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  • @F33tLov3r
    @F33tLov3r Před 3 lety +750

    istg the essay was due 2 months ago and here I am just now starting to write it-

    • @davidpan6349
      @davidpan6349 Před 3 lety +14

      Same...

    • @oliviastevens9934
      @oliviastevens9934 Před 3 lety +74

      mine is due tonight 🧍🏼‍♀️

    • @polaris7346
      @polaris7346 Před 3 lety +13

      mine was due in april....

    • @nonianunciacion503
      @nonianunciacion503 Před 3 lety +6

      Lmao

    • @alexcjoechez7881
      @alexcjoechez7881 Před 3 lety

      For students, isn’t it great that (profpiperr on IG) can help you solve your assignments and essays. The services are great and since I started using them, my grades have significantly improved.

  • @Amalioji2
    @Amalioji2 Před 2 lety +131

    Spending months learning how to write an assay for my research papers, you are the most clear, concise, organize and easy to follow presenter. For that I am grateful. Thank you!!!

    • @XxJoudi_STAYxX
      @XxJoudi_STAYxX Před rokem

      Same as a 9th grader I do researches in science astronomy and this helped

    • @Crimsonedits
      @Crimsonedits Před 11 měsíci +1

      I agree

  • @shotzcs2803
    @shotzcs2803 Před 3 lety +333

    I got a fsa tommorow, i need this, thanks!

  • @anthonycortinas1291
    @anthonycortinas1291 Před rokem +77

    Good evening. I just want to say how much I love watching your CZcams videos. I am a retired veteran who never had the chance to go to high school. I am 38 years old and with my disability through the years of the military it has made going back to school so much harder than what it should be. I wrote my first essay ever a few weeks ago. And even though I need a lot of work and help in my writing. Thanks to you and how you broke it all down for me to learn. I was able to do my introduction, thesis , body and closing paragraphs. I am very proud because with your help I was able to make an 85. It was one of the hardest things I had to do in college. Especially since I never had that opportunity to go to high school and learn all these things I am so behind on. I am attempting to do this character analysis essay and once again I come to you for guidance. You don’t know how much it means to me that when I look up on CZcams I look for your face out of everything and everyone on here. I am delighted and so great full for you and your videos that help me understand. When I read to understand it doesn’t catch or sink in. But watching you and seeing it does a whole lot. Thank you again. Have a blessed day or evening. And happy Halloween 🎃

  • @ghosttttt8
    @ghosttttt8 Před 4 měsíci +45

    Watching this before exam 💀

  • @sheikahchick9861
    @sheikahchick9861 Před 2 lety +144

    Really really helpful! I have never been a strong essay writer and I have two essays coming up for the end of the semester. This was so easy to understand! Thank you!

    • @Wahkee1
      @Wahkee1 Před rokem

      Ha! Sucks to be you!

  • @mr.alejandre9428
    @mr.alejandre9428 Před 3 lety +76

    When were in high school my English teacher always requires essay in every topic in English we would encounter. Base on my stock knowledge, essay has three basic parts: introduction that aims to give the reader what is the essay all about, body it's typically about facts or anything that has anything to with the introduction part and lastly conclusion which aims to summarize all the parts of essay sometimes it may include your opinion or anything. I'm not good at writing essays but I have enough knowledge about it. Also, I find writing essays hard especially if it's in English which is my second language. Nevertheless, I sometimes find writing essays interesting.

  • @bigboi5763
    @bigboi5763 Před 2 lety +81

    I have an end of year exam and I'm in year 10. This helped me out so much and im really thankful for this video
    Edit: I got a grade 7 out of 9 which I'm really happy with😁😁 thank uuuuu❤

  • @lucianplayz8397
    @lucianplayz8397 Před 2 lety +17

    I watched this 2 days before my essay deadline and it helped me very much! Thank you!

  • @cecireynolds9800
    @cecireynolds9800 Před 3 lety +83

    Thanks I was struggling with my essay! this helped so much! ❤️

  • @randomperson-gs1ck
    @randomperson-gs1ck Před 2 lety +12

    I just entered high school in a special class for Journalism and this very helpful. Thank you so much 🥰

  • @Donotron
    @Donotron Před 3 lety +85

    I’m still lost 😅

  • @chrisyes282
    @chrisyes282 Před 3 lety +34

    Just to let you know my teacher used this video and it was helpful.

