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  • čas přidán 25. 05. 2012
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Komentáře • 4,5K

  • @danwilliams1989
    @danwilliams1989 Před 10 lety +738

    Suddenly, the single life isn't looking so terrible.

  • @bigantspawn1223
    @bigantspawn1223 Před 9 lety +92

    This pasta had so much potential. The beginning and rising action was great, but I feel the gore was excessive and the end was both rushed and very cliché. This would have made for a great setup of a much longer and more thought out piece. 6/10

  • @iv.brianna
    @iv.brianna Před 9 lety +248

    The ending. I personally loved the story, had me on the edge of my seat threw almost of it. But seriously, after what she told him before her death, and his near death, why would he date a girl the looks just like her? Like, come on, do you even want to live the rest of your life?

  • @georgeszweden9497
    @georgeszweden9497 Před 8 lety +98

    In the beginning i was confused if it was a creepypasta or my life.

    • @stephting3176
      @stephting3176 Před 4 lety +1

      If thats the case, then your life is a creepy pasta 😉 (kidding)

  • @un-capital3666
    @un-capital3666 Před 8 lety +65

    I kind of predicted the twist as soon as it was mentioned that she didn't want him in the basement.

    • @DreadMew
      @DreadMew Před 8 lety +9

      I thought it was going bad when he married the woman after just 7 months, when she dident want him in the basement thats it! Nope outa there

    • @mcrainbowoeslak1603
      @mcrainbowoeslak1603 Před 8 lety +5

      Just imagine if the one behind all this was the girl who's number he lost at first.

  • @Extremehalofan16
    @Extremehalofan16 Před 9 lety +700

    You worked at Burger King? Was her name... *Wendy?*

    • @Flamefollower
      @Flamefollower Před 9 lety +13

      I see what you did there. :P

    • @lcyanicamccloud8729
      @lcyanicamccloud8729 Před 9 lety +6

      the lesbian-ness in this story is beautiful.Thank you.^-^ (not an insult i swear.)

    • @HunteR-uc7nv
      @HunteR-uc7nv Před 9 lety +1

      uhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuuhhhhh

    • @lcyanicamccloud8729
      @lcyanicamccloud8729 Před 9 lety +1

      because the wife say "she" by accident

    • @ayingchanda
      @ayingchanda Před 9 lety +2

      LOL!!!!!!!! what a nice joke, please make more.

  • @Hexi_Geee
    @Hexi_Geee Před 7 lety +23

    anyone else felt heart broken when he describes the 8 year old, and hearing the baby cry?

  • @OrderOfMagnitude1
    @OrderOfMagnitude1 Před 10 lety +100

    (SPOILER)
    Can I ask why noone cares about the husband getting murdered in the most brutal way possible? Why is her killing the kids the only horrible thing? And before you say, 'he probably had it coming' or something to that effect, you do realise she gets off on murder right? The whole leukaemia story was bogus, used just to lure the main character in. Her previous husband was just as innocent as her kids...

    • @hurricanian6146
      @hurricanian6146 Před 4 lety +6

      Daniel Luby lol, all I could think about is if he finished his forms...

    • @davidb8523
      @davidb8523 Před 3 lety +17

      I dont think its that nobody cares but when you hear someone murder a baby or even a child for fun that kinda just takes the forefront of your mind(even though this isnt real)

    • @Dizz2K7
      @Dizz2K7 Před 3 lety +6

      We've always been expendable. We have more or less two main functions, and they aren't exclusive to just us, so if we can't do it, just find someone else. Even the way this is written is set up to make the death of the men seem insignificant.

    • @michaela.754
      @michaela.754 Před 3 lety +4

      Because the murder of humans is bad. The murder of innocent humans is worse.

    • @OrderOfMagnitude1
      @OrderOfMagnitude1 Před 3 lety +2

      @@michaela.754 I wrote this 6 years ago so I can't remember the video but wasn't the husband innocent? Or are you saying all adult humans are less than innocent, thus it's not as bad if they're murdered?

  • @Shnapper
    @Shnapper Před 9 lety +318

    This is a classic pasta.
    Pure GOLD.
    Fuck I love old creepy pastas

  • @murdoxxed
    @murdoxxed Před 7 lety +45

    "The traumatic experiences of watching your friends get married, have children, and live the American dream"
    wow what kind of friends do you have?

  • @enp82003
    @enp82003 Před 10 lety +293

    But but.... did he make the hamburgers?

  • @SammySinglewide
    @SammySinglewide Před 9 lety +42

    Omg "two runny eggs nailed to a wall"

  • @FearTheHiddenSouls
    @FearTheHiddenSouls Před 10 lety +14

    This was probably one of the hardest creepypastas I have ever finished because I hate those whole "You know your fucked but you get to listen to every little detail about it until you turn around" kind of stories.

