Praying for Myself │Spoken Word Poetry

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  • čas přidán 12. 09. 2024
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Komentáře • 116

  • @katherine4996
    @katherine4996 Před rokem +1

    This is perfect. Thank you and amen 🙏🏽 ❤

  • @melindapemberton999
    @melindapemberton999 Před 4 lety +7

    MEL WE LIKED YOUR POEM IT WAS VERY MOVING YOUR POEM IS VERY INSPIRING TO US AS WE READ IT WE WANTED TO SAY THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR POEM WITH US YOUR FRIENDS M & M

  • @revelation320music5
    @revelation320music5 Před 4 lety +21

    The Lord is close to the brokenhearted
    and saves those who are crushed in spirit.

    • @SteAndRach
      @SteAndRach Před 4 lety +2

      Amen! I really like this one! We actually just posted a spoken word video on our CZcams Channel about how “comparison is the thief of joy”. Would love to hear your thoughts guys since you seem to enjoy this type of content!
      czcams.com/video/PkOgzeZ3rrA/video.html

    • @rahmawatilaila2621
      @rahmawatilaila2621 Před 4 lety

      Aamiin.

    • @linneamariatheresiahansen1876
      @linneamariatheresiahansen1876 Před 4 lety

      No he’s not. I’ve prayed, I’ve begged, I’ve yelled, I’ve cried and screamed out that I need the Lord’s help and his strength. But I haven’t gotten a sign or any help from him for years. So no, the lord is not close to all of the broken-hearted and he doesn’t save those who are crushed in spirit, not everyone. Trust me, I’ve begged him for help. But I’ve completely lost faith now. So it doesn’t matter.

    • @linneamariatheresiahansen1876
      @linneamariatheresiahansen1876 Před 3 lety

      @Starlight Wisdom : I used to hope for that too, but that hope died along the years.

    • @daughterofchrist8809
      @daughterofchrist8809 Před 2 lety +1

      @@linneamariatheresiahansen1876 God hears you and has been working in your life, though most times we don’t see it right away. It may seem hopeless right now, but I pray God will show you His hand moving in your life and restore your faith in Him in Jesus’ name. God bless you, your story certainly isn’t over yet.

  • @firstinpoetry
    @firstinpoetry Před 4 lety +5

    *Though we lazy on the other side, I love your focus*
    💕💕

  • @firstinpoetry
    @firstinpoetry Před 4 lety +11

    *Lovely prayer* 💜💜💜💜

  • @saksutonfranco1785
    @saksutonfranco1785 Před 4 lety +1

    First off I love you're voice
    Second love the way you deliver your poems
    Third it's hard holding back my tears listening to this
    And last but not least this was very moving and I love every bit of it

  • @mikelowe7576
    @mikelowe7576 Před 4 lety +1

    Mel you have a value much greater than you know. Believe this old man whom you have helped many times

  • @Nanashdaya
    @Nanashdaya Před 3 lety +1

    Amee guide me straight to where I should be

  • @Dagomt
    @Dagomt Před 2 lety +1

    Amazing I need it to heard that today. Thank you!

  • @elmiloudberkani2345
    @elmiloudberkani2345 Před 4 lety +2

    Pray for my self

  • @lee-annnomdoe2875
    @lee-annnomdoe2875 Před 5 měsíci

    Amen this prayer was just for me 🙏🏻💯

  • @asogundaniel
    @asogundaniel Před 4 lety +4

    Wonderful....I am a new subscriber....I love your poetry...👏👏👏

  • @Dan_Tano
    @Dan_Tano Před 4 lety +1

    I will keep my flames burning after listening to this piece.. thanks mel

  • @Truther1903
    @Truther1903 Před 3 lety

    Amen ✨

  • @canditube758
    @canditube758 Před 3 lety

    Everything written by Melissa Paiz is everything i watch. Just love your poems

  • @Jennifer-hv2bc
    @Jennifer-hv2bc Před 4 lety

    Amazing words gave me goose bumbs!! You are strong and through your words you help us to stay strong. Don't ever stop being such a special person. We love you so stay safe. 🤗🤗🤗🤗

  • @fumafuma1747
    @fumafuma1747 Před 4 lety

    These words speak but u give them life. Amazing prayer

  • @tracywright6437
    @tracywright6437 Před 4 měsíci

    Thank you Lord.

  • @moseskisebe979
    @moseskisebe979 Před 4 lety +2

    I love your poems.

