''The Dumpster'' | SO GOOD I THOUGHT IT WAS WRITTEN BY STEPHEN KING
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Tonight’s epic story is ‘The Dumpster’, an original story Chris Koleszar, kindly shared with me via my sub-r-ddit for the express purpose of having me narrate it here for you all:
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Other music used is credited to the wonderful Tanner Stokes (end credits). It is used here with his Express permission.
Video footage was made by me with whatever Go Pro Camera it is that I own... I hope you found it to be a relaxing backdrop for today’s story!
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"So I was at the dinner, and the owner asked me why I was carrying my shotgun everywhere. I answered: "Mimics".
He laughed. I laughed. The table laughed. I shot the table.
Good times."
😅😅 Great story!
Sounds like something I'd say. Love it!
Sounds like my experience aboard the Talos-1 space station, just sayin’. 😱
@@Jolis_Parsec Never trust a coffee mug again, eh?
Rockspoon Indeed. 😬
"Cthulu, but it's also a dumpster fire " sounds simultaneously like a winning play in Cards Against Humanity, and a PERFECT metaphor for 2020.
Well, there actually is a card in the game 'Cards Against Humanity' that just says, "Andre The Giant's enormous leathery scrotum" 😐
@@anonymousstrangeness7348 Touché 🤣
@@keithaugust9303 😂
@@anonymousstrangeness7348 you know, the phrase, "leathery scrotum" really sticks in my mind, like a prefrontal fungi...
You think it might mean a calloused bean-bag? If so... fucking how?!
@@keithaugust9303 Hahaha! Omfg... A calloused bean-bag. I have got to use that in something.
BOSTON GEORGE is my favorite, I hope he survives this entire story. 10/10 video no matter what happens.
I don't know why, but George reminds me of Jerry from Tales From the Gas Station.
Hi! I'm the author. I'm really glad you enjoyed the story. This is actually part of a series I'm working on called "the duxbury Chronicles". I have another installment that I'll be posting on my channel pretty soon although it will not be on the good doctors level of narration skill.:)
He sold blow for awhile and has a movie about him he currently is spending time with his daughter. LoL
@@ianhauschild8938 😅😅
I think you figured it out dude! That's why I mentioned how he has a lot of money, but no one seems to know what he actually does for a living.;)
@@greenwitchinc.1682 o shit your the author. Was the character really based on him? Good story I will be sure to go to your channel and sub. Thanks for taking the time to entertain me and find humor in my stupid post but if you really did base the character off him that's epic and love little shit like that.
If my life was ever made a movie, I'd want the Doc to narrate my life. I love listening to his stories to relax with a good cup of hot chocolate. His voice is so soothing
Living in the Netherlands myself I often listen to podcast and such while cycling.
So listening to this your stories at home while watching a video of people cycling feels very natural.
Nice! I'm a cyclist myself. In beautiful colorado. So a little ways away from your neighborhood.;) I hope you enjoyed the story during your ride
Actually my next story, is about a cyclist who is more or less being haunted on his nightly bicycling commute home from work.:)
I'll give you a shout when it's up. Either when I'm lucky enough to have another CZcams narrator narrate it. Or when I put it on my own channel.:)
Yes! I just got home from a long hospital shift. Just what I needed to unwind too. Thank you. Stay safe everyone.
Thanks SO much for the work you do, especially during these, covid days!! No Sleep stories, creepypastas, etc, horror narrations in general, are the BEST for unwinding, and sleep!!! I agree! Take Great Care of Yourself Too! 😌
Later,
Amanda H.
And I mentally cheered out loud.. it’s late 🤗 I’ll sleep like a rock and have the best nightmares!! ❤️❤️❤️
This story literally gives a whole new meaning to the phrase "Dumpster Fire", that's for sure. I mean really, what a crazy tale that was! I do hope there will be a part 2, or at least another story involving the Priest and his knowledge of what actually transpired.
Aren't they always evil/shady
@@wyntersteele1a 99.9% of the time
I concur! I need more information about the priest and the cake! Why was the cake glowing, did the priest summon cthulu, or was he just a spectator enjoying the chaos?
