing’s brother) is that he’s Tigerstar’s son and shares his ambition. Oh yeah, and his mother’s a rogue cat. Don’t really see anything major there.
blackrose5856 well he did train in the dark forest without remorse and try to kill Firestar...
I want to read these books instead
Me to.It would be much beter then what we got.And we get ride of most of the walking.
Saaaame
same *:P*
Moonkitti 200th like--
Jk. Nobody cares.
I agree.
Moonkitti Yes!! Plus your amazing! Love you!
I love how Brambleclaw becomes close to Hawkfrost and says that it's because they're half brothers, but he doesn't try becoming close to his half sister Mothwing. XD
but mothwing has cooties
Aww shoot. I forgot about that! XD
Has Brambleclaw ever even talked to her in the books lool.
Mothwing is still out here trying to live her best life and neither Bramblestar nor Tawnypelt will even deign to talk to her smh
ChaoticSushii what about Tawnypelt?
how do we pay you to make this and pretend this is how it always went
Any and all donations can be made directly to my paypal account. ;)
TennelleFlowers SAY NO MORE,,,
colacatinthehat ha I saw you I think in one of moon kitties videos lol
i love your stuff man
TennelleFlowers **furiously donates all of my 35 cents to my name**
Brambleclaw’s “the clans gotta stick together” attitude you had him voice at the end also makes for a good setup for his super edition, too. It makes that mindset seem more like an idea he held this whole time rather than a “I have to behave EXACTLY like Firestar” robot.
I feel like the "I have to behave exactly like Firestar" added a layer of depth to his character, even before he became leader. Because he's often feared for being Tigerstar's son, him looking up to the leader of his Clan and the chosen one makes sense. If he's more like Firestar, maybe the others will like him.
And when he becomes leader, Firestar has set ridiculously high standards that he now feels like he must follow. I feel like this is a nice conflict that adds depth to him.
was just about to write a comment saying the same thing!! it's super good and makes it clear what he feels the journey's true purpose was *and* it makes the group's journey feel worthwhile for the reader, even if it's a bittersweet ending! love it.
how dare you make me feel genuinely emotional over this fanfiction rewrite of warrior cats..
“notice how beautiful mothwing is” yeahhh that’s pretty much all leafpool does. im surprised she had a crush on crowfeather and not mothwing lol
leafpaw'e entire character was pretty much just
*notices ur beauty*
*_OwO WHATS THIS??_*
Eh probably because the Erins were too chicken to make a lesbian couple/love interest at that time /half-sarcastic
Leafpaw probably scaredy cat and thought mothwing might reject her because… you know, they both medicine cat
W e s h i p a l w a y s
The New The New Prophecy
XD
Lol
The New New Prophecy
Your Tawnypelt design can step on me
Haku Yowane
Same with her Squirrelflight and Feathertail design lol.
It's such a pretty, inspired design. A good mix of Tigerstar's dark tabby and Goldenflower's colors instead of being the black and orange tortoiseshell the book art has her as (not like we already have tons of those).
Leme join ya
She long
Honestly same
Am I the only one who just wants to see a re-written *New Prophecy* arc/ *Power of Three* and *Omen of the Stars* done by Tenelle?
Also, loving those character designs. I never pictured Stormfur to look so much like Graystripe (for some reason) and ugh, they look so good
Pupville101
Same tho
Same
PLZ
Eh, I think Power of Three should stay the same for the most part. That series is more of a gigantic character piece over an actual large expansive story. I would say maybe give more hints to the whole Ashfur betrayal and Hollyleaf turning out to be the murderer twist a little better, but for the most part, I wouldn’t change a lot. Omen of the Stars I would do a little more of Tennele’s ideas because holy cow, I love a lot of them, and most of it wouldn’t require too much reworking. Just, well, a more cohesive story and theme. That’s at least my take on it. I’m also the guy who’s sort of fine with the books in their current state, but if I could, that’s probably what I would do.
Let her rewrite them
I loved your take on Sunset ! The idea of Brambleclaw being all mysterious for the arc and leaving the audience wondering if he’s ~evil~ or not, then opening the book to find out he’s been training in the dark forest is just. So good.
