15 Tips For Writing Better Dialogue
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0) 0:00 - Intro
1) 2:02 - The Number One Lesson
2) 8:59 - Show Don't Tell
3) 12:43 - Cut 20%
4) 18:23 - On The Nose
5) 31:04 - Listen
6) 45:35 - As Real As Life?
7) 51:42 - Unique Characters
8) 1:11:39 - Contrast
9) 1:17:44 - Subtext
10) 1:43:16 - Move The Story Forward
11) 1:52:14 - Monologues
12) 1:56:48 - Time Period
13) 2:00:53 - Rewriting
14) 2:03:26 - Exposition
15) 2:05:56 - Final Thoughts
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Which chapter was most helpful to you?
51:42
That's like asking which Ice Cream flavour do want when there's 50 and you want all of them.
Each chapter offers equal and significant insight on the various mechanics of dialogue 🤌🏾
Unique characters
@@samphelps856 We'll start with Reese's Peanut Butter Cup
I love how you stitched all these snippets together! Film Courage is such a great resource for creative writers!
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We appreciate it. Thank you! It does take a good amount of work to put these together. Some of these interviews go back 10 years, haha. Hope we can help storytellers tell better stories. Cheers!
So glad I found your channel. Great tips and content ❤
This is an amazing super cut, thank you! :)
Thank you so much!
Amazing video. Extremely helpful for my writing process. Thank you so much!
Thank you Geoff! Hopefully this video will be here whenever you need it again.
This is litteral the best video on CZcams about advice on dialogue. It's helped me so much. I didn't know half of this stuff before I watched it . Thank you Film Courage 👍😁. The other videos on CZcams about it act like you nearly already know how to do dialogue and your watching it for a few little tips. It's so annoying. Thanks for going indepth on it and then doing a bit of a overview at the end. Thanks for giving everything you need to know in just the right amount of detail.
Thank you so much! We appreciate you saying that you didn't know half this stuff. It takes a lot to say that. Our aim is to provide as much value as we can. Can't say this one covers it all as there's always more to learn. Our best to you and your work!
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Zack Synder should watch this
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Really enjoyed this video! The tips on adding subtext to dialogue and using sensory details to bring scenes to life were particularly helpful. Great inspiration for my own writing projects. Thanks for sharing your expertise!
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There are main tips for writing dialogue as I read first should make sound , nature sound like real but polished conversation. Show don’t tell . Use subtext . Use dialogue tags sparingly. Use dialect and accent carefully. Embrace slience avoid exposition very sentences and structures and length. Use contractions . Stay true to characters. Keep it real .
I beg you to rewrite your comment.
English isn't my native language, I'll to be clear.
In "Yellowstone" there's a scene that I think it's brilliant.
It's a scene that explains how not to write dialogues on the nose.
The character Lloyd, an old man, is taking Jimmy to a competition about riding a wild horse. In a few scenes before, Lloyd had said to Jimmy : "You have talent for it" and Lloyd smiled sympathetic.
Jimmy won the competition and receive as an award a Belt buckle.
Lloyd amazed and emotional watched the belt buckle, gave a hug with affection to Jimmy and kept watching emotional the belt buckle
Please explain. What is so brilliant about it?
In che stato
Billy Wilder wasn't German 😂
What's being said is everything the characters don't say. The dialogue is basically everything EXCEPT what the characters want to say. Unless they're drunk.
Sorry but I don’t think the cigarette thing would pass a double blind test, man…. “Filters? None.” Oh wait Tarantino wrote it, so now it’s genius!!!! Sorry I have no filters on this comment. None.
Yeah, not the best example. And even if it is, he doesn't explain it well enough.
The scene is good because of the acting and directing; the writing is secondary.
The Paulwarner: “Sorry but I don’t think.” Tarantino: “Never?” The Paulwarner: “Ever.” Simple.
Lots of programs and films could do with following these. Over the years there has been plenty of wooden, stilted, bland, cheesy and generally poor dialogue but recently they have added loads of cringey dialogue as well, I wish they would stop!