  • @nihadtouiti
    @nihadtouiti Před 2 lety +16

    I’m preparing for my exam and I found your video so helpful. Thank you!

  • @JackieOlkish
    @JackieOlkish Před 3 lety +34

    When I use that clear-concise-catchy sentence for the hook, my sentence feels cliché sometimes. Is that something usual at writing? Or is there any tips on this matter?

    • @yabokutora6111
      @yabokutora6111 Před 3 lety +1

      Yes it is normal the more you write the better and diverse you will be able to write then things wont be repetitive

    • @atharva2920
      @atharva2920 Před 2 lety +4

      Some hooks can be very corny or clichè, so you're doing something right

  • @atinuolao2188
    @atinuolao2188 Před 2 lety +14

    who else is whatching this because they forgot how to write and essay :/

  • @vendetta4562
    @vendetta4562 Před 3 lety +24

    Fsa today yessir, wish me luck

  • @mwansachikonde4193
    @mwansachikonde4193 Před 2 lety +29

    Just came across this video series yesterday, I'm learning a lot and I love the content. Thanks! ❤️

  • @ssiqhr
    @ssiqhr Před 3 lety +17

    Thank you so much because I got fsa tomorrow

    • @alexcjoechez7881
      @alexcjoechez7881 Před 3 lety

      For students, isn’t it great that (profpiperr on IG) can help you solve your assignments and essays. The services are great and since I started using them, my grades have significantly improved. **

  • @DigiSTREAM21
    @DigiSTREAM21 Před 8 měsíci +4

    Clearest introduction writing video on CZcams thus far. Your style of presenting information gets five stars, it is easy to interpret and follow along with.

  • @marydiamond3631
    @marydiamond3631 Před 7 měsíci +1

    Thank you! I played this for my English students to help them begin their writing their research papers!~

  • @Toemuncher1
    @Toemuncher1 Před 2 lety +2

    My FSA is today. Thanks for the help wish me luck ✌🏽
    (Watching this before school)

  • @sivakatakam3078
    @sivakatakam3078 Před 3 lety +7

    I rocked my essay project just because of you

    • @alexcjoechez7881
      @alexcjoechez7881 Před 3 lety +1

      For students, isn’t it great that (profpiperr on IG) can help you solve your assignments and essays. The services are great and since I started using them, my grades have significantly improved. **

  • @owenscooters1489
    @owenscooters1489 Před 3 lety +18

    thank you I needed this !

  • @writebetterwithteachermel
    @writebetterwithteachermel Před 3 lety +18

    I like the novel concept you have here. Good job!

  • @kaitlynbrinklow5738
    @kaitlynbrinklow5738 Před 2 lety +3

    0:22 #1
    1:23 #2
    2:29 #3
    3:31 #4

  • @ss-wz6hm
    @ss-wz6hm Před 2 lety +9

    Great information
    1000%proper explanation
    I just got the idea as a student🙎
    THANK YOU SO MUCH 🖒

  • @sethhhh
    @sethhhh Před 3 měsíci

    pendahuluan
    - menarik pembaca, menarik rasa ingin tahu
    - latar belakang
    - mendiskripsikan kontrks historis atau sosial
    - mendifinisikan istilah istilah kunci
    - memperkenalkan teoris atau penelitian yg relevan
    - menyiapkan sisi sisi perdebatan yg berbeda
    - jangan berlebihan simpan untuk isi
    selanjutnya,
    - presentasikan pernyataan thesis anda > mempersempit fokus dan menunjukkan dengan tepat apa yg ingin dikatakan tentang topik tersebut
    pernyataan tesis: satu atau dua kalimat yg merangkum keseluruhan argumen (menentukan fokus keseluruhan)
    tesis bukan sekedar pernyataan fakta melainkan pernyataan yg memerlukan bukti dan penjelasan
    tujuannya menyampaikan dengan jelas poin utama tentang suatu topik dan menunjukkan alasan dibaliknya

  • @bigmoniesponge
    @bigmoniesponge Před 3 lety +6

    Thanks, I missed my meet telling us how to do this so I hope I get a good grade.

    • @alexcjoechez7881
      @alexcjoechez7881 Před 3 lety

      For students, isn’t it great that (profpiperr on IG) can help you solve your assignments and essays. The services are great and since I started using them, my grades have significantly improved.