  • @mauvnoelful
    @mauvnoelful Před 9 lety +49

    22:30 and this is when little jimmy knew he done married a serial killer

  • @imkaminski31
    @imkaminski31 Před 10 lety +33

    4 days sober from my meth habit...Welp, time to try speed dating

  • @jesseb9864
    @jesseb9864 Před 10 lety +41

    Hmm, dark wavy hair. Green eyes. Kind of reminds me of a girl I used to date. I believe she was a serial killer? Oh well, I'm gonna put that behind me and pretend I won't die :D

  • @EpicFail2388
    @EpicFail2388 Před 9 lety +28

    The modified video can b easily explained, most serial killers aren't just nuts, they are borderline genius and psycho, thus the excessive planning. So clearly she's a hacker and made the video bfor he found it and had a device to cut the power to his laptop noing he'd check everywhere for another, she made the flower pot key obvious on purpose so he wood check, so instead of going to the store she waited and watched outside for her moment, it's her house so clearly she's got a few seCrete enterances in and out to keep quiet, so she waited either in the basement and crept upstairs after him or snuck upstairs ahead of him and waited for the "turn around" to pop out, so clearly after she left she used a secret entrance to make her video in the basement right after she'd left then slipped out and cut the power on him, watched thru the window then climbed in after he headed upstairs and listened and waited, like I sed just cuz she's crazy Don't make her dumb, good example of that in the joker from batman, very smart cuz of his unique gadgets and schemes yet he's nuts cuz he's totally bat shit crazy with undefined mental illnesses lol

    • @WALKUREX
      @WALKUREX Před 2 lety +1

      Most are boardline genius?Brah common we need references

    • @BotBoy-un3pz
      @BotBoy-un3pz Před rokem +2

      I think you're vastly overestimating the author's ability to write a creepypasta

  • @skeeter9180
    @skeeter9180 Před 8 lety +121

    this whole situation could've been avoided if dude just went to a public library and us their computers...js

    • @Nitroxity
      @Nitroxity Před 8 lety +2

      +Bellicose He still would've been married to that psychopath.

    • @somnus5280
      @somnus5280 Před 8 lety +16

      It also could've been avoided if he dated the first girl. Always save your numbers before you close your phone

    • @squishyharms4427
      @squishyharms4427 Před 8 lety +1

      +KillStreakKnight she couldve been phsyco to you never know

    • @squishyharms4427
      @squishyharms4427 Před 8 lety +2

      +KillStreakKnight but she had his number to since she didnt text ir call she clearly wasnt really interested

    • @somnus5280
      @somnus5280 Před 8 lety

      Harmony's Updatesound maybe

  • @user-zo2vn8sh3s
    @user-zo2vn8sh3s Před 4 lety +23

    This story always made me sad but i listened to it now as a new mother I practically bawled my eyes out with the baby. 😭

  • @a_flying_mobula6062
    @a_flying_mobula6062 Před 5 lety +17

    I had my headphones listening to this story and near the end after she says turn around my mom walks through the door i never got so damned scared in my life

  • @DoctorHorror
    @DoctorHorror Před 9 lety +48

    Amazing! Loved the video. Appreciate you taking the time to create it and sharing with us.

    • @franciscomelendez7678
      @franciscomelendez7678 Před 9 lety +3

      Doctor Horror I love your videos :D

    • @AngelRuiz-xq2ie
      @AngelRuiz-xq2ie Před 9 lety +3

      Doctor Horror Whoa, Doctor Horror! Whats up man? Keep it up with your channel. Doin great!! Love your vids!!

    • @jkt4810
      @jkt4810 Před 6 lety +1

      I love your videos 😍

  • @PandaQuinnAtTheDisco
    @PandaQuinnAtTheDisco Před 8 lety +70

    This story did have its cliches, however I can admit this one scared the living hell out of me. Most of the others are just interesting... this one was just.... *on a whole new level of fucked up*. Excuse me while I use my holy water ear drops for this one.

  • @CreepsSpaghett
    @CreepsSpaghett Před 4 lety +13

    It’s been already 4 years and 2 months since I listened to this Creepypasta, it was also the first Creepypasta narration I’ve listened from MCP and in English, I always will love this story

  • @deadgrlart
    @deadgrlart Před 9 lety +120

    Why'd you have to describe her to look like my aunt. Why.

    • @KillerDragain
      @KillerDragain Před 9 lety +1

      Sfx Queen Why'd he have to describe her like me? o-o

    • @Cuggaconroyfan30001
      @Cuggaconroyfan30001 Před 9 lety +1

      KillerDragain is it bad that I like I Want this to happen to me? just saying

    • @KillerDragain
      @KillerDragain Před 9 lety +1

      Cuggaconroyfan30001 What look like the chick that killed 3 people or to have your wife kill 3 people and you be the next?