@@lizn4303 I can assure you that he did not summon Cthulhu with the pink cake. He may have used some warp spaghetti. But all in all, he was really just a spectator enjoying the chaos. ;)
@@AraCodq
Literally the whole time I was thinking, "Its just a mimic in a Dumpster, they've evolved."
Protagonist: Fighter
Boston George: Bard
Father: Priest
I forget the ladies name: Barbarian I wanna say.
😂😂😂
Boston George was definitely a rogue.
Syph Myles Excuse me, But what about Glenn from the Walking Dead? I didn’t see a dumpster eat him....
Gretchen Thompson
Lol! I like your Classification approach. Though I think Father John might be of the more... Lich-like persuasion.;)
I agree with you Dr. Creepen
This definitely Could have been written by King himself.
He’s one of the best horror writers and I’m a huge fan of his and of course ~~
Yours 🌹
Oh yeahhhhhh
My fav Dr. in the house tonight!
Gonna sit back and listen to this with my favorite 🍹🌹
Just what the doctor ordered 🌹
90:00 glorious minutes of our dear Doctor Creepen's heavenly angelic musical voice today on this rainy dreary mondaine Monday in North Alabama. Keep on tickling our 👂👂👂 please Doc.👍😍🤩😘🤗😇🤗😘🤩😍👌
Hey,Tiffany! Hope you''re in good health and your family too. Was a bit concerned not seeing you for a while. Take care and I'll see you in the comments next time.
@@bluesow
Hi Jackie!!! I'm doing good. Sorry for not commenting a lot lately. I've been listening just not commenting bc I've been kinda busy. Anyway I hope you have a wonderful day tomorrow and thank you for checking on me.😇😇😇
You're welcome. God bless & be well.
@@bluesow
You too friend.😍😇😍
Could be spelled that way on purpose but the proper spelling is mundane. Cheers and lovely day to you.
That was good! More, please!
Yes ndeed coffee and popcorn for a great story
Awesome possum!!!!Dr.C is here!!!👍
Very very good story!!
Facheerrtt cracks me another cold one hell yeah doc 👋 thanks cheers boss 🍻🍺
One of the best story's I've heard yet, I hope there is another one coming would love to know what the priest was actually up to an how he fit in this an were the monster went an how it came to be. So many questions I need answers to. Bravo
Thank you! I'm glad you dug the story. I would like to say that there's more coming in the near future, but I have a couple other projects that I'm working on for my own channel. But I will let you know when another installment is up.
This is actually one story in a short horror story collection I'm working on called "the duxbury Chronicles"
They all sort of tie in together. And I do have a couple other installments written and available to check out. But nothing that directly goes into Father John or the dumpster monster.
I had to listen to this story again this morning as I have my coffee
Awesome as usual Doctor.
Thank you sir.
Howdy! I'm the author. I'm really glad you liked the story. Dr Creepen has narrated part of one of my other stories as well if you're interested.:). czcams.com/video/R30Mz946eO0/video.html
Dr. Creepen you make my night. Love listening to your stories. Thank you
More plz. And always thank you dr creepen for bringing these wonderful stories to life.
I'm glad you enjoyed the story the good doctor has done another one of my stories that is a multi-part one. I'd send you the link but CZcams doesn't seem to like that these days.
It's called "I'm a sailor in the US navy. We just found something real bad" parts 1 and 2 are on the doctor's channel. And part three is on my channel. Just so you know it's a lot different than this one. and not very politically correct at times. Hope you enjoy!:)
Cool beans indeed! Loved this one doc :D
That’s some crazy fever dream of a story. Haha. Entertaining.
Well said !!! -- A fever dream 😀
I'm glad you enjoyed it! I have some more submissions on the way. Chilling Tales for dark nights just did their own version of this story. And I just sent a couple more submissions their way.
