I'm Not Ready - 72hr Swiftpaw PMV M.A.P [COMPLETE]
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- čas přidán 13. 06. 2018
- Edit: I changed the thumbnail to make it fit the color-scheme better, hope that's okay with everyone!
IT'S HERE!!
I ran into some issues with the editing but it's finally here! I added some things to make the MAP flow better, hopefully it's alright! Editing this took 3 days haha, I hope I didn't miss anything!
Thank you SO MUCH everyone who participated and showed support during the making of this! Go and subscribe to everyone in this, they're all fantastic!
I've had this MAP in mind for a year, I'm so happy to finally see it all done! I hope you'll enjoy it!
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❤ Part 26: fluffylovey / fluffylovey
❤ Part 27 (OUTRO): Sagutoyas / sagutoyas
Also here's the script for anyone who's interested: docs.google.com/document/d/1t...
MUSIC: The Weight Of Us - Sanders Bohlke
• Sanders Bohlke - The W...
OUTRO MUSIC: Night On The Mountain • Video
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I changed the thumbnail to make it fit the color-scheme better, hope that's okay with everyone!
I literally can’t remember what the old one looked like and it’s BUGGING ME
Sagutoyas that's fine ! I was a little confused at first tho !
WolfSword87
I'm pretty sure the background was changed from lots of blue colors to lighter colors.
Its Soo AMAZING CREATION!
Its a masterpiece
i though my vision change ._.
"I don't know when the end came for Swiftpaw. I only remember him fighting like all of LionClan. That's how I will always remember him."
-Brightheart (Secrets of the Clans)
Brightheart was always next to her friend
I was reading this at the end of the video, thanks for making me cri
*sniff* I'm not crying u are
Seasons Aj that part made me cry. I love the books.
Seasons Aj that part made me cry. I love the books.
Wow, Swiftpaw isn’t ready, but breezepelt is ready as he’ll ever be
Why doesn't this comment have more likes
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This comment deserves to be published on the news
Christ
Im Not Ready And Ready As ill Ever Be. Both Awesome Maps..
*the fact that SwiftPaw tried to use the move LongTail taught him against the dogs broke me heart along side with LongTail visiting his apprentice’s grave*
why do you type the names wrong like that
@@turtle150 its not wrong, just different :/
Yo why your pfp so scary 😢
stolen
@@jupitercore it is wrong lool they don't type it like that in the books, also i never originally said it was wrong
whatever your like ends in, is the warrior you are.
1. Brackenfur
2. Sleekwhisker
3. Darktail
4. Bramblestar
5. Mapleshade
6. Tree
7. Jayfeather
8. Ivypool
9. Lionblaze
10. Rowanstar
K. Twigbranch
(So. This has kinda gotten confusing. I had to add something in a while ago, and it was after it had gotten 1k likes, so I added a K for Twigbranch. It just had gotten more confusing cause after you hit the K's you would always be Twigbranch. So I made this edit to explain things. If you only have one number an K e.g. 1K then you'd be Twigbranch, but if you have two numbers and a K e.g. 1.2k then you'd be the number after the point. So if it was at 1.2k I would be Sleekwhisker)
so close to my girl mapleshade but i had to be bRaMbLeStAr like wtf
Tree ;-;
I’m jaybae yay
@@thehedges100 YEEE JAYBAE.
Sadly i got his immortal bro ;-;
not really sad. but still
Whelp apparently I'm Darktail
When you realize that if Swiftpaw lived, he would have been Bramblestar's older brother :0
@Zyreeme :00000000
OH MY GOS-
*cries in rip Swiftpaw*
Oh
My
God
HECK YEA
I know I’m late but if Swiftpaw lived it would have changed the whole plot
Think about it.
If Swiftpaw lived he would be able to warn the clan about how dangerous the dogs where because brightheart did not remember much, I do like the idea of him being named Swiftclaw; for his bravery and method with the dogs. Yes, He would have been Bramblestars older brother but think of that. What if Swiftpaw was a great warrior and was even thought of being made deputy! If Swiftpaw lived he could have even been the next leader after Firestar.
But he didn’t and this is how the story is, and honestly I think it’s better this way.
Just my opinion :T
oh my god. the last part always breaks me.
the artist captured Swiftpaw's remorse over Brightheart's injury and shame, although the cats could not see him. he bent his head, to guilty to look at his deputy. god.
5 months late, but your comment hurt me worse than the video
DAMMIT I WAS ALREADY CRYING THIS JUST MADE ME CRY HARDER AGGHHH
Why do I always cry over these damn cats
Yes. It's one of the few map parts that legitimately makes me wanna cry.
Oh yea I
Me cry, me share to fren.., fren cry. But all is BOOK, me cry 'bout BOOK STORY. I am sad, R.I.P Swiftpaw :
When Swiftpaw became an apprentice, his mentor Longtail taught him a move.
The move helped him in the RiverClan battle for Sunningrocks.
The move helped him all his life.
But it didn't help when he needed it most.
r/im14andthisisdeep but like literally deep
So true 🥲
*crying*
omg i might tear up 💔
Yes 😔
04:53, this part made me sad, because it was Swiftpaw imagining ripping the dogs to shreds, when really it was the shock from powerful jaws crunching his frail body. He wishes he was able to, when his eyes go white, it's not from power entering his body, it's just the shock of the situation sinking in onto him. So, he fabricates a scenario where he manages to beat up the dogs, but, of course, that didn't happen, for me that's the saddest part of this MAP, life cruelly being ripped away from Swiftpaw.
isnt actually fully white. it has one point in both eyes in the top, but yeah, you're right
It’s not really shock, just fear until the dog actually bites down on his back. Also he definitely did rip some of them up because there’s no way for the dog to grab his back when he’s pinned like that, and brightpaw later remarked that he fought like all of Lion clan
These... MONSTERS... IF IT WASN'T FOR FIREHEART AND BLUESTAR, THE WHOLE FOREST WOULD BE DEAD... MANIACS... MURDERS...