    • @foultarnished0101
      @foultarnished0101 Před 9 lety +4

      Sfx Queen Why.avi

    • @sleepyghostboy4638
      @sleepyghostboy4638 Před 9 lety

      Sfx Queen she doesn't look like mine, but she gives off that "auntie sweetie" vibe

  • @BullofCrete
    @BullofCrete Před 9 lety +12

    You can tell this Pasta is actually fake.
    I mean, 'left hand'? The chances of that are astronomical.

  • @KawaiiPewPew
    @KawaiiPewPew Před 10 lety +29

    Speed dating is now out of my option to find a good girl

  • @Lavawaffles
    @Lavawaffles Před 2 lety +11

    This one's ended killed it for me. (Pun intended) you knew right after she said "minion" the same thing was gonna happen all over again

  • @taylorbivens8546
    @taylorbivens8546 Před 8 lety +288

    How the hell did MrCreepyPasta find this picture of my kids??? It was kept safe in my scrapbook.

  • @HyoKoibito
    @HyoKoibito Před 9 lety +34

    moral of the story is: Never go to a dating game. Just meet someone in real life

  • @Pikajame
    @Pikajame Před 10 lety +45

    Did anyone else laugh when he said two Jehovah witnesses basically saved him? LMAOOO

  • @jbillraptor4382
    @jbillraptor4382 Před 8 lety +21

    Speed-dating events, that was your first mistake.

  • @samanthac319
    @samanthac319 Před 9 lety +319

    ALL THE SINGLE LADIES PUT YOUR HANDS UP

    • @ChibiThekitty
      @ChibiThekitty Před 9 lety +7

      //rAISES EVERYTHING

    • @samanthac319
      @samanthac319 Před 9 lety

      Lol

    • @samanthac319
      @samanthac319 Před 9 lety +2

      Cause im slim shady tYes im the real slim shady

    • @WatkinsStudios
      @WatkinsStudios Před 9 lety +5

      All you other slim shadys are just imatating (spelt wrong)

    • @devinflener8640
      @devinflener8640 Před 9 lety +1

      Watkins Studios so wont the real slim shady please stand up, please stand up

  • @Symbie
    @Symbie Před 9 lety +89

    It's getting intense

    • @laurentiugaal8960
      @laurentiugaal8960 Před 9 lety +2

      Slendy... we meet again.
      After my failiure on 8 pages (simply cause the fatass of a character could'nt sprint for more than 2 seconds) and my failiure on the arrival (no comment)I figured you'd come back for more.

    • @Symbie
      @Symbie Před 9 lety

      ;)

    • @Symbie
      @Symbie Před 9 lety +3

      I may suck but swallow.. All of it

    • @AtomBombMommy
      @AtomBombMommy Před 9 lety

      Slender Man slendyyyyxxDDDD

    • @Symbie
      @Symbie Před 9 lety

      Shh

  • @LesboNerd
    @LesboNerd Před 10 lety +46

    ASIDE FROM HER SUSPICIOUSLY NEVER LETTING ME GO NEAR THE BASEMENT SHE HAD NO FAULT.

  • @Alanspiderkipz
    @Alanspiderkipz Před 3 lety +13

    God damn that was edgy I hope the author moved on to make other creepypastas that didn't rely on "UMMM I AM EVIL I WATCH CP HERES TWENTY SENTENCES DESCRIBING CHILDREN GETTING MURDERED TO SHOW U THAT I AM SO EVIL AND SO COOL!!!!"

  • @OreoCinima
    @OreoCinima Před 9 lety +47

    Single life seems pretty OK now

  • @batfreeze56
    @batfreeze56 Před 10 lety +20

    That ending, was amazing!

  • @maybellpotter6709
    @maybellpotter6709 Před 10 lety +6

    This is one of my favorite creepypasta's simply cause of how good the narration is and the story itself

  • @ayingchanda
    @ayingchanda Před 9 lety +50

    This is such a sad story about a virgin man :(

  • @AjPuj
    @AjPuj Před 9 lety +124

    Still a better love story than Twilight.

    • @Uncoordinatedrooster
      @Uncoordinatedrooster Před 9 lety +5

      Any story is a better love story than twilight

    • @AjPuj
      @AjPuj Před 9 lety

      Uncoordinatedrooster
      well, technically no. Romeo and Juliet is indeed the only story out there that's worse than Twilight. For all intents and purposes, Edward and Bella DO, in fact, have more chemistry than R and J because they at least talk about the stuff that's going on.

    • @SirNippie
      @SirNippie Před 9 lety

      AjPuj Romeo and Juliet date back to Shakespearean times. Where arranged marriage and 'love at first sight' were more common. It's not fair to compare R & J to Trashlight.

