FRAY - The Lost World - SCIFI / STEAMPUNK SHORT FILM
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- čas přidán 27. 01. 2017
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This is our little no budget- scifi short film we shot here in Finland in 2014, finally out in the open. Hope you guys enjoy.
"For others it was a dead world, for her it was a land of opportunity." - Krátké a kreslené filmy
If acting consisted of delivering all your lines very slowly and in an unemotional monotone, these people would all deserve Oscars.
This reminds me of an early D&D game. The players enter a bar just on the edge of the wastelands. They don't know each other. For some reason, a fight breaks out, and they end up helping each other out. Afterward, they head out together to start their life of adventures together.
Soooo like I'm watching almost every day. IJS....the synchronicity of it all. BRILLIANT JOB AGAIN, GUYS!!!!
Very nice, great set, costume design and casting. Can’t wait to see more from you.
This was great! I hope to see a sequel. Really liked the personalities of Alex and Fray. Wonderful film.
Thanks Jason! Yay someone liked our film :) !
I second that!
Yes, more please.
The set and lighting for that bar was top notch. Thanks for posting.
thanks :)
Looks like a beginning of great friendship :) I want MORE!
Thanks Krzysztof! We'll try to make more!
Krzysztof Sokołowski .u go to bed with that nams
I agree, needs a series?
True talent. I masterpiece that today would be viewed as possibly outdated. However, man respect man. This SciFi short is a diamond in the rough.
Thx for posting. Steampunk is cool! Really just caught on. Reminds me of Heavy Metal magazine. I would like to enjoy more of Fray! 👍👍
Loved it.
No matter the rougher parts, overall I enjoyed this.
❤️
Well done, me likey, definitely a nod to heavy metal mag....perfect 🤩
Great video, I was left wanting more episodes.
Thanks!
That was awesome! What a rush! I'm instantly a fan!
Yay!
"Congratulations on graduating Villainous Boss Antagonist School. Here is your complimentary huge snake. Wear it with pride."
This has real potential, but also needs a lot of work. I hope you produce more episodes and make each one better than the last. You know what needs to be improved.
8:35 "What the hell is this?"
"What?"
-Gestures to everything
Nice story. With a lot of the junk that is being created today on mainstream television this is a refreshing story. Would like to see more of this!
Thanks Tim, we'll do more!
Tim Favreau. Do I spy a Farscape fan?
SISU!! That was a lot of fun! Please make more. Great english language usage- exotic, cool and tough. And Fray: yowza!! Cheers!
Thanks ;)
Amazing cinematography and lighting!! well done, liked and subbed ;)
Thanks! subbed back :)
Wonderful! I kept thinking to myself "there's something about their voices - was it dubbed?"
Then I see you're from Finland. Its just the way they speak English.
Its a pity the first one wasn't longer. I find myself wondering what Fray and her partner will get up to next.
Thank you so much for sharing, and here's to your continued work.
Hey thanks! Yeah we did some horrible adr/dub all over it haha ;)
Great film. Would like to see more. Thanks.
Nice, very cool looking forward to seeing more
I would totally watch this as a series
Great job guys. I love it
I would like to see more of this crew. Pirates of the Caribbean meets Guardians of the Galaxy.
Haha, I don't know if we're there yet but thanks!
Loved it! Nice work.
Waoo!. This is excelent. I love the ending sound tracks where can I download it.
great short film, It kept my interest right through
Great movie. All its faults are what made it special. When you guys make the next one don't change a thing!!! 10/10
Thanks Mijia!
Very enjoyable! Many a good friendship has started over a bar fight.
Amazing sci-fi simule...enjoyable
Loved it! Main characters have chemistry and liked the guys and girls acting even though it was short. I really liked the action scenes and bet if it had a great script it could be really great! I’d love to see something else made
Enjoyed it! :) A little slow, but SUCH potential. Hope to see more of FRAY. Thanks
I would like to see this one as a series or a movie.
This would be a great series!
Pyhät tulipallot! 2014 ?! Toivon, että olet työskennellyt jatko-osan parissa, koska TÄMÄ on kuuma ominaisuus ja ansaitsee sarjan ja / tai pitkäkestoisen elokuvan. PARAS lyhyt mitä olen nähnyt kuukausina. Bravo!
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Holy fireballs! 2014?! I hope you've been working on a "sequel", because THIS is a hot property and deserves a series and/or a feature-length movie. BEST short I've seen in months. Bravo!
Kiitokset!