Gosh yes gimme that Mothwing POV
In general, these changes make a lot of sense to me! It feels like the story could benefit a lot from these, although I have one question... how would the relationship between Brambleclaw and Hawkfrost be established? If neither of them have a book before Sunset, how will Brambleclaw's choice to kill his brother impact the reader? Even if there'd be scenes that show them as good friends from other characters' perspective I don't think that would still be enough.
(Although this is a thing that the actual books could have put more emphasis on as well...)
I think the development of their relationship could be handled well in one book, at least get it to the point where it has a similar emotional impact as the actual books, if not even stronger, bc the main focus of the book would be about their relationship.
Oh, alright! If you'd be going about it that way would that mean you'd have to change the prologue of Hawkfrost and Tigerstar discussing the Brambleclaw problem or would the reader already know that Hawkfrost is bad by now from Moonrise and/or Starlight?
Maybe that *would be* a bit more interesting than just slapping the truth about Hawkfrost in the reader's face in the prologue...
Remember that since it's Brambleclaw only, he gets twice the screen time to invest the reader in his and Hawkfrost's relationship
Ya mean word time? Cause it's a book? I'll leave
It's too late, Snuffles Fluffles. You have been banished from this realm.
I would have really liked to know what made Crowpaw so grumpy, especially before Feathertail’s death.
BreezyBramble I think it's was the lost of his father Deadfoot maybe?
his grumpiness possibly came from depression, and not wanting people to be close to him, out of fear of losing them like Feathertail or anger that they might leave him
Crowfeather(paw) didn't like other cats because he was the immature teen who wanted to be right
I thought thats just who he is
stxrmy But what made him that way?
"Let's Rewrite The Stars"
This is why I watched this whole video...xd
"Say that the world could be ours, tonight"
Katie The Equestrian
I just nearly choked on my water. Literally.
That was a great referenceeee xD
that was beutiful
Yes. THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUU XD
Tenelle please rewrite these books we need you
Im so happy you mention Dawn, It was my favorite out of the new prophecy, and seeing it from shadowclans perspective would be so interesting as the two legs have a direct destruction relating to their camp.
the rewrites would also make crowfeather almost killing himself have a stronger impact on the reader.
Tawnypelt could even witness Shrewpaw getting hit by the car while chasing the pheasant, this could lead to a shadowclan cat catching the pheasant and the moral delema of what would be normal border skirmish material (Clan A chasing prey into Clan B) have more weight to it, as it signifies the end of the mundane day to day life.
Also any reasons to show more of blackstar is a plus in my books.
I am a fan of moral ambiguity and your proposed rewrite has so many opportunities for it.
Galaxy Mew I personally love Sunset. Dawn is second best though cause I LOVED CODY!!!
this was the only book I liked
I’m freakin reading dawn
Juniper Storm omg Cody lol
Dudeee that piece you wrote made me so emotional the sad thing is this arc had not a single moment that made me feel the way your written piece made me feel, its beautiful i wish they made book rewrites as they do remakes of movies i would buy the heck out of the book if it was written by you or someone with the same sense of character and story telling as you
Honestly The New Prophecy is by amongst the most forgettable arcs in the Warriors series, but honestly if it were to be written this way... It might have surpassed The Prophecy Begins in terms of quality and establishment of the characters and the overall environment of the clans.
Honestly I wish the Erins had switched the point of views in these books so badly, and that they would've done it in the arcs past TNP, if the writing did allow it after this established the other clans a bit. Part of why I liked many of the Super Editions (ESPECIALLY Crookedstar's Promise and Tallstar's Revenge) was that it gave insight into the other clans, how they lived their lives as well as these characters that we came to know from an outsider's perspective.
DoqeQueen So true, after reading The Power of -science- Three, I forgot how the land was discovered
It's my favorite actually.
it’s not forgettable, I honestly loved it
This sounds fantastic, Tenelle! I really like the idea of reading POVs from all four clans to really emphasize the theme of unity. It wouldn't make sense to tell most of the story of Thunderclan (although, in my heart, they're still my favorite, lol.) I never considered Crowfeather playing a larger part in this story, but laid out like that, I think I would have liked that better too. And I know you didn't want to make too many major changes here, but honestly, I'm always up for hearing other people's idea for RADICAL plot rewrites and head canons. :D Plus that end scene made me unexpectedly emotional. Great job on the script! I'm excited to see more!