    • @kyliedavis2706
      @kyliedavis2706 Před 9 lety +3

      Seriously, are you all going to argue over Twilight and Romeo & Juliet? Some people actually LIKE Twilight, so can you not talk trash about it? And Romeo and Juliet is good, but it takes place over literally a couple of days. They're all dead by the end of it. That's not really a love story.

    • @mackenziefron646
      @mackenziefron646 Před 7 lety

      +Kylie Davis
      You see love, that's the beauty of the internet. People can say what they want and you can chose to either read it or not, if someone wants to talk trash about something, simply ignore it.

  • @alexsantiago2482
    @alexsantiago2482 Před 10 lety +67

    Mother of god -slowly takes off sun glasses-

    • @iDontCareApple
      @iDontCareApple Před 10 lety +14

      Didn't know that the mother of God owned a pair of sunglasses.

    • @cleoreavey3176
      @cleoreavey3176 Před 10 lety

      lol

    • @PieALaMode
      @PieALaMode Před 10 lety

      The115Archetype She tries to keep up with the times.

  • @BlackIris95
    @BlackIris95 Před 10 lety +49

    I think I'll just stay single.

    • @sonofodin1636
      @sonofodin1636 Před 10 lety +1

      or if you get a gf hire some surveillance in the basement?

    • @dalegag5671
      @dalegag5671 Před 10 lety +1

      dylan alter Or just get a house with out a basement and a attic

    • @sonofodin1636
      @sonofodin1636 Před 10 lety +2

      Elisha Seaman good point

    • @masako8980
      @masako8980 Před 4 měsíci

      Did you?

    • @BlackIris95
      @BlackIris95 Před 4 měsíci

      @@masako8980 Unfortunately so

  • @itzsal5739
    @itzsal5739 Před 2 lety +20

    This was one of the first creepypastas I ever listened to. Still creeps me out. I feel like creepypastas these days don't go as dark as the old ones used to

    • @WALKUREX
      @WALKUREX Před 2 lety +8

      They do just that narrators don't want to do them for fear of
      1-monetization
      2-getting cancelled for saying fEgit or whatever "offensive" word.

    • @Streifen1911
      @Streifen1911 Před 2 lety +4

      yeah youtube has gotten so soft. it’s a damn adventure to find darker ones. it’s so rare

  • @kyleetime
    @kyleetime Před 10 lety +92

    _This is why I will never, ever speed date..._

    • @ramiburghal4406
      @ramiburghal4406 Před 10 lety

      ر

    • @gvd72
      @gvd72 Před 10 lety +6

      Or date at all...

    • @grimreaper1551
      @grimreaper1551 Před 10 lety

      your profile pic matches the comment and i also like it

    • @deseanjames3966
      @deseanjames3966 Před 10 lety

      What do u mean by that

    • @500Diegoperez
      @500Diegoperez Před 10 lety +2

      thats the reason why I WILL speed date.... imagine that type women in bed...... damn. HAHAHA *no disrespect to the ladies reading this*

  • @mwalker3868
    @mwalker3868 Před 10 lety +15

    WHY?! WHY WOULD SOMEONE MAKE THIS MORBID AND TWISTED STORY?! IT'S AMAZING, BUT A BABY AND CHILD?! I CAN UNDERSTAND IF SHE KILLED THE HUSBAND AND ONLY THE HUSBAND, BUT THOSE THINGS CAME OUT OF YOU, AND YOU KILLED THEM?! I'M SO DONE.

    • @mwalker3868
      @mwalker3868 Před 10 lety

      James Frost SEEEEEEEE

    • @mwalker3868
      @mwalker3868 Před 10 lety

      Renike2012 What even?

    • @animeirl5265
      @animeirl5265 Před 10 lety

      lol to much creepy pasta? never heard a dead baby joke? THEY ARENT REAL PEOPLE!!!

    • @mwalker3868
      @mwalker3868 Před 10 lety

      anime irl Shut up. No one likes you. Oh, and Too*

    • @mwalker3868
      @mwalker3868 Před 10 lety

      Renike2012 Well dang sorry i just hate it when people say it's not real. I wanna believe it's real so shut up.

  • @killer13324
    @killer13324 Před 10 lety +55

    all this is doing is giving me torture ideas to use on pedophiles.

    • @BobJones-vg3iw
      @BobJones-vg3iw Před 10 lety +4

      Want more to torture ideas? Look up the origin of laughing jack.

    • @khaliquefields4861
      @khaliquefields4861 Před 10 lety

      a little extreme don't you think?

    • @killer13324
      @killer13324 Před 10 lety +1

      not when it comes to child molesters when the subject of them comes up i get extremely sadistic and on a primal level i enjoy it. is that bad?

