Building a Better Earthrise: Yes Finally
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- čas přidán 28. 01. 2023
- In today's video this has been a Long time in Coming. In many many many ways.
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The alspark being the meteor that killed the dinosaurs was hilarious 😂
Something that was meant to bring life instead became a bringer of CHAOS AND DESTRUCTION (rip the dinosaurs)
Also Could Be a Cool origin story for the dinobots
Thank you very much. I was proud of how I was tying that together.
@@PerspectiveEnd Although The New Bodies thing while a Good explanation and A Good way to get around it, Was Kinda Lame
An actual explanation for the Fossilizers.
The bit with “Sideswipe” and “Bumblebee” on the ark was pure genius. I love the idea that Wheeljack just completely screwed with everyone he could.
Thank you. I was proud of that. I wanted to give him something people could cling to since there's so little time for everyone to get characterized.
This was the most love he ever gave cliff jumper lol
@@PerspectiveEnd I can’t wait for the Kingdom one. I’m exited to see what you might do with the BW characters!
Imma be real this entire scene 6:24 feels like something an abridged series would do
I can feel that. I did Wheeljack like that, so every character would have something unique to cling to for the audience, so they stood out in only 6 episodes, and didn't all blur together.
Wheeljack in this is perfect. The sometimes funny sometimes insensitive mad scientist is a rare thing but it is absolutely the funniest shit I have ever seen
Yeah, I did that despite it not being really what the character is known for because it does give you something to grab onto when watching in a far shorter run time. And it's not at odds with his character.
I think Trailbreaker would be better guy to turn Ironhide into since Diaclone Ironhide shared the same color scheme
I was going to say that but I completely forgot to I also think that ironhides build is more similar to Trailbreaker than grapple
Which could maybe work as a reference to how Movie Ironhide looks.
@@lucastheprime787 after seeing perspectives videos about the movie designs and how much he hates movie ironhide I don’t think that would ever happen
Speaking of Trailbreaker, seeing his IDW design like Hoist's in toy form got me into thinking of making a Transformers OC who's a katana-wielding swordsman with Trailbreaker/Hoist's IDW mold but maybe with Generations Warpath's or Swere's head head then I'd name him "Murasame" (*which means village rain) like how I did with Rise of the Beasts' Wheeljack by renaming him by his codename "Barcelona" even tho' that didn't work out well since I couldn't stand the internet's whining about the nameslaps anymore.
@@drex_668 True, but idk, maybe he could do a joke about it.
You are very good at writing funny dialogue.
Optimus is SO DONE with everything. I love it!!!
This kinda made me excited to see where this goes, though that would require you to Rewrite the next show.
I know nothing about the Netflix shows, but I had a blast watching this!!!!!
Optimus has no more sh*ts to give and it’s great.
Wheelhack just casually telling Optimus he did a genocide. Whoops!
Exasperated Optimus is best Optimus.
Yeah I really wanted to capture the Optimus whos still willing to joke, but at the same time is also kind of dead inside.
And I hope to have the Third season done sooner rather than later like it took me to do this one.
@@PerspectiveEnd That’s great news!! I hope it’s going well.
@@PerspectiveEnd Oh yeah, he's DEFINITELY dead inside after the insanity that is WFC:Siege.
How do you keep making jokes tailor made to make me cry with happiness?! That joke about the most incompetent writers running wotc was solid platinum. That scene with Wheeljack f*cking with everyone was glorious. And finally Skylynx gets the respect he deserves.
I'm just glad to hear so many people loved what I did here. It's really gratifying that all the work I put in paid off.
And of course I put Respect on Skylynx's Name.
I LOVE the "sideswipe turned into sunstreaker" gag
Thank you! I was extremely proud of it.
Having to take this long for a video was so worth it this video is great. The story is so much better. The Autobots being in an abandoned city is really cool and having the threat of the mercenaries and Scorponok looming on the background is really nice. This makes Scorponok more of a threat and one that the show leads up to instead of him just being there. The double dealer stuff is great and the Allicons being people is really interesting. The idea of being in earth and hiding actually make sense and actually using robots in disguise to a practical effect is magnificent the pictures of sideswipe cough cough sunstreaker cough cough just sitting on the side of the road is great. The character redesigns and all of the jokes about it are really funny. The whole show having a running gag of making fun of sunstreaker is great. I like how they throw Cliff jumper of the side like they should have done with that figure. The points are so on point I love all of the voice acting. The jokes about time travel being dumb is funny and the dramatic reveal of sky lynx is great I think there could be a funny seen of him walking out like he’s on WWE celebrating while rock music is in the background. The Decepticons only coming in at the end is nice, breaking up the story with more bad guys works we’ll hear and it still ties into the next season. This video is just so good I don’t think there was a single joke that I didn’t laugh at. I am also not smart enough to look at Twitter to realize why there was no Friday video and I was going crazy trying to figure out why there was no video and what I was missing. I checked Twitter today and I am so dumb.