In the meantime. If you would like to hear anything else that I've done. The good doctor has been awesome enough to marry another ongoing series that I have. It's called "I'm a sailor in the US navy. We just found something real bad." Doc Creepen has married at the first two parts, and part 3 is up on my channel. Hope you enjoy!:)
Im gonna have to listen to this again. Very cool. Lost concentration at some point. Still need to hear how that date with the girl from alices restaurant worked out. Lol
Sometimes people throw away their whole lives. It's actually kind of creepy when you figure out the reasons. I used to live in a really neat apartment that was above some stores. In the basement was one off those store front type super strict pentecostal evangelical hispanic churches. It was the kind where the women wore head cover and long skirts. When someone would convert to that particular church, you would find items that the church deemed sinful.in the dumpster. Pop music CDa by the case, DVDs, women's pants, sexy clothes, home decor that depicted sinful? images. I would hit that dumpster after we would hear them speaking in tongues because there would always be a haul of goodies of people's lives. It was strange in a way to see people just discarding their identity among the trash from the stores.
That's fuckin crazy
Love the stories, doc! I listen to them with a concealed earbud when my kids try to tell me about their day. Always a great escape from the tedium of daily life. Thank you.
Only 5 minutes in and I already love all the quasi-obscure Coastal Massachusetts references. Cranberry bogs? Duxbury? Alices Restaurant? Yes please. This tale tastes like home
Omg that was so funny. "tsunami wave of apples. she was going to bounce away." I bet the priest has angel cake! Great story!.
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Thanks for your alluring narration, dear doctor. It is so helpful during housework, studying and help so much to relax in spare time. You are truelly a busy bee! Wishing you and my fellow listeners a splendid Tuesday.
Doc your Boston accent isn’t half bad, but the things being said have me in stitches! 😂😂
So upon completion of listening, that was definitely one of the most hilarious thought provoking tales I’ve yet to encounter! Basically a living giant dumpster, which houses an enormous squid like creature, and can move at speeds equal to a high speed sports car, all the while on fire, and a possible priest involved(maybe), and all I really want to know is did the officer still make his date? Because that’s one helluva story to have dinner and drinks over!!! Really unique, well done as any “out there” stories are. And the Dr gave it life! What more can you ask for? Ahh! A part 2! Where the priest is ultimately revealed as a world ending super villain bent in destroying small towns because he has a Napoleonic complex. Well, an A+ here! Loved it!
Diving into this Dumpster, with my favorite drink. Cheers Dr. 🥂
Honestly the FUNNIEST podcast I've heard in a while ... N I listen every day to my creepypastas!!! This one has me crying n pissing myself!!! 😂❤
That dumpster looks mighty creative and clean 🤔😏
Been busy for awhile. Glad to finally have a bit to sit back with my favorite drink and listen to this fantastic story
What a great way to spend the hour before I take out the trash . This will make the trip to the otherwise stinky dumpster a little more creepy, thanks for the escape, doc.
Awesome. Believe it or not.... One day I was driving thru a shopping center in the town I moved to after university.
The center has several business with one at the middle of the entrance a burger joint that had bn in business since the 1960s. The day was HOT and I had my car windows down, as I drive past the dumpster at the back of the resturant which wld make it near the middle of parking lot I got an awful whiff frm the trash. I know what trash smells like in summer and that was not trash.
Police were called and they found a man's body in dumpster!!!! This town has around 35,000 ppl so this was a surprise. The killer was found within a week.
On a side note I traveled around the United States & lived on the coast of Washington state after highschool.
I was out walking old logging roads with friends and some 15miles in we came across a strange scene of rope around a tree and womens clothes neatly laid all around with empty wallets and purses along w beer bottles. Then it wasnt 5 min after we found the site of whatever we heard a car coming dwn the gravel road and all of us hid in some bushes.
The car slowed dwn near the site and slowly went by. I had seen that car before, an old beater w a big trunk in town in a Safeway parking lot which was closed at the time watching people cme & go frm the Swansons Grocery store. The car had followed me one night and I lost him by going thru some oneway streets the wrong way.....this made me wonder WTH......
I carried a 30 ought 6 rifle while out bk then bc of animals that deep into woods.
When my friends and I got bk hme I called anthr family friend on the police force and told them what we had found......
Well they came out did a look and told me their had bn several missing girls in the past few months and the clothes we had found were what they were wearing!! I gave them the info on the car and the men's description the best I cld hv seen and I didnt hear anymo from that bc I went into the U.S Navy not long after.
@@g.m.i.9771 welp its what happened. Real life sometimes ends that way.