Animators when the 72 hours mark is up:
“IM NOT READY”
MápleDawn WiłdCraft comments never get near 5k likes unless they are from a popular creator
@@nothingfordarkness not true
Star Struck where’s your proof bud
Damn I had completely forgotten I had commented this
Canis ! n o i c e
i really do believe that swiftpaw looked at longtail like a father figure
Their relationship was so sweet, their bond was so strong. Poor longtail, he was devastated when Swift died.
Longtail was his half brother, making Goldenfower actually Longtail’s step mom, which explains why she helped him so much when he went blind.
Goldenfower and Longtail might have actually bonded over swiftpaw’s death, since they were both very close to him
But swiftpaw and longtail are brothers
That ligit almost made me cry.
Big bro tho
The part when Fireheart bought Cloudkit to the camp, and Swiftpaw looked to Longtail to see his reaction amd copy him was so sweet
I know he wanted to please his mentor
frrr
Swiftpaw never really had a dad figure so i think he was a lot closer to longtail than you think, since his dad Patchpelt didnt really care.
Also, patchpelt had Graystripe and graystripes half bro is Darkstripe
Swiftpaw is related to graystripe which means his blood is still with us!
Love dis map ❤🔥
Longtail is also Swiftpaw's half brother
I imagine Swiftpaw, Longtail, Tawnykit, and Bramblekit all sharing a close relationship before his death.
Wait a damn minute.....willowpelt is Graystripes mother and Patch pelt is Willowpelts brother....
SWEET HOME ALABAMA
@@backbiterr I always loved that little mistake. They have since corrected it though XD
I wasn't bc patchpelt didn't care I think it's bc patchpelt was an elder at the time so he couldn't show a dad figure cause it would probably Eghaust him
Imagine all the people digging up the forest and finding a bunch of cat skeletons in the ground
Lel that is what I was thinking
Yes
Just a huge graveyard at fourtrees 😂
that'd be hecken terrifing
Scary
This MAP made me realize how close Longtail and Swiftpaw were and how terribly grief-stricken Longtail was when his apprentice died. Swiftpaw, you will never be forgotten.
And thats why we will predict Longtail dies from depression
Pink Lemonade sorry
*but no*
*he dies from a tree*
Shakthi Sivaikugan we know that
Pink Lemonade sorry read it out of context
weren't they like... half brothers or something?
I think the most important thing to remember about Longtail is that he most likely was frustrated that Fireheart wasn't trying harder to make swiftpaw a warrior. It's hard for firestar and Longtail to understand the other better but in a dangerous path I know he meant well.
It sent a massive pain through me to realize that the person who hosted this is an actual nightmare, I loved this animation and would watch it over and over again.
cry harder
@@humanbeeing4780 so your rewarding them for grooming a minor? 💀
Wait what? Context?
@@reagandark353 The person who hosted the map groomed someone..
@@LumiZdoeZstuffZ You mean Sagutoyas?? When did that happen?
I like to think Swiftpaw was the one who led Longtail to Starclan and that when Swiftpaw died, Longtail and Goldenflower became like best friends from grieving over her son and his apprentice. Longtail and Swiftpaw's relationship is something I would have loved to read more about in the first arc and later on when Brightheart had kits she told her kits about Swiftpaw and how brave he was. Like Snowbush and Dewnose are all about being as great as him. And when Bluestar died, she sought out Swiftpaw and apologized for ignoring his skills.
@Karamia_ Wolfgirl_21 your right. on certain parts it was as if I was having a flash back from what happened both before and after his death. When I saw the thumbnail I clicked on it immediately. Swiftpaws death must have or really did devastate a lot of readers. the fact that his death caused bluestar to doubt starclan even more and it was probably really close to the time where he would become a warrior didn't stop me from crying even more than I did after watching this amv.(neither did the music)
Pastel_Psycho _Galaxy_Girl HECK.YES
@Karamia isn't pErFeCt UwU They are cousins
@@nix.i
*sweet home alabama*
@@nix.i *Alabama 100*
THIS WAS NOT THE ENDING SWIFTPAW DESERVED, BUT THE MAP SURE AS HELL DID IT JUSTICE.
Definitely
Me: Don't cry don't cry
two seconds later
TV: Flood warning
xD
4 years later and this map has me sobbing not only cause this song fits them so well but because of the absolute detestation you can see in Swiftpaws eyes in the last scene when he has to leave his love behind😭😭
*if they weren't cousins*
Don’t get me wrong they would be good together but like there related lol
I just realized....
After the Great Journey, think of all the cats that were left behind.....
All those bodies under someone’s feet...
Paw prints covered.....
Blood from loyal warriors forgotten and seeped into the dirt....
I realized this only when I saw the end
AprilSeal 44 I like to think that when the took the Great Journey, the spirits and Starclan followed them, despite the physical history being left behind.
AprilSeal 44 at least they’re spirits followed the clans
They followed them along in Starclan
This has always made me sad
They were also digging around a lot the churn up the ground, imagine how many cat bones and bodies they found
did anyone notice how Swiftpaw tried to use the same backfeet technique Longtail taught him on the dogs? did anyone else cry when they noticed this too??? ;;;
Ravensie yea
Yes ;_;
Ravensie yEs I cri evritiem
i started crying when swift saw that there were more dogs then he thought. and then i cried like a freakin baby when he died, and his spirit was saying goodbye to bright
Ravensie omg thanks now that I seen it I'm crying 😭
3 years later and this map still brings me to tears. It’s beautifully animated and amazingly executed. All of the talented creators that contributed to this masterpiece did amazing work, and it’s great to see where some of have from to what they make now!