Well I mean I haven't done a Friday video in like a month because I'm just so Exhausted.
But thank you. I'm so proud that everything worked out so well for you. I'm very proud of how this one turned out.
"I see the first thing you did was look up local swear words. I did too."
"I need you to understand a very scientific concept: time is stupid."
Wheeljack is getting the best lines in this.
Thank you so much. I was proud of the work I did with him.
Though I think Optimus and Ironhide had some bangers too.
@@PerspectiveEnd Ditto
8:04 That is so messed up, but at the same time that’s kind of hilarious
I liken it to him putting Sideswipe in Clown Make Up he cant take off.
I love these “building a better [blank]” videos. I’m curious if you have any more planned (I could see the dreaded Prime Wars being a possibility. That show failed to tell a good story, advertise several toys and write any character who wasn’t named Megatron or Overlord)
But yeah, this one was great. I especially loved Wheeljack’s complete lack of morals and the reference to “better seige”’s running joke of “Goldbug”. plus the quick Bumblejumper reference was fun.
I have at least Kingdom Planned, and I've thought about doing a PWT.
Though I don't know that I'd say that Wheeljack doesn't have Morals, I'd say he just did a Prank and Committed super hard to the bit.
@@PerspectiveEnd yeesss I can't wait for kingdom, I loved your better siege video and this even more, and I despise the kingdom show, because they did all the bw characters dirty.
I do love how you incorporated so many characters from earthrise into this. It just amazes me as, I don’t think I’ve ever seen something that incorporates characters. And it turning to be good, but now. I believe I found the only thing that broke that pattern
Thank you so much. I don't know I feel like plenty of serries have done it before me, it's just that the WFC sucked at it.
yeah you’re right. If they made a tv show based off of legacy. Just hoping that wouldn’t suck
1. Congratulations Beltfed, amazing voices as always.
2. Congratulations PE, this is a fucking great video!
3. The Wheeljack show is perfect.
4. OMG A MASTERFORCE REFRENCE IN A PERSPECTIVEEND VIDEO WOOOOO!!! FUCK YEA!!!!!!
(if unintentional, Doubledealers Japanese name is Clouder)
There Is no way that wasn't intentional. Also Clouder is a different dude altogether.
My point was Clouder is how Japan imported/translated Doubledealer
@@Starshine13131 I understand your point I just wanted to clarify to you that they are seperate dudes because I didn't know you already knew.
Same here! We clarified each others clarifications!
@@Starshine13131 You could say that's a "Double" Classification
I love the humour you put into the series here, it’s a nice departure from the taking itself too seriously trend which Transformers seems to have sometimes. My favourite small joke was the mispronunciation of human places
Thank you. And yes totally. I'm so sick of the parts of this franchise that seem embarrassed of them selves, so they have to be Super Serious so you know this "ISN"T FOR KIDS" what's wrong with being fun?
The raw charisma from the voice acting was top tier!
Thank you very much!
That whole upgrading the autobots to new bodies that look like their counterparts is smart but also seems like an homage to how transformers armada did with their upgrades
It wasn't quite an Homage to that, but done in the well worn knowlege that it's not that weird for them to change characters to look like others.
The idea of the autobots having new bodies is a interesting concept,the voice actors did a pretty decent job best one for me was ironhide/grapple.
Well Voice Actors, you mean me and Beltfed. Beltfed was Ironhide, and he KILLED it.
@@PerspectiveEnd he sure did
@@domydomy6668 hope he does more in the future. He was spectacular!!
You know what's be cool? A "Fixing Beast Machines."
I can't really do that because the problem with Beast Machines is really just a flawed concept, and a HIDEOUS art style.
It's not really that there's plot or even necessarily dialogue that needs to be repaired, more that it just approached a sequel like too much of it's own thing, and didn't really have the teeth to make it matter.
