You need to put more weight on your 5th finger in the right hand and more on your thumb in the left to make the cord really sing. Because when you sing a cord you always sing the highest note and if you apply that to your playing your cords willbsing more. Also you have to differentiate something. You know rach wrote this piece because he had a dream of a funeral and when he looked into the coffin it was himself. So the idea is, that de beginning 3 octaves are the bells that ring. And you have to play them differently than the melody. Also in the end i wouldn't bang the piano that much. Maybe it is because you recorded with mobile phone but generally use weight not force to sound good. The only force you use is gravity. Those are some tipps to really get this piece on the next level. If you apply them it will sound more musically. Instead of those things the playing was ok. Also for the fast cord passage I would practice it a little bit more. Also watch your pedalling. It wasn't always very clean. Also play more with metronome. You use a little bit to much rubato and in the end you shouldn't play the theme that much faster than in the beginning. Yeah but that was everything
You need to put more weight on your 5th finger in the right hand and more on your thumb in the left to make the cord really sing. Because when you sing a cord you always sing the highest note and if you apply that to your playing your cords willbsing more. Also you have to differentiate something. You know rach wrote this piece because he had a dream of a funeral and when he looked into the coffin it was himself. So the idea is, that de beginning 3 octaves are the bells that ring. And you have to play them differently than the melody. Also in the end i wouldn't bang the piano that much. Maybe it is because you recorded with mobile phone but generally use weight not force to sound good. The only force you use is gravity.
Those are some tipps to really get this piece on the next level. If you apply them it will sound more musically. Instead of those things the playing was ok. Also for the fast cord passage I would practice it a little bit more. Also watch your pedalling. It wasn't always very clean. Also play more with metronome. You use a little bit to much rubato and in the end you shouldn't play the theme that much faster than in the beginning. Yeah but that was everything
Are you my piano teacher? This is exactly what she is saying to me all the time, word for word😂