Reading my PERSONAL STATEMENT that got me into OXFORD, IMPERIAL and more - Mathematics

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  • čas přidán 2. 09. 2020
  • The personal statement is a crucial part of the university application process, and unlike admission exams or interviews, it is mandatory, regardless of the schools you are applying to. Admission tutors read hundreds if not thousands of personal statements every year, so you need to make sure yours stands out, sets you apart from the rest of the candidates. But this doesn’t have to frighten you at all, since we are talking about a personal statement, so it only needs to reflect your own voice, personality and passions.
    I hope you find this video useful! If you have any questions regarding the application process, my experience, or about anything else, leave a comment down below or DM me on Instagram!
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    Have a lovely day! 💓

Komentáře • 71

  • @no-de3lg
    @no-de3lg Před 3 lety +156

    Problem is I have no purpose at all if im being truly honest with myself

  • @beingpicah
    @beingpicah Před 6 měsíci +1

    Sooo Useful❤ Thanks a Lot🎉

  • @yousefmohamed5353
    @yousefmohamed5353 Před 2 lety +23

    This is so fucking depressing what should i write as a guy that didnt do shit in comparisson

  • @ShadabAli-dw8sw
    @ShadabAli-dw8sw Před 3 lety +6

    thank you! it help a lots of me.

  • @minyare
    @minyare Před rokem +6

    Studying Mathematics in Oxford is my biggest dream, really thanks for this video and I will follow you on Instagram, you deserve this 🥺🙏🇬🇧📚💗

  • @anianiani602
    @anianiani602 Před 2 lety +18

    I’m currently working on my application for Oxford’s Fine Arts programme and let me tell you, it’s not easy to figure out what to write.

  • @maameoseiantwi7459
    @maameoseiantwi7459 Před rokem +1

    Submitting my application next week 🎉

  • @ccrrttaa8927
    @ccrrttaa8927 Před 3 lety +3

    Thank you so much!!!

  • @user-co2nu5go9e
    @user-co2nu5go9e Před 3 lety +3

    Thank u sooooo much❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

  • @nobzwrld9380
    @nobzwrld9380 Před rokem +5

    Thank you so much for this
    This gave me an insight on how to write my personal statement, Hopefully I’ll get accepted and come back to break the news here 🙏🏾

  • @jerrych.1820
    @jerrych.1820 Před 3 lety +4

    difficult to find the interest about maths although i'm good at that

  • @mohammedmahinuralam2796
    @mohammedmahinuralam2796 Před 2 lety +11

    If you were to rewrite your essay now, how would you have modified it? BTW: I have liked the way you wrote your essay.

  • @safaa7625
    @safaa7625 Před 3 lety +12

    I want to study Business And Management and in personal they also ask what's your experience? What Experience I am 19 ?! I can be completely honest but I just cant to put the on words😭😭

    • @vidhroh1538
      @vidhroh1538 Před 2 lety

      Dude such experiences definitely impact your statement ofc but admission tutors know that not everyone (especially 19) was lucky enough to get opportunities to gain some experience

  • @lordhammad
    @lordhammad Před 3 lety +5

    Did you link your the extra-curricular activities to your course/major that you wrote in the fifth paragraph?

    • @ioanaroman2947
      @ioanaroman2947  Před 3 lety +3

      I’ve written only that short paragraph about it all, because I had to be brief and stay within the word limit - so I just said that I made maths come alive in a way that’s personal to me through these extracurricular activities.

    • @lordhammad
      @lordhammad Před 3 lety +1

      Okay thank you so much for the reply:D

  • @ishaansingh204
    @ishaansingh204 Před 3 lety +48

    Thing is though you are clearly incredibly smart so it doesn't really matter what you wrote. How would someone capable but not that gifted get their interest across?

    • @montagez3651
      @montagez3651 Před 2 lety +4

      Probably not possible, the competition is incredibly hard

    • @ishaansingh204
      @ishaansingh204 Před 2 lety +8

      @@montagez3651 true that did not get in

    • @montagez3651
      @montagez3651 Před 2 lety +3

      @@ishaansingh204 damn sorry bro

    • @ishaansingh204
      @ishaansingh204 Před 2 lety +13

      @@montagez3651 it’s all good got imperial that’s all I wanted anyways and glad to see other ppl got their dream

    • @Dayax25
      @Dayax25 Před rokem +1

      @@ishaansingh204 did you have to do step for your imperial offer?

