The Critical Drinker: She-Hulk - A Lesson In Terrible Writing | Reaction!
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Dear producers of Marvel shows: hire this man to at LEAST review the drafts of the writers.
I mean they need to at least hire a couple of reasonable people... doesn't really have to be this guy just a handful of people's with good tastes....I mean just go to a comic book store and read the script and see of anyone laughs much
The predator and Jameson laughing was the best!
Especially when Drinker slowed down Jamieson. That part made me smile.
100 likes appreciate it everyone!
Notice how that cast interview had all the women, no Mark Ruffalo, that slimy lawyer guy, just the actresses …. That told me off the bat what message we might be seeing 🤔
I agree with the writing idea for the Drinker. I think he would provide a great marvel show
Chill thwre
@@gorcsauce696 he would
Since Critical Drinker is a writer himself. He understands the lazy writing we see in these MCU shows in comparison to the birth of it with Iron Man. They scapegoat conventional storytelling for a writers interpersonal beliefs shrouding these established comic characters. DC shows like Stargirl does a much better job writing female characters.
@@_ripVanWinkle_ books. 9 books. Will Jordan is his name.
now days writers trying make feminine characters famous only by bashing towards to opposite gender
@@_ripVanWinkle_ he just released dark harvest 🤷🏿♂️ that be a good place to start
@@sinferious Lol. Someone is jealous. Where's YOUR books? Lol.
@@sinferious true, being a writer isn't what makes him right. Being right is what makes him right
The predator laugh always get me cracking up 💯😂
I think the Critical Drinker raised some valid points here
He always does
Some?
Like Tyrone said I think people still wont accept it, maybe less people that usual I think.
His channel thrives on shitting on stuff, and I usually hate that sorta thing. But I gotta say out of all of the hate channels on CZcams he’s probably the least toxic
What does toxic mean?
this show also makes me realize how boring professor hulk is lmfao.
They destroyed the hulk
Especially since professor hulk is an actual villain
Drinker was saying literally EVERYTHING that I've been thinking how they could of done the writing better.
Key writers will have immersed themselves in humanity- the crowd so as to offer a diverse writing style in their dialog. Writers who hang out in closed circles end up delivering writing for closed circles instead of for all major audiences who represent the crowd.
This is textbook how to create a villain, they got confused and wrote a villain instead of a heroine.
I can control my anger infinitely better than you!
Cuts to her nearly killing those guys...
*insert JK.Simmons laughing*
I think that they could have showed everything in her rant without blowback. There's HUGE difference between saying SOME guys are aholes, and saying that ALL guys are aholes.
Exactly! Not all of us are aholes.
I mean theyre not just jerks theyre insanely twerpish....even some of the worst men in history have had some redeeming and/or endearing qualities... almost all these guys are cartoonishly selfish bafoons and are often portrayed as being inferior to Jen often for engaging in similar behavior Jen is celebrated for
I'd love for him to write Marvel's tv or movies as well
They could be so good with his or any competent writers help.
@@moonlitskylight5740 I’ve met teenagers with better writing skills
@@eternalnjem I’ve almost met teenagers with better writing skills than Marvel writers.
😂 the predator laughing! 😭
1:29 Tyrone slapped the table exactly like J.J. Jameson
Critical Drinker on point as always.
@Mazzy lol ya
@Mazzy he's 100% on point
@Mazzy LOL YAH
@Mazzy lol yah
@Mazzy Enlighten us then with your point of view, dear hater.
The MCU needs its own David Zaslav asap!
If marvel was it's own thing I'd agree, but Disney is the overlord so that won't happen unfortunately
@@warlock91000 Out with Chapek, in with Zaslav! lol
We don't what Zaslav will do. Looks good on paper. Time will reveal everything, so won't recommend zaslav for the time bieng but do agree on Disney.
Why would they need David Zaslav when the MCU has made over 20 billion dollars at the box office? Lmao, they ain't DC
The Drinker has books he's published, check them out.
Critical Drinker is a very good movie reviewer and A very smart one. Even when you disagree with him, he still knows what he’s talking about and you get his reasons. Very good points are stated by Critical Drinker during his reviews.
I would also love for Critical Drinker to write a show or film, but as he said; his script would go against "Marvels rules"
You hit the nail. People would have tripped for wokeness either which way. Premise would have been rejected from jump.
Funnily enough, most of the things he recommended is almost accurate to the comics.
1:31 that was a perfect impersonation. 😂
25 Seconds in, im brimmin with glee...that energy is very contagious my dude
He wrote a book called Dark Harvest
Did it out sell any of marvels worst selling comics?
@@theymad6159 what does that have to do with anything?
@@theymad6159 A cursory flick through the Amazon catalogue, looking at the Books category ranking, would indicate that yes, he outsells Marvel (and DC) by a very wide margin.
@@stoneymahoney9106 you and I both know that is not true bud.
After 2 episodes , I'm really afraid about what they are going to do with Daredevil character....
I wouldn’t be surprised if they make him question his own sexuality lmao 🤣
@@Thisguy2532 no 😭
@@johnleeka3282 they will, for the ''message''
3 episodes now. Still afraid
The Predator laughing had me gone
As someone who has enjoyed the show so far, I think Critical Drinker made some great points.
Honestly they failed to make her likable, that was the problem
@@budgiecat9039 at all. Jen was literally thankful for not only him saving her but giving her hulk powers as well.
@@budgiecat9039 They not reading source material these days...
@@aldovk6681 funny considering Tyrone as well as other people would disagree with you. But anything the drinker or Nerdrotic says gotta be true right!
@@clarkstrange2142 or maybe the person truly finds her unlikable
Hulk is suppose to be a super human.... why does he still need glasses? 🤦♂
He explained in the show that he was able to combine his human and hulk personalities together. So I would assume professor hulk's strength is less then full hulk because of the greater human part of him now.