Develop a story from your experiences and send it to the Dr he may just narrate it 😊
@@loanianderson1978 oh I have years of weird things. Art imitates life they say. Giggle. Ahhhhhh its craycray with a side hogjowls.😊
@@moxiemckeldrey5486 Would love to hear about it!!!
A friend of mine used to own a little coffee shop named "cool beans" ,best coffee ever. Hearing it said in this story brought back wonderful memories. Thank you.
Would be nine hours if written by King
And six hours of it would be character development 😂
😅😅😅
And a lot more weird sex stuff
@@TayTayMakesBeats lol! Yeah, I'm flattered that I've been compared to Stephen King in this story. But I have not yet mastered the art of bizarre sex scenes that Stephen King is so well known for. 😅
@@greenwitchinc.1682 Probably more of a testament to your character than anything. Best to leave that stuff on the cutting room floor. That being said I do really enjoy your writing style, it flows nicely if that makes sense. Plus it was really entertaining listening to the Doc bust out a Boston accent
I am loving the longer stories! Thank you ❤️
Wonderful, a long story! 😁 Thank you Doc!
What a great story voiced by the best narrator.
Lol demon trash bin . Love it. Took a long look at my big trash bin this morning LoL. Great story how you kept from laughing at the idea of it I applaud you sir for the great job you do every time. Loves to you and yours
Damn that was good. Even the firefighters going out so easily Haha
This was well done and funny all in one.
The Duxbury Chronicles !! I read these years ago by chance. And I've been waiting to see who would be the first to find it and narrate. There's another one abt a phantom ..well I'll say rope. Not gonna spoil it.
Didn't know,these were books. Cool!
Oh snap! That's awesome you're familiar with the stories! Yeah... I kinda slacked pretty hard on them after the second installment of "The Students". But I'm back on it! And plan on making the Duxbury Chronicles into a full short story collection.
Doc Creepen has been narrating one of the other stories I've been writing. If you want to check it out here's the link to the first part.:) czcams.com/video/R30Mz946eO0/video.html
@@bluesow They're really not (yet). They were the first Creepypasta stories I ever wrote and then I sort of got sidetracked with other projects. But now I'm back on it. And plan on making the Duxbury Chronicles into a complete short horror story book. :)
@@greenwitchinc.1682 I'd be interested to read it.
@@bluesow Cool beans. I do have one of the other stories from the Duxbury Chronicles on Dr Creepen's Reddit Page. If you want to check it out, here's the link.:) www.reddit.com/r/DrCreepensVault/comments/dkotbr/the_duxbury_chronicles_the_detective_and_the/
Oh, one more thing Dr. Creepen, thank you for all of your personal time and effort that you so graciously give to us. Not too many ads, love the long stories that must take hours upon hours to prepare, and you get stay humble at the top! Top marks! 👍
The title of this video alone is amazing and really creative. Thank you for this one Doc.
Damn mimics are evolving
That Boston 'accent'. Oof.
Thank you for the distractions during work!
Well doc, I wasn't sure because of the title, but I must say this was absolutely awesome.. I hope there might be a part 2 in the future ❤️
Howdy! I'm the author. So there is not a part two to this per se. but this is part of a short story collection I have been writing called "The Duxbury Chronicles".
I have another story related to this that I submitted to Dr creepen's Reddit page if you'd like to check it out. www.google.com/url?sa=t&source=web&rct=j&url=amp.reddit.com/r/DrCreepensVault/comments/dkotbr/the_duxbury_chronicles_the_detective_and_the/&ved=2ahUKEwiD1-fXoMnrAhXBKM0KHbmIAQ8QFjABegQIChAB&usg=AOvVaw08ROAQwtmveCjWWTkoAZ1W&cf=1
Love the stories you post I listen to them during and after work keep up the good work mr.creepen
That is the best pronunciation of Keilbasa I've ever heard. Love the scary nothings in my ear. You are one of the best!