  • @aryankumarprasad1574
    @aryankumarprasad1574 Před 3 lety +2

    Thanks,

  • @lauraudechukwu2899
    @lauraudechukwu2899 Před 2 lety +2

    I want to study accounting and finance or business management but im not good at math..what should I write in my personal statement?

  • @stephenraju6881
    @stephenraju6881 Před 2 lety +12

    Hey Ioana
    Im applying for Oxford Computer Science and i don't have a lot of achievements to show in Computer Science as my school did not hold any competitive exams in Csc. So would you please tell me a few things to include in my personal statement ?

    • @f.a.s.1746
      @f.a.s.1746 Před 2 lety +3

      But late, but I suggest taking a few online courses- some colleges offer free lectures as well, so watch those and name drop then in your essay. That'll actually show that you took initiative and that you're passionate enough to study it on your own, which Uni's like.

    • @gossipopithecus
      @gossipopithecus Před rokem +1

      To apply to Oxford you need to show that your academic achievements are top 1% of the school. If you would like to study Computer science, you can talk about some project or program you wrote in some language, which is above the level of your high school. If you achieve some awards in Olympiads in mathematics, Physics, Chemistry, or Computer Science will give you some advantage as well. There is an entrance Oxford STEP MATHS exam which you need to pass in order to pass to the next stage. Make sure if you mention something in the personal statement, it reflects your interests and passion. They might invite you for the interview where you might be asked to solve difficult problems, they want to see your analytical and critical thinking.

    • @varunnayak5369
      @varunnayak5369 Před 8 měsíci

      For starters,
      1) It's not the STEP, it's the MAT@@gossipopithecus
      2) This person wrote and edited this message like 2 years ago so one would assume that this person has already reached university by now.

    • @dddddd-jj5md
      @dddddd-jj5md Před 14 dny

      How was the result?

  • @dameayana1243
    @dameayana1243 Před 2 lety

    Please give me same written sample

  • @red88ization
    @red88ization Před 9 měsíci +2

    well shit, that's a hard act to follow ...imagine the poor bastard that went to interview after you.

  • @lordhammad
    @lordhammad Před 3 lety +1

    Did you get accepted or also got a scholarship?

    • @ioanaroman2947
      @ioanaroman2947  Před 3 lety +5

      I didn’t apply for scholarships - they don’t really offer a wide variety of them. However, I have taken a credit for my tuition fee from the UK government.

  • @ishitwaanand1808
    @ishitwaanand1808 Před 3 lety +1

    Hey I want to ask 1 doubt. Can you please reply where to ask?😕

    • @ioanaroman2947
      @ioanaroman2947  Před 3 lety +1

      Sure, ask away!! :)

    • @ishitwaanand1808
      @ishitwaanand1808 Před 3 lety +1

      @@ioanaroman2947 hey I found you on insta too.. I've asked there..could you please see to it😃

    • @ishitwaanand1808
      @ishitwaanand1808 Před 3 lety +1

      @@ioanaroman2947 Hey I've been waiting for your reply😃

  • @wewereads
    @wewereads Před 2 lety +4

    i like your accent .. best wishes

  • @ralphstephaneguilbaud8725

    Thank you.Can I have your mail please? Can you Evaluate my Personal Statement?

  • @alexiaplacinta5468
    @alexiaplacinta5468 Před 2 lety +1

    Esti romancaaa

  • @starinsky2873
    @starinsky2873 Před 2 lety +1

    I regret declining to compete in IMO.

  • @regularman4063
    @regularman4063 Před 2 lety

    Hope you don't mind me asking, but what grades did you get in your a levels ?

    • @paulring9246
      @paulring9246 Před rokem +1

      Considering she represents her country internationally , I’m guessing 4 a stars

    • @shaaravguha3760
      @shaaravguha3760 Před 11 měsíci

      @@paulring9246 I'd wager atleast 6 considering what she has done.

    • @sixbass2588
      @sixbass2588 Před 7 měsíci

      @@paulring9246 she s like the girl from our school that is like the perfect girl, but she isn’t, many things done any many incomplete.
      Getting at any uni isn’t t rhat bad or hard, remeber that any uni from the west is hard to get because many stundeta aren’t differencing themselves from the majority of the classic good students.
      Rhe only way she did this thing is that is took a long eay to difference herself from the rest of her high school. That s why so many don t enter, even with really good grades

  • @neelmaheshwari9791
    @neelmaheshwari9791 Před 3 lety +1

    Thank you so much!