    • @khaliquefields4861
      @khaliquefields4861 Před 10 lety +4

      killer13324 yes that's very bad. do you even hear yourself? you enjoy the thought of torturing child molesters? If you think that someone doing something disgusting and illegal gives you free reign to do the most inhuman, ghastly things to them then you're just as sick. it doesn't matter what motive you hide behind.

    • @killer13324
      @killer13324 Před 10 lety +1

      khalique fields actually molesting a child is an inhuman act. the torture would be retribution. ***** that's assuming the pain doesn't kill them by putting them into shock or cardiac arrest.

  • @prosecutorgodot3166
    @prosecutorgodot3166 Před 10 lety +30

    The last video is impossible, if it (WHY.avi) was modified an HOUR ago before he found the Laptop, then how the HELL would she know that he would look at it, and how could she have exactly planned in the video to where she says "Turn Around". Still, good story, but it's impossible.

    • @epiccheeseify
      @epiccheeseify Před 10 lety +5

      Because everything in a creepypasta is believable

    • @prosecutorgodot3166
      @prosecutorgodot3166 Před 10 lety

      Whatever man.

    • @tirionsaikano2006
      @tirionsaikano2006 Před 10 lety +20

      i think she was some kind of monster disguised as a human with supernatural demonic powers

    • @banki121
      @banki121 Před 10 lety +4

      i agree with kano 3 lethal injections fk that shet if i was him no dating nothing id live in a bomb shelter house.

    • @Bringm3hop3
      @Bringm3hop3 Před 10 lety +6

      Maybe she modified it everyday because she did say "I knew you would find out" the whole turn around could have just been her luck on being there at the right time

  • @muttfacemcderp980
    @muttfacemcderp980 Před 9 lety +11

    I have to admit, when it came to the kids I lowered the volume >.>
    Great job by the way, love your readings.

  • @tlb963
    @tlb963 Před 10 lety +32

    I'm disgusted by my left hand too

  • @WobblesandBean
    @WobblesandBean Před 10 lety +23

    At first I thought "Oh god, this guy is a broke, shallow, overweight loser who objectifies women, has insultingly harsh double-standards and we're supposed to root for him?" But then he surprised me. He grew as a person. He became successful, driven, kind, and a lot more mature.
    That's good writing. He went from despicable to genuinely sympathetic.

    • @suzukablade
      @suzukablade Před 10 lety

      Dagmar the Bomb
      Any chance he might be Rodney Alcala?

    • @suzukablade
      @suzukablade Před 10 lety +1

      Mitchell Bobo
      First of all Rodney Alcala aka the Dating Game Serial Killer did in fact go on the Dating Game TV Show. > en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rodney_Alcala
      Second of all you might want to get your stories straight before you show the internet just how much of a misogynistic little man-b###h you are.

    • @smotnick
      @smotnick Před 10 lety +1

      suzukablade Wow. That's really something. Back then employers didn't do background checks. And getting on the Dating Game!!! A movie could be made of him!

    • @suzukablade
      @suzukablade Před 10 lety

      I don't know about movies but I do know that they made a few documentaries and it got a lot of press coverage at the time. Also a quick double check of his timeline shows that he was on the show some time in the middle of his spree. So that would be before his murders went on record and that might explain how he got on the show.

    • @kingBPP1947
      @kingBPP1947 Před 10 lety +4

      How did the character objectify women? Because he looked at their boobs? He commented on their low cut dresses? What were the harsh double standards?

  • @rinmolton3660
    @rinmolton3660 Před 8 lety +66

    moral of the story: don't use windows

  • @mayuthekitsune3306
    @mayuthekitsune3306 Před 6 lety +4

    Ok with the first few lines I cant shake that this is a creepypasta about a incel

  • @jakestanfield1762
    @jakestanfield1762 Před 10 lety +39

    am i the only one that hears hm repeat himself alot

    • @kimifw58
      @kimifw58 Před 10 lety +8

      When you say it like that, it sounds like it isn't obvious.

    • @jakestanfield1762
      @jakestanfield1762 Před 10 lety

      well...... i guess so ya :P

    • @mksabourinable
      @mksabourinable Před 10 lety +6

      jacob stanfield you try reading aloud for half an hour straight without any mistakes

    • @kimifw58
      @kimifw58 Před 10 lety +8

      Kate I understand that. He's bound to make mistakes, but can't he just edit them out?

    • @mksabourinable
      @mksabourinable Před 10 lety +1

      Kimi FW Yea I've wondered that too...

  • @mirandabarrett8987
    @mirandabarrett8987 Před 9 lety +58

    The only use for Jehovah's Witnesses

  • @RB01.10
    @RB01.10 Před 8 lety +1

    This is by far the most scary, unsettling, and disturbing creepy pasta story I have EVER heard. It stayed with me for days. No other creepy pasta has done that.

