Turning Pro - Illustration Critiques #2

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  • čas přidán 21. 03. 2017
  • I critique illustration work in both my University classes and at www.svslearn.com and now I'm going to start critiquing work here on my youtube channel from time to time. Getting feedback is critical to making the right changes to your work!
    My online illustration classes svslearn.com/
    Mag Takac - www.mag.takac.name
    Sarah Elliott - www.seelliottcreations.co.uk
    Leontine Gaasenbeek - leontineillustrator.com
    My Website: willterry.com
    My Blog willterry.blogspot.com
    Twitter: / willterry333
    Instagram: / willterryart
    facebook: / will.terry.733

Komentáře • 20

  • @sliproot1855
    @sliproot1855 Před 7 lety +4

    New Will Terry video. Life is good.

  • @KatnippStudios
    @KatnippStudios Před 7 lety +1

    Thank you so much Will, I learn so so much from your videos, these crits are perfect for looking over my own work! it's super important to improve, so these are amazing, keep them coming!

  • @mag_takac
    @mag_takac Před 7 lety +3

    Thank you Will! You have really great points - I cannot change how it will look in the book anymore though, but I still can learn, a lot! Which is sometimes the most important thing. ;) Thank you for helping!

  • @suziturton7268
    @suziturton7268 Před 6 lety +1

    Brilliant teacher! Learning so much. Thank you!

  • @creatingathena
    @creatingathena Před 7 lety +8

    I guess I am a graphic designer in an illustrators clothing, lol. Writing this in my pjs...

  • @anetteharnebrandt8320
    @anetteharnebrandt8320 Před 7 lety +2

    Thanks Will! Really enjoying these critiques!

  • @marshallalmeidaArt
    @marshallalmeidaArt Před 7 lety +1

    I think the change to the first illustration really helped (the orange bush in the background). There were too many things roughly the same size in that area.

  • @kupotenshi
    @kupotenshi Před 7 lety +4

    this is so helpful thank you for doing these!

  • @artistgq76
    @artistgq76 Před 7 lety +2

    Great critique / advice. I find it very useful

  • @A.L.Davis4
    @A.L.Davis4 Před 6 lety

    Thanks Will, your videos make my days better.

  • @LeontineGaasenbeek
    @LeontineGaasenbeek Před 7 lety +2

    Thanks so much Will, very helpful, and I see what you mean and try big medium and small shapes at the hair aswel.

  • @barchifojkar8650
    @barchifojkar8650 Před 7 lety

    Will, I hope you don't mind me giving a tiny remark about the layout of the first illustration (Alice & animals). Paragraph on the right side could be modified. I would break the line before the last, so the last line ("a fan") wouldn't have just one word in it (that is usually not cool - they have a saying for a single word, I think it is called "a widow" in English but not 100% sure). I hope this helps ... sometimes there is even easier way to solve the challenge. :)
    However thank you so much for your generosity, for sharing your knowledge time and care ... very very appreciated!!!

  • @MrAbhayaggarwal
    @MrAbhayaggarwal Před 7 lety +1

    I like your illustration....😊

  • @tombarrettart
    @tombarrettart Před 7 lety

    A bit late on the comment, but thanks for these tips Will! Very helpful. And try Wal-Mart Allergy Relief (cetirizine, green box)) tablets for the allergies. : )

  • @suziturton7268
    @suziturton7268 Před 6 lety

    Yup, loved it....even though I only know how to hold a pencil-!!@?!

  • @olimueller
    @olimueller Před 7 lety

    are you sitting in a steam sauna? Looks very humid or as if something is on the lens of your webcam.

    • @willterryart
      @willterryart  Před 7 lety

      I'm looking for a better webcam - I think it was the light coming up from the cintiq monitor.

  • @BradPitbull
    @BradPitbull Před 7 lety +2

    WILL TERRY IS MAKING AMERICA GREAT AGAIN WITH EVERY VIDEO
    THANK U WILL TERRY
    You inspore my drawing channel
    mine is rated R though
    deadpool style