The last few scenes literally make sob everytime because I remember how reading this in the book just torn my heart out 😭
When he used the move that long tail taught him my heart died. Ahhh it’s so sweet! I love this map!
dont you dare be nostalgic +cries+
What got me was not when he used it on another cat, he tried using it on the dogs too
Computer Dragon Ikrrrrrr so sad! He was so desperate T^T
I cries
Cried*
This is so sad. The one tactic he uses to defend himself from being pinned that Longtail taught him works all his life... but them, when he tries one last time against a huge enemy it doesn’t mark, u can see him frantically trying to push the dog off, but it didn’t work!
o m g-
Bruh
Yeah, I kinda give the Erins a 2/10 rating on this book.
Swiftboi was my fav.
this broke my heart the most UUUUUUGH IT HURTS
Oh fuck tears go back
It's been like 3 years since this map came out and I've loved it ever since.
Years ago, when I read the books and went up to swiftpaw's death and brightheart's injury, I was devastated. Swiftpaw should've lived longer. I've been rereading the books this year and I still get so upset when swiftpaw dies.
Love you Swiftpaw 🥺💕
lol it’s 5 years now
of all the PMVs and MAPs I have watched in my many years as a warrior fan, This one makes me cry every single time. Such an underrated character. The way you captured him is so priceless.
I FINALLY UNDERSTAND
NOT ONLY IS LONGTAIL SWIFTPAW'S MENTOR
BUT HE'S ALSO HIS HALF-BROTHER
GOD, WHY HAS IT TAKEN ME THIS LONG??!
**pretends I knew that**
Yeah yeah.. uhhh
Holy shit really that’s awesome
@@kappa3667 and sad...
LONG??!
tail
AlphaDragon smh-
at 5:20, when Fireheart saw Brightpaws remains, I strongly wish that Fireheart and the patrol could see Swiftpaw standing over her body as he did in this. Now, that would've caused me to cry, for sure. Imagine this;
**Cloudtail yowled as he stared in horror, ''Fireheart!'' Fireheart turned to face Cloudtail, his eyes clouded in pain and loss for the ThunderClan apprentice, Swiftpaw. ''It's Brightpaw! She's alive!'' He reported, staring at her body in dismay. Fireheart rushed over to look, half of the patrol following, the other half staring dully at Swiftpaw's body. Fireheart felt his heart break in half as he stared at Brightpaw's remains. Her face was torn, exposing peach, fresh skin on her left side of her face. And laying over her body, was a young, shining apprentice tom. The crying tom was instantly recognised as Swiftpaw. Not just Swiftpaw, but the StarClan spirit of him. He seemingly glared into Fireheart's soul, before wincing, and fading away. A tear was seen rolling down Brightpaw's flank. Fireheart, half shook and half confused, called over his patrol instantly. ''Sandstorm, go get Cinderpelt!'' Fireheart ordered...**
.. Now this would have been amazing to read. This is now canon, in my books.
I disagree, Starclans untouchableness was a large part imo of what made the early series better. You also have to think about where it'd go storywise from there.
Since this MAP is however, looking at Swiftpaw the most. Therefore, maybe he was standing there, but they didn't see him because he's just a spirit.
Poor swift a
Do YoU wAnT uS tO cRy
nah seriously
I shed a tear
or two..
okay I cried qwq
That would've been a cool addition. You're a good writer.
This was an amazing map!!
If only it wasn't hosted by someone who me and many others used to look up to, until they broke our trust when the truth came out...
Sagutoyas,
Why?
Exactly...I screen recorded this in case her channel gets taken down
I'm confused... What happened?
@@Shadows_are_Calling This creator had an illegal relationship with a minor, long story short. It's very disappointing.
@@NellaJade That's terrible! Thanks for the explanation
They are not taking the channel down. Don’t screen record it since this was worked on by multiple different people, and that’s copying all thier work
God the last scene where Swiftpaw’s spirit is hovered over Brightpaw’s injured body made me cry so much, the way he looked away from Fireheart taking blame for Brightpaw’s injury…god my heart broke for Swiftpaw, he deserved so much better with his life.
STOPPT I can't see thru all these mf tears
I know I'm five months late. But this is the most beautiful thing I've ever seen.
I always hate when I see people saying "he's an overrated character" or "he was too impatient" because if I was in his shoes I would've done the same thing.
This shines a whole new light on swiftpaw. He is my favourite character and he suffered in the most terrible way.
The end bit where brightheart springs out of the tree hits me hard. She is angry. And she is very angry.
And I ugly cry every time I see the scene where Swift is over Bright's body and that look in his eyes just feels so genuine and heart wrenching ugh.
Thank you Sagutoyas, This is truly amazing
"If I was in his shoes I would've done the same thing" but he doesn't wear shoes... (ok that was a joke don't kill me aa)
He's my favourite too, and everytime i watch this I cry, every darn time.
This is an underrated comment.
To me, I don’t understand how he was too impatient as people said he is. Bluestar without a doubt would have never made him a warrior if she was still alive to this day. She sees him as a traitor, so only waiting would be a waste of time.
If it wasn’t for him, Fireheart would have never taken that much action about the dogs. Swiftpaw was there to show a sign that there was terribly something wrong near the clans.
I would too do something the same, this is your clan, you need to take action. Swiftpaw was upset and in fact, furious that a younger apprentice than him could become a warrior first, that was very unfair for all of the apprentices, not only Swiftpaw. So in my eyes, he did the right thing.
I agree, I agree, I agree. With every statement you made.
Swiftpaw didn't go to fight the dogs out of selfishness or pride, he was so angry and sad that we wasn't being noticed. When Cloudtail was made a warrior, even though Swiftpaw had more experience, it pushed him over the edge. He felt a need to prove himself. No matter or stupid or reckless. This M.A.P shows that perfectly.
omg thank you so much for liking this! 😱
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They thought it would be fine leave the alone.
