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How To Write A Love Poem // Poetry Writing Exercise for Valentine's Day

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  • čas přidán 14. 08. 2024
  • Leave me a comment with your poem! :)
    Don't have any money to spend on your loved ones this Valentine's Day? No problem! Give them something that will warm their heart and put a smile on their face.
    Write them a love poem!
    This poetry exercise works for any loved one, not just a boyfriend, girlfriend or spouse. Write a poem to your best friend, to let them know how much your friendship means, or make a poem for your sister, to remind her how much you appreciate her.
    Whatever you do, remember that Valentine's Day isn't about having a "date". It's about loving yourself and those around you, opening up your heart, and being around people who love you for who you are!
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Komentáře • 186

  • @calebbasquill7014
    @calebbasquill7014 Před 6 lety +233

    Helping my dad write a last minute poem to my mother because their anniversary is tomorrow

  • @egg1407
    @egg1407 Před 2 lety +75

    this is the first poem i’ve ever written don’t bully me and i kinda moved the lines around a bit:
    darling,
    when i first met you i knew you were great.
    you drew me in immediately, with every personality trait.
    you get me flustered and not in the way i hate.
    i enjoy talking to you til it’s late.
    i would love to hold your hand and consider it a date.
    you are perfect in every way, even better than great.

    • @arieyst
      @arieyst Před 2 lety +2

      i personally like this and as a beginner, i dont think i have the rights to say it’s perfect but honestly speaking, this is so lovely !!

    • @egg1407
      @egg1407 Před 2 lety +1

      @@arieyst thank you sm

    • @lindseyjohanna6476
      @lindseyjohanna6476 Před 2 lety +3

      It’s great but the first bit darling is a bit cheesy

    • @lindseyjohanna6476
      @lindseyjohanna6476 Před 2 lety

      Did it work?

    • @austinanderson6705
      @austinanderson6705 Před rokem

      This is honestly amazing I wish I could take this word for word but I want mine to be from me but very well done

  • @marymoore3625
    @marymoore3625 Před 2 lety +13

    8 years later and I found the channel I was looking for. Cat, I hope you are doing great, and thank you. This is a great way to teach someone to write a poem.

  • @josephescarpe3869
    @josephescarpe3869 Před 7 lety +52

    LoveBug
    Remember me inching closer to your soft sweet lips
    You and I alone about to share that important kiss
    To think all this stared from seeing your smile
    Looking at your drives my heart wild
    I love laugh, your pout, and your scold
    Dancing with you may be the best choice I ever made truth be told
    I want to see the world with you while we embrace
    But as of now without your smile my world has gone somber just for a while
    The world was bright but now you’re gone
    Even though it won’t be for long
    I love your kindness, your heart, and your soul
    If sugar was time I’d give it all up
    Just to have you in my arms for every sun up
    The world is in discord without your voice
    I long to hear your voice and see your smile again
    Cause hearing you say I love you, I the happiest I’ve ever been.
    *What do you think*

  • @uberloulou9832
    @uberloulou9832 Před 10 lety +207

    ignore the bad grammar but here is my effort:
    James
    When you first kissed me, I'd never felt more alive
    You were perfection at the start, and perfection never dies.
    Everyone else fades, but you get better with time.
    And your kisses leave me high, like a stoner in the night
    I want to watch a movie with you, because your my leading man
    The smell of coffee in the morning, is made with your hands
    and salt on my lips, is salt on your skin
    And I dont think i'll ever be warmer again.
    I want to hold your hand, because it fill all the cracks
    And if I didnt have you, who would rub my back?
    And if I didnt have you, how would I be special?
    And your laugh is the brightest thing in my life, even the sun is dull.
    Every single breath that passes through your lips is my blessing
    every single day that passes through my life, is only important if it is spent
    with you.
    I'm pretty pleased with it thanks for your tips!!

  • @pmhwong
    @pmhwong Před 6 lety +29

    Sight (by me)
    First, doing this - I'd never thought I would,
    At the least, for you, I think I should,
    Love is not so straight forward,
    God even says "don't look backward",
    My heart melts when teach me you,
    Oh, poetry, expresses my feelings true.