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I wish it had POVs from each clan. It didn’t make sense to me when it had Brambleclaw’s and Squirrelflight’s POV and then one book about Stormfur and a chapter of Feathertail.
Also I’m on The Fourth Apprentice and there hasn’t been any POV from another clan other than ThunderClan inside their camp which I find disappointing.
I completely agree with all of your points! The changes are so minor when it comes to the plot, but you explained how a simple shift in perspective could have brought so much more to this series so thoroughly and so well. Making Crowpaw the first book's POV was unexpected, but it makes so much sense, and I agree with you about how billing this book as the first in a new set means that it should be able to better stand alone from the first arc. I think I would have been able to accept the second half of this arc WAY better if it had been written this way.
You made me write a fanfic, Tennelle. I hope you're happy.
I know this comment is old, but could you provide a link to the fanfic? I’m interested.
Really the only big thing that happens with Tawnypelt is the rat bite, I personally wish that Crowpaw and Tawnypelt were the big characters so that we could get to know them both better, because we only know Tawnypelt as the sister of Brambleclaw, and the daughter of Tigerstar and Goldenflower who went to Shadowclan as an apprentice, and then Crowpaw is just plain a new character,Thunderclan has gotten plenty of books so it would be nice to have some cats from other clans as the main characters, I agree with everything you say and I totally agree with the Mothwing and Leafpool part!
Don’t worry. Crowfeather is going to get his own super edition soon. I forgot what it was called though
I agree with you - personally, I wished that the New Prophecy was predominantly Tawnypelt's story (and now I've been swayed to also have wished it closely following Crowpaw/feather, too.) It would have been nice to flesh out her decisions from the previous series, maybe if she regretted leaving her mother and brother, but also what her relationship with her father was like, since that never really seems to come up.
Ivypool Its Crowfeathers Trial.
There is going to be a Tawnypelt novella, but it’s probably not about the new prophecy.
I always loved Feathertail in these books when I was younger, probably because Silverstream was one of my favorite characters and I was projecting my love of her on to Feathertail. Rereading these books I saw how bland she actually is. I would’ve loved to see more time devoted to her so her death means more.
Honestly if she had any POV chapters in Moonrise that would be absolutely fantastic!
Katrina Karaoke She did! There were a few from her point of view.. more so near the end
I also latched on to Feathertail, mostly because I thought her name was pretty. Cant remember anything about her though other than her death.
I liked the idea of switching perspectives, but at one point I had taken a break and read the chapter where Stormfur starts talking about his subtle crush on Squirrelpaw, I thought I was still in Brambleclaw's perspective for a while until he saw them together talking and I realised, becoming super sad.They were a cute ship for a while and I actually prefered them to Ash x Squirrel, even if they weren't developed.
AAA!! These ideas were a really good way to make tNP more dynamic. One of the most frustrating things about the series is that the journeying cats don't ever truly become friends. Shifting the PoVs would do wonders, if for nothing else to make the Brambleclaw-centric books more enjoyable. I really, really enjoy your idea of having Mothwing's PoV - it's so good. I wanted Hawkfrost's villainy to have more far-reaching consequences than it did, and seeing Mothwing (and RiverClan) dealing with her manipulative brother would make Leafpool learning of his actions have a bit more punch.
Another cool plot point with Tawnypelt could be seeing how she feels about her half siblings in RiverClan, and her internal struggles with where she truly belongs. ThunderClan, or ShadowClan? Also, we could see HER point of view when she saw Brambleclaw and Hawkfrost training in the Dark Forest with Tigerstar.
Heck, maybe even develop her relationship with Mothwing, which in the books is practicaly non-existent.
I agree with you on the switching up of PoV. The only reason why people really love ThunderClan, is because the main Clan written about is ThunderClan. We don’t need the super editions to get the other Clans, we need ARCS and BOOKS about the other Clans. I expected The New Prophecy to be about one of the other Clans, but no. By the end of The Darkest Hour, I was getting really bored of ThunderClan. I wanted to know about the other Clans and how they function during the seasons, and what they do when the monsters start destroying the forest. It gets really boring hearing about the same Clan forever and ever.