@@hmcindie
Olet tervetullut ja onnea!
rabbit I hate watching a good short that I can't continue, pretty good boys
Pamela Roy thanks pam, we tried!
Wish someone would make a full length movie.
I appreciated it, i think it's not for everyone, i didn't understand really the whole context, but it seems that the important point was the new relationship they were building each other.
Thanks!
Lots of fun to watch.
Great characters, great short!
Thanks Kenneth!
You've got something decent here. Hope you get the funding to progress this to a higher level.
Nice team....I’d love to see more
This has great potential. I wouldn’t classify it as steampunk, though.
I want to see more episodes of this. I want to see more of this chick and I want to know more about her relationship with her backup in the bar.
Hey thanks!
Kinda reminds me of FireFly!! I was hoping he would say "but at least I got the money" and show her the pouch the snake guy put on the table.
Not to bad. Hope they will bring us more
I'll try making more!
Really like this concept you should make more plenty for you to build on could be a good series
I shocked myself and enjoyed this acting a bit hammy but would make a great series xx
Enjoyed the short,looking to see the full length soon?
Hey james, hopefully! It might be more likely though that we will continue Eliza or something in that vain, our more action oriented style.
James Conner can't wait to see the whole thing thank you bye bye
Lots of various types and scenes... a learning process
Is this a "proof of concept" or a pilot for something potentially bigger? Previous comments on the cardboard acting are spot on, but if it got commissioned, a good director would kick them into touch. The setting, and writing are pretty good though, straight out of a comic. It left me wanting to see the next episode(s)!
Hey, sorry for taking a while to answer. It was originally thought of as a "proof of concept" but just became a too-long-short. Proof-of-concepts are usually really short, like one minute and just mostly show shots.
Cool, that was really good.
Thanks David!
Good movie. Hope there will be more
Brilliant. Another fantastically grim work from Finland, where the Soviet Union is always just next door.
This was so lit! Y'all should put that outro track on soundcloud or something. Would've liked to see a few vampires getting dusted but loved your style nonetheless. :) Thank you for coming through when LURK didn't -_-
Hey thanks buddy! I'll ask our composer to put up that track!
Sparky Smith I commented on cuz I really liked it thank you bye bye
Hey dude! I know this is 3 years old, but I'm actually remastering the soundtrack and releasing it under my name in Spotify soon.
Loved it! Fun, good story. I like what you guys did with the sound.
Thanks Gregory!
If you made this film....The possibilities would be endless. What is stopping you?
best sci fi short film
Loved this.
Great job guys, if this had been a full lenght film I would have watched the whole thing. The voice dubbing was a little bad, but the cinematography more than made up for it. Keep it up, I want more!
Awesome to hear Kybo!
am ever so pleased that at the end of my trawl I found myself here --- this is very good.
Neil Kendrick thanks Neal, happy you enjoyed it!
I enjoyed it, thanks 👍🏻
I Loved this Short Movie.
I think the showdown scene would have been more convincing if the heroine actress had been directed to act just a bit uptight or a tad worried instead of just matter of fact as if no risk was involved, but overall I could feel myself getting sucked into it all. A worthy effort to be sure. Wish I could have been a part of it. Thanks for sharing it.
Thanks Joseph! Yeah my directing was a bit weak in some scenes.
Good movie. I loved the way his gun blew up on him. Well they got thrown out of the bar with nothing for their efforts. Love the way she just gets up the spunk to go on and try something else. I wonder if she will ever get her money?
for her it was a land of opportunity
This is absolutely amazing. Such potential.
i used vic vapor rub on my nail and yes it is growing out, back to a healthy nail, used it every night
please do another one....i like Fray.....i want more
Thanks Lucky, we'll try!
"Give me a drink, the usual". Are you kidding? And of course a worm! I'm wondering now how many cliches are going to be in this movie!
Thank you for putting this out. It was a lot of work from the crew and the actors. You did really well, considering it was no/low budget, and that it was 7 years ago... The ADR... I, personally would have preferred the dialog be natural, native, with subtitles. Cut out some of stuff that doesn't add to the story, like the glass looking and booze sloshing at 6:02. Add some diegetic sounds, even if you have to use on-set microphones.
Thanks!
Good stuff!
enjoyed watching it.. cinematography photgraphy casting sound design all good mixed together. what lens did you use? ML is amazing .......thx for sharing
Konsta Pot thanks! I used a 200mm f2.8 on the closeups of people talking. Also used a 100mm f2.8, 24-74 2.8 and a 20mm 1.8.