This !....🤷🏾♂️
@@mikebaker2591 Dude thats gray Hulk....
I love the critical drinker
Loved how you anticipated the "You serious?"
It's always better to show it than to tell it. And it proves the point even further for those angry people that are trying to prove it or mad for for even showing it.
I don’t mind the rant if it’s been properly set up through the narrative.
Thank God somebody said how horribly written this show is
Keep em' comin'👍👍
He just had a book come out!
How is his book selling?
I will be able to forgive all of the flaws if we get a good character arc for Jen.
Same, I feel like episode 2 was a step in a better direction.
@@DrewCheech how?
Only time will tell.
@@ninjanibba4259 Don't ask, it will always be a step in the right direction but they will still ultimately go left.
@@OTOBIOhazord such a shame
That joke about bookshops killed me.
Love the critical drinker
Tyrone that JK Simons impression got me so good 😂😂
9:53 YEEEEEEESS
Actual fans writing theses stories would be ideal.
He definitely needs to invite you to one of his open bar discussions
Brilliant break down
Its so weird the fact her hair change and grow when transform. This doesnt exist with Hulk
sssssshhhhh... don't think. sssshhhhh...
9:52 You know what? Why not just review one of his books here? It would be interesting to see the bottle in someone else's hand, as it were 😂
100x better then any marvel/CW writers, that's for damn sure. 😂
🤣🤣🤣😂😂 very funny scene when Holl is talking about Captain America
Bang on. I was SO disappointed by this show. I was *really* hoping this would be a fun adventure to hop on board with, but no...
It has to be a soap opera lol and we who love action and creative writing are supposed to expand our horizons 🙄 ummmm I'm not going to tolerate bland stuff
I'm not sure he'd take the job but you'd think they'd hire The Drinker as a writer or at least as a consultant on one of these projects.
16:12 y ahí esta la manada de hienas.
9:43
after pausing and grabbing derrick piston you call your left arm...i was 99% sure you were going to say "I think I could do it, I could wrench that door open"
I wish he would have pause the "RULES"and read them out loud😄
17:28 Scottish Tyrone 😂😂👌
His books are good!
I love how the writer uses the show to rant about men explaining her how to do her job.... Then here comes a man to explain her how to do her job.
"He's outta line, but he's right."
Except he’s not out of line
Looks like I was right to skip this show.
Same
I skipped everything after Spiderman: No Way Home. Looks like i made the right choice.
Is it her contention that men are immune to murder?
Everything Critical Drinker said is true.
Literally why don't they just get Drinker to make and direct a marvel show dude cause that man got the actual GOOD ideas
🔥🔥🔥
Tyrone you need to go on open bar with
The Drinker and MauLer
Man that predator laugh got me laughing so hard🤣🤣🤣
He makes some good points. People hate Mary sues, a character that is great from the get go. Would have made sense for her to be an underdog. Someone to sympathize with. Also instead of men harrassing her make it woman. Woman can be a womans worse enemy.
he hits a another one out of the park 🏞️
7:57 - 9:02 *THIS!!!...127%*
You serious took me off 😂🤣💀💀💀
Drinker uploads Tyrone magnus soon follows
THIS is why I love Warhammer.
go go power drinker!
Show, don’t tell.
5:27
the predator scène was genius
when i saw this on my notifications I knew he will shreed this show 🤣🤣🤣
they made hulk into a gag character
Drinker nails it again
looking good T dog
Well there are fan prewrites on CZcams
You know
How i screenwrite this film
Show everything in her rant, just don't make all the perpetrators men.
I disagree @TyroneMagnus I think it would have most definitely worked out exactly as Critical Drinker described, because lets not forget thats kinda da way it went down in da comics after all
Drinker doesn't read no damn comics
Lol. Just because it's in the comics, that doesn't mean it's good. And comics also follows what's in the movies and tv show right now.
i dont want to toot my own horn, but damn my writing is better than that and im a newb to screenplays
Prove it
Why does her hulking out grow her hair?
i still think that loki complimenting another version of himself tracks tbh
Let’s all hope and pray they don’t do this for the new spider man movies 🙏
Y'serious?! 😂
My gods this analysis is excellent… FFS…
So ultimately the way to fix the show is to make it like the comics......how funny
👍🏻
Please react to drinker fixes captain marvel
😯
'I know about controlling my anger, because I've had to do it INFINITELY MORE THAN YOU!'
'Yeah, I suppose so. I was only a scientist with a brilliant career who found out his dad killed his mom, who had a terrible accident, was driven out of the US by his girlfriend's dad and forced to treat people in poverty stricken areas for whatever they could afford, who was then recruited by the country that was previously hunting him down, became a tool of Loki, fought off an alien invasion, co created a murderbot by accident, got stuck on an alien planet for two years, saw the whole Asgardian civilisation destroyed, half the universe 'blipped', almost lost an arm restoring those lives, and then my other ex girlfriend and my best friend both sacrificed their lives to defeat Thanos.
But you had a bit of misogyny and PMT to deal with. You've had it far worse'
That's irrelevant: good storytelling is (good story) and trolls will troll.
ah i like it so MEH!!!!!
Lets be honest people only watched it for the hulk🤷🏾♂
This show is boring 3.5/10
@Dev Ames how do you know if he watched it?
@Dev Ames also I love goku 🤙🏽
@Dev Ames he's not wrong after all 😂
The show is good.....as side from the "toxic feminist dialogue"
🧢
He says a lot of good stuff. But a lot of the changes he suggests are literally the exact storylines from the original comics.
This show is not for men or women....its for..... 😄 😄.
this is just drinkers way of begging feige to call him