Bounty Hunted - Short Western Film

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  • čas přidán 29. 06. 2016
  • WHO WILL SURVIVE?
    With little to no budget and a fast approaching deadline, this western short film was completed as part of a 1 year project, one of 12 shorts in 12 months. Let me know what you think!
    Watch our NEW western short here: • Gold Blooded - Short W...
    Situations, genres, characters--let us know what else you want to see in a western short film!
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    MUSIC:
    Stock media ("Western Frontier") provided by studiocat
    ("Western Standoff") provided by hitwizard
    ("Western Suspense") provided by patrickcoen

Komentáře • 915

  • @davidnieve6444
    @davidnieve6444 Před 4 lety +53

    Great job, I just turned 60. Love the west. What you just produced, brought back my youth playing shoot em up in the woods! God Bless

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 4 lety +9

      david nieve Thank you so much, that means so much! Thank you for watching and commenting!

    • @quentinsmommy8509
      @quentinsmommy8509 Před 3 lety +2

      Happy Birthday to you

    • @davidnieve6444
      @davidnieve6444 Před 3 lety +6

      @@quentinsmommy8509 Thank you very much! On September 1st I had open hart surgery, could have dropped dead at any time and I so happy to be alive and 60 yrs young. Doing great thank God fore U Tube!

    • @TheOfficalV
      @TheOfficalV Před 2 lety +1

      @@davidnieve6444 I’m late I’m sorry but I’m proud of you sir

    • @Erin-Thor
      @Erin-Thor Před 2 lety +2

      Happy 61st Birthday. And most folks call that war, not playing in the woods. 😎

  • @richberry6853
    @richberry6853 Před 3 lety +11

    It's really nice to see these short films ( although on a thou on a small budget) actually have a real story. Like a beginning middle and an end. Unlike so many other short films that just leave you hanging about what just happened. love this guy

  • @muskytears4288
    @muskytears4288 Před 3 lety +19

    the gun shots were amazing. loved how you could see the force when they were shot knocking them over

  • @coryshook7648
    @coryshook7648 Před 3 lety +4

    Masterpiece, no cheesy dialogue, no BS, no unnecessary script containing bravado and macho BS, the visual speaks for itself

  • @MrBnetV
    @MrBnetV Před 4 lety +3

    Makes the best of what's available and tells a fairly compelling story. Natural locations and atmosphere a plenty. Worth the time.

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 4 lety +2

      MrBnetV That was our goal! thank you very much!

    • @MrBnetV
      @MrBnetV Před 4 lety +2

      @@BlaisUnlimited Mission accomplished, brother. Forest western, desert western. Nature is the best production designer. Where you filmed looks like something out of Last of the Mohicans.

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 4 lety +1

      Thank you my friend, we did the best with what we had. Have to utilize what you have and make it work!

  • @luthahvelken4653
    @luthahvelken4653 Před 5 lety +3

    GREAT SHOT of a modern steel 55 gallon drum in the opening shot.

  • @dennismitchell1934
    @dennismitchell1934 Před 2 lety +1

    Well done guys ! Derringer in the hat was a killer surprise (no pun intended).

  • @fredroger4623
    @fredroger4623 Před 2 lety +2

    Loved that chase and the music

  • @dukeofearl6256
    @dukeofearl6256 Před 4 lety +38

    American Flag with 50 stars 32 seconds in to the movie...And a PEACOCK?

    • @Jwnorton
      @Jwnorton Před 3 lety +1

      Maybe a plug for NBC_Universal?

    • @TheGel69
      @TheGel69 Před 3 lety +5

      don t forget the 55 gal steel drum @ .41 .....which patent was not delivered but 33 years later

    • @arcburn6340
      @arcburn6340 Před 3 lety +2

      They both have fresh clipped haircuts.

    • @gsp8489
      @gsp8489 Před 3 lety +6

      plastic bucket in the corner when he first enters the barn.

    • @newenglandstoneman610
      @newenglandstoneman610 Před 3 lety +3

      Did you notice the pressed fifty gallon steel barrel they apparently had back in the 1800's?

  • @peachypie8018
    @peachypie8018 Před 2 lety +12

    How can you not like this? I loved it; the music, the acting, the story, that exciting chase through the woods, felt like I was there. Very surprised you shot this on a low budget, well done and thank you for posting this, really great film.

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 2 lety +4

      Thank you so much for watching! We did our best with what we had to tell an interesting and fun story, I’m glad you enjoyed. Thank you again!