+Jessica Lucas To be fair, no one had really encountered dogs that fearsome before. And Swiftpaw and Brightpaw were the size of full grown warriors. If it was a fox, they could've taken it on without a problem. Even when Firestar and the rest of the clan confronted it, Bluestar still died.
my kitten she-cat pepper has died recently by dog attack while she was out exploring with her mother cat, When we realize we couldn't find pepper among her siblings, we went out to find her, only to see her corpse on the ground, the grass painted with red. I couldn't stop the tears to overflow my eyes, We burried her eventually and after days of mourning and grief, i come back to this MAP and can't stop thinking of pepper, i'd like to think pepper was like swiftpaw, and i was the one who wasn't ready.
nevertheless i hope pepper is having fun in wherever she is, happy new year pepper, rest in peace kitty, Thank you for hosting and creating this MAP this really copes me with my kittens death :'D
edit: I have been in a mental spiraldown, So i had a white cat who gave birth to 5 kittens (pepper is one of them) The cat was named ming, we had 3 boys and two girls, The two girls were both a brown tabby with hazel eyes, Two whites whom both have separate tail lengths, one was straight like its mom and one was curled into a spring, one eye colored was yellow also like its mother and the other had heterochromia, and lastly a orange tabby cat with green eyes
pepper, copper, cloud, frost and rusty (yes i named rusty after firestar's kittypet name)
pepper died first from the dog attacks, Rusty gotten cat-napped, the mother died due to being crushed under a car, And recently today as im making this edit frost died, a victim to roadkill now im left with two kittens left who has their whole life ahead of them, My mental health was severly damaged from the deaths of my cats and with this song It heals my heart and mind knowing that at least they are okay and playing up on the clouds
Edit 2: Copper actually gave birth twice, the first batch.. sadly didn't make it.. their names was bella, oreo and pepper which were all greyish brown tabby she-cats and their only brother, Rusty the 2nd Which is orange tabbycat.
Copper's second batch all made it as I am typing this, although she ran away from home?? or went to the street.. and I don't know what happened but she never came back home. She left her second batch who was 2-3 days old, Me and my mum bottlefed them, we ordered goat milk for them and etc, We kept them nice and warm. Actually when they were learning to walk and stuff, during my daily routinely feeding of them, one of the kittens climbed on my back, using their claws and tried to drink milk from my hair (it was ticklish haha)
The batch has two grey-black cats, one has stripes and the other not, The grey striped cat is named brooks, the grey not striped cat is named boguard (boh-gard), both are tom cats. For the she-cats, we have two Orange tabbies, piper and ginger, piper was the runt of the group, she was skinny and tiny. She almost died from suffocation when her mother sat on her embryo sack when she was born.
Lastly we have a calico, Spleens. Named after a Sims 4 calico in graystillplayz channel, i thought it was funny. I was planning to name the others after organs too, Tonsils (Nickname Tony), Urethra (reth), Esophagus (Gus), Diaphragm (Dia) but mom wanted normal names i guess haha.
So that's all for now, might update this later on.
It’s likely been a while since your last edit but I hope the two remaining kittens are doing well- I believe you’re very strong for being able to carry on and care for those that are left behind after such horrible tragedies.
May Pepper and Swiftpaw run in starclan. Along with my old brave girl Blueberry.
jesus fuck stop letting your cats out and SPAY AND NEUTER YOUR CATS.
@@willfraud I would but our situation right now and especially the area, we don't really have vets, and My parents dont particularly want to bring the cats inside because my lil brother has asthma
Even though sag is a groomer.. I cant help but love their MAPs and art 😢
Love the art, not the person
I know :'(
Same, their Maps are so amazing. I just hope that they don’t delete their channel otherwise we would loose them along with the participants hard work
I feel like the Erins should make a super edition about SwiftPaw
Yesh
defintly (see i cna speLl) he was a swiftpaw (i am not helping the situstion)
Samantha Esquivel I feel like a novella would be better, I don't think he lived long enough to have a super edition
@@sun-zy1be yea true
YES
I’m not ready to let go of this channel that was so amazing. Freaking sagutoyas
Mate don’t worry about that stuff, just enjoy the vids!The content is still good, just drama outside of it.
@@doctorpan2581addressing a creator grooming and manipulating a minor as “drama” doesn’t sit right with me
@@feathered_turtle I’m not the best at wording, the incident that happened.
The first series will always hit hardest. It's so nostalgic. Even though I love the new books, I'll think back to the old series and how far the clans have come. Even though they're not real, things just felt so much simpler in the first series. I miss the original trio so much. (Why am I crying) I wish I could go back to the first time I read warrior cats, so I can experience the joy and simplicity all over again.
The story of swift paw is absolutely heart wrenching, but honestly all he wanted was to prove himself, to show that he was worth of becoming a thunderclan warrior. I honestly think that its kind of sad to see that Erin didn't have swiftpaws death affect the plot, I wanted to see longtail mourning alongside fire heart with no words to say only grief for the loss of the apprentice. I want to see bluestar feeling guilt for not giving him his name. I want to see brightheart crying out his name in her sleep, while cloud tail murmurers soft words of comfort to her. I want to see some swiftpaw affected moments in the books. And most of all I want to see a scene where both brightheart and swiftpaw reuniting in starclan with apologies from swiftpaw and a lick on the ear from brightheart telling him its alright. But sadly that wasn't what we got, and i'm sad because of it.
He totally affected the plot. He gave Firestar one of his lives and gave Brightheart the will to go on, inspired by his tenacity and bravery. He didn't affect the plot in a huge way, but every cat in the story made choices and did things that shaped the course of the Clans.
@@magicrainbowkitties1023 also if he didn't die then he probably would have become Brighthearts mate and Cloudtail and Brightheart would have never had whitewing, which in turn means they never would of had Dovewing
@@foxxlight That's also very true.
