"The Pastel Man" by Vincent VenaCava
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- čas přidán 11. 09. 2024
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It's always an honor to do storys from Vincent VenaCava. He's fantastic.
Maybe he should write more stories
Hey mrcreepypasta! will you check could my creepypasta and maybe even read it on my channel?
how do you make that sound effect at 10:10
Do the Pasta Man!
This pasta and reading kicked ass.
Every thing this guy writes is gold!
I know right!
gross but i like!
i agree. this is just another example of a really good pasta.
Vincent wrote this not mr creepypasta read the title next time
i know i love being dumb, im what noobs say, a troll. TROLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL
I think a lot of you are missing the point here. It take a LOT out of you to actually kill someone. In fantasy it's easy to say, "oh yeah I'd take that guys heard off because he deserves it." But in a real life scenario, you start to think about what you're really taking away from someone. You relate to that person and try to understand why they are the way they are, and most of all you start to ask the question, "who am I to decide who lives and who dies?"
[spoilers ahead]
In the beginning he's young and naive so his emotions can get the better of him. Fear, panic, He just reacts without giving it too much careful thought, but when he's older, he's experienced and has better control on his emotions. Most importantly, he's a father. Yes a teenager can make a mistake, and yes his wife is gone. But like how he wouldn't want the life of his son taken from him before it really gets started, he can't take away the life of another kid before it gets started. So he does the right thing.
Give MCP an award!
You're exactly right. While I was listening to this, I tried to put myself in the same situation. Even if the person in question is a complete piece of shit, you still realize the gravity death has not only for that person, but for everyone in that person's life. Not to sound cliched, but you're not just killing one person, you're killing a small part of everyone who ever cared for that person.
Is it the right thing, though? Isn't 'people can make you miserable but you have to forgive them regardless' an answer steeped in vaguely religious morality?
Also, if the story was meant to make us feel as though people like Walter just need time to grow into better people, why not show that instead of just having him appear as the stereotypical high school douchebag?
You can say 'think of it in a real life situation', but if there actually WAS someone that singlemindedly hateful and violent, I have a feeling I'd be less than regretful over their death. If the author wanted to show that a single person cannot in good conscience choose who lives or dies, then they ought to have presented a life that was worth more to the world than 'potential to do good'.
KaitlynMutt again you're missing the point. Sometimes you dont know everything or the inner workings of a person's mind or past. That's what causes the inner reflection. Walter might have become a murderer when he grew older. He might have become a loving father and husband. but we'll never know because he was killed.
I read this yesterday and was going to ask you to read it. so now I want to make a request for you to read The Writer's Ink.
SPOILER:
am i the only one who sensed irony in the fact walter's death was concluded a "drunk driving insident" and his wife and son met the fate of a drunk driver? this has been one of my favorites since my freshman year of highschool
I think that was intentional
I read the title as "The Pasta Man" and the thumbnail looks like noodles
Would you eat that noodles?
ReissecupFilms definitely not tasty noodles tho 😂 mill worms are gross!
literally same
Pastel not pasta
MAGGOT's.. Disgusting.. 🤢 🤮 🥵
Fellow Creepy Listener, From Ont, Canada 🇨🇦
"My son awoke right as the sun had made its way out of the horizon line, and I was suddenly stuck with the most painful heart attack I could never describe appropriately. My son watched in horror as I hit the floor hard, nearly paralyzed by pain. His face went white, with his mouth agape, and I heard the last words I would have ever wanted spoken to any loved one I had. "I can save him...""
I thought the same thing! Kind of disappointed it didn't end that way, but the story was good nonetheless!
KhanRec0rdz YES OMG, [Spoilers]
i started to think that would happen as soon as i heard that he's kid got hit by the car!! im glad i wasnt the only one to think of this
or something along the lines of, (still from the protagonists point of view) i felt my heart clutch and as i fall off the chair i see the pastel man, thinking this is the end, but he isnt looking at me and as i slip out of consciousness i hear a faint angelic voice saying, "i can save him"..............
(obviously written better than that but i hope you see it from my point)
...woah
WingerB17 whoaa that an amazing ending😭😭👌🏻👌🏻
My favorite thing about this story is the monster you make a deal with doesn't trick you. He doesn't make it impossible to find that whom you wish to kill, he doesn't make it impossible to say his name. I like the idea that the deal is still horrible, but not a cheat.
The fun part for the Pastel Man was the guilt of the protagonist. I feel he would complete the contract anyway and keep the guy alive even though he didn't hold up his end. He'd still be feeling guilty for agreeing in the first place.