    • @peachypie8018
      @peachypie8018 Před 2 lety +2

      @@BlaisUnlimited I know nothing about the technicalities of acting, directing, gun shots (I'm in England, so unless you're a gangster or part of the hunting set, we don't have firearms)and all the other parts of film making, but I know what I like in a movie. I want to laugh, cry, be scared and be entertained, so big thumbs up. Also the scenery was stunning and the very end was just like a beautiful grotto, so the violence was even more unexpected.

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 2 lety +2

      @@peachypie8018 Yes! And that’s ultimately what counts! All the details of plot and the technicalities of filmmaking should serve the story and make the audience feel engaging and interesting things. Thanks again for sharing your thoughts!

    • @claeslundin4124
      @claeslundin4124 Před 2 lety

      @@BlaisUnlimited So Therese where to little information to make it good. The script was not finished. To much time was put on the chase. More time and effekt should been placed on backstory. The charachters where like emot pages. Not good.

  • @jean-pierreouvrard769
    @jean-pierreouvrard769 Před 4 lety +2

    Nature, again and again, main strength of western. Nice final gimmick and gun shot sound.

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 4 lety

      Jean-Pierre Ouvrard very true! Thank your for watching and sharing your thought

  • @reginaldthatcher4351
    @reginaldthatcher4351 Před 5 lety +15

    Solid man, solid.

  • @Scratchingforcash
    @Scratchingforcash Před rokem +3

    New sub, you have some great films!! Bravo!

  • @claytonreimer3900
    @claytonreimer3900 Před 4 lety +3

    Great vid hands down one of the best short films I’ve ever watched keep it up.

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 4 lety +1

      Clayton Reimer Thank you very much, thanks for watching :)

  • @markplumb3968
    @markplumb3968 Před 4 měsíci +1

    I’ve only just discovered this plethora of Western Short movies on CZcams, grateful and deserved applause to all concerned in making them….
    ( just a tiny thing that stood out in this particular one ) I’m not criticising by the way ( see my first statement )
    But just after the caption 1872 in the barn scene there was a pretty modern bike wheel….
    ( more modern than 1872,
    I mean )

  • @Mark-yb1sp
    @Mark-yb1sp Před 2 lety +1

    Another excellent film from JB. 👍🏻

  • @BrianSmith-ez9kj
    @BrianSmith-ez9kj Před 5 lety +8

    Well done- first off, the Cinematography/Locations/Photography was beautiful - usually in Westerns it's a bullet fest in the wide open, or in a Saloon, House, etc- this was a run-and-gun in the Woods, dodging behind trees, plenty of misses and wild shots- added to the realism, along with both men dying - - - - when the Marshall gave that 2nd guy a badge, then hid his, I was smirking- sucker gonna get killed "That's why they call him Lawful"

  • @bunkman64
    @bunkman64 Před 5 lety +4

    Very well done! 0:29 Even the "Grand Union Flag (1872)". WELL DONE!

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 5 lety +1

      Bunk Man Thank you! Great eye, most people assume it’s a modern flag :)

  • @fdeadlycommasir
    @fdeadlycommasir Před 4 měsíci +1

    Beautiful scenery!

  • @abmovies1937
    @abmovies1937 Před 7 lety +2

    That was awesome! Great job!

  • @abizzybomb
    @abizzybomb Před 5 lety +5

    I randomly found this video and really enjoyed it. I see alot of criticism in the comments and agree I saw some things that didn't fit but, can't we just enjoy it for what it is? A very well done amateur film. You did an excellent job telling the story without a need for verbal explanation. I love how the Marshal set up the "Sheriff" to protect himself. I subbed.

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 5 lety +2

      Chupacabra Carter Really appreciate your perspective! Means a lot that you enjoyed it and took the time to comment. Thank you for watching!

  • @robwalker7575
    @robwalker7575 Před 4 lety +3

    293 outlaws disliked!!
    Brilliant job, great cinematography, especially the chase scene, quality sound, wonderful location and good acting. Subbed.

  • @adventureswithyames3867
    @adventureswithyames3867 Před 4 lety +2

    Awesome for sure, I love making short films and music

  • @TheMercMen
    @TheMercMen Před 7 lety +2

    Great Job. I enjoyed it very much

  • @austinstone478
    @austinstone478 Před 6 lety +4

    I half expected the Marshall to wake up and pull his badge out of his pocket, with the bullet stuck in it. Kinda glad you didn't use that old cliche.

  • @KowboyUSA
    @KowboyUSA Před 6 lety +11

    9:11 I remember the 1872 vibram boot soles well, they were cut from rubberized rawhide.
    - As for the video: I liked it.