Very funny in a delightfully gritty, ultra camp sort of way! Sergio Leone would be proud. Well, hey, my opinion. 'The Good, The Bad, and the Really, Really Ugly' in space with a female lead. Could be a success on the big screen if promoted correctly. A potential cult favorite. Try Kickstarter!
Hey thanks!
That'll be $5, please. [ : - Q ]
Seriously, I look forward to the future adventures of...
I can't see how others missed the humor. Black humor is hard for people to catch sometimes, but when one sees someone drinking out of a bottle with a skull and crossbones on it, a knock-em-down, drag-em-out fight where everyone's none the worse at the end (OK, minor contusions - you gotta show something), a co-lead's casual attitude of "I'll rescue the female just as soon as I finish my drink...oh, all right, what the hell..."), a bad guy with a pet snake, and so on.
I hope it finds its true audience soon. I've subscribed to your CZcams channel so as to keep up.
Very cool! I was hoping she got her item back during the fight. :D
Thanks Oscar! Originally that part was a deleted scene but I figured that yeah, we need to show it.
The villain was awesome !
pretty cool
kept my attention.
no criticism here I appreciate all art.
thanks. great flick
thanks ablaz x! have a great day!
Bwahaha just watched this again for the first time in a couple of years. Being involved in this project is one of my favorites memories from my time in Finland. Could the acting have been better? Sure. Dialogue? Most def! But this is an amazing project, with a great crew. And I mean, c'mon, set design, editing, overall production value! Thanks so much @hmcindie for everything!
PS- I'm one of the actors with the charisma of a wet paper bag, as one of the haters below described us. Lol. That shit is funny!!!
Oh yeah, we had a damn blast making this one!
@@hmcindie Is it odd that I find the hater comments hilarious? Reminds me of celebrities reading mean tweets...
@@aporter Oh yes!
To be honest, minus a few things here and there I personally would like to see a full length with a decent budget and enough time of course. Plus Fray hot as hell and kicked some ass.
thanks a bunch!
Not bad!!!!! Give us more!!!!
... & ´ still remember that "Weapon -Fiasco" !
But it was in the "Old-City", damned it. !
Awsome... Epic wonderland
Enjoyed it. End left for more episodes. have the actors work together more and tighten the script and youv'e got a series. Goodluck.. :)
Thanks for comment Robert! Luck is needed :)
Want more of these two
Very interesting! Good blocking and framing, decent cinematography, sound design and a curious script. My thanks to all involved in your 'little no budget sci-fi short film'. It's refreshing to see what new talent can create outside of the mainstream. I sense this is not the last we'll see of Fray? Have you considered crowdfunding for future projects? I've worked as a support actor on various low budget projects. medium budget TV shows and films and high budget Hollywood trash (well I have to make a living and I have bills to pay), but I always prefer working with a smaller, dedicated crew with a vision. Good luck to you all.
Hey landscape detective! Thanks for your comments! Yeah, I've thought about crowdfunding but I feel that we still have to improve before going there!
This had a lot of potential if not for the stale lines for the characters.
Great concept. Steampunk is an awesome universe. This is an effort that doesn't make it somehow.
Good un its class.. worth the time.
STEAMPUNK ?
saw only punk, but have some good moments with fails mostly, that was fun
Cool little short. I think the music competed with the dialogue a bit. But, I liked the cinematography and graded look.
Thanks VFX Todd! Cinematography and the grade is I think our best asset here.
Loved it. Nice and gritty.
Late thanks Alysson!
Any more tales from this world in the pipeline?
Yes, though it will probably we a bit different (we will make some changes to everything)
Nice. I'd say more on the sci-fi side than steampunk, but nothing wrong with that. It'd be a good pilot for a series or teaser for a feature. An interesting world. If there was more, I'd watch it.
What camera did you use to shoot this film, canon 5D mk iv?
Hey uscoe, we shot this with the Canon 5d mark III (with magic lantern RAW) in 2014. I'm gonna make a small behind the scenes / how to video about some of those technical things.
"Is it dangerous?" xD
that a money maker you got there...very good!
15:30 "Im in, all three inches. Cant you tell?"
Moody, Bladerunnerish, very entertaining.....and good soundtrack....Do some more!
Thanks!
great choice of cast - not just 15 uni students of same wirey build.
Carn Soaks thanks, i guess!
f.....great !
watje janssen thanks!