  • @jesusjoelharo8551
    @jesusjoelharo8551 Před rokem +6

    From the very first day I laid eyes on her heart pounding out of my chest
    When I saw you in that white dress looking to impress here I go i’ll try my best
    Hands shaking as I come closer staring at your beautiful silhouette
    Those eyes that smile a whole snack an amazing woman i’ll never forget
    The warmth of her hug the nervousness i felt the heat from her touch as our hands interlace
    Walking side by side hand in hand the feeling of complete happiness I knew I found the one I’d spend the rest of my life with in this place
    Closer and Closer we get as I help you grab your things still nervous I take several glances at her beautiful soul
    An overwhelming amount of joy who knew I’d find someone with such a heart of gold making her my wife someday now that’s my goal
    I pack her things and soon after I pull out a ring and make her a promise i’ll never forget
    To love her for all that she is through the rough after all not every ship is perfect A perfect kiss from her perfect lips ensues thinking to myself about the first time we met
    you think she'll like this one?

  • @Fayedanielsx
    @Fayedanielsx Před 5 lety +25

    You and Me
    you rolled over and kissed me
    the spark that we shared
    you were there for me
    it’s as if we are a pair
    i said i loved you
    but you didn’t want to know
    all you said was you have to go

    • @mynation123
      @mynation123 Před 3 lety +1

      ..Do you have any good poems or lyrics you would like to have made into a song?

  • @SwastikNaik318
    @SwastikNaik318 Před 7 měsíci +1

    Can’t describe how beautiful the given outline is, I wonder what would happen when I actually put them in order! Thanks to the heavenly angel to assist me out, describe my love for my beloved. ❤

  • @dungeonmaster1406
    @dungeonmaster1406 Před 5 lety +13

    Is this good?
    Your voice is more beautiful than that of an angel, golden light. My feelings sing there too.

    • @tartanhandbag
      @tartanhandbag Před 16 dny

      you might want to look up the word "trite"

  • @ryan-mv6ws
    @ryan-mv6ws Před 7 lety +98

    Roses are red, I like to play in the sands. I just pooped and didn't wash my hands

  • @finalflash1359
    @finalflash1359 Před 2 lety +2

    Thank you I wanted to cheer my girl up and remind her I love her

  • @rosaweeb9808
    @rosaweeb9808 Před 4 lety +6

    Had no idea where to begin at first but this video helped me considerably. Thanks!

  • @CALEB-52
    @CALEB-52 Před 9 lety +12

    What about 3,4,5, and 7? Where are they placed in the poem?

  • @MeatEatingVegan777
    @MeatEatingVegan777 Před 2 lety +1

    My Angel is an English major. I have no experience writing poems, and I actually can't tell a good poem from a bad poem. I want to impress him with a love poem on our next anniversary.
    I thank you for your advise.

  • @ryanpendley1826
    @ryanpendley1826 Před 2 lety +4

    Okay I tried to write a love poem, hopefully you enjoy it!!
    PROMISE
    ---------------
    I promise to love you, it's my favorite duty of life
    to cherish you,
    I love your silliness,
    Your googly eye pictures makes me laugh,
    You know we're some dorks
    Please dont get me on your smile it's my
    Kryptonite that warms the soul
    The duty of me being your man is to make us
    happy,
    I may not be good at spilling my guts
    But this is who I am letting you know that there
    is nobody else in this world that compares to
    you,
    It's crazy you're the only person that's 24/7 on
    my mind, and that's a sincere thought no lie,
    You consume me,
    I love your nakedness
    That's my everything and
    Being naked is pretty funny,
    And funny is what I want to be!!
    So to my better half
    Let's laugh!!
    Take this rib, ouch;
    It's okay if I'm in pain
    I love you
    Maybe I try to hard
    I just want to be myself with you.
    Maybe I don't think you accept me?
    Butchya do!
    I hear the rhythm of our heart beating as one
    Take my hand let go and let God!
    Speaking in tongues of the Angels
    Hallelujah!
    Love has won!
    Writer
    Ryan K Pendley

  • @shahezmankhan9128
    @shahezmankhan9128 Před 7 lety +9

    you are goddam great , thankyou so so so much ,I wrote my first poem with ur help and it turned out to be so good, I mean I never knew I could ever write,though I can't show it to u😂 sorry but still thanks girl

  • @fitchchick715
    @fitchchick715 Před 10 lety +17

    LOVED THIS EXERCISE! I will post my poem after I give it to my love for Valentine's Day =)

  • @robertoshmuel1494
    @robertoshmuel1494 Před 6 lety +7

    I’m only 12 lol but still writing a love (more like than love) poem for someone despite how old this video is, thanks!