    • @cheezyridr
      @cheezyridr Před 5 lety

      there was actually quite alot of modern items shown especially around the farm and in the barn. @0:25 you have a stamped steel gate, and a 50 star flag.

  • @snocamo154
    @snocamo154 Před 3 lety +1

    One of the best running gun battle scenes I've seen in a while. Good ending, too. Sometimes, you don't get away.

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 3 lety

      Thank you very much! Thanks for commenting, glad you liked it

  • @timsim1940
    @timsim1940 Před 6 lety +2

    I love this!

  • @stormtrooper1823
    @stormtrooper1823 Před 6 lety +14

    One of the best short westerns I've seen. Thank you for making this. Everything was great including the acting.

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 6 lety +2

      Thank you very much!

    • @fernandoluna572
      @fernandoluna572 Před 4 lety

      Storm trooper best wésterns ? You dont help them if you dont tell them the truth

  • @clubmembers3368
    @clubmembers3368 Před 7 lety +73

    Actually kinda surprised no one commented much on the chase. it was well done and different than anything I think I have ever seen. Seemed fairly realistic actually.

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 7 lety +7

      Thank you for noticing!

    • @jamesmeyers6982
      @jamesmeyers6982 Před 5 lety +3

      Club Members I thought the chase was done well. Seemed realistic.

    • @davidjenson4512
      @davidjenson4512 Před 4 lety +3

      The chase was good. Forest chases are often poorly filmed. Maybe keeping proper orientation in forest scenes is difficult. This one at least made sense!

    • @Janet_Yellens_Liquidity
      @Janet_Yellens_Liquidity Před 4 lety +1

      @@BlaisUnlimited The chase was kinda nonsense. If I have a rifle and am being chased by someone with a handgun I just make a stand using tree or a ditch and let the chaser come close

    • @johnshilling2221
      @johnshilling2221 Před 3 lety

      @@Janet_Yellens_Liquidity Exactly! You don't chase a man with a rifle in an infinite cover location. Especially while ignoring all of that cover while you're chasing him.

  • @johntoddmcallaster4922
    @johntoddmcallaster4922 Před 4 lety +1

    Whoever made this is probably the most respectful human in the CZcams comment section, that was a well done chase, the gunshots were good, not exactly realistic, but great!

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 4 lety

      John Todd McAllaster Thank you very much for commenting. Wanted to make a fun, enjoyable chase sequence! Appreciate your thoughts :)

    • @johntoddmcallaster4922
      @johntoddmcallaster4922 Před 4 lety +2

      @@BlaisUnlimited Thank you! Is that a 36 or 50 star flag and is that a Winchester 1866 or 1873? Also, the only 2 problems I see are the oil drum and colt single action army, I would have used a navy, I like that opening music, and surprisingly good film quality for what? 2 years, didn't know anybody could pull that off! Good film quality, scenery, and action! 8/10.

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 4 lety +1

      John Todd McAllaster It’s a 37 star flag, rifle is a 1866! Really appreciate your thoughts!

  • @arthurwagar6224
    @arthurwagar6224 Před 2 lety +1

    Well done. Thanks.

  • @ashkaaz
    @ashkaaz Před 4 lety +6

    This was awesome! Keep making short Western films like this; maybe even a trilogy. I was so surprised on the filming talent and the acting talent. Maybe you guys will get noticed by a film making company and make some movies you can sell. I would rate all your movies five star. Awesome job!

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 4 lety +1

      Thank you very much! New short frontier western coming soon!

  • @RichardDominguezTheMagicIsReal

    nicely done, thanks for the upload

  • @tihokujo613
    @tihokujo613 Před 8 lety +2

    Awesome clip ;D intense and full of good action

  • @joshcramer6086
    @joshcramer6086 Před 3 lety +1

    I’m a fan. Great video!

  • @johnhubbard6262
    @johnhubbard6262 Před 3 lety +25

    Man with a rifle, cover, distance, and the high ground running from someone with a pistol. Sigh

    • @marc_anton8067
      @marc_anton8067 Před 3 lety +2

      Actually, someone with two pistols and a derringer in the hat.