My of, brokenshadow : I wanted that too, but him joining Starclan made brightheart have more courage and be confident. Him joining starclan made fireheart become leader of thunderclan. If it weren't for the sad, sad death, so many cats wouldn't be blown, examples:whitewing,ivypool, dovewing, and so many others! We all will honour his death and mourn for him, but it made all of us a better cat. Our destiny's are clearer BECAUSE of swiftpaw.... I want you to know, everything will probably be made up for in a different book. Let's all honour him and make him smile, I'm sure he'll be proud!
Imma draw it, because I wish we got it
*Reads title*
"I'm not ready"
*Sees next video*
"Hurry Hurry"
*Sees down that video*
"Wait for it"
OK WHERE ARE YOU "Ready as i'll ever be" I CAN SMELL YOU
L M AO
I saw wait for it too lol
My next video was "Ready as Ill ever be" XD
My next up was Top 5 Worst Deaths of Farthing Wood. _I'm _*_not_*_ ready._
Mine was ready as I'll ever be xD
His expression and tears at the end, I can practically hear him dripping with guilt and misery, weakly muttering "All I wanted was to be a warrior..." as he lies on top of his friend's dying body.
Beautiful animations, Wonderful animators.
Only if we can change the person who hosted this Map from someone who isn’t a horrible disgusting human.
What did they do?
@@dragonlight123 It came to light that sagutoyas was a groomer and pedo….
@@dragonlight123they had an innopropriate relationship with a minor
@@clownabyss Not only that but they minipulated said minor into keeping it a secret until they were of age
oh shut up
I absolutely love how the move that Longtail taught Swiftpaw (the one where he pushes his opponent off of him with his hind legs) was repeatedly shown throughout the PMV as the story progressed and portrayed different ideas.
When Longtail first uses on him and he does it back to Longtail, it shows their bond as mentor/apprentice and how Swiftpaw looked up to him and learned a lot from him. This idea (their bond) is then portrayed when Longtail watches Fireheart bring Cloudkit with disgust, which causes Swiftpaw to then mirror his mentor's feelings.
Next, he uses it on an enemy cat, and it works. He's obviously proud of himself, and this also shows how much he's learned and how capable he is as a warrior. But then all he sees is Bluestar looking approvingly at Cloudpaw, which allows us to understand his frustrations as well as his actions later on.
Finally, he tries to use it on the dog who's attacking him. This move was used by Swiftpaw throughout the PMV and has worked every single time before. However, now, it's completely ineffective, and that immediately gives the audience a feeling of hopelessness. This hopeless feeling then is able to highlight how courageous and fearless Swiftpaw is as he's shown attacking with his claws right after, even though both he and the audience are fully aware of how desperate his situation is (and this desperation is reinforced by how Swiftpaw's move failed when it worked every single time before). Which then makes it even more sad when he's killed ;-;
Wow so this ended up a lot longer than I thought it'd be but I'm just so impressed at the thought put into the planning for this that I had to point it out. Planning aside, the art for this is also amazing and it's incredible how it was completed in only 72 hours!
Overall, I just love this so much. Brilliant job!
Sophie Lan noo this made me so sad
I know it's kind of a small thing but I really like how some parts really highlight how much Swiftpaw looked up to Longtail, like when he checks Longtails reaction with Cloudkit was brought to camp. Idk, it just makes me happy because he really did admire his mentor
I've watched this video so many times, and I realise that I actually love swiftpaw and I'm not sure why, I think he has become my favourite character
You're right, because he only hated cloudtail because longtail did and also because brightheart liked cloudtail more but that was later on, if longtail had liked cloudtail from the start I don't think swiftpaw would've hated cloudtail so much
Good map but what you did was unforgivable.
Fr, no one will forgive her
@@--moonwatcher-the-nightwing--agreed
This was so good and a way to remember what challenges swiftpaw went throught
I hate how Swiftpaw was made an apprentice even before Brackenfur and Cinderpelt, and Graystripe was hardly ever around to take care of his own apprentice. Longtail on the other hand seemed like a very good and smart cat to mentor Swiftpaw. I’m actually really tired of people who say they hate Swiftpaw because he went to find the dogs out of selfishness, which I really don’t see it that way. Swiftpaw had hardly been mentioned at all for the entire arc, and if you ignore the fact that he died, he did his Clan a favor by showing the danger of the creatures at Sunningrocks. It was Bluestar’s fault he never got to become a warrior, a bit of Fireheart's too, but n0p3. This MAP beautifully shows Swiftpaw’s struggles of trying to be noticed and to be a true member of ThunderClan. The artists portrayed the scenes perfectly, this is definitely one of my favorite projects I’ve ever seen, and I’m so happy it was finished so soon. Amazing job you guys!!
BreezyBramble oh my gosh yes, you are so right, you should be pinned
Swiftpaw was a hardworking cat that deserved to be made a warrior, but Bluestar didn't trust his mentor and therefore forbade him to be a warrior, along with all the other apprentices besides cloudpaw. Cloudpaw being made a warrior but not swiftpaw was unfair on bluestar's part, but I don't see why it's firehearts fault. Fireheart tried to convince Bluestar that swiftpaw and the other apprentices were trustworthy and deserved to be made warriors, but she refused to listen. Swiftpaw was desperate to prove himself, and he made a risky deduction that cost him his life and brightpaws eye. I agree that longtail was a good mentor, there's a scene in the books where he and fireheart have an argument. Longtail wants swiftpaw to be a warrior, since cloudtail recieved his name. Afterwards fireheart does try to convince Bluestar to no avail. It's one of the small details in the main story, a plot line in the background that should have recieved more attention to be honest
I agree with each and every part of this. However, What did Fireheart do wrong?