That's dr creepen
@@mrtank1995 right? He didn't spend 8 years in creepy medical school to be called 'mr'
Love having a good story to relax to
I think I speak for everyoner listening when I say... A sequel is most definitely in order 🤩 That was GREAT!! Well done to the narrator and the author 😉
Lol! Thanks! Well there's no sequel currently in the works per se... But this is part of a short story collection I've been working on called "The Duxbury Chronicles". All the tales take place in and around Duxbury MA. If you'd like to check out some more, I do have another one of the stories currently posted on Doc Creepen's Reddit Page. www.reddit.com/r/DrCreepensVault/comments/dkotbr/the_duxbury_chronicles_the_detective_and_the/
Also. The Good Doctor has been Narrating one of my other stories I've been working on. It's unrelated to the Duxbury Chronicles. But if you want to check it out the first two parts are already posted on Doc Creepen's CZcams channel. Here's the link to the first part.:) czcams.com/video/R30Mz946eO0/video.html
Bravo 👏👏👏 Great story and narration as always. Thank you Dr.
That is a great tale. I've listened to it about 10 times. Thanks so much Doc and to the writer I really hope we get a series.
Hi! I'm the author. I'm glad you dug the story! I do have a couple more segments to the series coming up. If you want Chilling Tales for Dark Nights has done another addition to the series. You can find it by typing in "Chilling Tales for Dark Nights Animalistic Aberrations". Hope you enjoy!
WOW! Mr. Koleszar did an wonderful job with this when pets-go-wild tale. Hope to hear more from him! Thank you so much for reading this work, Doctor Creepen!
Hi! I'm Chris Koleszar. I'm glad you dug the story. I am going to hopefully get up another addition to this series by the end of the weekend.:)
Yes definitely.
I really like your rendition of this story the noise made by you such a nice difference.
Definitely need more!
If Stephen King ever made a 2 nd "Maximum- overdrive" it would fit right in! One heck of a good rea/story.
I never really leave comments
But having the stories you read really helps me out at work
I just wanted to say I appreciate you man keep up the good work
Awesome, unique story. Really enjoy the ones that aren’t cut and paste stories with slight modifications.
agreed. Unique stories that don't require every character be a stupid deer-in-the-headlights is nice.
@@nookleer Thanks! I'm glad you dug the story. The good Doctor has been narrating another one of my stories as well. If you'd like to check it out, the first two parts are already up on his channel. Here's the link to PT 1.:) czcams.com/video/R30Mz946eO0/video.html
@@greenwitchinc.1682 oh neat! the author! I'm aleays shocked when the author responds.
Hey, can I ask? Will this creature and the priest appear in another story? I gathered that the priest was also supernatural and it's a shame to never know what's up.
@@nookleer Yes sir! The creature and Father John will both be reappearing. This is actually part of short story collection I've been working on called "The Duxbury Chronicles". If you'd like to check out a little more of it. I do have another one of the stories posted on the good doctor's reddit page.:) www.reddit.com/r/DrCreepensVault/comments/dkotbr/the_duxbury_chronicles_the_detective_and_the/
@@greenwitchinc.1682 I'm there!
Ever since discovering Jerma, I always subconsciously imagine every character that the story goes out of the way to highlight is from Boston as him
Incredibly well read!! What an enthralling story. That Bostonian accent, excellent!! Thank you so much.
This was awesome and definitely put me in mind of King's "From a Buick 8". Great writing and if course great delivery. Thank you, Dr.C. Stay well.
Someone has to make a b movie of this , would be pretty cool .
Betty Lynn I thought the same thing!
Right?! I was thinking of making a more intense sequel and calling it "Dumpsternado"... ;)
If not a full horror movie, then a short horror movie, as I've begin to like those short horror movies, and this would be an awesome short.. 😍
No. This reminds me of the movie about the killer tire. I never even tried to watch it after looking at the trailer several different times on CZcams.
this has greenlight all over it
How can you tell if your dumpsters burning 🎶🎵🎼🎤
Them there flaming dumpters scorch your soul 😲😲😲
Need a a sequel soon 😍😘
Three frickin feet , lmao doc that was truly the best laugh ive had this whole crazy year. Thankyou so much your the best
You know it's gonna be good when Dr Creepen says thought it was written by Stephen King! Now if only I had a damn drink 😒
Hello Dr. CREEPEN
no. ♡3 here🍀🍃💚🐾🐈🍀🍃
Cheers Everyone, enjoy.
Stay safe/healthy + Sane.
That title is one hell of a backhanded compliment.