    • @stewiegriffin289
      @stewiegriffin289 Před 3 lety +1

      Not sure why when he had a gun in his hat he made it obvious he could’ve shot him without him even seeing the gun in his hat and lived another day

    • @crr311sux5
      @crr311sux5 Před 3 lety

      The Marshal was flanking him

  • @joeygar1
    @joeygar1 Před 4 lety +4

    First may I say "Welcome to the club of being an Independent film-maker". Sometimes we have no money for a budget but we do the best we can. Good film, well written, good shots of location and good acting by Jason Blais, Mark Howland and Nicholas Blais. I done 3 complete movies with little or no money, so I understand what you went through. Also, good directing by Johnathan Blais, it looked like you used your brothers for actors.... well, they did a great job.
    Keep going and I hope to see more movies from you. Thanks

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 4 lety

      Joey Garza Thanks for a thoughtful comment! Really appreciate it, thanks for taking the time to share your thoughts!

  • @this0033
    @this0033 Před 3 lety +1

    Beautiful scenery.

  • @littlehouseguy7782
    @littlehouseguy7782 Před 7 lety +2

    Nice short!

  • @NoobsofFredo
    @NoobsofFredo Před 4 lety +7

    Good little film. With an actual budget, slightly more experienced actors and a hair more attention to detail, I could see you making some truly excellent pieces. The chase scene in particular was masterfully done, though I'll call the Marshal a fool for bringing handguns to fight a rifleman. On the visual editing side, the gunshots were phenomenal. I would've thought you were using actual black powder blanks if I weren't personally familiar with powder.
    Keep up the good work!

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 4 lety +3

      Loremaster Yn'Taris Comments like this make it all worth it, we really appreciate you taking the time to comment! We definitely had a vision for a certain type of chase scene that we wanted to see in a short, and the gunshots took their fair share of time in post. Thank you again for sharing your thoughts, means a lot to us

    • @NoobsofFredo
      @NoobsofFredo Před 4 lety +3

      @@BlaisUnlimited Always happy to give my feedback, and I've always been a sucker for a good Western. Not enough of them coming out nowadays. Here's hoping I can see more from you folks in the future!

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 4 lety +3

      Loremaster Yn'Taris Agreed! Stay tuned, we have another fun western short coming very soon. Thanks again!

    • @NoobsofFredo
      @NoobsofFredo Před 4 lety +1

      @@BlaisUnlimited I look forward to it.

  • @kevinhoffman8214
    @kevinhoffman8214 Před 4 lety +3

    great film

  • @BruhWTF
    @BruhWTF Před 3 lety +2

    I love the music you guys put into I wish I can just listen to it more. And the rest of the scene you guys did is exciting too I believe these cowboy films will never get old. 🤠👍

  • @pipefield4581
    @pipefield4581 Před 2 lety +1

    This is awesome already.

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 2 lety

      Thank you!!

    • @pipefield4581
      @pipefield4581 Před 2 lety +1

      @@BlaisUnlimited Ok this Was awesome. I watched it completely. CZcams Western shorts are underrated

  • @jamesvickers9476
    @jamesvickers9476 Před 5 lety +31

    ...an you actually saw him reloading which you don't see often...⭐⭐an a half ⭐s

  • @bback74
    @bback74 Před 4 lety +5

    Great!Smart having a backup in the hat, but he shouldn't have pulled it. Just shoot through the hat.

  • @deadrenegadefilms
    @deadrenegadefilms Před 3 lety +1

    Great work!!

  • @petermushala1288
    @petermushala1288 Před 3 lety +1

    Just found the video was a great job hope to find more

  • @Jbelcher7903
    @Jbelcher7903 Před 4 lety +10

    So many negative comments, just enjoy the movie

  • @BrianandGage
    @BrianandGage Před 4 lety +14

    Honestly really good! But if I were you I’d color grade it.
    Edit: the gunshots look freaking amazing.

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 4 lety

      Pink Tie Productions Yes thank you, great point, color grading needed more time and attention! Appreciate your thoughts!

    • @crr311sux5
      @crr311sux5 Před 4 lety

      Sounds good too

  • @jondaigle3821
    @jondaigle3821 Před 7 lety +2

    this is really good

  • @bpdarragh
    @bpdarragh Před 4 lety +1

    Cool. great soundtrack too. Great cinematography.

  • @dosmundos3830
    @dosmundos3830 Před 6 lety +4

    Nice short! i was watching for the disclaimer "no orchids were harmed in the making of this" but alas no lol

  • @mogarcia9755
    @mogarcia9755 Před 5 lety +34

    The Marshall looked about as rugged as Mickey mouse, I was expecting bubbles to come out of that pipe....

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 5 lety +3

      Mo Garcia haha, thanks for your input :)

    • @InDisskyS131
      @InDisskyS131 Před 5 lety +2

      LoL, so did the "outlaw" with his missing earring.