BreezyBramble I don't really see how it's firehearts fault. He can't make apprentices warriors himself
Mewzey Exactly!
he attack
he protect
but most importantly, he saves bright from dog pack
Well, he did save Brightpaw/ heart
he doggo snacc
Noooooo 😂 too depressing for this😂
yas
@@deadchannel4839 hE DOGGO SNACC NOOO
1:16 when they put their noses together it made a heart.
This made me so sad!! I remember when swiftpaw died in the books i thought it was so unfair he never got to be a warrior
Same
text from dad:
why are you crying so loud.?
ChorCol . . . S O B S
Text from dad:
Boys don’t have periods son
Xd
Holy Water same
Furry son: it's not crying it's moaning
I’m sad Swiftpaw didn’t make it, if he did I wanted him to be named Swiftclaw, for avoiding the dogs and telling the clan about their danger.
You should write an au
Or Swiftdog 😂😂😂 ok bad joke...
@@Delihlah knowing bluestar, probably something like that! (Or dogmind)
If he got an injury, like lost a limb or something, i would want his name to be changed to houndstrike and not some stupid name like lostface but if he did keep his suffix / didnt get injured i think his name would be swiftthunder or swiftlightning because he was able to escape the dogs
But i also like the swiftstrike au uvu
@@polarwolfo yeah, I think firestar would change his name to swiftcourge or houndstrike(I love that) after bluestar died and named him dogmind or something like that
Watching this over each year again and again, it really does put a hole in your heart. Swiftpaw was always one of my favourites, despite him not being a main character. He's loyal and determined, but the luck was never on his side. Bless him.
I am literally sobbing right now and I swiftpaw’s death didn’t even phase me much in the books
That can only mean one thing
Great animation and storytelling
5:24 The way Swiftpaw looked away from Fireheart in shame really hit my feels 😭
same fam....Same....
Did he?
For the q weigh of us
Honestly this part really affected Firestar
I mean he said it was his fault Swiftpaw is dead.
@@suchomimustenerensis technically it was bluestar’s fault because she didn’t make them warriors and swift paw wanted to prove himself-
A Dangerous Path was the most depressing book I read outside of high school
Bluestar went crazy, Swiftpaw died out of desperation to get his warrior status, Brightheart got disfigured, so many cats died including a deaf kit, the forest was under threat by dogs, and Tigerstar got away with everything
Yeah like what, I told all my friends about Snowkit.
I read A Dangerous Path in Elementary school.
Most depressing book I have ever read.
(besides Crookedstar's Promise.)
SaltyIsToxic thus the name “A Dangerous Path”
Dangerous path was in my opinion the most depressing book in the series, but in the super editions, it is Crookedstars Promise
Yep, I didn't feel the same as reading the other books.
One of the few things in media that has made me cry. I don't cry during movies or videos EVER. Except for this, it some how gets me every time...
The idea of Swifpaw's spirit protecting Brightpaw even after death is so precious.
In my opinion, Swiftpaw deserves this MAP. He fought like a warrior 😢 We all miss him
"All I know is that he fought like all of LionClan."-Brightpaw
(Now I go cry in the corner thank you)
I cried too dont worry
i think he shouldve lived! :(
@@tarryncox8909 He diserved to be honered in death he gave them something to fight for so he didn't die in vain i'm crying right now.
Honestly SwittPaw and BrightHeart are my favorite cats and everyone loves BlueStar even though she is the cause for his death she had a huge breakdown and now a very loyal apprentice was killed and another very loyal apprentice was badly disfigured and then BlueStar gave her the awful name of LostFace just because you are having a break down don't take it out on BrightHeart like come on BlueStar and she is so annoying even in StarClan she complains about how the spot she is sitting in is damp and everyone calls FireStar annoying BlueStar come on you can do better than that
I know I'm late but I'm actually crying. I've seen many depictions of the dog attack but this one made me very emotional. I had never doven deep into Swiftpaw's character as Brightheart was always the one who was talked about. Swiftpaw just wanted to be a good cat to his clan and to make Longtail proud. The use of colors and visuals is amazing, especially Swiftpaw using the moves Longtail taught him. I loved this map, be it both heartbreaking and beautiful.
What truly made my heart break was where Swiftpaw tried to use the move Longtail taught him to get the dog off him. LUNA YOURE A FREAKING LEGEND FOR ADDING THAT
SwiftPaw needs a super edition
I love every scene where Swiftpaw glances up at Longtail to decide how he should feel about situations. It's so cute, even if it's just a small detail.
God, I always tear up at the last part. You can just see that Swiftpaw's indirectly telling Fireheart: "I never wanted any of this to happen! Just save her from the mistakes that I've made."
Beautiful MAP, one of the emotionally strongest I've watched! I always thought that Swiftpaw was such an overlooked character, so thank you to all of these talented artists for making this! :)
Swiftpaw's death will always make me cry 😢
The main antagonist of my story, Aodhán (pronounced as ay-awn), is loosely based on Swiftpaw. It kinda serves as a memorial to him and how hard he fought for Brightpaw and to be a warrior. I hate to make him evil in a way, but the story I'm working on is too nostalgic for me to change.
1:51 This make me cry how Swift’Paw seen LongTail Has An Exemple And Tried To Be Liked Him..
duh they were mentor and apprentince
Pink Lemonade I know but I still find that cute-
Thats so cute
"I'm not ready, I'm not ready..."
The best thing in this MAp for me is that you're REALLY not ready for the ending. If i were non-Warriors viewer I would not expect what will happen to the protagonist. I mean AT ALL. Just like Swiftpaw I wouldn't expect to meet the death, and this moment here is just as terrible, as brilliant.
One of my favorite MAPs for now. Big thanks to all participants and hoster, you're a heroes!
eighthsun [HITA] 69 ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
I just wanted to point out that I found this right after watching the 'As ready as i'll ever be MAP...'
im not a warriors person but it didnt shock me
Listen, I’m not a warriors person, and I actually have no idea who these characters are, but I fucking c r i e d. I never cry. This is weird.
