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  • @daledrakewriter4912
    @daledrakewriter4912 Před 2 lety +201

    This story is from my book of short horror stories Dark Waters. Available on Amazon. It also as a broken Messiah story in that book the first of the series I ever wrote and can also be found on this channel the book is available in paperback or kindle. Sorry for the plug guys lol.

    • @kevinwilcox2689
      @kevinwilcox2689 Před 2 lety +4

      You have an amazing writing gift.

    • @jayhudson3257
      @jayhudson3257 Před 2 lety +5

      Huge fan of broken messiah!! I’ve been waiting for the next after gluttony to be narrated on here, I was worried he moved on but if you already have the full story out il check it out!

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 Před 2 lety +5

      @@jayhudson3257 no, no the Broken Messiah is still being finished. This book is just some of my random short stories.

    • @LibertyJefferson
      @LibertyJefferson Před 2 lety +2

      You are very quickly becoming my favorite fiction author good Sir. I'm definitely going to look into the paperback stories. Keep it up, but don't burn yourself out.

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 Před 2 lety +4

      @@LibertyJefferson thank you. I won't burn out. Writing is a pleasure for me. One of the few things I enjoy in life lol.

  • @gohan78g
    @gohan78g Před 2 lety +6

    Why is this my kink? Amazing lovecraftean writing. I loved this

  • @grapesodasalmander2434
    @grapesodasalmander2434 Před 2 lety +4

    I loved this one personally, a new favorite up there with tales from the gas-station.

  • @iantaran2843
    @iantaran2843 Před rokem +2

    Proud of the MC.
    Sometimes you need to clean up your own messes

  • @daledrakewriter4912
    @daledrakewriter4912 Před 2 lety +123

    Thought I would have a little break from my ongoing series and throw in a little lovecraft action lol. Not to worry more Masterson chronicles coming very soon, Broken Messiah and of course Hellbound.

    • @mvannorden02
      @mvannorden02 Před 2 lety +4

      I'm glad to be able to say thank you for your stories! ❤️ You sir are very very talented.

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 Před 2 lety +2

      @@mvannorden02 Well thank you very much.

    • @burdrrr
      @burdrrr Před 2 lety +2

      This shit is good bro, well done

    • @norapaquette1057
      @norapaquette1057 Před 2 lety +1

      Okay I can be patient but please sir well you know.Please get back as soon as possible to your series.Well this is what you get when you are gifted and loved. So there!!!! LOL 🐾💜

    • @jacobshular2743
      @jacobshular2743 Před 2 lety +2

      You have such a unique writing style, that I thought this WAS the next chapter of the Masterson Chronicles until I saw this comment. This one is like a slightly more comprehensible Lovecraft tale. I am a giant fan of you both.

  • @shanedawndusk3290
    @shanedawndusk3290 Před 2 lety +4

    A masterful story, I must say. I love the Lovecraftian feel overall.

  • @h-b9790
    @h-b9790 Před 2 lety +21

    I have been hungry for some lovecraftian stories. Thank you very much, I hope we see others from the pantheon in future stories.

  • @debacofzomb9889
    @debacofzomb9889 Před 2 lety +37

    Three minutes in and I have to stop to say just how very skilled the author of this story is. Very professional and well made. Please never stop writing.

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 Před 2 lety +6

      I don't ever intend to stop lol. Thanks for the kind words.

    • @debacofzomb9889
      @debacofzomb9889 Před 2 lety +4

      @@daledrakewriter4912 credit where credit is due

    • @Mygg_Jeager
      @Mygg_Jeager Před 2 lety +1

      @@daledrakewriter4912 Is your CZcams name the same name you write under? :)

  • @Abaddontepes666
    @Abaddontepes666 Před 2 lety +5

    This absolutely blew me away, this story is a masterpiece

  • @zarostheemptylord5893
    @zarostheemptylord5893 Před 2 lety +15

    Yet another dale drake masterpiece..as always...a magnificent story complimented by one of the best narrators in the buisness....the combination of which is never a disappointment...keep on the good work mr. Drake

  • @cameronthrashbonergreatcri8848

    In a world full of mediocre creepypasta's this has some serious quality. Looking foreward to more like this.

