Stephen Burgess Don’t be rude and show some sympathy hun. Showing off that you can correct other peoplems grammar says a lot about you. Their first language isn’t english I’m sure.
Your horses physical form might pass but there spirit will forever be with you and when you pass they will find a way to get to you and be happy again because horses are incredible and will forever be with you
When ur horse walked it looked like it wanted to trot, when ur horse trotted it looked like it wanted to canter, When ur horse cantered it looked like it wanted to gallop 🤣
Hi I just wanted to say great vid but next time you do an story and you tack up take on something more realistic and walks to the horse's head to take on bridle it's your opinion but it will make it highly more realistic
This hit me hard because I used to have a horse her name was night she was my best friend to be honest she passed away two years ago and I still can’t get over her death but I know that she is in a better place now 🥺
I don't know why or how that "Everyone has a story" and that music made me cry bc I started thinking my dog... He died last year by car crash... I was so sad and so angry and I really miss him...
Hey! I'm Audrey Snowpaw. My hobby on CZcams is to watch SSO movie/series, and give some feedback/criticism. If you take offense to this, I allow you to delete my comment. But I would like you to read my judging and take the advice into account. Thanks! The rating is out of five. Introduction: It wasn't very intriguing, use of scenery playing is a little bit over-used and in my opinion there was too much of it. However, there was a little too much exposition. 3/5 --------------- Editing: The editing is very good, there's no watermarks and the quality is excellent. But there weren't many effects. 4.5/5 -------------- Music/Sound Effects: Good choice of sound effects, they matched the player and horse quite well. The music didn't have very good transitions and was not the right mood sometimes, but I liked the music none-the-less. Sometimes the music was too loud aswell. 3/5 ------------- Spelling/Grammar: Your grammar was a bit off, some words needed correct capitalization but your spelling was fantastic. I understand if English is not your first language. 3/5 ------------- Plot: The plot is extremely overused. It was almost predictable what would happen next. That's not a very good thing. But, it was a bit different to most other SSO movies, and I liked where it was headed most of the time. 2.5/5 ------------ Realism: Realism is a very important part in a SSO movie if it isn't based around fantasy. You did very well with your realism in your story, but keep in mind when giving a horse away to be euthanized you might want to untack it first. 5/5 ------------ Conclusion: I wasn't very satisfied with the ending. I was left wondering what happens next with Pluto, and to add the conclusion felt almost rushed? 2/5 ------------ Total: Overall it was a good movie, but it wasn't that intriguing and didn't leave me very interested. I applaud you though, because your total score was: 23/35 Well done! Please, do not take offense to this comment. I only want you to take advice and good vibes from it. You have a great potential to become a very good movie maker! :) - Audrey S.P
whenever i try to move the camera whilst on the horse,it just moves the horse!Do i have to be a Star Rider to move the camera whilst on the horse? P.S great movie!
LPS:Beach Collie, u do not have to be Star rider for that. U have to press right click on the mouse( don't click, u have to hold it ) then drag and it will move where ever u want ur screen angle to go! :) hope u understood cuz I am real bad at explaining things XOXO Jasmine Bhatia
80% of the story was exposition and like 15% rising action
You mean 80% of the story was exposition and like 20% rising action
What happened to the last 5%?
Sorry that the video might be confusing.. And the black screen that appeared just made it worse arghh!!
Heather Eaglenest no it's fine
Horsegirl 101535 thank you haha xx❤
Heather Eaglenest it was amazing
@@omfgidkwusntpfo6886 thank you xx❤
Hey! I play star stable too. I'm planning on making a short film. Any animation tips u got?
This story tells my whole life
I love your work. And I loved the ending. You gave me an idea of a story I want to make no copy ofc.
Midnightbeauty awww thank you, I bet yours will be amazing & I'll watch it for sure💗
beginning: oh god pls don't make me cry
when she says a friend i lost: -sobbing-
Sso is legit the BEST GAME EVER!!!
Also why don't y'all use the actual sounds in the game? It's better like that
at the end i cryed cuase it made me think of the poney i losed
Awwww xx😭❤
matt hewitt At the end, I cried because it made me think of the pony I lost. That is the correct grammar.
Awwww don't worry my mom always told me if you lose it you will get it again😘
@Stephen Burgess Their pony’s gone. You could show some sympathy
Stephen Burgess Don’t be rude and show some sympathy hun. Showing off that you can correct other peoplems grammar says a lot about you. Their first language isn’t english I’m sure.
I really like white grey horses ❤
The Flea bitten grey horse
I already started crying as soon as it came on
Amazing story!💗 Have you seen the new update? You can now hide, area name popups, friend requests, and plenty other things!😊 Great stry btw!