  • @LunaWaffle
    @LunaWaffle Před 10 lety +8

    Totally doing this for vday! Thank you!

    • @CatBeyondTV
      @CatBeyondTV  Před 10 lety +2

      Awesome! let me know how it works out for you or if you want any feedback :)

  • @CluelessStacey
    @CluelessStacey Před 9 lety +12

    This is so helpful! Thank you so much, just wrote a poem with your help!

    • @CatBeyondTV
      @CatBeyondTV  Před 9 lety +2

      Clueless Stacey that's awesome! makes me so happy to hear :)

    • @CluelessStacey
      @CluelessStacey Před 9 lety

      ***** I recorded myself reading it btw! So you can watch what you've helped to happen on my channel if you want to :D

  • @86bidyut
    @86bidyut Před 8 lety +9

    My practice !! please, don't be miser to say, how is it??
    For Expressing Love!
    -Ali Hossain Bidyut
    Fifty one thousand of roses
    I’ve killed,
    Before they’re bloomed
    The only once to say
    I love you.
    Ten million and eighty eight thousand miles
    I’ve walked.
    The once a sight to see you,
    I wished.
    Thirty one thousand of nights,
    I’ve passed in sleeping .
    The once and only once,
    I hoped you in my dreams.
    Forty one times,
    I’ve escaped from accident.
    The once and only to feel,
    I kissed you.
    Fifty six thousand times
    In thirty six manners,
    I’ve whistled for
    The once your looking back.
    Thirty three thousand excuses,Thirty three thousand times
    And in thirty three thousand ways ,
    I’ve tried to say.
    Even only once I couldn’t .
    I love you.

  • @ark2335
    @ark2335 Před 4 lety +6

    Here's mine, please give tips and stuff. I wrote this for our anniversary.
    Rachel
    I saw you from
    Across the room
    First day of Year Three,
    Smiling in excitement.
    You were different
    And unexpected
    I tried to stay away but
    You drew me in.
    Your laugh, that soft tinkle
    Puts me under
    Your spell
    Your enchantment.
    I still remember that
    Week in Croatia
    When I was weak and afraid
    But you made me strong.
    I want to grow old
    With you
    And live happily ever after
    In your arms.
    When you smile,
    You glow and
    I get
    Butterflies.
    You told me you loved me
    I love you too.

  • @CainCalifornia
    @CainCalifornia Před 10 lety +1

    I just mashed four Queen songs together (this is the first time I did something like this) & added, took out, &/or replaced parts. The songs if anyone's curious: Too Much Love Will Kill You. Love Of My Life. I Was Born To Love You. You Take My Breath Away. It turned out good. If anyone tries this method tell me how it works.

  • @yourfriendraiden
    @yourfriendraiden Před 6 měsíci

    Genius video! Need more content like this! Very original and very helpful, not only in poetry but songwriting too.

  • @taylahjarvis6971
    @taylahjarvis6971 Před 8 lety +6

    U really helped me with me poem

    • @CatBeyondTV
      @CatBeyondTV  Před 8 lety +1

      +Taylah Jarvis So happy I could help!

  • @secretlymisha4226
    @secretlymisha4226 Před 8 lety +10

    I used this to write a sad destiel poem (I meant for it to be happy and cute but idk what happened)
    Cas,
    From the moment you walked into that barn, it changed everything.
    You were an angel, and I was the opposite.
    But I loved you because you kept me together. You made me think I wasn't all bad. You were the good in me.
    I once saved your life, but you've saved mine more times than you know.
    I would give anything to just grow old with you.
    I need you. I'm so lost without you.
    The only way I can sleep anymore, is if I'm holding your trench coat close to me.
    It still smells like you.
    I miss the warmth the spread through my body every time you touched me.
    You once said you gave everything for me, and I just want you to know that I would do the same.
    But I guess it's too late.
    I'm sorry.