  • @amri9104
    @amri9104 Před 3 lety +6

    thanks I got extra credit on my essay because of this

    • @alexcjoechez7881
      @alexcjoechez7881 Před 3 lety +1

      For students, isn’t it great that (profpiperr on IG) can help you solve your assignments and essays. The services are great and since I started using them, my grades have significantly improved. **

  • @ArslanHussain-qo5gf
    @ArslanHussain-qo5gf Před rokem +1

    My topic is the crown, cricket and Canada. Is this a good hook:
    Many people are aware of the relationship between cricket and the crown but not many know that Canada is also tied in.

  • @ghousonibrahim9464
    @ghousonibrahim9464 Před rokem +1

    The ability of stem cells to differentiate into any type of cell represents a turning point in the repair of damaged tissues.
    Can we consider this as a hook?!

  • @abdullahnooreldinalkhawari704

    Her video introduction did grab my interest which is a proof for the good quality of the video content 😁👍

  • @rochellefine3095
    @rochellefine3095 Před 2 lety +6

    This video definitely helped me revise my introduction paragraph. I had no transition and my thesis statement was to general.

  • @yordanymartinez4158
    @yordanymartinez4158 Před 2 lety +3

    Thank you I got a FSA tomorrow

  • @kimberly.osorio
    @kimberly.osorio Před 3 lety +11

    Thank you, this video helped so much with my reading essay !

  • @dinaazzahra6490
    @dinaazzahra6490 Před 3 lety +32

    Such a great explanation!
    When I reading a text that containing hooks, it looks easy if I make it. But when I want to make it, it turned out to be hard to do. In making a hook, I have to understand the choice of the right words to make it more interesting. That's my problem. Then, how do we choose the fancy words so that the hook sentence is more attractive to the reader? Thank you

  • @masterjericho9026
    @masterjericho9026 Před 10 měsíci +1

    Chat gpt and Undetectable AI is the best combo for making essays for me 😌

  • @WardNoor-h1y
    @WardNoor-h1y Před 27 dny

    This guide is so detailed, I’m eternally grateful for this thank you!

  • @viratthakur7786
    @viratthakur7786 Před 2 lety +1

    Thank you much❤️
    Huge respect from India 🇮🇳

  • @emlyrics6068
    @emlyrics6068 Před 3 lety +1

    00:51 Loved The office reference 😂

  • @peapod5629
    @peapod5629 Před 10 měsíci

    Watching this the night before my GCSE O Level English examinations... Thanks for the video 😅

  • @kitukusnr
    @kitukusnr Před rokem +1

    Doing my thesis from scratch.. very helpful

  • @rebekkakiertzner7050
    @rebekkakiertzner7050 Před 3 lety +11

    "The short story Stop Thief! is truly a historical story with a meaningful and instructive plot." Is this a good hook?

  • @bristolurban8432
    @bristolurban8432 Před 8 měsíci

    tysm for this! i was clueless on how to right an essay. But after I watched you mix, i knew exactly how to right an essay!
    🖤🖤🖤

  • @hx2u431
    @hx2u431 Před rokem

    Bro her channel has everything to writing a good essay

  • @730DIMEDROP
    @730DIMEDROP Před rokem +2

    THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE EXPLANATION.

  • @kawaiinatalie9195
    @kawaiinatalie9195 Před 3 lety +6

    thank you so much, this really helped me and I did not know how to make a introduction for my essay to thank you so much!!

  • @BigJoeFaceYT
    @BigJoeFaceYT Před rokem +1

    TY this helped a lot.

  • @bradleysamuels5366
    @bradleysamuels5366 Před 5 měsíci

    Jessica you deserve a bouquet of Flowers❤✨️

  • @omotayomuyideenayinde8098

    I ❤the fact that you are a very talented and passionate person and I am very grateful

  • @Droplid
    @Droplid Před 10 měsíci

    As a student in college composition I find these videos very helpful.

  • @ilesm.5
    @ilesm.5 Před 3 lety +10

    I needed this

  • @thelagamagin5345
    @thelagamagin5345 Před 2 lety +1

    Thank you for your help because I got 99 % at my exam

  • @thatkidosma5807
    @thatkidosma5807 Před 3 lety +3

    Thanks I just got done with my essay that is due today

    • @alexcjoechez7881
      @alexcjoechez7881 Před 3 lety

      For students, isn’t it great that (profpiperr on IG) can help you solve your assignments and essays. The services are great and since I started using them, my grades have significantly improved. **

  • @gammingmatty8899
    @gammingmatty8899 Před 2 lety +2

    I have a essay today thanks this really helped!!!!!