I’ve been waiting for this moment for a long time. Keep up the great work perspective. Also this is a roast you should have done, “these writers were probably promoted to this garbage to write Velma only to be fired midway through and rehired as negative brain cell people.”
Well I did Wizards of the Coast because they are owned by Hasbro.
This feels more like a you tube skit than a rewrite
How do you mean. Like yeah a lot of the dialogue is supposed to be funny, but that's just because I think the show needed a lot more levity than it had.
And it's really more about the change to the plot. Like the new structure actually makes sense.
It’s hard to say which scene is my favorite, anytime anyone speaks is perfection.
Thank you very much!
@@PerspectiveEnd You’re Very Much Welcome! Thank you for the quick response!!
@@PerspectiveEnd Did you leave a reply on every comment you mad lad!? The amount of care and respect you have for your viewers' thoughts is astounding!!
I try to. I'll admit it's gotten harder and harder over time, since the number of comments per day has grown so much since I started, but the thought of giving up on trying makes me very sad, so I continue to grind my head against the wall for the time being.
After all these months (and hellish production) we finally have this video. Holy mother of primus
Side note, it warms my heart that perspective is a part of the dnd community
Side side note, this plot is actually fantastic. I would 100 percent watch this
Thank you. And yeah I am. Have you never watched my Channel Opener?
Now to wait the conclution of the trilogy in fixing kingdom!
Hopefully it wont take another two years.
This is why hasbro needs to hire fans to write the shows
I don't know if it has to be fans, it just needs to be people who aren't incompetent.
@@PerspectiveEnd and people who actually care about this franchise
Or at least writers who actually give a shit
Interesting how you tied doubledealer in his human form from masterforce.
Thank you, I was proud of that little bit.
This is great, I really love how much better this is than the original, the way you fit in the characters were very funny and clever. Good job
Thank you. I don't know that I'd agree that it's better, but it is for sure different, and improved in some ways, though I think lesser in others. Like there was a lot less variety in the visuals here.
I think the reformatting idea is really interesting and cool and this is just such a unique idea in general, great job
Thank you very much, and yeah I was quite proud of it, because it simplifies so much.
poor side- I mean sunstreaker but on the flip side, great work on fixing earthrise
want to see more of this version of sky lynx in kingdom (if/when you have the time for it). That entrance was just comedic in the best way possible
Thank you so much! Happy so many people really enjoyed this.
I mean I was planning on keeping him around for Kingdom.
Tbh this really makes me wish Hasbro would just adapt the IDW comics into a series or animated films like DC. There is such a strong basis for so many stories and the writers really knew how to use lots of characters very effectively. The WFC trilogy felt like a slightly better Prime wars trilogy and that’s not saying much
What about a Beast Wars reboot show based on the IDW comics?
that would be awesome since in my unpopular opinion I grew up with Beast Wars more than G1 imo.
No offense by the way.
@@kinnikuman-devilman_fan_2002 like the recent IDW comics? I’m not into those at all, I’m referring to stuff like MTMTE, Lost Light, last stand of the wreckers, that era of IDW would be great adapted into animation.
@@Natee178 Oh, ok understood.
There's a strong Fanbase asking for that, and it's shocking that they just wont.
@@PerspectiveEnd I’m just getting into them but I can see why. They definitely would need to be streamlined a tad bit but I think they have a pretty great blueprint that they surprisingly refuse to use.
Okay, the idea of the Allspark burning out and them needing to time travel I did not see coming, or the change of looks
One of the things I like the most about this is foreshadowing Doubledealer's existential crisis using the sky.
I'm glad I could surprise you.
Thank you. I was proud of that.
Some parts of the video are very interesting, while others are very complicated and confusing like the different bodies for the autobots and Sky Lynx coming out of nowhere to help. Interesting Ideas, but too complicated for a kids toy commercial. Loved the Doubledealer/Clouder idea.
I don't think so. 1 it's been done before. All through out the UT has stuff like the Body changing happened, and reformatting is just a normal part of Transformers in general.
And Skylynx didn't come out of no where, he was on the ship, but it's not like a Giant Dragon who's taller than all the local buildings is going to be helpful with stealth missions.