  • @kitsunekierein7253
    @kitsunekierein7253 Před 2 lety +2

    With a squid for a head...
    Oh, hi Cthulhu! I didn't see you there! 😂

  • @Jormyyy
    @Jormyyy Před 2 lety +1

    Hot damn, that was Lovecraftian inspired horror at it's finest. No heroes, no happy endings, just pure terror till the very end.

  • @leekendall7155
    @leekendall7155 Před 2 lety +8

    Absolutely bloody awesome! One of your very best stories and totally smashed out of the park with one of your finest productions. Completely blown away by how good this was. Cheers MrC. Lee.

  • @angelischiel
    @angelischiel Před 2 lety +25

    This story was rich with a creeping dread, birthed by the rather informative intro about how the man had built his home. The dude sorta brought his death on himself, honestly. He lacked all respect for the world around him, and what came before. He essentially upended the entire spiritual balance of the local area just to build his home... It was... not the best idea xD Even still, this story was a lot of fun to listen to!

  • @Wraithfire27
    @Wraithfire27 Před 2 lety +8

    Awesome story. Made me think it was actual lovecraft

  • @lordlammi1562
    @lordlammi1562 Před 2 lety +1

    He just described an altar of Cthulhu

  • @night_demons7364
    @night_demons7364 Před 2 lety +13

    Haven’t listened to this channel in a hot minute I forgot what I was missing with this mans narration of the story’s

  • @dawnstephens9751
    @dawnstephens9751 Před 2 lety +5

    You never disappoint! Bravo! 💪🏻✌🏻🙌🏻😊
    Badass story!! Thank you to the author and as always thank you for blessing us with your gift of story telling!

  • @smoothoperator7219
    @smoothoperator7219 Před 2 lety +6

    Taking the body of a supernatural sea creature with you into the sea as you jump from a cliff....probably not the best idea. Better to keep it away from water and close to a fire. Well.....on fire that is.

  • @ebuttsie
    @ebuttsie Před 2 lety +4

    Thanks for sharing MCP, you always add to a story with your narration xxxx

  • @benhuether5474
    @benhuether5474 Před 2 lety +1

    Great haunted house story; I can see the Lovecraft and Shirley Jackson influence.

  • @jelogram
    @jelogram Před 2 lety +2

    Similar set up to lovecraft’s “the rats in the walls”

  • @neek3834
    @neek3834 Před 2 lety +1

    Ayo fancy seeing Cthulhu in the story.

  • @angelvanord3766
    @angelvanord3766 Před 2 lety +6

    This was an awesome story, I was very intrigued. Thank you again for once again, giving us an amazing tale. Keep up the good work, Sir!

  • @kenpanderz672
    @kenpanderz672 Před rokem +1

    i wonder how long it'll take to get the mental image of this birth-to-unbirth situation out of my head. maybe just an eternity

  • @devidrachan
    @devidrachan Před 2 lety +6

    Love cosmic horror. I hope to see more. Keep up the great work

  • @stacifry4059
    @stacifry4059 Před 2 lety +4

    I really enjoy this author a really excellent story.

  • @CreepingShadows
    @CreepingShadows Před 2 lety +22

    Another great video from you, love your channel so much that it inspired me to start making creepypastas also. I still watch your videos every day, please never stop

    • @PrimateProductions
      @PrimateProductions Před 2 lety

      What?? You fed that exact same bullshit to another narrator yesterday! In addition to that you may have started your own channel (which I was so excited to check out and really wanted to like) but having bots read dumb stories with titles 2 miles long is not the same as actually narrating quality stories. You are wasting your time uploading 10 videos everyday in that manner. 🙄

    • @mvannorden02
      @mvannorden02 Před 2 lety +2

      @@PrimateProductions you can be inspired by more than one person. That comment was really mean and spiteful. I don't know if you meant it to be but you come across looking like a horrible person. Leave this person alone. Don't bully.