The Stephen King description? Yeah I felt my ego inflate the second I read it. 😅😅
What an awesome story! Terrific tentacled metal monstrosity!
GREAT TALE! 💗You've outdone yourself with this one 🤯 As always, thank you for all the time you devote to keeping us creepy 🧟🦇 Side note... Werewolves are assholes, CAN'T WAIT 🥳
You know its bad when C'thulu has to start dumpster diving.
I'm a huge Steven King fan. He would be proud of the reference. But what a motley crew chasing a flaming dumpster containing a demon octopus down the street. Almost seems comical. Please let there be a sequel. Great narrating Dr. Sweet dreams.
I'm glad you enjoyed it! I sent Stephen King a tweet about it. And I asked if he could hook me up. Was greeted with radio silence. 😭
@@greenwitchinc.1682 Oh no. Well he is missing out. You've got talent so keep writing. Thank you for responding. 💖
@@lisasims1691 Lol! I honestly wasn't expecting a reply. I'm sure he gets like a thousand messages a day asking him the same thing.
And "yes" I'll keep at it. And will give you a heads up when my next story makes it onto CZcams.
If you'd like to listen to anything else I've written. The good Doctor has been narrating an ongoing series I've been working on. It's called "I'm a sailor in the US Navy. We just found something real bad." He's done the first two parts and part 3 is up on my channel. Hope you enjoy!:)
@@greenwitchinc.1682 Awesome I will go listen to them. I'm sure I will be very entertained. Yeah now I'm so happy. ☺
@@lisasims1691 cool beans. Well, don't hesitate to tell me if you think they suck. I can handle criticism. 😅
Just a heads up. That other story is a lot different than the one you just listened to.
I've been meaning to dig into this one, finally got the chance!
Omg, best story I've heard in forever! Definitely want a sequel!!
Howdy! I'm glad you liked the story. This is actually part of a short story horror collection I'm working on. It's called "The Duxbury Chronicles". While there is not a direct sequel in the works per se. I do have a couple other stories that take place in the same town. If you want to check one out, I do have another one posted on Doctor Creepen's Reddit page. Here's the link. Ave Imperator!:) www.reddit.com/r/DrCreepensVault/comments/dkotbr/the_duxbury_chronicles_the_detective_and_the/
Damn that was pretty cool. Kinda goosebumps style.
The story has the Maximum Overdrive tone to it. It was a cool story. The dumpster is pretty cool idea.
This Cash Machine just called me an asshole!
@@davidh7177 Hahaha!
Loved that movie! My uncle in Wilmington NC owned a huge auto junkyard. When the movie was filmed the studio bought a bunch of old cars from him. They trashed the cars up, then gave them back to my uncle.
@@melfreemans way cool.
@@charlesii4830 he met some cast, and got to be on the set. And got great money for his junk cars!!!
Yes, I really loved it to 👍🏾 Ty sweethearts 😍
You're right,this did have a Stephen King-ish vibe to it.Also a bit of Lovecraft too,I thought. What a wild ride of a story! My sincere compliments to the author. Dumpsters always creeped me out a little before,now it's permanent! Smashing narration as always,Doc. It would indeed be interesting to know more about the priest. Hope you and yours are keeping healthy and safe. Happy September and Peace out!
Another awesome journey through the land of WTF! Thanks for leading us through it DOC and thanks to the Author 🙏👍
And THIS story folks is the Prequel of, 'Starship Troopers'! *Ba-dum-dum-tssst.
Sorry, I'll show myself out...
@Michael S. - So, you don't understand the joke, or you got no funny bone? Which is it??
Dr. Creepen, you have a great speaking voice, and I’m liking the content. So glad I found your channel! Keep up the good work!
I do see the comparison to to Stephen King The author has a smooth, enjoyable writing style allowing the reader to immerse themselves in the story rather than trip over awkward phrases. I appreciate being introduced to the works of Chris Koleszar, thank you. I can say that I enjoyed this story just as much as many of S. King's.