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 5 lety +1

      @@InDisskyS131 haha, good eye

    • @elixtido1448
      @elixtido1448 Před 3 lety +4

      Mo, Danny Trejo wasn't available and Tom Hardy wanted $180,000

  • @MichaelJohnson-zu3by
    @MichaelJohnson-zu3by Před 5 lety +1

    Awesome film... love the scenery. I use to live in the Durango /Telluride area... back when it was worth living in.

  • @careersteer6497
    @careersteer6497 Před 3 lety +2

    Great job!

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 3 lety +1

      Career Steer thank you!!

    • @careersteer6497
      @careersteer6497 Před 3 lety +2

      @@BlaisUnlimited Welcome. Don't pay any attention to naysayers. Making movies isn't easy - and I speak from experience. You guys did a great job with it and I encourage you to keep that story going. What happens next to the fugitive? Does he somehow survive his wound and get nursed back to health by a young woman who soon discovers he's a fugitive but she can't bring herself to turn him in because she's an outlaw former bank teller who embezzled money from a bank? Just thinkin'...

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 3 lety +2

      Career Steer thank you so much for the words of encouragement! Making films on basically zero budget is a tough assignment to be sure. Love your sequel idea! We have some ideas brewing for our next short 😁

  • @RaineCarosin
    @RaineCarosin Před 6 lety +9

    Freakin' awesome photography! The Cameraman deserves an Oscar! And the acting was superb! I agree that this looked totally real! A nice cuppa tea for me, f'sure!

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 6 lety +4

      Raine Carosin Thank you for the kind words! Thanks for watching!

    • @keithdavis4997
      @keithdavis4997 Před 5 lety

      Yes, very good. The attention to detail reminded me of some classic Japanese film cinematography.

  • @jean-pierreouvrard769
    @jean-pierreouvrard769 Před 4 lety +4

    Great short movie. Visually amazing.

  • @markpascoe7845
    @markpascoe7845 Před 2 lety +1

    Well done! Glad I found ya. Hard to get my cowbo movie fix now a days. Subbed an shared

  • @emanuelmihai554
    @emanuelmihai554 Před 4 lety +2

    great show, keep up with the good work

  • @nathanadrian7797
    @nathanadrian7797 Před 5 lety +6

    The Marshal and the Sheriff should have been packing rifles, and the date should have been 1873 for the weapons used. Great film!!

    • @johntoddmcallaster4922
      @johntoddmcallaster4922 Před 4 lety

      If He had a horse, the rifle would have been on it, I'm just wondering why the Marshall didn't have 2 revolvers

  • @mdnealy4097
    @mdnealy4097 Před 4 lety +5

    It looked the sherrif died over a pretty good amount of gold.

  • @stephenjablonsky1941
    @stephenjablonsky1941 Před 2 lety +1

    Well done. A true American story of guns, guns, and more guns. MY 10 minutes were well spent.

  • @davidwinters1394
    @davidwinters1394 Před 3 lety +1

    very exciting short film, excellent, and ironic

  • @jamesl.rickard1277
    @jamesl.rickard1277 Před 5 lety +16

    Not bad at all! I hate people who sit on their butt and mouth off about what they DON'T like. I'll tell you what I liked. First of all, the shots didn't sound like cap guns like so many CZcams vids. You didn't have the guys take a whiz in the stream. The guy looked like he was going to crap his pants as he was reloading. How often do you see that or even see a six shooter reloaded? Not a happy ending but a REAL ending! Keep up the good work!

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 5 lety +2

      James Rickard Thank you so much for the feedback, and taking the time to comment! Really appreciate it!

    • @scalemiester
      @scalemiester Před 5 lety

      Jim- Someone has to. And I suspect the makers of these films appreciate the input. Ya cant go through life with blinders on, if ya wanna improve your product.

  • @williamtomkiel8215
    @williamtomkiel8215 Před 5 lety +3

    so at 7:46, why the pause
    gunshots as audio have some good mid-bass TR, in my set up,
    in the beginning- how many stars on that flag?
    great photography, color

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 5 lety

      William Tomkiel thanks for watching! Flag has 37 stars!

  • @tembofly
    @tembofly Před 3 lety

    I liked it, as it was original and gritty. Great job!

  • @tonyrome655
    @tonyrome655 Před 2 lety +2

    This was an ok short. Keep an eye on the details that add to the realistic feel. A couple examples would be the steel 55 gal drum in the shed or how clean and clean shaven the actors were.

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 2 lety

      Thank you for your comment and thank you for watching!