Long Creepy-pastas > Movies
Creepy Pastas leave SO much more to the imagination than movies do, and damn... I love them.
Damn straight brother!
chase williams Such truth.
22:57 "Walter's face was White" Breaking Bad Season 6 Confirmed!
hooray!
What a coincidence i just scolled passed that comment and as i read it in my head Mecreepypasta spoke the words hahaha
XD!!
Better call Saul!
MrRayhonda hey you a CZcamsr right
I couldn't stop staring at that the thing in the corner. Took me a while to figure out that it was a bug.
uuh ... yo u got a .... bug on your face ... uh ... sir it's ... uh very big ... uh ... SIR ... neverm-mind
O,O
QUICK SOMEONE DRAW THE MONSTER!
wait, are you making a reference to my drawing of the Dream Stealer? did ayone actually see that? o.o
No sorry I was meaning that this monster could join the other drawn monsters like slender, jack etcd
***** well, i drew the Dream Stealer and posted the link in the CPJ video of it. that was like over a year ago though, and didn't get any publicity since, that's why i was surprised. nevermind. xD
Sorry :( Julia Jeopardy
(draws picture of flying spaggetti monster)
Am I the only one imaging The Pastel Man as an evil Mr. Meeseeks?
holy shit I thought I was the only one
am i the only one who is not a weeaboo or emo person that listen to this stuff
WOLFGUY 711 xx2 what does being a weeb or emo habe anything to do with enjoying horror? It's like saying anyone who enjoys a Dean Koontz or Stephen King novel an emo or goth.
RJTheHero rick and morty isn't anime trash
RJTheHero no me too
Sorry to comment on a 2-year-old video, but I must say, the effect you put on your voice for demon stories is my absolute favorite!!! I just recently found your channel but I really hope to find more demon-based stories with effects like this. You do them so much justice, thanks for the great storytelling, sir :)
yes
Welcome Fellow Creepy,
Have you Checked Out NaturesTemper/The Dark Somnium/Mr. Creeps / & Afew Other Creepypasta's.. To Name Afew..!!!
Creepy Fan From Ont, Canada 🇨🇦
@@rtempest12I like most of them, don’t listen to naturestemper anymore and I stopped liking dr.creepen because his intro just irritates me
But there’s one narrator called sceptic theory and he used to do ai visuals but now uploads regular narrations and they’re great
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Hi, I'll check the Channel out
.. 👾 From Ont, 🇨🇦.. ✌️❤️
I hope you found them, I’m the same, this one was a classic for me from high school
I'm literally a stupid sack of shit.
I read the title as "The Pasta Man" and thought the thumbnail was a picture of spaghetti...
I thought the title was called "The Cake Man" since "pastel" means cake in spanish but I was wrong
It's ok... I thought the same thing xD
Don't worry i did the same. :( Where both stupid sacks of shit. XD
Josh Marks the cake was a lie man, A FUCKING LIE
T_T your so right... YOUR SO RIGHT!
This was awesome! It's one of the few creepypastas that I actually felt sad at the ending. It's just great and I really love it!
I don't think I could actually kill someone. I have a hard enough time deciding what I'll eat for breakfast. Let's not throw life or death into the mix...
Haha! Kindred spirits, buddy.
Dude, that's a great deal! Get rid of a nuisance and save a loved one! How awesome is that?! And why would you hesitate to kill that deuchebag?! Pastel Man runs a goood biz
I know right
To summon the Pastel Man you must call his name....
AND HIS NAME IS JOOOHN CENAAAAA!
DO DO DO DOOOOO!
DO DO DO DOOOOO!
+Joe Atherton spicy meme son
+Joe Atherton XDDDDDDD so funni 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
ahahahaha
Joe Atherton 👌😂👌
are you sure about that?
Am I the only one who pictures the Pastel Man as Ryuk?
I pictured him as a black Rem Shinigami-type character with purple bug eyes and a circular head.
:P
I have to say, I rarely pay attention to the writers of these stories, but Vincent VenaCava is definitely my favorite creepypasta writer. His stories are well written, enjoyable, and they have a certain personality. He should really try to get published.
* I turn around, and see a creature behind me* OH HEY THERE BUDDY, HOW YA DOIN? SIDDOWN, LETS HAVE SOME TEA!
Ah its 4;am and I think its finally time to go to bed... Oh look a new creepy pasta, it wont hurt right?
Hey dude, I think there's a bug on your lens.