Agreed
Wow! This would change how we see all of the characters so much, but not change the story line so much! I think if the Erin's did this instead, we all would of been more pleased with this arc. I can say that this arc as my least favorite, it was really boring with mainly Brambleclaw's P.O.V! I've always wanted to see more RiverClan P.O.V, I feel like it needs more involvement in this arc and POW. Maybe it's just me? I don't like to count Leafpool's countless thoughts and trips there, because they were always for Mothwing. But anyways, I think this arc would be way more interesting if it was like this! Great job!
"At least they still had each other"
*Power of Three comes along*
*Me sobbing in the distance*
Ah yes, _Starflight_ My FAVOURITE Wings of Warriors book
TENNELLE I JUST NOTICED YOUR AMAZING EYEBROWS.
Carlotta Coppola same!
There are BOOTIFUL, amiright? (Why am I like this...)
Carlotta Coppola Very Bootiful.
I know, right.
I think the different clan points of view would have been fantastic. For the first arc, it was fine, because it was ONE cat's story, but this arc is a story about ALL of the clans, getting some perspective from them would have been refreshing.
leafpool has 4 points in warriors. camera, cinderpelt, forbidden relationship, and medicine cat.
It’s hard to believe it took until Vision of Shadows for a POV in another clan to be a thing.
Unfortunately that’s probably the best part of the new arc.
They did show us Flametail in OotS.
Oh truetruetrue
Still though - wish he'd been a more up-front character.
I just saw you give Stormfur a MUSTACHE so he Mustache you a question
inhaleeeee- I liked that too much
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Brambleclaw being left for the last POV is just SUCH a good idea? Really builds up the suspense much better. Also agreed that their friendships should have been stronger and stayed solid longer!
Not me rewatching this for the fifth time-
I thought, by the title, you were gonna change everything but I absolutely LOVE what you changed. It puts more relatable scenes and characters in the series that’s the most hated/disliked by most of the fans of Warriors. Thank you for giving an alternate story about this series :3
If I was given the chance to change the New Prophecy, I probably would have changed the PoV per book while making some romances (i.e. CrowLeaf and LeafMoth and possibly even BrambleSquirrel) more realistic, like maybe when Crowfeather proposes to run away, Leafpool is caught in a loop, thinking about how Mothwing would react to Leafpool leaving with Crowfeather, and maybe Crowfeather wants to get away because he knows that Nightcloud likes him and is trying to become mates with him, because we all know that their relationship is already falling apart by the second book of PoT. Maybe Breezepelt could even have a PoV book in Omen of the Stars, a book just to himself and, even though he is a major character in that arc already, maybe his book could be about his parents constantly fighting or lashing out at eachother and how Breezepelt was introduced to the Dark Forest. Anyways, I kinda got side tracked but yea. :Y
I’d l o v e if Crowpaw was the lead character! If only.. ;-;
TAWNY SMILED AT SQUILF. WE HAVE A SHIP. A NEW (non)CANNON SHIP.
Better than BrambleSquirrel ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
The four addressing hawk and leaf together and possibly helping eachother gives me life.
I gave up on New Prophecy due to the bullcrap it does, so this adaptation would've been much better to my brain's train of thought. Also I LOVE THESE DESIGNS, SQUIRRELFLIGHT IS SO CUTE ^0^
Stormfur , paladin of the grey lion
I see someone else noticed the paladin symbol 😏
these are really, really great adjustments! now we just need someone to do all the dirty work in writing it..
I might work something out!
Not it!
I volunteer. I just gotta finish rewriting The Prophecies Begin first..
I would totally do it! Mainly because Crowpaw/feather is my absolute favorite character. I also really like Tawnypelt, and would love to play around with her perspective. Honestly, the only character out of the six that never really intrigue me was Stormfur, so it would be fun to try to view things from his perspective as well. I know this is not a popular belief, but this arc has actually been my favorite so far. I think the reason why is because we at least get to hear more about the other clans. My least favorite is the first actually, because it’s so Thunderclan-centric. I absolutely love writing, especially fanfiction, so if I could get permission to do this, I would absolutely love it. 😊
20:50, I just love it. I don't know why, but Tennelle accidentally shipping Squirrelflight and Tawnypelt in her rewrite, makes me happy on a spiritual level.
Brambleclaw: wowie I'd love to become closer to my brother hawkfrost
Also Brambleclaw: Mothwing?? Idk her
Tawny pelt has the best cheekbones I swear they are perfect.
