My Honest Poem by Rudy Francisco

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  • @Snowleopard2938
    @Snowleopard2938 Před 4 lety +5

    I was born on July 27th.
    I hear that makes me a Leo.
    I have no idea what that actually means.
    Iʼm 5ʼ6”.
    I weigh 145 lbs.
    I donʼt know how to swim,
    and Iʼm a sucker for a girl with a nice smile and clean sneakers
    Iʼm still learning how to whisper.
    Iʼm often loud in places where I should be quiet.
    Iʼm often quiet in places where I should be loud.
    I was born feet first and Iʼve been backwards ever since.
    I like ginger ale…
    a lot.
    I’ve been told that I give really bad hugs.
    People say it feels like Iʼm trying to escape;
    most of the time it’s because I am.
    Secretly I get really nervous every time someone gets close enough to hear me breathe.
    I have this odd fascination with things like sand castles and ice sculptures.
    I assume itʼs because I usually find myself dedicating time to things that will only last a few moments.
    Thatʼs also why I tend to fall in love with women who will never love me back, and I know that sounds crazy but itʼs actually easier than it seems. And to be honest I think itʼs safer that way. You see, relationships, they often remind me that Iʼm not afraid of heights or falling, but I am scared to death of everything thatʼs going to happen the very moment that my body hits the ground. Iʼm clumsy. Yesterday I tripped over my self-esteem, I landed on my pride, and it shattered like an iPhone with a broken face. Now I canʼt even tell whoʼs trying to give me a compliment.
    See, Iʼve never been in the military, but I have this purple heart; I got it from beating myself up over things I canʼt fix.
    And I know this sounds weird, but sometimes I wonder what my bed sheets say about me when iʼm not around. I wonder what the curtains would do if they found out about all the things iʼve done behind their back.
    I’ve got a hamper thatʼs overflowing with really, really loud mistakes, and a graveyard in my closet.
    Iʼm afraid that if I let you see my skeletons, youʼll grind my bones into powder and get high off my fault lines.
    Hi, my name is Rudy.
    I enjoy frozen yogurt, people watching, and laughing for absolutely no reason at all,
    but I donʼt allow myself to cry as often as I need to.
    I have solar power confidence,
    and a battery operated smile.
    My hobbies include:
    editing my life story,
    hiding behind metaphors,
    and trying to convince my shadow that Iʼm someone worth following.
    You see, I donʼt know much but I do know this:
    I know that heaven is full of music,
    and I know that God,
    He listens to my heartbeat on his iPod.
    It reminds him…
    that we still got work to do

  • @NELLYHENRIQUEZ
    @NELLYHENRIQUEZ Před 12 lety +1

    This poem is amazing! Omg! "I'm afraid if I let you see my skeletons you'll grind my bones into powder & get high on my flaws" you are a lyricists! If you're not already published then it's in your future because you are truly talented

  • @brianajanelll
    @brianajanelll Před 10 lety +1

    i honestly have no words. every time.

  • @1904.Lowridaz
    @1904.Lowridaz Před 9 lety +2

    See, I've never been in the military but I have this purple heart. Its from beating myself up.

  • @godsofearth_media
    @godsofearth_media Před 10 lety

    Impeccable!

  • @MaestroDeSean
    @MaestroDeSean Před 11 lety +2

    I can relate to this poem on so many levels. Keep doing what you do, Rudy!

  • @AnTzWiF3
    @AnTzWiF3 Před 10 lety

    He's awesome GOD bless him. ❤️

  • @mclguitar1
    @mclguitar1 Před 11 lety

    This is amazing.

  • @HeyitsMeGuy
    @HeyitsMeGuy Před 12 lety

    Got super excited when I saw this in my sub box.

  • @meeegghan
    @meeegghan Před 11 lety +1

    2:40! Amen! hahaha

  • @CathyTheDestroyer
    @CathyTheDestroyer Před 12 lety

    this is amazing.

  • @alwaysthetomboy
    @alwaysthetomboy Před 12 lety

    ...you took the words right out of my mouth, ;)

  • @LOS7error
    @LOS7error Před 11 lety

    wow, love it. 1 day off my birthday.

  • @SalaciousSerenity
    @SalaciousSerenity Před 11 lety +1

    You are such a wonderfully sweet sensitive guy. I get that now. Please do me one favour. Learn to love yourself completely and unconditionally.

  • @carolinagutierrez9687
    @carolinagutierrez9687 Před 4 lety

    I looked up to you you expired me to write poems in the way that I didn't know I could you expired me to write so many things in one word and I hope you read this because I thank you so much because the way you use your words it's like magic but with beautiful words and that's the precious thing about writing

  • @harleyfoster3713
    @harleyfoster3713 Před 11 lety

    I think its amazing how he can express himself, i am now making one

  • @robertlopez2375
    @robertlopez2375 Před 4 lety

    WOW GOD LISTENS TO MY HEART BEAT ON HIS IPOD !!! WOWWWWW

  • @kawlinnersnow
    @kawlinnersnow Před 12 lety

    the best in the biz.

  • @nanidato
    @nanidato Před 11 lety

    #1

  • @JNealOfficial
    @JNealOfficial Před 12 lety

    My motivation

  • @dtel7154
    @dtel7154 Před 12 lety

    Happy late birthday!!!

  • @jobazam
    @jobazam Před 11 lety

    I think you just described me.

  • @PenCapsandBandAids
    @PenCapsandBandAids Před 11 lety +1

    My sneakers are clean, can I keep you?

  • @Kaveh25
    @Kaveh25 Před 6 lety

    pay your tribute to Anis Mojgani... do the right thing

  • @jeyprnssa
    @jeyprnssa Před 6 lety

    Help