    • @mvannorden02
      @mvannorden02 Před 2 lety +2

      Ignore the mean comment my friend. ❤️

  • @livingcorpse5664
    @livingcorpse5664 Před 2 lety +2

    Keep your head low, don't draw the attention of cosmic terrors.

  • @acno1901
    @acno1901 Před 2 lety +8

    Hey creepy love your content always excited to see it been watching for a while thanks for filling my childhood with terror :)

  • @lolasum_sumi_san
    @lolasum_sumi_san Před 2 lety +1

    Cthulhu mythos inspired CreepyPasta?
    Count me the fuck in!!

  • @davidturney2975
    @davidturney2975 Před 2 lety +1

    This is one twisted story

  • @laurasohn8332
    @laurasohn8332 Před 2 lety +2

    Do you fear death? Do you fear that dark abyss?

  • @rjfrantz539
    @rjfrantz539 Před 2 lety +3

    Thanks for the birthday gift MCP!

  • @debacofzomb9889
    @debacofzomb9889 Před 2 lety +2

    Ooooh more Cthulhu plz ❤️🙂👍

  • @MisterFrets
    @MisterFrets Před 2 lety +2

    Amazing

  • @eviltoad746
    @eviltoad746 Před 2 lety +4

    Well that got kinky

  • @artemisarrow179
    @artemisarrow179 Před 2 lety +1

    Ooo not too often you see 1800’s Creepypasta

  • @karencook9490
    @karencook9490 Před 2 lety +2

    That was excellent !

  • @bryanmckinney1098
    @bryanmckinney1098 Před 2 lety +1

    That was dope af 🔥

  • @jamesgoodwine6420
    @jamesgoodwine6420 Před 2 lety +3

    Man I hit the like button B4 you start bro dam good show 👏 👌 dam good 👍

    • @Dark_Angel..
      @Dark_Angel.. Před 2 lety

      I do the same thing...you know if MCP is narrating it you already know that it isn't going to be something that's 💩.

  • @michaniedospia4100
    @michaniedospia4100 Před 2 lety

    Nice one!

  • @morgancaughlin5298
    @morgancaughlin5298 Před 2 lety +2

    I liked the ending, but wow! That story was pretty messed up.😬

  • @robertdikes2435
    @robertdikes2435 Před 2 lety +1

    AWESOME PERFECT

  • @spicetea4060
    @spicetea4060 Před 2 lety +1

    Petition to make this canon.

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 Před 2 lety

      I would love that. I am a massive lovecraft fan. I have written others similar to this.

  • @-The_Jester-
    @-The_Jester- Před 2 lety +1

    Man if I could join a cult all about cthulhu I would

  • @madiw2097
    @madiw2097 Před 2 lety

    this guy straight up nailed the Lovecraft brand racism

  • @sheriffbill852
    @sheriffbill852 Před 2 lety +2

    Were was thy pistol

  • @lvluptoaverage52
    @lvluptoaverage52 Před 2 lety +1

    Wow really good story

  • @jaylovesmay2012
    @jaylovesmay2012 Před 2 lety +3

    Oh praise the deep ones praise Cthulhu 🙏🤲🐙

  • @phoebeandholdenross4428
    @phoebeandholdenross4428 Před 2 lety +1

    Hey! A Cthulhu story

  • @isexedthepumpkin8176
    @isexedthepumpkin8176 Před 2 lety +3

    Finally a story with a title that isn't an entire sentence

  • @joesantos2455
    @joesantos2455 Před 2 lety +1

    I'm pretty gosh darn vim and virile myself, doncha know, okie-doke- there-then!

  • @the250mikec
    @the250mikec Před 2 lety

    Yes

  • @siriuswhite5814
    @siriuswhite5814 Před 2 lety +1

    As a swed I read vandraren, vandräven,vändraren...what is a vandrav? Gaah i guess i have to listen to the story now🙃😅

  • @goatgang3584
    @goatgang3584 Před 2 lety +1

    Teapea for my bunghole

  • @bald_man01
    @bald_man01 Před 2 lety +1

    Hey mrcreepypasta u always say that u got couple books on audible and I listened tfgs series but I can't seem to find and other audiobooks can u share couple titles I would love to listen those anyone else feel free to recommend some audiobooks thx.