  • @grrrlbreaker
    @grrrlbreaker Před 5 lety +4

    Good. Better than anything put out by big budget Hollywood lately. One criticism, and it's really minor, is that the volume of smoke is too small and the wrong color. Watch some shooting black powder videos to see.

  • @allenrichardson2956
    @allenrichardson2956 Před 3 lety +3

    “1872 Colorado Territories”. Where did all three characters acquire their firearms? The marshal and bounty hunter both carried Colt 1873 Single Action Army revolvers, while “Lawful” was armed with an 1873 Winchester.

    • @clineproffit9676
      @clineproffit9676 Před 3 lety

      Keen observation. The steel drum, rubber feed bucket, bicycle wheel and plastic pipe stem jumped out at me. Still entertaining and a hell of a lot better than I'll ever do.

    • @TheoBunge
      @TheoBunge Před 3 lety +1

      Never mind the plastic bucket!

    • @tt600pch
      @tt600pch Před 3 lety

      @@clineproffit9676 I am thinking Doc Brown hauled it there from 1985.
      It did keep my attention though.

  • @shaneyoung6227
    @shaneyoung6227 Před 4 lety +1

    Great film 👍🏻

  • @laimayumram3258
    @laimayumram3258 Před 2 lety

    First time to see peacocks in a western film.Feel great.

  • @Liz-ww3cm
    @Liz-ww3cm Před 3 lety +3

    You made a great story here!
    The ominous marshal in the doorway, the running gunfight through the woods, the suspense of re-loading, the really impressive blood spray scenes (omg! good job!)...
    I liked that all 3 characters were corrupt in their own different ways, so (being a western!) I was waiting for them each to get their just desserts, and I was not disappointed. The marshal was the worst of the whole bunch, and very creepy indeed., so I cheered his demise :)
    I appreciated how well you conveyed the story and the characters with such focus-- nicely economical storytelling, letting the audience work a little bit to catch all the clues. This added to my enjoyment!
    Some commenters are saying the characters looked too young, but I think most kids left home really young back then-- and could end up in a lot of trouble really young, too. I had no problem with suspension of disbelief myself. So many grim backstories possible! (Plus, good job working with the people you have, and getting the job done with the resources at your command. The best art is the thing that actually gets DONE.)
    Looking forward to your next one!

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 3 lety +1

      Liz Thank you so much for watching and for your thoughts. The best are really is the stuff that gets done! Really appreciate your attention to detail as well. I enjoyed reading your comment, it motivates me to get back out there and do it all again very soon!

  • @denisejustdenise
    @denisejustdenise Před 5 lety +4

    I have what I call "age cred" because declaring "I'm old" lacks any sort of range restriction and I'm not, ya know, THAT old. I have four adult children. All of that is to say that I have seen plenty of artistic endeavors and I'm impressed with this film. I think you will like my thought at its conclusion. (Sigh), I had a colon and was ready to quote myself but my exact words didn't fully explain. (Open personality here, stream of consciousness communication serves me well, editing isn't wrong but FEELS dishonest, apologies). My thought was that this situation, with all participants/witnesses to an armed conflict being mortally wounded has happened over and over and over throughout time. With the classic literature conflicts, (man vs. nature, man vs. man, man vs. himself, heh heh, and I am old enough to know that "man" is not a bad word), in mind I applaud you on your deft ability to take what seemed to be merely the setting of the story into its enduring role as the last character, er, standing, so to speak AFTER the man vs. man outcome. Nature was seamlessly introduced, (in my opinion and I have not re-watched anything), with that glorious moment taken to observe that picturesque, ambient waterfall. Nice job with the ending.
    Just thought I would mention that the time was running out on a college assignment in English. We were to describe a location. I chose my grandparents house, which was actually not theirs, the second floor was a jail. My grandfather was the last jailer in MATADOR*, Texas. (Edited because my mom said, "Not in Texas! There are jailers now!", but there was further information gathered by someone else, a small town newspaper journalist maybe, and he was the last, I'm tellin' ya, but not tellin' my octogenarian mom, Texas jailer who lived in a literal jailhouse). My purpose in saying this is your "...and a fast approaching deadline..." condition. Time was running out for me too. My paper began with the sound of the old linoleum on the floor and wound around describing the building and through the tall iron, (I think), mint green painted door with the half circle barred area for communication and ended in the jail area which was often empty because of the low population of that county. That freshman year paper was published in two different Texas towns in their newspapers. One was the featured article New Year's Day front page. Because I was finishing on the day, when I read it even I was struck by the last line. I was describing a big room with iron everywhere in north Texas where they get snow, which is very rare in my part of Texas. But considering the subject matter, (my little grandmother was tied up twice when men escaped, but their criminality was of the Mayberry, North Carolina variety, so the escapes were all very cordial), I felt a... hahaa, chill when I read the last combination of words: "It was cold."
    So, yay, fast approaching deadlines!
    * The jailhouse of my youth is now a museum and can be found on the internet. I have never even been there. It would be SO COOL if my essay was in there. Mom said that the town and the museum may be gone due to the size of Matador. I remember that the town square was surrounded by streets that were wife enough for horse drawn carriages to drive on both sides and park too.
    Maybe I have shared something that will inspire a set, a location, a storyline, a character. My grandfather was lauded as the last old school jailer, the story exceeded Matador. The jail got a plague 👈 as a historical landmark.
    • Now about the sentence just before this one, there is no possibility that I am claiming that a "plague" beset the jailhouse and yet Autocorrect, (capitalization of Autocorrect is intentional because to me Autocorrect is likely the first case of modern tech related demonic entity inhabitation 😠 🤭), changed "plaque", a commemorative item, to "plague".