This is incredible! Would you ever consider actually writing like "fanfictions" of Warrior Cats? I got goosebumps all over my skin form your ending!
So so talented!
Being someone who read The New Prophecy (accidentally, of course) before any other series, I know that this would have been a far less confusing series to stumble into randomly in that bookstore.
I want a series flipping between the clans so bad. I'd love if it was written this way
GOD I CAN'T DESCRIBE HOW MUCH I WISH THIS WAS ACTUALLY HOW IT WENT.
Also I absolutely love the ending with you reading out how you thought the ending to the series would go after the changes
How do we rewrite the stars? Say this whole arc could be ours.
Let’s rewrite the part where Brambleclaw is terrible to Squirrelflight then just treats her better in the next book because the writers wanted Ashfur to look bad :)
“HAHA yeah right.” -Everyone
I know it's a fantasy book with cats that have a religion however I found it bizarre that a mountain lion appears despite the series being set in England did it escape a zoo or something?
StarTheAngel And in the Fourth Apprentice there are beavers. Seriusly, where are we again?
Beavers are actually was native to England however they was hunted to extinction since then people have started reintroduce them into the wild especially in Scotland it makes more sense.
Dominika Jaskulska I can’t remember precisely, but didn’t it say something about the Twolegs using the Beavers to make the dam? I might be wrong, but I just assumed they imported them or something. 🤷🏼♂️
Dominika Jaskulska we have beavers
Add to that the fact that the cats have stories about lions, tigers and leopards... dang, the zookeepers in the area really need to be more careful!
I feel like this way, you could actually understand the friendship between them. I don’t see that much of a friendship just acquaintanceship
The way you draw Tawnypelt looks very similar to your character, I just noticed.
Swiftclaw
Holy [B]rap, you're right.
The New Prophecy: 70% Traveling, 20% settling, 10% Something Important/Interesting actually happens
Adds Tennelle's edits:
The New Prophecy Rewritten: 100% Greatness
*sits down w a bag of popcorn* aw yissss
I hope you got rid of the Leafpool & Crowfeather plot. That’s all I really want in life.
Same here
don’t we all want that in life
She can keep it as long as she addresses that crowfeather does it as a rebound girl and leafpool did it to make mothwing jealous
saaaaaaameeeeeee
Well,Graystripe x Silverstream and Leafpool x Crowfeather were pretty good,but lionpaw xheatherpaw was when it got boring,but at least had juice because of their break-up and,eventually,hate for each other.However, Dovepaw and tigerpaw was HORRIBLE.
What a treat this was to wake up to this morning! I was enjoying this nice meaty review with my coffee as I got some work done.
I love your take at the end too! Thanks for that bonus round!
I realized after listening to this that what Starclan asked these cats to do involved a pretty big sacrifice. They saved their clans but at the price of their own personal heartbreak and emotional struggles. They know the sweet taste of inter-clan friendship but ultimately have to give it up again. The ultimate goal was to save everyone but in the process they had to lose a little piece of themselves. That would be a fun theme to explore in the series too I imagine.
A bit like Frodo having to lose the Shire to save it.
Yes
Let’s do it
Let’s (basically) re-write warriors history
Let's rewrite the stars.
Lovely Tigress say that it ended differently
White Flags Fly kind of I was trying to be silly but I do agree with tenelle
Omg I wanna read /this/ version of the books so much with that taste you gave of us of the ending!! ❤️😭
You should get a group of writers to help rewrite the books! Theres many good writers who would agree and help!
I'm not going to lie, I used to think that these books were nearly perfect
then I watched this video, and I now realize
this is the way it needs to be
This is a really in-depth rewrite theory! I would love to read this if it ever came out.
Combine this and North Flower's Redesign of the covers and we have God Tier books.
MAN IF I HAD EXPERIENCE OR MOTIVATION I WOULD TOTALLY FOLLOW EVERYTHING YOU SAID AND MAKE UNOFFICIAL REMAKES OF THE NEW PROPHECY SERIES (with your credit to the ideas of course lol)
I LOVE THESE IDEAS/CHANGES/ANALYSISES (is that a word) SO MUCH TENNELLE YOU ARE A GIFT AAAAA
I agree completely. I don't like how thunderclan is always the "eyes" that we see the warrior world through. And this change would definitely make me love the arc more. Thank you for making this. And your art is great, as usual. (= Have a good day, Tennelle.