  • @MiguelHernandez-ui8cd
    @MiguelHernandez-ui8cd Před 9 lety +17

    This protagonist has to be the most unlikeable of any creepy pasta I've ever heard

  • @TheCTD123
    @TheCTD123 Před 10 lety +18

    0:51 story of my life LOL

  • @posey9573
    @posey9573 Před 9 lety +19

    ..Was carving that sentence into the kid seriously something this story needed?

    • @Michael-ck7lv
      @Michael-ck7lv Před 9 lety +4

      Yes.

    • @elijahgodbey1100
      @elijahgodbey1100 Před 9 lety +4

      Ohh yes indeed

    • @mranderson509
      @mranderson509 Před 9 lety +5

      No I'm of the opinion carving something so hateful into a small child wasn't
      needed, the guy clearly over shot his try for shock factor.

    • @andweoop3254
      @andweoop3254 Před 9 lety +1

      Mr.CreepyPasta

    • @sootheater
      @sootheater Před 9 lety +1

      Posey The scene was horrible. I don't even want to visualize that stuff in fiction

  • @ganstagirl512
    @ganstagirl512 Před 10 lety +10

    I love the story, but this is kind of sterotyped....People think that Gothic's are evil already, and now that they're adding a Gothic(Well, from the way that she is mentioned and how he says 'Gothic', I'm guessing she is) and plus, making them evil, just makes people think more that Gothic's are mean.....oh well....still a really amazing story.

    • @peenumgeee1012
      @peenumgeee1012 Před 9 lety

      So true

    • @furryash8388
      @furryash8388 Před 9 lety +1

      It's far from the actual stereotypes of Goths. Goths are actually somewhat grouped together with Emos for some reason.

    • @azrenthedemon8140
      @azrenthedemon8140 Před 9 lety

      Fanatic Proxy
      why are they in a group?they are nothing alike

    • @furryash8388
      @furryash8388 Před 9 lety

      Don't ask me. I'm not the one who grouped them together.

    • @theMONSTERaddict423
      @theMONSTERaddict423 Před 9 lety +7

      "Someone dressed in a gothic manner" meaning she only wore a black dress. Doesn't mean she's goth so calm down.

  • @dakota754
    @dakota754 Před 10 lety +32

    Nicely read but if you make a mistake while reading why not just use simple audio editing to fix it.

    • @ChokoBjorn
      @ChokoBjorn Před 10 lety +51

      I always viewed it as him attempting to make it more immersive, as if this event had actually happened to him, so I kinda like it.

    • @StackerRox
      @StackerRox Před 10 lety +5

      I agree with Fiji :)

  • @metallicafreakinroks
    @metallicafreakinroks Před 10 lety +8

    I'd run away from the apartment as fast as I could when I got a quarter into the first video.

  • @justinburgy3707
    @justinburgy3707 Před 10 lety +14

    addicted to your vids!! XD

  • @goryparodiesproductions6561

    20:05 - Tasty juice... drink it, then convert it to pee!

  • @carluwu2331
    @carluwu2331 Před 8 lety +22

    *DUDE WHAT'S WRONG WITH WORKING IN BURGER KING*

    • @nocturnalchicken5722
      @nocturnalchicken5722 Před 8 lety

      EXACTLY

    • @carluwu2331
      @carluwu2331 Před 8 lety +2

      Giada G. I'm not being stupid it's just a simple comment I made, I don't need your criticism

    • @carluwu2331
      @carluwu2331 Před 8 lety +3

      Giada G. OooooOOOooohhhHHhhHHHhhHHh okey~ Now dat you've given ur reasons i feel sorry
      \(°ロ°)/ Sorryyyyy

    • @dickrichardjohnson6931
      @dickrichardjohnson6931 Před 8 lety +2

      I work at pizza hut

    • @XThexXTank
      @XThexXTank Před 8 lety +1

      +miles prower same shit lol

  • @barkbark479
    @barkbark479 Před 5 lety +4

    Dude this one is pretty weak but I remember watching this when it was first posted and oh man the nostalgia

  • @Morningstar91939
    @Morningstar91939 Před 4 lety +5

    Is it me, or does the girl in this story sound a lot like Jane? I mean, dark hair, tight black dress, all we need are the pitch black eyes and we have confirmation!

  • @VickiDickey56
    @VickiDickey56 Před 9 lety +95

    CAUSE MAMA IM IN LOVE WITH A CRIMINAL!!!!