    • @CatBeyondTV
      @CatBeyondTV  Před 8 lety +3

      +Secretly Misha this was so good! very intense and full of the dark and light aspects of romance

    • @capitalg1512
      @capitalg1512 Před 6 lety

      Do something with this talent this is a gift from God like wow!

  • @thellama7300
    @thellama7300 Před 2 lety +1

    You and I, Constantly in shock that we are so close now.
    You and I, we remember never getting along.
    You and I, just begin getting along somehow
    You and I, can finally realize when we’re in the wrong (me specifically)
    I was never the brightest child, I must admit,
    But you, Mom. You tried your absolute best to hand me the world
    While little Anna did not attempt in the slightest bit.
    Later on in my teenage years, the way i acted made me wanna hurl
    I realized, Mom isn't the enemy
    I realized, I was foolish to think she was
    All Mom wanted was some damn serenity
    And a lot of the damage I realized, I caused.
    “I love you” three words I heard from your tongue
    I never believed. I thought I was born against you
    It was simply just my mindset when I was young
    But guess what mom? I love you too.
    A mom isn't just someone who pushed you from their womb
    A mom is normally your number 1 fan
    A mom who will support you no matters who’s in the room
    Someone who will do everything in their power to make their child a wonderful Man or Woman
    A mom like you is not only that for me though
    You’re also my best friend
    Not only because your like my only friend you know
    With you now i know, there's no need to pretend
    You taught me the best lessons in life
    For starters you taught me love, respect, and i'm still learning honesty
    And you taught me it's okay whether you want a husband or wife
    You taught me the amazing concept of equality,
    You are always honest with your opinions,
    And I have no reason to doubt anything you do for me.
    Because the amount of faith i have in you is worth billions
    With you I’m always safe, That's a guarantee
    You’re not one to take me for granted, unless given a valid reason too.
    I know you mean well, and always will.
    But every word i've said just now is 100 percent true
    So whenever you’re alone, Just remember you have so much skill
    And please never forget how much i appreciate all you’ve done
    Do me a favor and grab those insecurities and whispers of unworthiness
    By the throat, and simply say “you haven’t won”
    And continue to build your confident sturdiness
    input???

  • @linkoflegends6521
    @linkoflegends6521 Před 6 lety +1

    Thank you so much for making this video and helping those who need help on making a love poem thank you

  • @dukefire143
    @dukefire143 Před 3 lety +3

    My ex is very very mad at me, so I will start waking her up with poems until I can try again :)

  • @BigDan67
    @BigDan67 Před 6 lety +2

    I love poetry!!

  • @charlotteinthebuilding7037

    I am just bored and started writing a love poem about my favourite K-Pop idol. Lmao I am just one of those sad people with no love one in their lives right now.

  • @bensontroy1526
    @bensontroy1526 Před 5 lety

    I have great success by providing 3 samples per client then they select. Using the principles I employed has had the effect of clearing courtrooms, getting product free. It is great for sharpening my writing skills. Your checklist here is a great framework to work from.

  • @lynnn3891
    @lynnn3891 Před 6 lety +5

    It's fuzzy,
    when we fought the world together,
    the sweet and caring way,
    we would talked on the bleachers,
    if the rain disappears,
    my heart aches,
    no one to talk to,
    no one to express myself to,
    kindness is what pulled the fish,
    out the pond,
    the rose will finally bloom,
    when we go to Korea,
    to meet perfection,
    there's nothing like us,
    saranghae

  • @beepot2764
    @beepot2764 Před 7 lety +7

    Is that an Wiccan alter next to you? Just curious lol.

    • @mynation123
      @mynation123 Před 3 lety

      ,.,., Do you have any good poems or lyrics you would like to have made into a song?