The New Prophecy executes a lot of themes, one large one being unity. But, a lot of these themes aren’t executed well.
But I still like the second series. It’s just...... okay. ^^
Hmm your right, despite sunning rocks ;)
I LOVE a lot of the point you made in this video, I really think writing the books this way could have given the arc a boost
I agree wholeheartedly with all of this and seriously wish the books had gone this way
Can we get a rewrite of this series? I want to read this fanfic please lol. Sorry Erin’s, Tennelle’s rewrite is canon now
That ending you wrote for Sunset is PERFECT. Can you just rewrite all of warriors? Please? 😂
I love this! I really like the idea of reading more pov's of cats from clans besides thunderclan. i also want to see crowfeather, and that's coming up in crowfeather's trial. =)
I really like how each of the six have a pov for their own thoughts and opinions
The New Prophecy was my first ever book and honestly I agree with how Crowpaw should have been the main character. I got some spoilers when I actually read the Prophesies Begin because of what I read from Bramblecalws POV and I thought the protagonists change every book like in Wings of Fire. I was so disappointed when Crowpaw wasn't the main character for Dawn
This video made me realize I completely forgot about Windclan’s civil war during The New Prophecy. It also made me realize how forgettable this arc past the road trip section was.
I also must say I thoroughly enjoy your speaking and speedpaints! I'd love to see more of these types of videos, maybe even readings of the books with speedpaints? It's super peaceful and cool!
I want your version to be made into a TV series :) the ending was soo good and emotional!
Dawn originally being the ending to the series as a whole before the unexpected commission of 3 more books makes a lot of sense in retrospect
Ah yes, starflight the best warrior cats book, we have dargon drama and cat drama.
I loved this video! The speed drawings were a nice touch and your opinions were so interesting, please do more of these
I love to see more videos like this from you! It gives a fresher perspective for the books. Also, the version of the poster with the clouds hanging above them looks so cooler :D
Can you do a Power of Three version? As much as I love Jae-Bae and Hollyleaf, it needs to change
Mitzi Hope she does. While it’s my favorite of the arcs, I do think the big “Ashfur betrayal” could have been way better established. Plus, as shocking as the whole “Hollyleaf was the murderer” twist was, it has very little setup. Honestly, that’s really it for me. I’d probably have a done a similar “each book from a certain character’s POV” thing, because it also would have allowed for characters like Lionblaze to not come off for most people as the “boring” one of the Three.
It happened
Imma tell my kids this was The New Prophecy
I love your designs SO much!!! Especially Tawnypelt!
I need one for every series! :0 this was fantastic!
This version is canon, and no one can tell me otherwise.
I Really want to read these.. books..
(The edited versions)
I would definitely have loved povs from Tawnypelt and Crowpaw/feather, because I love their characters and they are different (if you get) from some other characters, for example Brambleclaw. I adore your ideas for this and you explained everything so well. And the drawing you did at the end was stunning! Amazing job, Tennelle
I appreciate that other people have wanted to rewrite this too. I rewrote the ending after I finished the series, because as the books were coming out, I was so excited for how I thought it was gonna end! But, as you said, it just didn't live up to it's potential to set up a strong (also, /interesting/) world for the next few series...so I ended it myself. I like a lot of your changes and the idea of changing more than just the ending!
Love warrios cat love....... 💜💛
Always found the dislike against the 2nd arc odd as it was one of my favourites. The destruction of the forest and change of the Clan dynamics was, in my opinion some of the most tense and darkest moments in the series.
Then I remembered that Books 4-6 exist. God damn did the main cats (Squirrel/Bramble/Leaf/Hawk/Crow) become annoying, borderline flanderised versions of their original selves.
I love your feathertail and stormfur designs! And these changes would be amazing!
OML- that ending bit sent chills down my spine! I seriously want you to write these now! I know you probably never will die to copyright and time, but this is seriously so good. Another well make video Tenelle
AND HERE WE HAVE THE NEW MEMBER OF EREN HUNTER
*Squels* new Tennelle video!
(Cinderpelt)
“Every word she spoke tore into Leafpool heart like a badgers fangs”
**FORESHADOWING**
Was this a line from the books? Love it!
Okay, i love these points but your cat and background are awesome. Love how you make this video