  • @Icantdothatrightnow
    @Icantdothatrightnow Před 8 lety +93

    This story sucks.
    The entire thing is just an excuse for the author to be as gruesome and edgy as possible with no actual effort put into being scary or interesting. The woman character is just there to be evil and all the quirks about her character are so stereotypical that I think the author must've been reading Goosebumps books for inspiration. The only scary thing about this story is that I could see every little "spooky" detail coming from the next planet over, and the "horror" parts of it being delivered in such a hamfisted way that I thought I could smell bacon grease coming from my headphones.
    D+

    • @AintNodocta
      @AintNodocta Před 8 lety +4

      i liked it, this was the second time i heard it and still gave me some spook
      i give it a C, you should hear autopilot at "someordinarygamers" channel listen to it and comment back with your thoughts on it

    • @______1278
      @______1278 Před 8 lety +3

      and thats putting it lightly

    • @EgagAnoroc
      @EgagAnoroc Před 7 lety +7

      Icantdothatrightnow no one cares about your opinion

    • @EgagAnoroc
      @EgagAnoroc Před 7 lety +3

      Icantdothatrightnow no one cares about your opinion

    • @Palafico3
      @Palafico3 Před 7 lety +4

      It just comes across as smut, it's uncomfortable and kind of just offensive without any direction. :/

  • @jadenfoglia7295
    @jadenfoglia7295 Před 10 lety +11

    at 14:00 i was like nope. nope nope nope nope nope nope.fuck this i am OUT of here

  • @destinyangelique3095
    @destinyangelique3095 Před 10 lety +9

    I watched it while I was constipated on the toilet and the scary part just cleared it right out of me so I would just like to thank u lol Shannon and des

  • @AceofSpadessssss
    @AceofSpadessssss Před 10 lety +2

    18:35 it originally said "I DESERVED THIS" but MrCreepyPasta's version made it more evil, sinister, and brutal

  • @gtrkarma
    @gtrkarma Před 6 lety +2

    I know that that is a story, but god damn I can’t help but feel boiling anger to what she did to the poor baby

  • @kanzenchowa9868
    @kanzenchowa9868 Před 7 lety +5

    the story is creepy, but the ending is just plain dumb. *spoilers*
    the woman already mentioned to him that she will send a "minion" to finish the job.. so later on a few years later.. he begins a date with another woman that looks exactly like her and it never clued him in as to who this new person could be?

  • @pearachu5363
    @pearachu5363 Před 9 lety +6

    "Being 32 and single is no laughing matter" *sister laughs hysterically in other room*

  • @seattlegirl14
    @seattlegirl14 Před 10 lety +1

    Definition of insanity: Doing the same thing over and over, expecting different results.

  • @Drakon_Minaka
    @Drakon_Minaka Před 9 lety +9

    "I close my phone on accident and realized I never saved her number,so it was lost forever. For the love of-"
    I was dying XD

  • @TheThugnificant
    @TheThugnificant Před rokem +4

    Oh, I hadn't realized I already heard this long ago (probably when it came out) until it got to the basement videos.

  • @Marmonery
    @Marmonery Před 10 lety +10

    Dude! WTF! I'd call the police after the first video!

  • @anniemccovey979
    @anniemccovey979 Před 8 lety +7

    I buy stuff from Walmart but I work at target

  • @smoshfan439
    @smoshfan439 Před 8 lety +7

    she survived not 1, not 2, but 3 lethal injections. That alone is scary af. flat out inhuman.

    • @haileylannr
      @haileylannr Před 8 lety +1

      Maybe she was possessed... How would she know he needed a computer and his would not work, and then make the video right then and post it right then. I make no sense but maybe she was possessed

    • @phantomtail2270
      @phantomtail2270 Před 5 lety

      Or the author’s attempt to make it extra spooky

    • @RB01.10
      @RB01.10 Před 4 lety

      In real life, they can't give it again because it's considered an act of God.

  • @ashyfur524
    @ashyfur524 Před 9 lety +14

    ((Skips the infant clip almost instantaneously.. NOPE))

    • @themeatman6984
      @themeatman6984 Před 8 lety

      +Brooke Carter me too

    • @sierracarlton3966
      @sierracarlton3966 Před 8 lety +1

      +Brooke Carter It was sad.

    • @haileylannr
      @haileylannr Před 8 lety +1

      I heard "she stuck---" idk what happened butt it was A BABY SO NO NO NO NO NO NO i didn't skip far enough.... I heard added baby cries. NO NO NO NO NO IM DONEEEEE

  • @MrKilledRanger
    @MrKilledRanger Před 10 lety +11

    Maaaaybe you should of just used eHarmony...

    • @isaackim1602
      @isaackim1602 Před 10 lety +1

      Christian Mingle so he doesn't hook up with any demons...

  • @plsmorecats
    @plsmorecats Před 10 lety +2

    12:25 "Damn, there's no computers in the house. Wait! There was that one flower pot that my wife wouldn't let me near! I should go check it for computers!" That's how the scene went, I guess.