  • @Hakai1016
    @Hakai1016 Před 6 měsíci

    Hoping this works for me

  • @princess.yeditz8393
    @princess.yeditz8393 Před 7 lety +1

    thenk you this helped me alot

  • @kevinlam1717
    @kevinlam1717 Před 2 lety +1

    your burly hands gripped me in an embrace that clasped our bodies into one-fold
    although it begun as longing for palpable warmth under Seattle’s desolate summer nights, a man with a compassionate heart, big enough for all he loves, left me yearning for more than just a body to hold
    presuming it is impossible to sleep in one’s arms all night without going numb, nor letting go, even as dawn dared to come between us, we persisted that love can be temporary
    even separation by an arms-length felt insufferable, because long nights in your refuge, always felt too short
    longing for one more night to run my fingers through your hair and thrust my tongue down your throat
    guess I miss your ego, always bragging about your hotness, yet it never fazed me, knowing your self-confidence could even douse your foe’s insecurities
    as timber catches on fire, an emergence of smoke erupts, bearing resemblance to the axe and whiffs of lavender fragrances in your room
    from your touch, a slumbering animal in me awakened, panting from hunger and thirst, until a storm poured over, offering respite
    “stay for a few more months” you said, you don’t know how badly I wanted to do so…

  • @raytavera7693
    @raytavera7693 Před 9 lety +2

    Loved it !

  • @Luka-ub4pm
    @Luka-ub4pm Před 3 lety +6

    Roses are red
    Violets are blue
    Your words were beautiful
    And so are you too 🌹

  • @everythingy2098
    @everythingy2098 Před rokem +2

    roses are red,
    violets are blue,
    if you don't want me,
    then i don't want you.

  • @tenacious_she
    @tenacious_she Před 7 lety +6

    Caveman
    I was working when I heard you sing
    a counter between the world
    your voice came through the speakers
    a freight train of words
    with a voice, velvet and deep
    with salt and commanding wit
    right in the eyes, I could no longer see
    the man in front of me
    I was singing along by the end of your song
    once I reached out while you were leaning in
    we all raised our arms
    pushing forward to feel your stance
    your body was strong, but weightless and tall
    you grabbed my hand, it lost its color
    I didn’t care that I could no longer see
    the world could blow up tomorrow
    you and the passing time have been with me ever since
    one day when you go, I’ll miss your changing voice the most
    can I see you again? and will you sing into my hands?
    alright love, come here.

  • @petrosmixides4410
    @petrosmixides4410 Před 4 lety +1

    Omg I needed that

  • @SYAZ_ASSASSIN
    @SYAZ_ASSASSIN Před rokem

    Thank u this is gonna help me with my relationship tomorrow

  • @jesusjoelharo8551
    @jesusjoelharo8551 Před 2 lety +1

    remember when you asked if I wanted to see your glow in the dark dinosaur collection?
    who knew then and there i'd have this much affection?
    That radiant personality that is your soul that makes my darkest of days so much brighter
    with you by my side my heart feels so much lighter
    I love that independent soul that loves and cares with all your heart and expects nothing but the same in return
    A soul worthy of my life you set my heart on fire burn!
    Watching movies tv shows talking and spending quality time with you till morning
    Your style is so immaculate fashionable everything you wear adorning
    I want to walk through the cherry blossoms in japan together hand in hand is it weird to say I dream of us when we are old.
    whenever you're around butterflies just like when I first met you and you showed me that immaculate heart of gold
    "I'm so glad to have you as a best friend and a lover I don't want anyone else
    only you because you are the person I want to marry."
    is what you said to me that night when we were both drinking in such a daze they still stuck with me these words I cherish and forever I will carry!
    how is this do you think she'll like it?