  • @roshinchoudhury2669
    @roshinchoudhury2669 Před 4 lety +1

    Always amazing💫

  • @lindseyfreathy8629
    @lindseyfreathy8629 Před 2 lety

    Thank you. I love this prayer ✝️💖🙏🏿

  • @Diana-gt1rv
    @Diana-gt1rv Před 3 lety

    This is so beautiful. Stay strong my dear, and always remember you are loved 🥰

  • @kindman1404
    @kindman1404 Před 2 lety

    That's was so powerful and true its like you knew me

  • @thejourneyoflife2982
    @thejourneyoflife2982 Před rokem

    Beautiful ❤

  • @alicechadegani55
    @alicechadegani55 Před 2 lety

    Beautiful

  • @screamingeagle-rt1kj
    @screamingeagle-rt1kj Před 3 měsíci +1

    I can do it with God’s help. Amen.

  • @GameLord2021
    @GameLord2021 Před 4 lety

    *Mel's Thoughts* Cool !! keep doing

  • @marianrachelleb378
    @marianrachelleb378 Před 4 lety

    Thank you for writing this its what i really needed.

  • @miredwin167
    @miredwin167 Před 3 lety

    She left me alone 💔

  • @mercyaddo6990
    @mercyaddo6990 Před 3 lety

    This is a good poem

  • @READERSPOEMS
    @READERSPOEMS Před 4 lety

    Lovely

  • @asifahmedovey
    @asifahmedovey Před 4 lety

    It makes u unique

  • @gorgeoushowsoever8794
    @gorgeoushowsoever8794 Před 4 lety

    ANOTHER MASTERPIECE! 🥺💛

  • @roseanne9864
    @roseanne9864 Před rokem

    AMEN ❤❤❤👑

  • @modestovarias3094
    @modestovarias3094 Před rokem

    AMEN

  • @Terrence-s6v
    @Terrence-s6v Před 8 měsíci

    Amen 🙏🙏

  • @user-ff1js4ct8l
    @user-ff1js4ct8l Před 8 měsíci

    Amen 🙏

  • @mariaricciutelli509
    @mariaricciutelli509 Před 3 lety

    Very nice 👍

  • @patcollins6087
    @patcollins6087 Před 3 lety

    thanks girl

  • @Edi_xted
    @Edi_xted Před 4 lety +1

    🥺🥺i get emotional

  • @mikelowe7576
    @mikelowe7576 Před 4 lety

    All I can say to this is AMEN

  • @alicechadegani55
    @alicechadegani55 Před 2 lety

    Thx for this

  • @queenthepenplayer1484
    @queenthepenplayer1484 Před 3 lety

    Serene

  • @rumbehamesa8348
    @rumbehamesa8348 Před 4 lety

    Hey Mel
    I love your pieces,so much
    They have inspired me to be vocal about the pieces am writing
    Which app do you use to make your videos?

  • @miramacanovic6435
    @miramacanovic6435 Před rokem

    My prayer’s for you❤

  • @taylorcannotsleep5596
    @taylorcannotsleep5596 Před 4 lety

    You’re an incredible poet! :)

  • @destinyjackson2447
    @destinyjackson2447 Před 2 lety

    Power

  • @pagenteadolphin6787
    @pagenteadolphin6787 Před rokem

    🙏🙏🙏

  • @bhaskargautam
    @bhaskargautam Před 4 lety +2

    If you believe in someone's love then you should have heard me. Would you listen to me?

  • @3six9_eye_am
    @3six9_eye_am Před 4 lety

    Love this ink

  • @sarahsariul1565
    @sarahsariul1565 Před 4 lety

    💞

  • @NicholasDemski
    @NicholasDemski Před 4 lety

    "Shower me in hope and love and guide me down the right stream." I really liked that line 😬

  • @alexismarquez3674
    @alexismarquez3674 Před 3 lety

    DEAR GOD, I BELIEVE IN YOU :) YOU CAN SEE ME FROM HEAVEN :) THANK YOU GOD FOR ALL THE KINDNESS I'VE DONE HERE ON EARTH :)

  • @manjudahiya1974
    @manjudahiya1974 Před 4 lety +1

    💓💓💓💓

  • @etherealpoems7838
    @etherealpoems7838 Před 4 lety

    Hello! I just started my poetry channel but I have no views. Any tips on how I can change this?

  • @rahmawatilaila2621
    @rahmawatilaila2621 Před 4 lety +1

    I just want You to Stay, my God.

  • @Nanashdaya
    @Nanashdaya Před 4 lety

    So help Me "the answer of all prayers"..