Lol
That. Was. Unbelievable.
I LOVED IT
Drunk drivers don't deserve any sympathy.
it was a teenager! Your saying a teenager should be tortured to death cus he made a mistake?
Yes, a teenager, not a child.
idontlikeyouyo you're insane! You don't get it do you? A teenager is just as naive as a child and you wouldn't kill a child would you?
Usually the penalty of drunk driver is losing your car, driver license, and getting a fine. .-.
Katziez
Just because someone is young and inocent won't make his mistakes unhappened. That teenager killed a mother and severly injured a child. Someone who have a driving license should know what is he / she responsible for. In a situation that the main character had i would be glad to kill the person who destroyed my family and his/her age would not matter.
"Pastaman" - By Vinny Pizzapasta
My favorite creepy pasta of all time.
I 'm a longtime fan of your channel and your amazing narrative. You are a natural. Love and light and joy with plenty of time to enjoy them !
Big eyes no nose evil magic cannot speak his name
THE PASTEL MAN IS VOLDEMORT IN DISGUISE
Creepypasta is at his best when he does over 10 min videos
Preach it my mad lad (lass)
Sorry
Walter From this story Sounds Like 98% Of People I Know!
same here
What dead?
Wondering where the ambulance is 13 mins in...
This makes me question,
"What if every saved life, a person dies in his or her place? Is The Pastel Man real?"
Quite a rather interesting thought.
But, no one will truly know.
That is, with the acception of the people who have consulted with The Pastel Man.
Who, obviously, will not say a word about it. Due to the simple fact that they may be either locked up in a psych ward for the criminally insane or thrown in a jail cell.
Or simply killed by the Pastel Man. Much more likely imo.
Hm. That as well.
Death is one thing. Torture is even worse... -.-
"Pure blue skin" hmmm sounds like your youtube avatar MCP.
I thought the title said the 'Pretzel Man' and thought that the thumbnail was a bunch of pretzels in a pile.
Lol that's good
I really hope Vincent creates a 2nd part to this story, told from the perspective of the boy.
saving anyone you'd like and watching the person you hate get brutally murdered doesn't sound so bad
DAFUQ HATTY
Well. Yeah your right. You can go back to killing youtubers.
Joshua Pasadyn I'm on it
I imagined it as Him from The Powerpuff Girls o-o
I pictured him similarly...
This reminds me of Jigoku Shoujo (Hell Girl). Though on that show you get revenge on anyone you want but when you die your soul goes to hell. They frequently use the quote, "when one is cursed two graves are dug" so true.
Definitely a really good story to make up for the rather meh ones we've been getting recently. Vincent is obviously a very talented writer.
Dammit, Mr Creepypasta. This is one of your best work yet. Love the playful creepiness your voice lent the pastel man!
I think this story would be very different if the main character had chosen someone like a rapist or molester. I don't know about other people, but I'd make that kind of deal in a heartbeat with no remorse.
He probably didn't know a rapist that had a major impact in his life
The Death Note effect.
Mr.Cava is a fucking genius
This was a very interesting one, I wouldve accepted his deal
So you have someone you want dead?
Everyone has some one they hate
Is there someone you hate so mush that you want to see that person die?
Yes
You must really hate this person
I picture it as Sidoh from Death Note
+Hamnster209 your my hero sempai
what is this, Beetlejuice?
I like the Pastel Man's voice! :]
Frig that. I wouldn't have any guilt over letting the creature kill a drunk driver, especially one that took the life of my wife and nearly my son. Nah, he dead.
Loved this story. So well written. Part of me was wondering if upon breaking the deal, the pastel man was going to make Shawn into a pastel man. Thus in doing so, the thing he never wanted to do (take another human life) is something he had to do (first hand, not just watching as it happens) for eternity. In a twisted way, as time passes, what if he comes to like doing it?
something so beautiful that belongs to something so repulsive, it gives life which is its beauty and then it makes you take a life which is its ugliness.
+Dire Wolf I also really enjoy the pastel mans voice its so pretty
Kyubey, is that you?
Woah all these comments... i'm just here to say I loved this story and it was beautifully told. The end =)
AMEN
this story is great
Oh my goodness this one was amazing, I didn't want it to end. The story is so interesting
Optimus Prime enters: One shall stand. One shall fall.
HOW DIDNT I REALISE THIS WAS 40 MINUTES LONG
The monster sounds like he is a big gingerbread man
im pretty sure a gingerbread man does not have blue skin and pink eyes
and sharp ass teeth. are you smoking crack
Misheard blue for brown at first XD add in the pink eyes and its a demonic gingerbread man.
