The Worst Writing I've Encountered: Kylie and Kendall's Sci-Fi Book
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- čas přidán 28. 06. 2024
- Yeah this... this was wow.... holy no. No no no. No.
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Rest assured the KK sisters did as much actual writing on this book as one would be able to credit a keyboard when typing out a grocery list.
I think the most I've done is about 46 hours. I know I've never broken 50. But yeah, it's weird to feel c o g n i t i v e b r e a k d o w n in real time
I forgot this book existed. It has a
This book makes Wizard'sFirst Rule look like Memory of Light 😆
They are genuine inspirations! They have shown that you don't need skill or talent to get your novel published. You just have to be famous and have lots of money.
These celebrities were so preoccupied with whether they could that they didn't stop to think whether they should.
Each sentence has exactly six words. This makes the book quite monotonous. Reading out loud would catch it. But if you don't you don't. Then you're stuck with this shit. Like reading bullet points off slides. The same cadence all the time. Not a single hint of variation. It gets boring after a while. Sounds like a constant sine wave. You wish they did something else. Made some music with their language. But no, we can't have that. You get six words per sentence. No more, no less, always six. Books shouldn't be written like this. But sadly they are some times. It's very very very very bad.
Well, of all people that could've written a sci-fi novel, these two surely are the last i would ever have expected it from.
"First drafts are meant to suck" - this is commom advice in the writing community. But you're not supposed to publish that without edits... 😆
Seems like a clear case of "Editor and publisher didn't want to piss off celebrities"
"Don't you know, my family is very, very, very important, therefore I matter." That pretty much says it all... 😂😂😂
This certainly raises my confidence that I am not as incompetent as I thought.
I like to think the sentence cadence is fucked because Kendall would write half a sentence and then pass it to Kylie to finish the sentence.
Those girls' literacy was formed in the texting age.
72 hours? If I miss sleep one night I feel like an absolute crackhead.
8:44
The drop in quality from the prologue (which wasn't terrible) to the actual chapters (which were quite terrible) is staggering.
As someone who was once up for a week straight without chemical assistance, can confirm you start to hallucinate a couple days in. Can not recommend.
This video expanded my eyeballs.