Thank you! And the update is really cool xx
Heather Eaglenest ye💗 keep up with the good work, im exited to see future work from you xoxo👍🏼 Btw congrats with a new sub!😉😂😊♥️
@@frannipotet1874 ❤❤
Your horses physical form might pass but there spirit will forever be with you and when you pass they will find a way to get to you and be happy again because horses are incredible and will forever be with you
They make me cry (very emotional) and do more I love to cry lol love the work you do
awwhhh, thank you so much :)
Im just amazed by how it took 2 MINUTES to get to the actual movie XD Good work. lol
It's sad and cute at the same time❤️
Good work, keep up, and good luck with your channel⭐
You made me remember my grandpa that died only 2yrs ago but for that I can thank you bcs now I will never forget him thanks so much
that was so lovely dont listen to anyone who thinks otherwise or else they got a fight on their hands
When ur horse walked it looked like it wanted to trot, when ur horse trotted it looked like it wanted to canter, When ur horse cantered it looked like it wanted to gallop 🤣
Wow I'm
Lost of work all I can say is.......
WELL DONE!!!!!!
thank you!
Wait in the beginning how did she tack her up?? 😧😯SHES IMMORTAL!! She has the force!! Lol sorry
Its great!
Stephanie & Britney thank you!❤xx
A horse doesn’t die the body does then horse moves into a new world named heaven ❤️
Lol!!! This movie/video was so sad!! It made me cry ;( but when she meets Pluto, i cry tears of joy! XDDDD
keep up the great work and don't listen to those haters
Leanna Taylor THANK YOUU!!! 💗💗💗💗❤
Best story ever!😭💗
thank you xx :)
i love this story i love horses and i think i cryed a little. i like the horses in it
It so awesome i still watch it many times and of course i cry when you sey words when your horse gone you awesome youtuber
awww, thank you xx
omg this made me cry thinking of my horse that is going to dye soon :(
Aww what a beautiful story! ❤ 😢
-claps. This was great in my opinion! Great job! You have a new subscriber! This was a beautiful story!
Your horse will never die
No I'm not going to cry I'm not gonna cry..... You did amazing 😍😀
Amazing :’) i love it
Saga Starpark thank you!!
I love it the video,the horse the everything!!!❤️❤️❤️😍
Thank youuuu!! 😂❤
I love this! Whats your recorder and editor? Xx
That made me cry love your videos so much keep going 😍
Thank you!! X
Beautiful! I love it!
"In dark times a light will always lead the way" -Heather
Girl! Why haven’t you got 10M this amazing!!
that was such a great story i cried
Oh my God.. This is such a great story! It almost made me cry... And I don't cry a lot... I just love this story, and I recommend it to anyone!! 💞 💙
BOOTIFUL!!! I subscribe now :3
thank you :) xx
Rly Beautiful horses c': I love that Pluto I have that first horse but It's all white c:
aww cute!!❤😍
The start slash beginning music nearly made me cry
Hi I just wanted to say great vid but next time you do an story and you tack up take on something more realistic and walks to the horse's head to take on bridle it's your opinion but it will make it highly more realistic
Amazing! Keep up the good work! I loved it!
Star Stable Stories thank you!!💓
That was great it was so good it was kinda sad I almost cried. This is the best movie I have seen in a while!!! U are so true!!!
spencegiz omg thank you so much😭😭💗
Heather Eaglenest ur totally welcome u deserve it!!!
Heather Eaglenest I hope someday this movie comes out on Netflix and TV it is an amazing movie and story!!!
Heather Eaglenest also u should get an award!!!
Cringe
Every typical Star Stable movie ever. Not to be rude
Lol true😂😂
*Sees title*
“Oh that looks pretty cool”
*clicks on video*
*sees bright green saddle*
*leaves*
Realism please sis
Run Awae yellow* 😂😂
Okay, i NEED that lusitano!!
I see a bay Lusi I click. Idk why don't sso xDD
I got a heart!!! Thank you so much heather!!!
Haha it's okay!! I heart everyone's comments ❤❤
This hit me hard because I used to have a horse her name was night she was my best friend to be honest she passed away two years ago and I still can’t get over her death but I know that she is in a better place now 🥺
aw im sorry :( and yes she is xx
😂 I own the same Connemara on SSO 😂
awwww! whats his/her name? :)
THIS MADE ME CRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I almost cried that was terrible to watch because I love animals so much
I don't know why or how that "Everyone has a story" and that music made me cry bc I started thinking my dog... He died last year by car crash... I was so sad and so angry and I really miss him...
I lost mine the same way a couple weeks ago..,
I'm a thousand four-100 like! Love you! More than one, please record.
I feel bad for the other horse that had its last few days
Good story!