Right on man! I'm glad that you enjoyed the story. If you'd like to check out anything else that I've done, the good doctor has narrated another one of my stories that's an ongoing series. It's called "I'm a sailor in the US navy. We just found something real bad." Dr Creepen has done the first two parts of the story. And if you get that far and want to check out more, part 3 is up on my channel. Fair warning though. The first couple minutes to part one has some ham-fisted political smack talking. It was meant as a gag. But some people got real butthurt over it. So just a heads up if that kind of thing doesn't sit well with you. I will say that it is a lot different than this story. I was kind of trying out a different writing technique. 🤷
And if you want to check out anything else that takes place in the duxbury Massachusetts setting. Chilling Tales for Dark Nights has done another one of these stories under the title Cunning Corpses
Hope you enjoy!:)
Chris Koleszar, bravo and write a full novel, please!
Hi! I'm really stoked how well received this story was. I haven't done a full-length novel yet. But if you're interested in checking out some of my other stuff Dr Creepen has narrated one of my other stories as well. Here's part one.:) czcams.com/video/R30Mz946eO0/video.html
@@greenwitchinc.1682 Thanks! I’m gonna check it out immediately!
Anybody get what he was getting at at the end with the priest? That part confused me but I loved this story!
I'm not 100% sure, but I'm THEORIZING that the story was implying that the Priest knew what really happened. Especially near the last few sentences when they mentioned how he did all kinds of work for people...
It's almost implying the Priest was behind the whole thing.
@@abluntuser940 yes and when he said you don't know what may have come outta the bog; also when he is described as having a big, toothy grin and when Bob thought he saw a smile of satisfaction, the pink cake is a very good clue as well😎
The priest was a conjurerer and summoned the king of marine spirits....
Excellent story. Myself, I'm twisted enough, I probably would cause some more confusion at the end by having the priest still holding the cake at the end.
I hereby demand a part two of this it's so good it should be a movie!!!
Thank you! I'm still holding my breath for that Netflix deal. 😅
If you want, this is actually part of a series that I'm working on called "The Duxbury Chronicles". When it's completed it will have some recurring monsters and characters.
Chilling Tales for Dark Nights has done another addition to this series, you can find it by typing in "Chilling Tales for Dark Nights Cunning Corpses". Hope you enjoy!:)
What a trip of a story! Awesome job, Doc!
Nooooooooooooooooooooooo you can’t end it like this, my poor family think I’ve gone made as I yell at the top of my voice NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.
What an adventure, LOVED IT !!!!
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@@chrissygreig2277 Hi! I'm glad you dug the story! Sorry that the ending left you hanging.:)
If it's any consolation this is part of a short story collection I have been working on called "the duxbury Chronicles". I do have another written story from this collection on Dr creepin's Reddit page if you would like to check it out. www.reddit.com/r/DrCreepensVault/comments/dkotbr/the_duxbury_chronicles_the_detective_and_the/
Also Dr creepen has been kind enough to narrate a couple parts of one of my other stories (unrelated to the duxbury Chronicles) but if you would like to check it out here is the link.:) czcams.com/video/R30Mz946eO0/video.html
Another great story Doc ❤️
Thank you and all the author's for all the wonderful stories ❣️
This was soooo good loved it!!
I wish I could like this 100 times over.
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!:)
@@greenwitchinc.1682 My pleasure. Loved it!
@@iheartcryptoverse2857 just a little shameless self advertising.;) But this is part of a short horror story collection I'm working on called "the Duxbury Chronicles". I will be posting another edition to this series on my channel this weekend. Although Fair warning, I'm nowhere near the good Doctor's level when it comes to narration skill.
Dr Creepen has been narrating another one of my stories that is an ongoing series if you're interested. Although it is a lot different than this story you listened to. I'd send you the link but CZcams doesn't like that. 🤷
It's titled "I'm a sailor in the US Navy. We just found something real bad." Just a heads up though. The first couple of minutes of part one is not very politically correct. It was just some fictional character building but it definitely was not everyone's cup of tea...
That is so cool you are the author! I realize now your name is Chris Koleszar and have joined your channel. 😊😊😊 I love your writing,
@@greenwitchinc.1682 I also found Dr Creepen narrating the Sailor in the US Navy story and will be listening tonight. What a treat! Thank you.
Dang, that was good. That one will for sure be published. Though I don't know about the mystery surrounding the Father...that has me stumped.