I mentioned before you had got me thru some brutal times and entertained me while I was hospitalized and paralyzed. Jan 25 of 2021 I was in a really brutal accident, shouldn't have made it thru but somehow I survived: rolling an f250 into a field 300ft. Walked 50ft from the accident till my femur fully broke in half. A cop found me face down in the snow. Got transferred to a local hospital (it was too snowy for air lift) from the they packed my insides to stabilize my organs to be transferred to the closest trauma center. Vitals crashed otw there. I remained in a coma/on life support for a month. Went in at 400lbs and woke up at 240lbs and couldn't move any part of my body or speak so I didn't know for about 2 or 3 days who was in the accident or wat had happened. Found out I coded blue after they reconstructed my left hip and coded blue again after they reconstructed my femur. Also had my right pelvis reconstructed. Right oblique is non-existent and will remain that way just like my broken right collar bone and separated left shoulder. Also broke 5 vertebrae, 13 ribs, with a multitude of organ failures such as double collapsed lungs, and renal failure. I also got double pneumonia and sepsis while in a coma. Just this past October they were able to put my colon back in place but I still don't have a right oblique so my kidney has a tendency to pop out above my pelvis (I wear a weight belt specifically to hold it in place when I workout). And I have yet to get fixed the football size abdominal hernia on my upper abdomen. Lost all my muscle, kept all the fat. Had to learn how to do literally everything again from pointing my finger to walking and everything in between do you normally take for granted in everyday life. I'm 6 ft 3 and currently weigh 290lbs building myself back up. Yeah by all rights I shouldn't be here but I just wanna share my story to help people keep on keepin on. Sry for the short story🤣 but transformers has played a significant roll in my life and my healing. And you have been a part of that healing, Mr End. Thank you for making content the way you do.
Jesus man. I'm so glad you made it out of that. That sounds horrifying.
I am so proud to hear I could make these last two years even 1% more bearable.
Honestly, ik u didnt really meant for it, but making wheeljack the main character was a genius move
It's an ensemble, but he is focal given that he's the one who knows what's going on, and thank you!
It feels like I've been waiting a lifetime for this.
I love the idea of the bots changing bodies. The only thing I would change about the bodies is Ironhide would be Hoist or Trailbreaker.
That would have made a lot of sense, but at the same time, it wouldn't have made the color swap Red for Yellow.
@@PerspectiveEnd True.
Thank you for making Sky Lynx useful in Earthrise he is my favorite transformer character
If Sky Lynx existed IRL he would be very disappointed with his original depiction in Earthrise
Skylinx: "Me? Humble?! BAH!"
@@wanderingaceminecraftandmo8034" My accomplishments are grand they deserve to be told in story"
I love Skylynx, and the fact that all he did in the real ER was have a Pointless Conversation with Optimus, then die was SUUUUUUUCH a waste.
@@PerspectiveEnd I know maybe if the ark exploded or something and he had to carry them would have been cool in the original show if he had a personality in the original show it would have brought some flavor to the bland ass show
@@wanderingaceminecraftandmo8034 "Indeed, that is complete BALDERDASH"
I know nothing about the Netflix shows, but I had a blast watching this!!!!!
I'm happy to have entertained you so.
the voice for Megatron is so good! it’s a lot like War and Fall of Cybertron Megatron
I kinda love the star trek vibe you gave to the beginning of the story. Love the ideas you have for this
I love Star Trek, but I don't know what you mean by the Star Trek Vibe?
@@PerspectiveEnd I feel like "Ship encountering a friendly ship, only for a massive change to occur and the once friendly ship is out for blood" is a very TNG opening
Holy shit! Never thought I'd see this series continued on lol.
I have always wanted to continue it.
Not surprised the voices in this is soooooo much better then the original
Well you see I did something they seemed incapable of with the actual show. I did voice direction, and asked for retakes when the lines didn't come out right.
This is your best video yet, I love these concepts soooo much, and I'm so sad this isn't what we got, I love how Optimus actually gets a personality unlike most other shows, I love how the earth is a post apocalyptic land were the quintisons basically brainwashed every one and upgraded them into cool robots. I thought it was hilarious how wheeljack pranked sideswipe, and his reactions to all that, I love the creepy factor that it had, kinda like what the actual show tried to do. This is soooo much better than what we got and I really wish that this was an actual show. I love this soooo much. 100/10 I hope you do a fixing kingdom one, but I understand if you don't, because this must have token a super long time. Also great voice acting, from both you and beltfed.
I'm proud to hear that.
I'm glad you noticed that. That's what I tried so hard to do. I wanted him to have energy and be able to make jokes.