    • @Aman-dg9lb
      @Aman-dg9lb Před rokem +1

      Man u danm perfect it will be the best

  • @thellama7300
    @thellama7300 Před 2 lety

    input..?
    What is a father?
    No, it's not someone who's related to you by blood.
    For if it was, mine would be named jake, and to him i seemed quite a bother
    My fathers name is Michael, Mike for short, and with his love, he lets it flood
    Mike stood up to be the dad he knew for a fact he didn't have to be
    He didn’t even hesitate to step up and be a dad for us
    And when anyone says he's an amazing man, we all can agree
    We all appreciate him for putting up with the fuss.
    I remember when i was just a little girl,
    Moving in with Mike, as he and my mother reconnected.
    He welcomed us in and gave us the world
    He never made any one of us feel the littlest amount of neglected
    He didn't see any one of us as a burden
    He showed us love and compassion
    And made sure a hopeful future for us would be more than certain
    A world without my father is rather difficult to imagine
    My Fathers an amazing fighter
    For what he wants, what he desires
    For example, he was a marine and is a wonderful writer
    I look up to him alot, i'm one of his admirers
    He loves to help people, and he succeeds
    He’s never hesitated to help me when he's able too or when i need it
    He's a wonderful man, and a wonderful father, That is guaranteed
    But he also knows how to put himself first, so his success never quits
    Me and my father didn’t instantly connect.
    We only really joked around every now and then
    Same with my mom, I decided when i was a teenager to stop the neglect
    In our relationship, we grew closer, and i sure hope our friendship never will end
    Him and I began going out to eat with one another
    Him and I began being playful, and wrestle one another, which was always fun
    But most importantly i will never forget the impact he has on my mother
    As for fans, he was always her number one
    Dad, You’ve impacted many people in many different ways
    You may feel as if you haven't done enough sometimes
    But i promise you, you deserve all the praise
    Because you are a good man, and for that i give you my silly rhymes
    A poem may not be most sufficient
    But it's the best way i could think to express how i view you
    Because you are truly magnificent
    A father like you is the best I could ever even ask for, and that is true.
    I love you dad.

  • @biogeniclife
    @biogeniclife Před 3 lety +1

    Here in 2021 for some ideas.

  • @BikesNight
    @BikesNight Před 6 měsíci

    😂 me comin out from the lonely side of CZcams this valentines day

  • @johndavies9589
    @johndavies9589 Před 7 lety +3

    I am having problems finding rhymes for phrases in a poem about my romantic hopes for a tender and respectful loving relationship. Do you have any rhyming suggestions for the following please: 'living, said', 'know me', 'luck, my rock' 'floral flecks', 'knowing frown', 'bunny fingers', 'view you' 'groggy smile', 'free some' 'pang sang' 'sup the glass' 'day-glow pacifism' 'thought her thoughts' 'dim me' or 'meet my wit and think my bliss'?

    • @zoechappellclark3924
      @zoechappellclark3924 Před 5 lety +1

      I hope you got help since it was 2 years ago lol

    • @sapnasingh.__
      @sapnasingh.__ Před 8 měsíci

      I was about to find but then I saw it was 7 yrs ago so I hope you get help and wrote a poem

  • @EllieJayden
    @EllieJayden Před 10 lety +11

    You are so pretty ahhh

  • @franciscogonzalez-ko9ey
    @franciscogonzalez-ko9ey Před 9 lety +2

    that was fun!
    gorgeous
    you under the desert sun,
    gorgeous,
    your awake,
    sneaking ,
    spend the night and travel 7,000 miles through the south.
    your heartbeat is beautiful, come play.

    • @luisdm6778
      @luisdm6778 Před 8 lety +2

      +fransisco gonzales can i use this for my homework im sorry i know that i can make one pls let me

  • @aquamongerpro373
    @aquamongerpro373 Před 4 lety

    What she said at the end is so true I had to Subscribe to her

  • @shorelinefishingmafia6133

    Roses are red, violets are blue I'm counting down the days until I finally see you 💗

  • @jananstunes
    @jananstunes Před 5 lety

    I just found this because I need tips. I'm about to subscribe

  • @Treyshellz
    @Treyshellz Před 9 lety +9

    Who else did this as back up plan?

    • @CatBeyondTV
      @CatBeyondTV  Před 9 lety +2

      Jake smelly haha nice! did you give the poem to your special someone?

    • @Treyshellz
      @Treyshellz Před 9 lety +1

      Yep I wrote a sad poem she thought it was sweet but we were just really good friends we don't go out