Such a good video! Although I have noticed one thing - you have said that Pluto was a Lustinato instead of a Lusitano? Sorry it just jumped out at me
Sorry I spelt it wrong haha x
I got so emotional because it was like my horse who rode last month she pasted away a couple weeks ago :(((((
Wow.. so great! 😍
thank u!💕
this is a amazing video
that was amazing!
thank you!! :)
I cry this is so sad but very cool video😢😢😢😢😢😉😉😉😉😉😉
that was amazing well done👌😁👍
thank you! x
*Silence...IM ON MY WAY*
I'm wearing headphones!!!!
Moto G3 aaaahhhh 😂😂❤
I almost cried. Great job!
Thank you!❤❤❤
Your horse may die like mine did but he/she will stay in your heart forever
my good friends horse was put down today. he was 27 years old and was off the track.
I wish my Lusitano ran that fast 😂
haha, me with all my horses now xD
Great Job!
thank you!❤
Hey! I'm Audrey Snowpaw.
My hobby on CZcams is to watch SSO movie/series, and give some feedback/criticism. If you take offense to this, I allow you to delete my comment. But I would like you to read my judging and take the advice into account. Thanks! The rating is out of five.
Introduction: It wasn't very intriguing, use of scenery playing is a little bit over-used and in my opinion there was too much of it. However, there was a little too much exposition.
3/5
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Editing: The editing is very good, there's no watermarks and the quality is excellent. But there weren't many effects.
4.5/5
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Music/Sound Effects: Good choice of sound effects, they matched the player and horse quite well. The music didn't have very good transitions and was not the right mood sometimes, but I liked the music none-the-less. Sometimes the music was too loud aswell.
3/5
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Spelling/Grammar: Your grammar was a bit off, some words needed correct capitalization but your spelling was fantastic. I understand if English is not your first language.
3/5
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Plot: The plot is extremely overused. It was almost predictable what would happen next. That's not a very good thing. But, it was a bit different to most other SSO movies, and I liked where it was headed most of the time.
2.5/5
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Realism: Realism is a very important part in a SSO movie if it isn't based around fantasy. You did very well with your realism in your story, but keep in mind when giving a horse away to be euthanized you might want to untack it first.
5/5
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Conclusion: I wasn't very satisfied with the ending. I was left wondering what happens next with Pluto, and to add the conclusion felt almost rushed?
2/5
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Total: Overall it was a good movie, but it wasn't that intriguing and didn't leave me very interested. I applaud you though, because your total score was:
23/35
Well done! Please, do not take offense to this comment. I only want you to take advice and good vibes from it. You have a great potential to become a very good movie maker! :)
- Audrey S.P
At leas milly is in a happy place now ❤️
❤❤
Those 32 people that disliked this video are heartless 😖😩
Love it its amazing❤️❤️keep the great work up❤️crying already!!
Kelly Gadek awww thank you❤
You r so awesome at makings so movies. Great message at the end and it made me cry great vid
This makes me happy I recently had a ped die
Horses don't die (where do you buy these shoes)
xD and i really dont remember. you can check on the star stable database tho xx :)
this is great! but how do you lead your horse?
you need to buy the function x
Omg I cry at the start almost
Awwww xx💗
Wow, every 8 year old ever!!! For fuck sake, pussy.
i cried :o
awwww :( xx
😍
Pluto seen very nice and helpful
yes he is xx :)
so sad people should Care about there horses in star stable😢😯😢
Can you please make a part two?
What editing software do you use?
Sony Vegas pro 13 x
is she going to the slaughter?
I have a question. I have star stable and how do you lead your horse? Like when your walking?
Purple and Pink Swirl Girls Swirl you have to go to a trainer but it cost star coins
Megan Causey ok thank you!
Wah, so good. X From, *Fence xo*
TaekooksNamjin thank you❤
Hodně se ťy to povedlo
whenever i try to move the camera whilst on the horse,it just moves the horse!Do i have to be a Star Rider to move the camera whilst on the horse? P.S great movie!
LPS:Beach Collie, u do not have to be Star rider for that. U have to press right click on the mouse( don't click, u have to hold it ) then drag and it will move where ever u want ur screen angle to go! :) hope u understood cuz I am real bad at explaining things XOXO Jasmine Bhatia
Jasmine Bhatia thx
i cried :(
As such a cute story,also kinda sad,what breed us Pluto? :/
Thank you!! And he's a lustinato x❤
The Unicorn Gamer galaxy girl Lusitano.
Lusitano.
Lucitano
SOOOOO SAD IM CRYING :(
awwww :(
Why did milly have to die I'm crying
I like but it takes sooooo looooooong to start telling the story
thank you, and sorry about that xx :)
so beautiful the story taw great
Moldy Agent thank you xx💗
i just love star stable short movies
an did this really happen in real life
Poor thing she had to be put down
Your mean
Nah bitch I ain't mean, I'm brutally honest
@@rachel5698 stop being mean she meant no harm
@@rachel5698 stop being mean she meant no harm
The hoof sound ruined it XD
ER MER GERD IM CRYING SO HARD YOU ARE EVIL