That wasn't quite what I was going for, the Quintessons took charge, but it wasn't that they Brainwashed everyone or altered them into robots, the allspark pulsing in the past changed all the organics into machines.
The Creepy Factor?
And thank you!
@@PerspectiveEndYour welcome. Also in the beginning when the humans greeted them and then got turned into robots, plus the mystery of the whole thing made me assume that you were giving it a creepy vibe. But yeah this concept is honestly better than a lot of tf shows. Again great job.
Respect the high moon Megatron impression and the custom
Thank you very much, and yeah he does a KILLER High Moon Megs.
@@PerspectiveEnd it’s really good!
The most brutal indictment of Earthrise I can deliver is the fact that two years after its release I can’t even remember when or why I stopped watching it. Or even what parts of it I did watch.
I can remember it, but that's just cause it made me so angry listening to all the Dialogue that didn't function.
Props for referencing Sky Lynx and Wheeljack being buddies like in the G1 comics, and it'd be a believable excuse to not have him show up till the end, due to how big he is when actually to scaled to his fellow bots, as it would likely take a while to reformat him to an earth mode.
Wheeljack: "... and I based his alt mode off the first thing we saw here, before everything went south due to how stupid the spacetime continuum is."
Prime: "Wheeljack, stop talking. Sky Lynx.... Put yourself back together, because I don't know which one I'm supposed to talk to."
Upper and lower halves (sitting across from each other): "Me of course."
Prime: "STOP THAT!"
Wheeljack: "Prime, don't think about it too hard, or you processor will explode."
Exactly! Those were my precise thoughts.
Oh man, I love that interaction you wrote there.
i was watching this and the "WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME" caught me off guard insanely
Happy to hear that.
The Sunstreaker bit made me cry(from laughing)
I'm glad to hear that.
That move with sunstreaker and sideswipe was a stroke of genius and I’m mad that I didn’t think of it. Great work, I’m sorry you gave yourself such an ambitious project.
Thank you. And yeah, that was actually a recent idea of mine, not one of the things I'd been thinking about for a long time.
And it was sure tiring to try to pull this off.
Outstanding work PerspectiveEnd!! This was an epic retelling of Earthrise, and I really enjoyed Wheeljack trolling everyone. lol Keep on being amazing.
Thank you very much, and yeah everyone loved Jerkassjack.
@@PerspectiveEnd You're welcome. "Jerkassjack" that's a good one. :D
@@TFfangeekAgree
This was so worth the wait. I think you should use wheeljack in a new short "The wheeljack show" lol well done
A bunch of people are asking for that. I'm glad you all love it so much.
This was really good I just two pieces of constructive criticism
1. I feel like the Cons kinda just showed up outta nowhere at the end with proper build up
2.20:26 I feel Optimus wouldn't be making cracks at Wheeljack when it appears that all hope is lost.
Again this constructive criticism and I really liked the video
1 That was kind of the point. There'd be a Little more there in a full show because I'd have the time to hint at their arrival, but I didn't want to waste the Audience's time with a whole lot of plot about them that didn't matter.
2 I wanted Optimus to have more youthful energy, and a sense of humor in this one. I'm so Sick of Tired Old Humorless Prime.
Is it a little inappropriate how he reacted, but at the same time, I thought him trying to take it as best as possible and not dwell on it, would be a lot less rote than him being super upset that ALLL IS LOST!
Anyways thank you. If you have any more criticism I'd be happy to hear it. It's just these ones were things I'd already considered while writing it.
Love this wheeljack
Edit: not sure about everything else but at least wheeljack was PERFECTION
Really? Whats wrong with the rest of the Characters?
Anyways glad you love Jokey JerkJack.
@@PerspectiveEnd one, they are not wheeljack-azz, 2 not much the chatacters but i think is the story, i get the idead but, something feels... Off, although i will admit, way better than whatever the official earthrise was
Oh my god it finally happened! Hell must have frozen over!
(Congrats on 11K by the way!)
"Waltuh, put your Transformers collection away Waltuh"
Thank you very much, and it sure has been a long time in coming.
Finally fixing earthrise is here
At long long LONG last.
The biggest red flag of how this whole series was people saying "its not your grandpas transformers".
Yeah. Nothing good comes from being like VELMA...