  • @triwidyamaharani3849
    @triwidyamaharani3849 Před 3 lety +3

    That's wonderful explanation,
    But I wonder because sometimes, when I write an introduction, I do not have a great idea on that time, how if I do not write some step that you have already described before? Is it okay?? Thank you

  • @filipinagirl2260
    @filipinagirl2260 Před rokem +1

    My yesterday essay was completely messed up and I'm very disappointed that's why I'm here to improve my writing.Hope that I can catch up next next🥺

  • @keepam4867
    @keepam4867 Před 3 lety +2

    I like you teaching essay

    • @alexcjoechez7881
      @alexcjoechez7881 Před 3 lety

      For students, isn’t it great that (profpiperr on IG) can help you solve your assignments and essays. The services are great and since I started using them, my grades have significantly improved.

    • @alexcjoechez7881
      @alexcjoechez7881 Před 3 lety

      @Kyler Rogers Yes they went from Ds to Bs which is a great improvement

  • @budgetcuber2910
    @budgetcuber2910 Před 2 lety +1

    Fsa tmr man wish me luck

  • @jaysonW7
    @jaysonW7 Před rokem +1

    I just want her to write my essay at this point! This is giving me anxiety! Great video but seriously just write my essay😂

  • @katjitoreruekavari9188
    @katjitoreruekavari9188 Před 2 lety +1

    what is the importance of thesis statement in a narrative essay ?

  • @intrazelica
    @intrazelica Před 3 měsíci

    The invention of braille has been a cornerstone in easier access to literature for people with disabilities

  • @karenhyllam-elliston4081

    Help me!
    I’m writing an essay about the lack of black teachers in education. This is my initial thesis statement:
    Black teachers are becoming extinct in education, with few enrolling into ITT courses, many quitting the profession because of lack of support and only a handful heading towards a leadership role, the proposal is to find out what can be done to turn things around.

    • @Miso217
      @Miso217 Před 9 měsíci

      change extinct to diminishing

  • @dancancrinskid2989
    @dancancrinskid2989 Před 3 lety +4

    Thank you dear😁

  • @Sydney_o
    @Sydney_o Před 3 měsíci +4

    My karma for not doing shit for like a week. 😭

  • @thadsanchez9306
    @thadsanchez9306 Před 3 měsíci +1

    "erm what the sigma" was my hook

  • @asheelow1256
    @asheelow1256 Před 2 lety +1

    thank you for helping me to make a good introduction

  • @nathanielchavez80
    @nathanielchavez80 Před 5 měsíci

    Double chunk in alignment with a literary element and complex theme. Fun

  • @petertheg
    @petertheg Před rokem +1

    Here how my introduction sentence looks like: The Jacksonian Democracy was a major reformation process in the history of the United States.

  • @amithmaharaj1723
    @amithmaharaj1723 Před 7 měsíci +1

    this is amazing!!! i wish my teacher was u😍😄😉😋

  • @drealfifi
    @drealfifi Před 2 lety +1

    Thanks for this I forgot how to write the hook part of the essay

  • @holly2994
    @holly2994 Před 3 lety +4

    Thank you this helped me so much!

  • @arielledamgaard3301
    @arielledamgaard3301 Před 3 měsíci

    English is my third language, so I'm finding it harder to start writing and starting the essay, any tips?

  • @matthewramlal8122
    @matthewramlal8122 Před 2 lety +2

    This was very helpful

  • @Akutagawas_lefteyebrow
    @Akutagawas_lefteyebrow Před 2 měsíci

    Watching this with my essay due tmr (i haven't even got the pictures printed

  • @kaylasisk4683
    @kaylasisk4683 Před 9 měsíci

    My finally essay due dec 1 or 2nd but my final essay draft is due nov 19th. And I am just starting it now.

  • @nickey1848
    @nickey1848 Před 2 lety +1

    Thanks never been a good writer but this helped a lot

  • @looney.joe_
    @looney.joe_ Před 24 dny

    It’s not the only time I see this

  • @ruikasasfixer
    @ruikasasfixer Před 5 měsíci

    tomorrow is my state writing test and i came back to make sure im prepared bc i really want a 4

  • @user-vc1wf8kv7p
    @user-vc1wf8kv7p Před 10 měsíci +1

    I usually suffer to make a good hook to catch the reader’s attention how can u advice me ?