I didnt read the warrior cats books...I AM SHOOK
After, like the 10 time watching this, that "The End" really hit me hard. You don't usually say it's the end of the video, you would thank the viewers for watching and stuff like that. But this video was telling the story of Swiftpaw, his upbringing and his sacrificial death for his love. He died so early on and that The End was the scissors that cut his life off. This probably doesn't convey the feelings that hit me when I saw that The End, I'm sorry.
Wise word i understand
STOP ur hurting dis childs emotions
You conveyed yourself perfectly well.
These books are notorious for backstabbing you, and unfortanetely Swiftpaw was apart of it.
These books have unsettled me more than anything in my life, but that's what makes them good.
Instead of seing Swiftpaw's death as only a tragedy, we can extract something from it.
If these books teach you anything, it's that life is always unpredictable, and you have to enjoy it while also expecting the unexpected. (If that makes sense?)
I had to write a short story using figurative language (More creative ways to describe something, not really about similes and stuff.) In the end, I made the decision to kill the main character, the protagonist. She was killed by a long lost friend, who saw his duties over mercy.
Anyway, this reply is to a year old comment and it's getting long so I have nothing else to say.
For those who dont know, the person who hosted this map, sagutoyas, groomed a minor and was in a relationship with them.
shut the actual fuck up people can watch the video without shit like this
Boohoo I’m still gonna watch this shit
@@Pixelated_sodaa im glad SOMEBODY agrees
how many fucks do i give?? zero
@@Pixelated_sodaaHELP you ate
Also I love how longtail is just such a supportive mentor, I love him so much.. 😔💞✨
4:39 god damn that transition from fear/terrified/horror to anger and force of will is absolutely stunning.
The realization in swift paws eyes when he was laying over bright heart really got to me! Just the thought of swiftpaw knowing that he did this and the realization only getting to him after it’s to late is devastating
Alice The Horse when I say the look in swift paws eyes I just thought to my self of what he was thinking like him saying sorry with that look in his eyes of regret. Just Imagine him saying please look after her while I’m gone make waterfalls flow from my face 😭
I like the idea that Swiftpaw stayed to watch over Brightpaw until the others came, trusting them to take care of her. He knew he had made a mistake, and he was so sad to see who it had hurt. To him, I don't think him dying was the worst thing at the moment, it was the idea that Brightpaw might as well.
the end honestly hit hard. swiftpaw fought like a true warrior that is for sure.
i'm not crying, it is just something in my eye.
Oh, its Longtail sitting over his grave with....OH MY. NOO! Those are forget-me-nots, NOOOO!
Quiet Rage WHY DID YOU MAKE ME NOTICE THIS! I THOUGHT YOU WERE A NICE CZcamsR!! NOW IM CRYING AGAIN!!
Quiet Rage I think it real happen in the books. Since it been so many edited changes in the book Dangerous Path. Because the views from the parents said it was too dark.
King Namor 777
when were the changes made because I'm hoping I have the original
Quiet Rage NOO DONT IM GOING TO START SOBBING AGAIN
This comment and part destroyed me,i also love your vids thou.
This part, most of all, destroyed me. I had a cat, who looked a lot like Brightpaw, who was mauled by a pack of dogs in our back yard not too long before I started reading the books. Great video and kudos on the all the talent on-board for capturing such a devastating scene, and I don't mean that sarcastically. There's a certain catharsis in letting myself cry over Warriors m.a.p.s that confronts and eases the pain of the cats I've lost. I'd like to imagine they're with StarClan now.
Oh God. I'm so sorry that had to happen to you. I hope that cat is in a better place now.
* This comment made me cry*
:( May your cat rest in Starclan.
RIP. The dogs will fall in the river and your brightpaw will watch from starclan
@@wow-l83929_ lmao yees
I left the fandom about two years ago and now I'm coming back because of nostalgia. This was by far my favorite map... But after I found out about what happened and stuff I'm just sad man... I really loved this map and now I cant enjoy it anymore :(
Me: properly crying about how Longtail reacted
Parents: walk in
Me: n-no swif-ftpaw *sobs more* (doesn't realise parents are there)
Parents: Are you ok?
Me: NO FIREHEART MY APPRENTICE JUST DIED
*parents walk away, deeply disturbed*
I'm actually crying
This MAP is so beautiful and it shows Swiftpaw's life in so many fantastic ways. All of the participants did splendid and the art is absolutely gorgeous
There were thieves, (Darkstripe)
There Kings and killers, (Tigerstar)
And then there was
Longtail
the warrior cat Souleye the good boi
lol lmao
Me in a friend group.
The pure boi who crumbled under peer pressure
Longtail. Best king. Besides Gray boio and raven boio
I love how you interpreted Swift’paws life with his mentor Longtail aswell. It gives I guess a little backstory of why Swiftpaw doesn’t really like CloudKit. This m.a.p is actually one of my favourites. I don’t know how to express the right words because I’m utterly speechless. Great job!
whilst swift paw is just a character, he transformed my childhood. didnt have much hobbies when i was younger- wasnt sporty, or too smart. so, i got into reading more and i fell in love with wariors. i read book after book, and I adored swift paw. It was so comforting to read about him. His death drove me to tears as dramatic as it sounds. It's been a few years since i've read warriors, i want to read it but my dad says its unnecessary. But, i'll do it. someday.
i'll miss you swift'paw.
You know...this MAP reminded me that, while all the focus was on Bramble and Tawny, Swiftpaw was ALSO Goldenflower's child. Did we ever get a proper grieving moment for her? I can't remember.
Razzlewolfflight
Wait
So they where half brothers?