    • @555droid6
      @555droid6 Před 8 lety +1

      +Cat Coule I'm doing this for homework

    • @longinusloser3540
      @longinusloser3540 Před 5 lety

      Me to a girl

  • @vishnuvardhan9082
    @vishnuvardhan9082 Před rokem

    Loved it

  • @Leo_goodaim
    @Leo_goodaim Před 2 lety

    I really like this girl so now im watching this video

  • @This_Guy2007
    @This_Guy2007 Před 11 měsíci

    What about 345and 7

  • @goodboimen
    @goodboimen Před 2 lety

    5:06 Joe really he gets all the miners

  • @treasuretv602
    @treasuretv602 Před 5 lety

    This is helpful

  • @reetasharma6722
    @reetasharma6722 Před 3 lety

    Right

  • @aprylrose3313
    @aprylrose3313 Před 4 lety +1

    How is this.. any tips?
    To my love🧡
    When we first met at the church, I knew you were the one,my only one .....you were funny , and warmed hearted ... I LOVED your heart ...when we met again
    I knew I had to have a life with you ...and now we are forever

  • @anastasiashistoryproductio6791

    When I saw your face I felt love

  • @mimianna4748
    @mimianna4748 Před 10 lety +1

    This is awesome :)

  • @LunaWaffle
    @LunaWaffle Před 10 lety +3

    Oh and where is the link to your other channel? I'm on a smartphone so I can't click on your link in the video

    • @CatBeyondTV
      @CatBeyondTV  Před 10 lety +1

      Oh good call! I just added it to the description but you should be able to click here: Writing ♥ Valentine's Poem for my Love

    • @alexdelgado8143
      @alexdelgado8143 Před 3 lety

      @@CatBeyondTV I really love this girl her name is fallon

  • @dantesfinferno7248
    @dantesfinferno7248 Před rokem

    Where is your poem?

  • @julieobado6138
    @julieobado6138 Před 7 lety +1

    OMG I love cats

  • @nusratalbert7566
    @nusratalbert7566 Před 7 lety +2

    I am a girl and I'm 8 years old and I made a love song poem to my crush in 2nd grade with me named Warren

    • @jackelliott7853
      @jackelliott7853 Před 4 lety +1

      Nusrat Albert bruh it stupid to do that shit at 8 but do whatever ur life

    • @sapnasingh.__
      @sapnasingh.__ Před 8 měsíci

      are you guys together now
      like it's been 7 yrs lol

  • @meazateklegirgis6316
    @meazateklegirgis6316 Před rokem

    Wow

  • @kariyepro661
    @kariyepro661 Před 3 lety

    Nice one

  • @sierra3934
    @sierra3934 Před 9 lety +13

    First poem i've ever wrote, it's about my baby sister. give me your thoughts? I really want to write more, this was a lot of fun!
    9:15pm
    I had gotten the text
    "She's here"
    and I couldn't have been more excited
    my baby sister had finally arrived
    when i look back now,
    i dont know what i ever did without her
    she's the reason for the smile on my face,
    just looking at her calms my soul.
    She's always making jokes,
    being the light of every room she walks in.
    Between her singing,
    "Do you wanna build a snowman?"
    and us actually building snowmen,
    i dont know how I could ever pick a favorite memory.
    But no doubt, the best part of my day
    is hearing the sweet sound of her voice saying
    "i love you sissy"

    • @CatBeyondTV
      @CatBeyondTV  Před 9 lety

      Sierra Hildreth this is so beautiful!

  • @thegovtdoesntcareaboutyou

    What if the person is online

  • @funwithbella4133
    @funwithbella4133 Před 8 lety +4

    What was yours

    • @CatBeyondTV
      @CatBeyondTV  Před 8 lety +1

      +Fun With Bella i posted it here: czcams.com/video/uUdBjEvKtK8/video.html :D

  • @fj2572
    @fj2572 Před 4 lety

    Please make more veds likes this

  • @daedanforth2920
    @daedanforth2920 Před 6 lety

    Does anyone know the song in the intro?

  • @crushercrusherette4620
    @crushercrusherette4620 Před 4 lety +1

    It’s weird to write where I met my bff bc we met in Walmart

  • @derrickybanez4461
    @derrickybanez4461 Před 4 lety

    hi cat can i ask you a poem of love in how to a court a girl, thank you

  • @amanjoshi4472
    @amanjoshi4472 Před 5 lety

    Omg you are so adorable and cute

  • @GIGASHAGGY-ZOINKS.
    @GIGASHAGGY-ZOINKS. Před 2 lety

    Wish I watched this before I written my joint

  • @maryloveburgos8871
    @maryloveburgos8871 Před 5 lety

    Jajjajajjaja carne fresca!! Pa virgen de las galletas María son tremendas las hermanitas

  • @longinusloser3540
    @longinusloser3540 Před 5 lety

    Violets are bread, so are you now come over here, so I can have a peace of you.