    • @cyrushyram5673
      @cyrushyram5673 Před 4 lety

      Hmmm... perhaps one could sumerise this comment into a shorter version. I didn't have time to read it all.

    • @denisejustdenise
      @denisejustdenise Před 4 lety +1

      @@cyrushyram5673 I don't blame you. I totally understand.

  • @phnorris2011
    @phnorris2011 Před 3 lety +1

    How did YT not serve me this sooner?? I watch tons of Westerns//Western Docs, Omeleto and this is amazing! Great job Johnathan Blais!! You rock!

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 3 lety

      Thank you so much! Means a lot!

    • @phnorris2011
      @phnorris2011 Před 3 lety +1

      @@BlaisUnlimited I just subscribed to your channel and will watch all your content...and pass it on to my like minded friends...thank you!

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 3 lety

      @@phnorris2011 Thank you!!

  • @snkolson
    @snkolson Před 2 lety +1

    The flag in the begin is what I keyed in on immediately. Approximately 34 seconds in.

  • @vrisbrianm4720
    @vrisbrianm4720 Před 4 lety +6

    I think the final scene could be improved with a short dialogue right before the Marshal drew his derringer. Well done overall.

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 4 lety

      Vickte W yes interesting idea. Thank you for your thoughts and thanks for watching!

    • @Michael-im1vc
      @Michael-im1vc Před 3 lety +1

      I liked the tension wrought by silence.

  • @jeremywhittington7605
    @jeremywhittington7605 Před 3 lety +3

    Nice, but the buildings wouldn’t have had a 150 year old patina when they would have been fairly new

  • @mahmmodemran1744
    @mahmmodemran1744 Před 4 lety +1

    It's a time to start hunting in a new action. Fantastic movie

  • @jfratis9081
    @jfratis9081 Před 4 lety +1

    One way to spot a student film is every cast member is 22 yrs old. I think the newest way to spot them is obvious and unwarranted drone shots. When doing Westerns pay attention to firearm details. Functional auto ejecting was a ways off in the Americas. Interesting coincidence in the same year 1872 the Swiss military adopted a self ejecting revolver so maybe a pass on the sound effect. The Winchester rifle didn't get a steel body until 1873. Probably not in the hands of outlaws for some time later. Asked a prop guy on a micro western why he picked the pistols he did for the main character. His answer was because they looked cool. They were period acceptable but the hero was a two gun shooter and one was a volcanic arms lever action. Impossible to operate accurately with one hand. The lack of a treated or sepia tone is a welcomed change. I Think it works fine without horses. Overall nicely done. Keep making movies.

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 4 lety

      J Fratis I really appreciate your attention to detail. Thanks for watching and commenting

  • @thegreycrusader
    @thegreycrusader Před 4 lety +5

    1:08 the year is 1872, these marvelous firearms haven't been manufactured yet until the following year.

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 4 lety +1

      The Third Crusader We missed that detail! Great eye!

    • @thegreycrusader
      @thegreycrusader Před 4 lety +2

      @@BlaisUnlimited I didn't want to be an ass and drag down a solid peace of work, but I can't help but notice that. Good job on the film, keep it up.

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 4 lety +1

      The Third Crusader Absolutely, glad you commented, we appreciate the constructive criticism! Thank you

  • @codymcdaniel1151
    @codymcdaniel1151 Před 4 lety +3

    I low key thought the Marshall was going to be the outlaw and turn on the bounty hunter

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 4 lety +1

      Smartphone Gamer Not a bad idea at all actually!