Richie Beall Blue waffle man
Juan Larios wtf? Hell no! Lol
Juan Larios XDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD
An incredible story horror and a serious eye opener thank you to the writer and thank you to MrCreepyPasta. A round of applause for the two of you.
Great creepy pasta you had me when i thought he was gonna kill the young boy in the hospital and good work to you aswell vincent
Of all the creepypastas he has done this takes the cake
Lock the door, shut the blinds, turn off the lights, but it's already to late. It's always to late. The beast is not in your house, he won't come through the door or the windows... He's in your mind, and locked himself in, never to come-out except in your dreams. There he is free to roam as in the dark behind your eyes. That's why when you walk down a dark path you think someone's behind you when there is a seizure like fear in the back of your mind. Now will the beast get you, or will you keep it at bay until the end of your life when you confront your demons in-front of God and the world. Will they in the end condemn you, or you them? To answer though would be meaningless because in the end all have at least one demon themselves, if you think you're above them or clean only makes you naive and only weaker to them. To finish I say, be prepared. (I don't know, just felt like writing a line or two and it exploded.) Good episode.
That's why I watch Justin Bieber videos, so that I get so mad, I forget about the fears I've had :P
I also laugh and cheer up when I read the comments :D
I absolutely love this story. Pastel Man is such a great villain - I hope there will be more stories about him or stories that he plays a role in. This is by far my favorite pasta story.
That bug is nasty.
I love how this monster has logic
Anyone else creeped out by the bug on the screen
+Dire Wolf yep
yay
me
this actually scared the craps
out me because for some reason I could actually picture the monster in my head
For a moment I was actually considering it. I know who I would target too. But nobody deserves that treatment, and becoming a murderer just isn't worth it..
You won't be the one to kill
+Noel Alexiusson But you caused the murder.
Saying that you agreed to let the pastel man kill someone, and then claiming that you weren't the murderer, is the same as saying this.
"I may have pulled the trigger, but I didn't kill him; the gun did!"
It is the same thing. You would live with the guilt of causing a death and retracting a life from what it could have been if it had carried on.
Nothing is worth that, even a loved one.
love the pastel man's voice effect...could never figure how to do it and make it with such justice
No one deserves to die, even if you're killing someone to make a deal to bring back someone you love, you're still stealing the life of someone who may be loved by others. No matter what any of you think, no one deserves to die..
Rebecca Dowis I disagree, like Rhaegar said, no one deserves to die. If you think that way, your no better than the child molester. Who says prison teaches them nothing, have you been to one?
coolguyman16 The only people who deserve death are the ones who have killed, but even then if they are good people then they will suffer mentally more then physically.
Josh Marks I still disagree, if you wish death on those who have killed, you're no better than them
coolguyman16 Some people deserve to die. ;/ Its sad but true, you can't truthefully say that you haven't seen or met someone who you thought didn't need to be alive. :/
Josh Marks Yes, I'm not going to lie I've met a few people that, to say I don't like them would be an understatement, But that doesn't mean I or anyone else should be the one to decide whether they live or die. There's no write or wrong in life. Take for example murder. If someone was to murder someone you loved, and you wanted revenge so you killed them. Who's the good guy and who's the bad guy? You've done to someone's family what they did to you, removing a loved one from their lives. So no, I don't believe some people deserve to die just because they don't follow what other people do, It's almost a form a Nazism to believe that someone who isn't up to your standards should be punished, simple because they may have some characteristic about them that they can't help, or that something happened to them that was out of their control which caused them to be this way, So no, no matter how much I, or anyone else, may dislike someone no one deserves to die.
The balance...must remain. One lives...the other dies...
Did anyone else think of "Him" from PowerPuff Girls?
Omg I do now.
I always half-expect a jumpscare at he end of Mr.CreepyPasta's videos, this one was amazing! Good job!
What did we learn here?
Never drink and drive. XD
Hi, I just wanted to say, I just recently discovered Creepypastas...& immediately fell in love. I started listening about 2 & 1/2-3 weeks ago & ever since I listened to my 1st one I have not been able to get to sleep or sleep easy unless I do & fall asleep listening to them, they're my lullaby I guess you could say...lol. MrCreepyPasta is my soul favorite, I have been listening to the list on Nightmare Fuel since my 2nd night, his voice just has this unbelievable calming affect on me, not to mention he's wonderful at narrating. Well, off to listen to my beautiful lullabies so I can get to sleep for work in the morning...=)
Me: "Donald Trump"
Pastel Man: "you got it bro"
+candlelocks Had to be someone in your life, and you had to confront donald trump to do so. Good luck getting alone with him. If I were you, I would request extra time to schedule an appt with the trump-man to do a journal entry on him. That'd cause a huge scandal though, and you'd be sent to jail. Of course, killing one man and potentially saving hundreds more is worth it.