  • @reveiws5663
    @reveiws5663 Před 3 lety +3

    thank you dear

  • @zoeyl.5480
    @zoeyl.5480 Před rokem +1

    Wow! My teacher played this video to help us with essays, and its really fun to just watch!!

  • @zealluvsu9118
    @zealluvsu9118 Před 3 lety +3

    This really helped, thanks!

  • @JThuijs
    @JThuijs Před 3 lety +1

    Buckle your seat belts boys and girls, Professor or whoever is reading this at this spectacular time in your life because in eight short pages I am going to learn you a thing that only I know the basics when I was in 1st or 2nd grade and the rest I learned myself about two hours ago, so sit down, shut up, and enjoy the experience of my 3-AM-Monster-Energy-ADHD-Medicine-Induced-Self-Hatred-Fuelled-Writing-Extravegenza about Rosa Parks and what you are going to read is damn near the best thing you will probably read in a 30 minute time frame.

  • @abramporras7877
    @abramporras7877 Před 3 lety +2

    Thank you I didn't know crap and used this and passed lol

    • @Scribbr-us
      @Scribbr-us  Před 3 lety +2

      Glad to hear this!

    • @zelee9848
      @zelee9848 Před 3 lety

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  • @inohalajian4151
    @inohalajian4151 Před rokem +2

    On my assignment 😪 today

  • @fishboi1126
    @fishboi1126 Před 2 lety +1

    This video helped me so much thank you

  • @DragoAb_
    @DragoAb_ Před 3 lety +9

    Fsa Florida gang

  • @MiriamMwanyengapo-fl1ij
    @MiriamMwanyengapo-fl1ij Před rokem +1

    Hey, what if you have a topic like, suddenly there was absolute silent, how can you start your introduction

  • @spotify_editzzz
    @spotify_editzzz Před 2 lety

    Thanks for the video. I have grade 5 NAPLAN Tomorrow so I need this.

  • @L1terally_Re1_Ayanam1
    @L1terally_Re1_Ayanam1 Před 2 lety +1

    Topic: hammurabis code was unfair.
    Most laws today are pretty stable. But back in the era of the first civilization, it wasn’t the case.

  • @lizhadley3803
    @lizhadley3803 Před 3 lety +1

    Sign-posting is often discouraged in college writing. If you're a high school student being told to sign-post in your English class, please know that we don't want you doing this in college.
    ~A college English professor

  • @Natalie-dn3wp
    @Natalie-dn3wp Před 5 měsíci +1

    I got my writing test tomorrow I need this😭

  • @arcelotte
    @arcelotte Před 3 lety +3

    I ever saw the long introduction paragraph with rich of evidences, it was as long as the body even the conclusion paragraph. But, it was caused of, "I need". So, should I firm as my style or change with the shorter one. And then, about the hook, almost people including me who really want to make it attractive will add inappropriate thing, is that okay? Thank you

    • @alexcjoechez7881
      @alexcjoechez7881 Před 3 lety +1

      For students, isn’t it great that (profpiperr on IG) can help you solve your assignments and essays. The services are great and since I started using them, my grades have significantly improved. **

    • @arcelotte
      @arcelotte Před 3 lety

      @@alexcjoechez7881 I'll try it and report mu progress for you. Thanks 🤩 I joined with international essay and hope will be worth haha, I should learn more and more.

    • @alexcjoechez7881
      @alexcjoechez7881 Před 3 lety

      @@arcelotte No problem check the progress and update me on how everything is moving. I will be here to help you incase of anything

  • @skz336sky
    @skz336sky Před rokem +3

    me doing my essay and hour before due
    Edit- I got a B

  • @Princessmow123
    @Princessmow123 Před 25 dny

    Thank you teacher ❤❤

  • @kirkjones1862
    @kirkjones1862 Před rokem

    Thank you so much. My students are quite nice but tired of listening to me!

  • @hcrts4ning2
    @hcrts4ning2 Před 10 měsíci

    Thank you! This is exactly what I wanted. Thanks again :)

  • @digantaroy8152
    @digantaroy8152 Před 3 lety +3

    Thank you.