Yeessssss I’ve been waiting for this, can’t wait to see how perspective uses brain cells unlike the show writers
zero plus zero is still zero
I guess you could say
You would've waited an eternity for this
Cells? Please I only need 1 to have more than the actual show writers.
Amazing, you made Wheeljack the best character
Thank you very much!
Bro...earthrise will never make me happy. But this, makes me happy!!!
It sparks Joy.
This is my head canon now
I'm glad you enjoyed it so much.
The bumble jumper refrence was great still want a bumper figure.
Thank you I was really inspired during that.
I love your mad scientist Wherljack.
Thank you so much!
16:14 - 19:56 is pure gold.
20:22 - 20:37 is my favorite bit.
12:52 - Wheeljackass, I love it!!
I did feel rather inspired writing that bit.
Obviously Wheeljack being the main character is a major improvement to the story, and I hope he continues to be so during the possible rewriting of Kingdom.
Also, another transformer stream is coming soon, are you gonna cover the reveals?
I'm guessing the reveals are next video. And Wheeljack makes the entire video 10x more funny.
I think there might be enough to finally do it yes.
As for Future Wheeljack, I don't know, we will see. I haven't put as much thought into the exact lay out of the Kingom Repaint.
Why is this more enjoyable than Netflix’s version
Because the Netflix version was miserable.
6:19 I was watching this video while eating in the kitchen and my mother bursed out laughing when she heard that.
I'm happy to hear that part landed.
hoenstly should of just turned bumblebee into gold bug just because wheeljack thought it would be a more fitting form to fit the name prime called him
I mean that's a way to take it, but that was one of the more rare figures from the line.
Earthrise means something about space
Indeed it does, and it doesn't mean anything in the context of the show.
This is better than the whole WFC trilogy, fr
Thank you so much!
I really like these type of videos so I’d be interested to see like a pitching a legacy series after a fixing kingdom video, I’m sure you could come up with something better than what ever they were planning for legacy show that Netflix did not want
I might do that, we will see. I'm not sure. Like I'm doing this to prove what was here was fixable.
I would have loved to see this version of Earthrise just for the existential crises that the Autobos were having. And contrary to popular opinion, I like yellow cars. I would like to have a yellow beetle, but my epilepsy is not allowing me to get a driving license.
Sorry to hear that. I didn't know that you had Epilepsy. I hope none of my videos have ever caused you trouble?
@@PerspectiveEnd Thank you for your concerns. Your content have been fine since day 1. Im glad that nowdays most YT content creators do put up a warning in their videos if it contains triggering lights.
This is way better than actual earthrise
Thank you. I thought so too.
Very creative. I wrote what I thought WFC should be myself (20ish years ago I did the same for the Unicron Trilogy, my first experience with unsatisfying media that squanders the premise).
I didn't constrain myself to the number of episodes (making what you did even more impressive), doubling the number of episodes and adding a season. Siege is the last day on Cybertron, Earthrise is the trip to Earth (ending as Earth rises on their scanners, yeah, it's cheesy), Earthfall is G1 redone my way, and Kingdom is the trip back to the Beast Wars. In my story Earthfall has an ongoing plotline where they realize something happened to Optimus between their crash landing and awakening millions of years later. The Maximals botched the clean up, leaving clues that Jetfire puts together, sending them back into the past.
My Earthrise is them starting out going to colonies (basically the Amazon Galactic Odyssey locations) while being hunted by Doubledealer and his troops, who work for the Quintessons. They're also pursued by Megatron in the Nemesis.
I do like your approach and would say it's better than what we got, but that is fanning with the faintest praise possible. The poop I cleaned out of my cat's litter today is better than what we got.
It's fine that you made it longer. I wanted to do it in the same constraints to prove how incompetent the actual writers were, because you can make something good with what they had. They just didn't.
Having Doubledealer being an actual Mercenary is something I considered but decided I didn't have the time for.
Indeed. It was easy to be better when what we got was so bad.
Finally, the autobots know how to rise!!!
It's on the back of Skylynx.
As a general summary of one season, it works. It's rough around the edges, with some spite coming from the original sucking so hard mixed in, but all together sorta enjoyable video.
Thank you. And yeah there were some parts I wanted to have more room to breathe. Like the whole Doubledealer face turn feels rushed in this format. It would have more build up in an actual show.
How to describe Earthrise:
"pain in the ass" - Wheeljack
Indeed.
Hell if I knew you needed voice actors I would have volunteered.