  • @TheCrazyBunchTV
    @TheCrazyBunchTV Před 6 lety

    I need to do a chaling it’s 12 and I done six

  • @meharitesfazgi6414
    @meharitesfazgi6414 Před 6 lety

    I love that 👄 stick it's so pretty

  • @davidsaywell7772
    @davidsaywell7772 Před 2 lety

    I'm a loner and there is his person i like, I wrote this poem for them should i give them it at the end of the school year?
    You remind me of the arcade, bright, fun and loud.
    You smell of fresh pizza, and roses on a spring evening, your warm touch fills me up inside.
    I love the way you’re always with me, never letting me hurt myself and sticking up for me when others belittle me.
    I want to take long walks with you in the rain, and watch the sky turn orange and pink as the day ends.
    I love the way you’re always with me, never letting me hurt myself and sticking up for me when others belittle me.
    When you said to me “I’d rather date a pole than you” it broke my heart, shattered into a million pieces. I know you didn’t mean it, but the heart is of the most fragile of the organs.
    If I had not met you, I would be forever alone, stuck inside my own head with no one to comfort me.
    You are the prettiest boy in the world, your eyes shine like melting chocolate, your hair perfect in every way, your talent and creativity leave me dumbfounded and awestruck, for there is no other like you.
    At first i thought i hated you, then, i grew to love you.
    I'm really embarrassed by it because its my first poem = )

    • @dogfat.
      @dogfat. Před rokem

      You said the thing about not letting you hurt yourself & sticking up for you twice

  • @pamelalagnada5296
    @pamelalagnada5296 Před 8 lety +2

    Pizza and Thunder
    smirking when you caught me laughing at you
    you feel like home
    your existence makes me forget all the bad things;
    even if just for a while
    chasing each other
    gazing at the stars together
    it feels like i've known you for a while now

    • @hoogalooga3d564
      @hoogalooga3d564 Před 7 lety

      Pamela Lagnada, this is very beautiful and made me smile, because I once had something like that but it was only in a dream.

  • @c__ain_1586
    @c__ain_1586 Před 6 lety

    4:21

  • @breeisberrysweet
    @breeisberrysweet Před rokem

    Did we forget about 3 and 4 or am I just stupid? 😭

  • @madmadpussymonster
    @madmadpussymonster Před 8 lety

    this might be creepy but fuck, you look really pretty here.

  • @rajeshsoni2698
    @rajeshsoni2698 Před 6 lety

    you are soo cute..

  • @llimagelessminkll5858
    @llimagelessminkll5858 Před 5 lety

    I want to make a poem with pizza

  • @vuxvuxbigfan4852
    @vuxvuxbigfan4852 Před 6 lety

    This girl looks like Tess from Hunter street

  • @starnet4177
    @starnet4177 Před 2 lety

    No one from 2022?

  • @nickimanajmegafan-4564

    booooooooooooooooooooooooooo9oooooooooooooo👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅booooooolkkkooooooopoooooooo

  • @aliaaala5603
    @aliaaala5603 Před 7 lety

    what did I do in return is lie to you with no shame like a poor man in the rain with a toy train saying he's gay calling himself for the kkk and I don't know what I'm saying

  • @mdngtraveling2469
    @mdngtraveling2469 Před 6 lety

    I'm single

  • @NOVARIS
    @NOVARIS Před 7 lety

    You didn't use all 10 points 😅

  • @nycbebe2699
    @nycbebe2699 Před 2 lety +1

    How is this Today I thought if I never see you again
    I will not be able to detach you from my being
    To every individual comes stages, different people
    You are the woman of my dreams
    With perfect imperfections
    There is no other man on earth that makes me tremble from my legs
    Just looking at you makes me shudder
    Today I want to illustrate that I live for you
    💭
    To me you are the light
    Loving you is a virtue
    I'm going to add you to the bible for being divine and so good
    You, the calm in its fullness
    I love you so many light years
    You Are my prodigy man, the one I love most on the planet