  • @dannyjdogscene13
    @dannyjdogscene13 Před 2 lety

    You got a link to the jpeg you used as the background??

  • @kingpyron3806
    @kingpyron3806 Před 2 lety +2

    Ahoy there creepy boys

  • @AG-en5y
    @AG-en5y Před 2 lety +2

    🔥🔥🔥

  • @julsmoreno2654
    @julsmoreno2654 Před 2 lety +1

    Sheeeesh

  • @Alexi-Raener93
    @Alexi-Raener93 Před 2 lety +1

    Is this supposed to be a horror story or an erotic one? Hahaha. 😂😂😂

  • @L1qu1d-2qu1d
    @L1qu1d-2qu1d Před 2 lety +1

    I shouldn’t complain cause I’m a big fan of lovecraft but can we get some other god than Cthulhu? Like shit there’s a books worth of gods out there, what about hastur

  • @Travis10634
    @Travis10634 Před 2 lety

    Anyone else think we need a stitch reboot??

  • @kijanailis
    @kijanailis Před rokem

    Why are some of the narrators using 'acrost' instead of across?
    It's odd 😆

  • @malikhargrave4341
    @malikhargrave4341 Před 2 lety

    Cuthulu

  • @Jack-zn6qm
    @Jack-zn6qm Před 2 lety

    Based

  • @-JA-
    @-JA- Před 2 lety +1

  • @longinus7150
    @longinus7150 Před 2 lety +2

    Draven? Mashallah.

  • @goryparodiesproductions6561

    As horrible as it is that the male protagonist was drugged and r**ed against his will (something that society should acknowledge more often), at least he can take comfort in knowing that his seed wasn't the issue with trying to get his wife pregnant.

  • @willsimpson125
    @willsimpson125 Před 2 lety +1

    Cthulu

  • @jabbarmuhammad7529
    @jabbarmuhammad7529 Před 2 lety

    It looks like khutulu

  • @vlbonnie
    @vlbonnie Před 2 lety +1

    Definitely feels true to Lovecraft, right down to the racism

  • @stripe801
    @stripe801 Před 2 lety

    ANY RECOMMENDATIONS!? the styLe of story of a victim dying i can’t seem to find many that NARRATED! somebody Let me know. heLL i can’t find many good ones where the narrator is the “bad guy” to be honest. dear abby is a good exampLe i guess for the Latter. heLp me out horror fans

    • @deltax8202
      @deltax8202 Před 2 lety

      My wife left 4 incognito tabs open is a good one where the narrator becomes a villain towards the end

    • @Dark_Angel..
      @Dark_Angel.. Před 2 lety

      I friggin loved Dear Abby

  • @hannahxxxbeautyxoxo6659
    @hannahxxxbeautyxoxo6659 Před 2 lety +1

    Hey mrcreepypasta, I love your work and have been subscribed for many years . Creepsmcpasta is under a lot of heat because there is grooming accusations . Tbh I believe the victim and creepsmcpasta has been lying multiple times in his response video I just hope your doing okay and that we can still reply on you. I’m not sure if your close with him anymore . But i hope what he’s done gets more talk about because grooming is disgusting and I hope people are aware of what happened .

    • @robynsmith4164
      @robynsmith4164 Před 2 lety +2

      @Hannahxxxbeauty xoxo : Wow… this is the VERY FIRST TIME I have heard ANYTHING negative about CreepsMcPasta. Will you please give me a short rundown of how this happened and who accused CMP of this heinous act? Where did you get your information about all the grooming accusations? I’m very curious and would truly like to know if it is true or not. Thank you so much! ♥️

    • @Dark_Angel..
      @Dark_Angel.. Před 2 lety

      You're def not alone fr...I've not once heard this myself...Creeps is another one of my favorite narrators. I would really need to check this out to see if it's legit because as always there is two sides to every story...

  • @MegaKuchiku
    @MegaKuchiku Před 2 lety

    Yooo. This dude got manhandled by a woman like a biiiatch and acts like he couldn’t stop it. hahaha
    Edit: Sooo glad this isn’t a real hp lovecraft. This was way too predictable and stereotypical for his works.