  • @LyricaSilvan
    @LyricaSilvan Před 8 lety +2

    Why in hell, after going through all that, would he go out with someone who looked just like her? That's just masochism on a psychological level.

  • @welcometotheinternetfam4245

    Thats what you get for forgetting to save numbers and also asking a girl to marry you in a half a year.

  • @ivyluna3057
    @ivyluna3057 Před 9 lety +23

    "smelled like a flower garden designed by martha stewart" dont talk to me of you you dont say this first

    • @oren1305
      @oren1305 Před 9 lety +4

      That'd be quite the compliment… 'You smell so good, Martha Stewart must have designed you herself..'

    • @oren1305
      @oren1305 Před 9 lety

      ***** It would be a weird compliment…

    • @Akechi_The_Phantom_Detective
      @Akechi_The_Phantom_Detective Před 8 lety +1

      +Ivy Luna Pretty hilarious when you consider the guy was working for BURGER king. As for the chick...ain't got nothing on you Luna ;-)

  • @halfasleepvampire7545
    @halfasleepvampire7545 Před 7 lety +2

    Hard to believe that so much time has passed since this was first posted :) this was the one of the very first stories my brother and I listened to when we started to truly get into creepy pasta. We were about 12 years old (we're twins). So much time has passed. My brother and I are still avid readers and listeners. I even write some of my own. Ahh... memories...

  • @saramarra5307
    @saramarra5307 Před 8 lety +5

    just wow... seriously the most f***ed up creepypasta iv'e heard in a long time!

  • @SerCabbage
    @SerCabbage Před 8 lety +7

    This was incredibly lame. Cartoonishly evil 'villain' and over-the-top edgy scenery.

  • @moonymonster
    @moonymonster Před 5 lety +3

    Why approach the basement WHEN YOU CAN BUY A NEW COMPUTER

  • @anatefcan13
    @anatefcan13 Před 9 lety +4

    Beautiful wife, nice house, well-paying job: "Fine."
    Weird shit involving Child Torture pops up on the laptop: "Well, I'm-a gonna go live in a van down by the river, later nerds." *Jumps out window, IMMEDIATELY*

  • @ekkonus5719
    @ekkonus5719 Před 2 lety +4

    This story went from good to shit in a matter of seconds

  • @PumaLyn
    @PumaLyn Před 5 lety +3

    26:22 she survived the first 3 lethal injections?!🤔😂😂😂😂😂😂

  • @blaxican_jv8145
    @blaxican_jv8145 Před 7 lety +24

    did anyone else hear the word "crippling depression " dank meme lord

  • @jamesmcnamara649
    @jamesmcnamara649 Před 9 lety +6

    Anyone notice he said "some of them quite low cut" twice lol

  • @AngelRuiz-xq2ie
    @AngelRuiz-xq2ie Před 9 lety +123

    Black hair and green eyes....who cranked up the Percy Jackson?
    (Like if u got reference)

    • @mintytehbunneh6546
      @mintytehbunneh6546 Před 9 lety +1

      ChardCore42 She's Percy's long-lost Mary Sue half-sister.

    • @lanajames3081
      @lanajames3081 Před 9 lety

      ChardCore42 I thought Percy Jackson had blue eyes? (It's been a while since I've read the books)

    • @AngelRuiz-xq2ie
      @AngelRuiz-xq2ie Před 9 lety +2

      in the movie he had blue eyes and brown hair in the book it was black hair and green eyes

    • @alexconverse4839
      @alexconverse4839 Před 9 lety

      ChardCore42 I thought they were blue green.

    • @lanajames3081
      @lanajames3081 Před 9 lety

      GaifeyLives 11 That's what I originally thought too XD I just imagined them as blue tho

  • @TheKingHyena
    @TheKingHyena Před 10 lety +5

    Can you FEEEEELLLL the SCHADENFREUDE????

  • @iamveryloser
    @iamveryloser Před 10 lety +7

    The original version is worse, the video with the baby?? Yea, she grabs the baby b the legs, and hit;s his head against the wall forcing it to explode.

  • @ekramer1030
    @ekramer1030 Před 9 lety +7

    Oh that poor thing...32 male and single....

    • @iamgroot4863
      @iamgroot4863 Před 9 lety +5

      Fairly common. The guy in the story sounds really insecure so I can imagine why he's single.

    • @ekramer1030
      @ekramer1030 Před 9 lety +5

      I am Groot
      Definitely. I was being rather sarcastic. I see in some of these people going on as if thirty or forty were just ANCIENT.

  • @Lilindey
    @Lilindey Před 7 lety +1

    Your voice is gold. It's perfect, your tone made me laugh so much :D