PERFECTING the Accuplacer® Writeplacer® ESL essay!

Reviewing our second Accuplacer® Writeplacer® ESL sample essay. This essay also scored a perfect score: 6 out of a possible 6.
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00:00 Opening comments
02:36 Paragraph 1 review
05:08 Paragraph 2 review
08:53 Paragraph 3 review
13:29 Paragraph 4 review
17:42 Paragraph 5 review
18:55 Closing comments
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