I didn't need Voice Actors, I actually Initially did all the voices my self just in case it didn't work out getting Beltfed in to record on time.
I included him not because I needed to but because I wanted to have my close friend in the video.
Ideas for Building a Better Kingdom
- Once everyone goes through the Space Bridge, heading towards Prehistoric Earth, The Allspark whizzes past The Ark, Sky Lynx and The Nemesis, causing...
*Optimus, Megatron, Starscream, and Soundwave to shrink, becoming their Core Class variants
*Knock out Sky Lynx
*Turn SunSwipe into Earth Sideswipe, GappleHide into Inferno, and CliffBee into Worlds Collide Bumblebee
*Give Mirage an Earth mode
*Generate Blaster into existence(for no reason lol)
*Give The Ark a Robot mode
-Once they all land, The Autobots will meet The Maximals(which are the same cast as og Kingdom, with the additions of BW Skywarp and BW Grimlock)
-Episodes 1-4 will just be used to help establish all the new characters, as well as tease Unicron and his minions at the end of each episode
-Episode 5 will have a shit ton happening, including...
*The Allspark going haywire upon entering the atmosphere, turning a random bat into Fangry, giving Blackarachnia her toy/Worlds Collide deco, and turning Primal into Nemesis Primal, that last one being reversed midway through Episode 6
*The Ark finally now able to transform into his Robot mode
*Of course, a giant war between the 2(?) factions
*Unicorn, Galvatron, Cyclonus, and Nemesis Prime all showing up at the end of the episode
-Episode 6 will have everyone team up against Unicron and his minions, while The Allspark rockets towards Earth's surface. After The Ark uses what can only be described as a big fuck off canon to send Unicron and his minions to God knows where. Everyone hightails it off of Earth, all life on Earth is wiped out, leaving it barren and ready for new life
I don't know how to end it, but that's my "pitch", thoughts?
Those are some interesting ideas, though I do think the Core class guys are supposed to be normal size, just scaled to Titans.
BW Grimlock is supposed to be Regular Grimlock reformatted into a BW character?
I don't want Unicron in my Kingdom show, I think he's overplayed at this point.
The allspark hasn't hit the planet in the first 5 episodes? How did they land before it?
I'd say that you have a Bunch of interesting ideas, but I think you need to simplify it a little bit. This season shouldn't be about Fighting Unicron, it's built up so far to it being about Saving Earth. That kind of needs to be the focus I think.
Though you could have it be about winning the Autobot Decepticon war with the power of the Allspark too. I just think Unicron is a Bridge too Far.
But good work. I think if you refine this it could be quite fun.
I'd pay real good money (if I had it) to see the alternate universe where this version of earthrise dropped instead
I wish that was the universe where we lived.
My goodness if only we got this 🤦
It could be pitched as a potential future series perhaps
I'm glad you enjoyed this so much, I was very proud of it.
Replaying the song impossible in my head reading the title
What song?
I would totally watch the series
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed.
The Wheeljack show is perfect for me, he’s my favourite Autobot
He's up there for me too.
I WANT THIS SO BAD. The humor was something that was definitely needed in the original.
Ps. Are you planning on reviewing SND the one? (Chug scale Idw Optimus prime)
I am planning on doing that yes.
And thank you. Yeah the show needed to not be so DAMN dour. Yes I want a serious Transformers but not one that isn't fun.
12:53 Wheeljackass. How have I never thought about that…
I'm glad so many people approve.
The Fixing Siege series was the first thing I saw on this channel, and I remember watching those as they came out. I like the idea of replacing the toys but not the voice actors, as they get abused enough in work already. Also, the Time Travel bit is genius. If you do kingdom in a few years, I'd be happy to try to voice a character or two then! Congrats again on 11K!
Well I wasn't really trying to get someone to do voices I cant or something, I just wanted to include my good buddy Beltfed, including him was a huge logistical pain too. It was worth it, but man it probably more than doubled the amount of time it took to cut the audio.
Thank you. I was actually shocked when Kingdom didn't do time Travel. It seemed like such a foregone conclusion with that story.
@@PerspectiveEnd 1. That's awesome! 2. I know right?
Wheeljack is the funniest character and he makes 90% of the scenes he's in hilarious.
Thank you! I'm so glad everyone loved what I did with him here.