I am so confused
Wait what
I don't remember her grieving for him,and yes bramble and tawny are swift's half-siblings.
After re-reading this part, Firestar mentions that Goldenflower goes over and sits vigil with him, as does Longtail. It's not really focused on though. I guess they were too afraid of what killed him, and trying to save Brightpaw.
I,, had no idea about this
5:25 OH MY GOD THE FORGET ME NOTS IN THE BACKGROUND I’M CRYING RN THIS MAP IS SO BEAUTIFUL😭😭😭
HOLY FUCK I NEVER REALIZED THAT??? THAT MADE ME CRY OMG
The one put on Swiftpaw's grave by Longtail in the credits hit me hardest
I don't see it where is it-
@@idi0tnati0n behind swift, when he fades it's more clear, the blue flowers
@@user-ck8gn1nr2h I don't see it....
I hate they killed Swiftpaw, he would have made a great warrior. Very strong and talented.
I finally got myself to read books, and now feel comfortable to watch map. (Cause I was scared of spoilers)
Edit: kinda wished I hadn't watched it now.
This was so incredibly amazing, but also so goddam heart wrenching. I feel so so bad for swiftpaw. He was just a kid. A strong, ambitious kid filled to the brim with potential. Nothing of what happened was his fault, he wasn't evil nor selfish nor cruel. Just a kid happy to serve his clan. I know its a fictional story controlled by the authors but it wasnt fair what happened to him. Not blaming the authors, its plot. but im saying what I am in a way that might apply to a real world situation. Events set in motion by the world around him screwed him over. Really, you'd be blaming Tigerstar for what happened. If he hadn't betrayed thunderclan, bluestar wouldn't have been in her depression and paranoia and wouldn't have believed all her clan to be traitors, she wouldn't have denied the other apprentices their warrior status, and swiftpaw wouldn't have tried to prove himself in order to gain what he deserved already.
One thing that I like about this MAP is how is shows Swiftpaw physically and mentally get older. Whenever I see the ending "-paw" or see that the character is in the apprentice's section, I immediately image them to be 12 or 13 years old in maturity, when in reality one most likely becomes a warrior by the time they've reached adulthood, so Swiftpaw, when he died, might have been 18 years old in maturity.
I've seen a lot of MAPs, but even though I don't know too much about Swiftpaw, I think that this is one of best that I've seen. I can feel the emotion, tone, mood, attitude (whatever the right word for this sort of thing) in different places, such as at 3:48, he is positioned in such a way that shows that he is ready to take on this task almost to the point of making him a martyr for doing it. I also like how they showed Fireheart and other warriors discovering the rabbits at 3:13, which foreshadow Swiftpaw's decision and later his death.
There's a lot more that could be said and analyzed in this video, but I don't want to make a high school english essay in the comments.
This MAP is amazing and everyone who worked in it did an awesome job =)
@Goldenfire / Auburn lol I'd gladly write an essay about this MAP though :)
M pretty sure Swiftpaw was 18 moons old when he died
Correct me if I'm wrong, but wasn't swift paw like 18 moons old? That's just old enough to be a warrior.
Edit: I see that someone else replied something like this
To late you already wrote the essay
Something that made my heart break in millions of pieces is to think about Swiftpaw, Bluestar, and all the cats that died in the old territory, were buried in the old territory. Yellowfang and Bluestar, and major cats, are still remembered today in the books. However, what about the other cats, like Snowfur? Most likely including Swiftpaw, except a few might remember him. Will they fade quicker than the others? Will they be gone forever?
Animal Jammer Loves Animals They'll always be remembered, not just in the hearts and minds of the cats, but in the stories that will be passed down from generation to generation. ♡
When warriors soul tottaly he will get new life. I heard that
I think the starclan cats use fading as an excuse.
They're ghosts,they could be able to make themselves more transparent.
I think Brightheart will remember Swiftpaw
brindleface.. cri
Rereading and rewatching swiftpaw’s death after so many years just made me realize that Fireheart was responsible for Swiftpaw’s death. Eventhough the books made Fireheart turn out like a hero, the blood of Swiftpaws death and Brighthearts wounds are on his and Bluestars paws. If only they had listened to Longtail, who, now that i speak of him, is a really misunderstood character in the warrior cats series. He deserved better.
lmao i watched this and halfway through remembered who swiftpaw is and immediately started bawling my eyes out
Longtail: * smiles at Swiftkit *
Swiftkit/paw: *HAPPY SCREECHING*
Wonderfully done! Swiftpaw using the move longtail taught him and it failing was so emotionally heavy, this turned out amazing! well done everyone
I didn't notice that until you mentioned that. OML ARE YOU TRYING TO MAKE ME CRY?
OH I didn't notice :( now I'm sad
Dogs are most of the time stronger than cats but swiftpaw did try his best to push the dog off him (even tho it looked like he was using so much force)
I actually like, cried ToT
This is one of the most SADDEST scenes in Warriors .
I personally think Fireheart could see Swiftpaw's spirit, through his (Fireheart's) connection to StarClan. Swiftpaw, knowing Fireheart could see him, said a simple: "Please take care of her..." on Brightpaw's subject. Which ups the tragedy points. R.I.P. Swift. 😢
Evidence: You can see Swift's spirit in Fireheart's eye reflections. And *only* Fireheart's eye reflections
That just makes this so much more tragic omg
Excuse me while
I just
Go cry in a corner
TvT
ikr its really sad.
Can I join you? I have been defeated in my battle against the Onion-cutting-ninjas
I wasn't expecting to cry over a series I havent read in years oh my god this was so well done everyone did such a beautiful job i haVE NO WORDS
Makaruu SAME
I watch this every time it’s suggested and idk why cause I cry EVERYTIME
The first series what the best series and nobody can change my mind
Three years have gone by and this MAP still makes me cry. It's so well done.
Yeah I'm balling rn