I would literally love to get published. Do you have any suggestions how I might go about it with this story? I'm kind of a Stoner..;)
Also this story is part of a series that I'm writing. And the next installment that I will be posting does feature him once again.:)
@@greenwitchinc.1682 It's honestly like other industries; comes down to who you know for the quickest way in, talent because that's hard to ignore, and luck.
I write as well, but not on this level yet. From what I've found out is find a publisher online or nearby (maybe travel a ways to one with some repute) and hound them lol! Somewhat kidding, but I'm sure you know how that process goes from there.
There is the self-publishing route which is cheaper, but requires a bit more self-promotion and the like and you have complete control of what you do. Maybe someone will pick you up after it gets out there.
What you're doing now is great for exposure, having it read on CZcams. On Reddit you have the Nosleep community and I'd bet you'd find someone that has been published and could point you a good direction for the genre you're in.
The Chilling Tales for Dark Knights channel is another place to have this read and see what they could help you with.
If it's going to be back on here and elsewhere, I'll definitely be tuning in. You've a gift for sure if pulling works off like this.
@@blumiu2426 Thanks! I can literally feel my ego inflating.;)
Yeah, maybe I should try sending this story and some other work to Chilling Tales and nosleep. Thanks for the advice!
So you write as well? Do you have anything online yet? I don't know if the pros ever stop doubting their own abilities. But I imagine that it is a thing that plagues most artists for their entire lives.
There's definitely people out there who have better advice than anything I could offer up... I think the best suggestion I can give for the creative process is to try and enjoy whatever it is you're making. I think if you can get lost in your work. And genuinely get excited over what you're doing. Then you've crossed a big hurtle that holds a lot of people back.:)
@@greenwitchinc.1682 Some ego is fine as long as it manifests as confidence lol! Anymore and it's hard to keep one's head propped up without hot air XD
Definitely see how many would be interested, as I know they pick more than they get offers to read. At the same time, I agree with Dr. Creepen in relating this to an author's work. You can kinda tell what's meant to be posted to some scary story groups, while this has novel elements. I guess the real test then is how much more is in the noggin'.
I do have one completed short story I forgot to put up somewhere lol! I think I was going to put it up on a writing forum for critique just to get more thoughts on it. I have poems and character bios, as I draw alongside, but not much else. I'm working on a novel with five chapters, but they are old and need revision.
Yes. Because there are successes and failures, there is a continual process of doubt and improvement. It can keep one humble and centered, while some only put their work out when 100% about it. Think of Daniel Day Lewis. Every single movie he has done is perfect because he is very selective and put all into his roles.
Writers don't always have that opportunity unless they have the finances to take their time, so some have "spare" works while they work on the main piece.
I agree, I've had those spells and it sucks when it passes. I'm not sure if you have background in writing as in schooling, or you just naturally are good at it, but keep writing. You're excellent with character dialogue, pacing and use of humor. I can admire that as those are things I work on still.
@@blumiu2426 I have a little bit of background in schooling. I was an English major once. But never graduated lol!
And yeah writers block sucks. Fortunately I have not had much of a problem with that. But I would definitely attribute most of my writing to the nightmares that I have. Which I really do enjoy most of the time, and usually use them as a basis for stories. Also I think the sweet, sweet ganja definitely helps out as well.;)
AN OL!DY, BUT GOODY!!!!.THANK YOU DR.IT BRINGS BACK MEMORIES
That's dope you remember this. Honestly back when I first wrote it and it made it to the Creepypasta website, I was convinced it would be on CZcams in no time. Lol! Guess I was off by a few years.
Creepy ass Dr creepen,
Man Micky D's don't have nothing on you, "I'M LOVING IT," 💯💯💯🎶🎶🎶.
KEEP EM COMING DOC !!!!!
I'm the guy who give's a thumbs up even before I listen to your stories.
The Father reminded me of a resident evil merchant who always has the right stuff at the right times with no explanation
What you buying
U have been my favorite narrator since my first listen 😁😎🍷☕ and I listened to Hell Town
Yeah, yeah, sue me, just plain ol' water tonight
I'll never look at a Dumpster the same way again.....
Thank you Doc 🙏👍