  • @goatgang3584
    @goatgang3584 Před 2 lety

    6th

  • @fyeboiangel8054
    @fyeboiangel8054 Před 2 lety +1

    First

  • @brandontipton4028
    @brandontipton4028 Před 2 lety +3

    I enjoyed the story and I really appreciated the gothic elements. However, when paying homage to Lovecraft it's important to avoid falling victim to his xenophobia. Drawing sinister connotations from Matilda's mix-raced heritage is totally in theme with Lovecraft's works, but unbecoming of a modern writer. Aside from that, it was a perfectly lovely tale.

    • @vanessaashford9203
      @vanessaashford9203 Před 2 lety

      yeah tbh, it would've been fine if it had been more self-aware (like if it was made more obvious it was just the protagonist's period-appropriate prejudices), but as the story is written, it comes off as though played completely straight (not saying this was the author's intention, just how I interpreted it). Also, definitely picked up some slight unfortunate implications connecting queerness with unnatural and evil forces with the whole "two mothers" thing and the two women laying naked together with their legs suggestively interlocked during their dark ritual.
      Like, I really feel like the last thing the world needs right now is the totally sincere resurrection of these kind of retrograde tropes in horror without any hint of subversion, but tbh I'll admit I'm biased because I've been personally kind of burned out on Lovecraftian horror that just straight up tries to be Lovecraft (even when it makes a point to leave out the racism, xenophobia, misogyny, etc.) for a while now. Like to me as someone who has been reading stuff like this for probably about a decade and a half now, it comes off as tired and cliched more often than not; but again, that's just me speaking personally as someone who tends to prefer experimentation and new takes on stuff over appeals to tradition as a writer.

    • @robynsmith4164
      @robynsmith4164 Před 2 lety +1

      Hey Brandon, I like your comment and it makes sense. I do have a question though, how do we know that Matilda is not the same race as the MC? I understood she didn’t celebrate Christmas so she wasn’t a Christian but I don’t remember where in the story it stated what her race was. I may have just missed it, please tell me where to look, thanks!!! 😁

    • @brandontipton4028
      @brandontipton4028 Před 2 lety

      @@robynsmith4164 The author specifically mentioned that she was multiracial in his initial description, around about the time he called her wild and beautiful... describing POC as wild kind of problematic too. I understand that the tacit xenophobia could be written into the MC, but it's still a problematic trope.

    • @vanessaashford9203
      @vanessaashford9203 Před 2 lety

      @@robynsmith4164 there is some wording early on about her being of "mixed heritage" (I forget exactly how it is put), and she is described several times as having darker skin than the protagonist (who being a wealthy Englishman from that time period, would almost certainly be white).

  • @jeffn4836
    @jeffn4836 Před 2 lety +1

    Is this another clickbait thumbnail using eldritch imagery when the story ends up neither about some mermaid or other humanoid creature?
    Ocean stories are the most clickbait-laden ones. I’m kinda loathe to even give them a chance anymore. They all use imagery of gargantuan monsters and that is a rarity .

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 Před 2 lety +2

      No gargantuan monsters in this story or much ocean to be honest lol.

    • @jeffn4836
      @jeffn4836 Před 2 lety

      @@daledrakewriter4912 Thank you for saving me 30 minutes.
      I am so sick of being clickbaited by ocean stories. Be better than that, narrators. Don’t outright have a thumbnail when it has less than nothing to do with the story. Quit using Cthulhu!

    • @tsukarikaoru
      @tsukarikaoru Před 2 lety +1

      @@jeffn4836 lmao someone's salty

    • @jeffn4836
      @jeffn4836 Před 2 lety

      @@tsukarikaoru An unintentional ocean water pun? Nice!

    • @Bluesit32
      @Bluesit32 Před 2 lety +2

      @@jeffn4836 They never said the picture was wrong. Just that there was no large monsters or ocean. MCP had a good reason for using Cthulhu.

  • @malikhargrave4341
    @malikhargrave4341 Před 2 lety

    Cuthulu