  • @petercleary1000
    @petercleary1000 Před 5 lety +1

    Very good good atmosphere in the cowboy one 4 🌟

  • @josephdocherty7919
    @josephdocherty7919 Před 5 lety +1

    This was great, this looked very professional and the acting plus the gun rights and finally the costume design was amazing keep up the good work - Many thanks from over the pond.

  • @85waspnest
    @85waspnest Před 5 lety +18

    Set in 1872 and using Colt Single actions and a Winchester 1873 not produced until 1873. No worries, Hollywood's been doing the same for years. :-)

    • @eryanwills1621
      @eryanwills1621 Před 4 lety

      That is not an 1873 Winchester, it is an 1866.

    • @Colt-tf6xf
      @Colt-tf6xf Před 4 lety +1

      A modern barrel in the shack or steel drum

    • @reubenmarchant2229
      @reubenmarchant2229 Před 3 lety +1

      At least the Marshal reloaded, manh westerns the 45s could shot 45 times before needing to be reloaded. ah hollywood.

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 3 lety

      Hi again! Do you know when the ventilation grommets on cowboy hats were first used? (Perhaps called "rivet holes" sometimes). I'd appreciate any knowledge on this little detail

  • @kasumikojiro7221
    @kasumikojiro7221 Před 5 lety +3

    I thought this was very well done. Better than a lot of Hollywood shit I've seen.

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 5 lety +1

      Kasumi Kojiro Thank you very much, appreciate the comment

  • @InsidetheBoothTV
    @InsidetheBoothTV Před rokem

    good job boys!

  • @Lthrbootedguy81
    @Lthrbootedguy81 Před 3 lety +1

    another great job

  • @nagraking
    @nagraking Před 4 lety +3

    Period pieces are always tricky, especially on a low budget. Shame about the plastic bucket, even more outstanding than the oil drum.

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 4 lety +2

      Marcel Glover Thanks for the comment. Period pieces are difficult, always seems to be something we miss. Thank you for watching!

    • @charlesbutler9610
      @charlesbutler9610 Před 4 lety

      Marcel Glover also the flag with the 50 stars on it in the beginning

  • @elixtido1448
    @elixtido1448 Před 5 lety +3

    Thought maybe the badge saved him, but nah-sir...

  • @BarryDuffield
    @BarryDuffield Před 5 lety +2

    Nicely played :-)

  • @griff6985
    @griff6985 Před 5 lety +2

    Some nice camera work there. The editing was well done. Thanks.

  • @johnhalchishick7094
    @johnhalchishick7094 Před 4 lety +5

    Why wait to shoot the guy,bad idea.I liked it,also the area was beautiful.

  • @davewilson4058
    @davewilson4058 Před 4 lety +14

    Great scenery, good storyline, nice ending. My one slight criticism is they both looked too young and with no facial hair, but that's probably just me looking at it through 84 year old eyes. Even policemen and soldiers look like children to me now. SIGH!!

    • @BlaisUnlimited
      @BlaisUnlimited  Před 4 lety +2

      Thank you for watching! Always appreciate constructive criticism!

    • @lukebable
      @lukebable Před 4 lety +4

      Its not the age . its the easy 21st century living .
      The brutal harshness of growing up in the late 19th century is hard to replicate...

  • @claudinecundiff8218
    @claudinecundiff8218 Před 4 lety +3

    Very good. Real slick wow he hid his badge so the other guy got shot.

  • @francischoo1812
    @francischoo1812 Před 5 lety +2

    Very well done.

  • @fbweaver63
    @fbweaver63 Před 5 lety +6

    was that gold in that thar crick? alanis morissette would like this.

    • @prostudentdriver9347
      @prostudentdriver9347 Před 4 lety

      From what I know of alanis morissette she is a big leftist that would take guns away from anyone who isn't in Big abusing government. And as we have seen a number of times in history leads to loss of Freedom of Speach. Witch means free thinking Creations like this fine little short would not be permitted by government. Besides the creators of this film would not care about making movies they would be trying to survive in hostile Leftist Hell holes like Venezuela. So who cares what morissette would like?

  • @chickenfriedbobcat6090
    @chickenfriedbobcat6090 Před 5 lety +6

    The gunshot from the introduction is from a semiautomatic firearm. You can hear the casing hit the floor. Sorry for being pedantic.

  • @christopherallen9580
    @christopherallen9580 Před 2 lety +1

    excellent!

  • @cecilpotter1229
    @cecilpotter1229 Před 4 lety +1

    Outstanding
    Work. Looks like Missouri