  • @geoleon3845
    @geoleon3845 Před 4 lety

    this is what i wanna here now because i'm feeling insecure about everything . whatever i do ,a part of me keep saying me that i am capable of nothing. people around me are continuously doing something productive meanwhile i am sitting here with my phone trying to finding my passion and cursing myself for being enough sometimes i think i'll do coding ,sometimes it's poetry n sometimes graphics designer but i never anything except cursing myself ☹️

    • @manjudahiya1974
      @manjudahiya1974 Před 4 lety

      You said
      A part of u
      Just one part
      But ur other parts listen to them
      Sometimes we keep finding happiness in big thing while happiness is just feeling small Happy moments with great love
      Try keep writing a diary everyday
      Promise urself that u will write something positive
      Please
      It's my request 😢😢😢

    • @geoleon3845
      @geoleon3845 Před 4 lety

      @@manjudahiya1974 you are right about happiness lies in small things but sometimes those small things hurt the most .... i tried but at the end of the day i realised that i only wrote my bad experiences ☹️ i think that one part is louder

    • @manjudahiya1974
      @manjudahiya1974 Před 4 lety

      @@geoleon3845 hey!
      I know
      It starts like that
      But soon you will believe that it changes
      Positivity matters
      Just try
      Try writing positive things only
      It worked for me too
      It would take time
      But it will get better
      And when it comes to aim
      Don't try to find an occupation
      Try to find what u wanna do
      Ex- healing people,etc
      It would work.
      Pls believe me.
      😢😢

    • @geoleon3845
      @geoleon3845 Před 4 lety

      @@manjudahiya1974 i'll try this thankyou so much 🌹

    • @manjudahiya1974
      @manjudahiya1974 Před 4 lety

      @@geoleon3845 please try
      Don't lie
      Cause it hurts when you hurt urself 😢😢

  • @festivalofcreating875
    @festivalofcreating875 Před 3 lety

    How beautiful from korea

  • @marciakirkbride4210
    @marciakirkbride4210 Před 4 lety

    I wrote my poems you published

  • @Jennifer-hv2bc
    @Jennifer-hv2bc Před 3 lety

    Hi how are you doing? Wanted to ask you a question. Could you write something about losing your best friend

  • @kshitijpanday6188
    @kshitijpanday6188 Před 4 lety

    Hello can I use your audio on my videos please

  • @laizahmaningi6056
    @laizahmaningi6056 Před 2 lety

    God I can't fight my self the. battle is yours fight for me for all negative curses troubling me and mafamily l do couse l trust in you believe and l have faith thank you jesus

  • @dmskh1929
    @dmskh1929 Před 4 lety

    What name of background

  • @AfrickiaMyers
    @AfrickiaMyers Před 3 měsíci

    Father god please guide and protect my children from know and forever ❤

  • @violetsrcross9517
    @violetsrcross9517 Před 11 měsíci

    Thank you for healing on my family in Jesus name I pray

  • @pauljones7311
    @pauljones7311 Před 4 lety

    🥺🖐👣

  • @sharonpiccone9094
    @sharonpiccone9094 Před 4 lety

    "YOU ARE 'LOVED', & 'IMPORTANT',- YOU WILL PRESERVERE, REMEMBER THAT THE 'FALSE' ONE'S, 'ALWAYS' COME BEFORE 'BEFORE', THE 'TRUE' ONE'S, & THEY'LL' TRY'TO
    DESUADE YOU FROM THE 'POSITIVE', I HAD TO 'LEARN' THAT ONE, THE HARD WAY!!!...
    AS IT IS IN 'SCRIPTURE', - THE 'TEST' & THE 'JOURNEY', & THE 'BATTLE' 'FOUGHT', IS 'WON'!!!...
    'PRESERVE' N THE 'TRUTH', THE 'WORD' & THE 'LIGHT' OF GOD, & THE 'FALSE ONE'S' WILL 'FALL AWAY'-& WE 'SHALL' 'ARISE 'VICTORIOUS',- IF WE BUT -
    'PRESERVERE-
    'PRESERVERE-
    'PRESERVERE-
    FOR THY 'LORD' THY 'GOD IS 'NEAR', & 'LOVES' 'YOU' & SO 'DO' I, I HAVE 'FAITH' IN YOU , LOVE, LOVE, LOVE,💘LOVE,LOVE,💘 💘😍😍😍

  • @Jennifer-hv2bc
    @Jennifer-hv2bc Před 3 lety

    She didn't die she screwed me over

  • @AfrickiaMyers
    @AfrickiaMyers Před 3 měsíci

    My god please guide falconie Randall Falco Casey Smith and falconie please

  • @asifahmedovey
    @asifahmedovey Před 4 lety

    Please use black background

  • @AkrickaMyers-ug2wb
    @AkrickaMyers-ug2wb Před rokem +1

    My god IAM with Paul going three years ambit seeing any improvement can you help my children and I in anyway jah you are the only one I have i have to do all the spending around the house and cars all he does is cheating help me my god God he I s a ginal I can't even walk with out you holding my hand s africkia amen ❤

  • @ratz220
    @ratz220 Před 4 lety

    Loved your poem❤️ and your voice. I have tried poetry too. Please give me feedback on my work.

  • @jesuanthoniyammal2832
    @jesuanthoniyammal2832 Před 3 lety

    Confess your anger to God, or do you want to monk

  • @Agarcia9496
    @Agarcia9496 Před 7 měsíci

    Amen

  • @roxannedavis2417
    @roxannedavis2417 Před 3 lety

    Amen