Hilary Clinton*
+SinäLennätKuuhunEnsiViikollaApinoidenRaketillaJokaToimiiIhmisLihalla Both*
+SinäLennätKuuhunEnsiViikollaApinoidenRaketillaJokaToimiiIhmisLihalla Both*
+candlelocks The story says you have to get them alone but lets be honest the Pastel Man would be like. "Bruh, Ill make an exception." And just dance away to rip apart Trump.
I'm new to the whole creepy pasta thing. I've had friends that were into them, but never really got interested enough to look into them. However, after MrCreepyPasta i'm and addict. Keep doing it right man.
My fucking god, that thing at the corner is bothering me.
It looks more like a cricket or a grasshopper crawling.
or something else...
I thought of it.. although it looks like some kind of roach or grasshopper
yeah I thought so too.
"The Pastel Man", "The Harbinger Experiment" and "A Favor For A Favor" are still probably my favorites of all of all these stories.
They'd make a great horror anthology film.
I would kickstart that project
Sir, your voice for the Pastel Man makes him sound hot. Now, this is my favorite Creepypasta.
Dat Tomboy Gamer Doe Waiting for the fanarts lolol
I can only imagine what kind of bloopers you make while reading these. Not to mention, I can see you as one if those guys that is all happy and funny out in the real world and on here you just become super creepy xD
Am I the only one who felt no remorse for Walter?
truly a gr8 story, he accepted death in the end to redeem hiself and give a kid his life 10/10 20/10 narration
-listens to this while building in minecraft, my cousin walks in-
Walter: SHAUN THE SHITHEAD!?
My cousin named Shaun: -puts his head on his chest a says in a high pitched voice- "EXCUSE YOU."
hand*
xD wow that was perfect timing
I listen to this last night but didn't comment, one of my favorites. I agree with MrCreepyPasta it's all about the inner workings of the human mind. But it's all about the person.
Is that a giant twitching flea in the bottom right corner of the video?
Six years later and you have an answer! Aren’t you happy?
I’m pretty sure it’s a cockroach, based on the legs. Had a bad infestation of them a while back, so I would notice those retched little legs anywhere.
Vincent VenaCava is such a brilliant author! I love all his stories.
Hey, MCP I was wondering, how did u get ur icon?
silenced-requiem.deviantart.com
When I realized the twist, I was like OMG MY WORLD IS LIKE WOW
i might make a game on this
pleas do
*****
i have some ideas in mind, but it wont be finished until the summer since i make all my games in c++ winapi
*****
ya i gusse your right, it would have been really hard though it would take about a year for me to make because im only 14 and busy w/ school
***** That isn't exactly the best reasoning. Often amateur game developers do not have original ideas to base games on, and without experience it is hard to become better, clone games, creepypasta games, and such are the result.
***** Most likely with it being made in winapi and all, if it is bad very few people will play it, so who would even know?
No-end house was my first creepypasta but this was my second and the one that introduced me to the creepypasta narrators such as mr.creepypasta and creeps. And it really holds a special place in my heart. It's also where I found my love for the stories of Vincent venacava.
TLDR; Thank you for yet another job well done
if i was going to tell him to kill Justin Bierber.
but you have to watch him die and have to meet him how are you gonna do that and I agree
But how would you get to him?
oh, if only.
AlphaLeader772 can you film it for me? Please?
Hunter Gregory There are some people I would gladly watch die horribly
Oh man you did it?! I recommended this and you did it :D I love you!!!
HE IS EPIC!!!! HE KILLS AL THE DICKS AND BRINGS BACK DEAD FRIENDS AND OR FAMILY!!!! OH MA GAWSH!!!! I
Jay Davies No, he can only bring those who are on the brink of death. If they already have died, there's no saving them.
I remember playing dark souls 2 listening too your story’s. Thank you for all you do
Main character is kinda whiney
For real, I hate these type of characters.
Mr CreepyPasta I love you and the stories you find especially Vincent VenaCava Stories.
And the Pastel Man's real name was... PressFartToContinue!