1:33 LOL
So much funny in this video, great job, the episode 6 dialog between wheel jack and optimus made me cry ." Time is stupid"
Can't wait to see your review on Earthspark (if you do one)
Why would I do Earthspark? So far that show has been Decent?
You should have the Autobots fighting over and energon on cyberTron so that they can get off the planet to look for the Allspark
What do you mean have the autobots fighting over the Energon?
@@PerspectiveEndjust like how you wrote it originally with one line in episode 1 saying they need the energon to get off the planet to get the allspark
When megatron comes on screen, immediately imagine a toddler trying to get a gold star from the teacher, but this one has both the speech pattern of a war criminal and his voice
I wasn't a subscriber when you did fixing siege, so I think nows an appropriate time to say I think a good way to still use the allspark but also making it less op is by making it a food preservative. By that, I mean it would keep energy fresh and stop it going toxic. That way, energon will be more valuable, and we could use use the toxic energon (which is obviously tox-en) as a way to explain why the surface is so dangerous
An interesting idea for the Allspark, but you'd have to introduce the concept of Energon Going bad and what that means first.
@@PerspectiveEnd fair point, I just really want tox-en to be used more often
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To prove your point even further, there was an episode of Prime where there was a full model of a space suit, and since Polygond Pictures WAS willing to reuse assets for WFC...
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Out of everything I have expected, hearing your voice go screechy to the point of cracking is not on the top of that list.
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Of all the ways to call attention to their charmingly odd-looking ears, having Ironhide casually mention it like this is comedy gold!
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The idea of Sunstreaker (not Sideswipe) going "Fuck you Wheeljack, I told you no one likes yellow!" is quite possibly the funniest way to pay off that running gag.
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The one line that can improve this already hilarious explanation is Wheeljack saying "like, dumber than Mudflap stupid" as a rip on the RotF character.
That would be super useful yes.
That wasn't actually me. That was Dexter Gilligan in an episode of Sanity Not Included.
Thank you so much!
Thank you.
I'd just rather to pretend those movies don't exist.
Can't wait for fixing kingdom in 2099
It won't take that long.
How does this feel like an actual Transformers cartoon, without the animation?
Good job. You captured the spirit of Transformers perfectly.
I bought 86 Hot Rod for 27 bucks. It's technically cheaper than the online listing since I bought it offline, no shipping fee.
Which one I should buy first?
1. Legacy Bulkhead (he's expensive online. He's a damn favorite, I can't find him anywhere for a good enough price. Let's hope that one corner in the mall will give him 10% more discount.)
2. Legacy Jhiaxus (seems to be the one to get the early discount like LegArcee and 86 Junkheap)
3. RID Prime Arcee ($20)
It's an old model, but it checks out. I want this goddess of beauty so bad. But my parents think she's ugly.
4. Kingdom Blackarachnia ($12)
Should I buy this, or should I wait for Animated Blackarachnia?
Of course I'm gonna buy 86 WreckGar next month, for my birthday.
This is the one after that.
I'm gonna wait for a Legacy Blaster retool with a visor. He looks super ugly without it.
Thank you so much. And it's because I'm not ashamed of loving it. Too many people look at passions like this as something that needs to get matured up to be allowed to have but I'm not about to make it something it's not because I'm insecure.
I'd say Bulkhead or Jhiaxus. Those are both top tier figures, and they did win their respective WTBs.
The Clouder reference I would not expect from you but I like it
You are welcome. I also tried to make the first name pair with the second to have the same cadence as DoubleDealer so DylanClouder.
@@PerspectiveEnd Ahh nice
I love this version of Sky Lynx.
The one that shows up for 10 seconds, and doesn't die?
@@PerspectiveEnd Exactly.
This video was more fun to watch than earthrise
It also wasted like 1/7th the amount of time as that trashfire.
YESSSSSSSSS ITS HERE!!
Hope it lived up to the wait?
@@PerspectiveEnd It did better
Maybe one day someone can make an entire stop motion animation series based off of your rewrite
That could be fun, though I don't think I'll be the person to do that.
First
edit: That was an L thing to do sorry y’all
Congratulations on your firsts. I don't hold it against you.
We need a rewritten kingdom now
I mean I do plan on doing that.
Rewriting earthrise… with beltfed voice acting… and stop motion?! Attention PE fans, this is NOT a drill, I repeat, THIS IS NOT A DRILL, we have the best video of 2023 already
Well I'm happy to hear you feel that way at lest.