Chapman Video Essay - Disneyland Gateway

This is a video I'm currently working on for my submission to Dodge College, part of Chapman University. It's still in the rough stages, but I wanted to get some feedback, see how it looks online, check sound levels, and have a couple of friends check it out...Give your honest opinions.
This is basically trying to come up with something that hasn't been done and creative. The rules are that you can't appear in the video, 2 minute length, and it has to be about yourself (interest, personality, etc).

[@thelostduck]

Cool video. I love Disneyland too. How did you get in there when the lights were so dark and the place so empty?

[@DisneyDude]

I actually borrowed that footage from someone so I really don't know.

[@DisneyDude]

Thanks?

[@shp1]

this dude is such a bore..im ready to go to sleep