"A Doomsday Prepper Hired Me To Watch Over His Bunker, It Came With Rules” Scary Stories Creepypasta

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  • čas přidán 4. 09. 2024
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Komentáře • 104

  • @robertshekels131
    @robertshekels131 Před 2 lety +57

    I have to admit, upon first hearing your narration of the time travelers in the subway car I wasn’t sure if you were worth listening to. After a few more stories, I’m now waiting for new content with excitement. Keep up the great work my friend.

    • @TheMeriot1
      @TheMeriot1 Před 2 lety +6

      What, the time traveler story is literally the best one. That should've cemented your loyalty????

    • @mook3204
      @mook3204 Před 2 lety +2

      That story was utterly depressing

  • @Santient01
    @Santient01 Před 2 lety +17

    The most important rule: THE DOG MUST ALWAYS SURVIVE!

    • @viktorsebastien604
      @viktorsebastien604 Před 2 lety +2

      A-effing-men. If a creepypasta kills a dog in front of me, 👋.

    • @leojedas
      @leojedas Před 10 měsíci

      John Wick's dog agrees but know the harsh truth that isn't always true.

    • @PXR5-PXR5
      @PXR5-PXR5 Před 2 měsíci

      ​@@leojedas
      You should read A boy and his dog by harlan Ellison.

  • @NEMOfishZ92
    @NEMOfishZ92 Před 2 lety +19

    I'm listening to this and I can't help thinking "I'm sure I have heard this before but also I don't remember any of it" lol
    Still this is awesome and I absolutely love your voice

  • @ilovefabricandflowers8543

    Mr. JuJu, the dog always has to survive.

  • @johnbaran4428
    @johnbaran4428 Před 2 lety +6

    DAMN JUJU! THIS WAS THE BEST YET! TY MAN!

  • @TrevorNet
    @TrevorNet Před 2 lety +4

    One Solution: Burn it down. Burn it all down. - Take my dog, take my sanity, I’ll take your home.

  • @verenaamaris804
    @verenaamaris804 Před 2 lety +4

    Finally able to unwind, and relax with one of my very favorite narrators! Thank you very much!

  • @WALKUREX
    @WALKUREX Před 2 lety +1

    Bro the sound effects of knocking and whining of the dog makes it extra extra sc ary 😱

  • @AniSepherd972
    @AniSepherd972 Před 2 lety +2

    as i am not native english speaker, i hear your story in x0.75 speed. ngl it feels surreal

  • @eric63377
    @eric63377 Před 2 lety +18

    Change the title to
    A doomsday prepper hired me to watch over his bunker and I found a list of rules
    And you will gain massive views. People LOVE rules creepy pastas and they will listen to it more likely knowing right off the bat there's rules in this💯.
    Thanks for the pasta and all the great work!
    P.S. I'm not trying to tell you what to do I was just trying to help you out😁😉.

  • @tauniafemrite2963
    @tauniafemrite2963 Před 2 lety +9

    Ooh yay!! I've missed hearing your voice & Awesome stories!!
    Haven't even listened yet... But you never disappoint!!

  • @kiegaming0993
    @kiegaming0993 Před rokem +1

    I heard Roanoke VA and spit out my food. None of these stories are ever close to me lol

    • @slowneeee
      @slowneeee Před rokem

      the “where dreams come to die” part was way too accurate

  • @Teknofobe
    @Teknofobe Před měsícem

    Great narration & a great story. One of the best i've heard in a while. Gratitude.

  • @MrBig-xc9gc
    @MrBig-xc9gc Před 2 lety +5

    In the end I like to think our protagonist and Amelia go back to the cafe where he met Aberdeen, they eat pie and drink coffee. Then he tears up the list of rules, get another dog, live a boring normal life happily ever after.

    • @derpherp1810
      @derpherp1810 Před 2 lety +4

      I like to think instead, they live that boring life for a little while but the rotting jungle from the ashes gives birth to a kingdom of hate. It spreads from the burnt rotten core, its roots infest the spires of concrete and the dominion of man. All that man kept sacred for eons ripped away by a new kingdom of darkness. Now Amelia and the New guy with his dog wander through an violet apocalypse with an uncertain future ahead of them.
      I imagine the news unfolds slowly like a flower slowly unfolding its petals before blossoming and spaying its pollen. The news reports of foliage turning bright colorful colors, this brings joy but then pollen from alien flowers burrows its seeds into the bodies of many turning them in shambling plant like husks of what once used to be human. The rippling affect of this spreading alien jungle mutates everything into fantastical horrors almost like in Annihilation but on steroids. People cower in their broken homes, to fend off hordes of the Shamblers, mutated animals once familiar to mankind twisted into new beautiful and terrifying forms. Maybe the protagonists new dog is affected by this mutation, but still clings onto the love of its trusting owners as a ferocious monstrous hound of hell.

    • @MrBig-xc9gc
      @MrBig-xc9gc Před 2 lety

      @@derpherp1810 Far out! With ideas like those you could submit that to the author and possibly work on a collab together

    • @russiannpcbot6408
      @russiannpcbot6408 Před rokem +2

      There is an unlocked bunker under the tower. Bunker hatches only lock internally. With the owner out of it and dead, it's unlocked. They could get in and wait for the forest fire to burn itself out.

  • @rdf4315
    @rdf4315 Před 2 lety +9

    Wow this video came out right on time, I just started to workout wondering what I was going to listen too thank you juju.

  • @James-pk4jf
    @James-pk4jf Před 2 lety +2

    Looking forward to this 👌

  • @russiannpcbot6408
    @russiannpcbot6408 Před rokem +1

    There is a bunker under the tower. The hatch only locks internally, so they'd be able to get in.

  • @manifestdadon
    @manifestdadon Před 2 lety +4

    Man that was truly an awesome story man!!!!!

  • @micahhurst8986
    @micahhurst8986 Před 2 lety

    Excellent!

  • @JackJack25
    @JackJack25 Před 2 lety +2

    Lovecraft good!

  • @kenolson3064
    @kenolson3064 Před rokem +1

    Alternate ending:
    As Mike and Amelia felt the hot wind at their back, they scrambled up a short embankment. Mike then shoots A-sharp glance to the right then to the left and realizes he has found the road out. The raging inferno created its own weather, blowing the flames back on itself, allowing Mike and Amelia to get distance from the flames. The race from death slowed to a trot, then a determined walk. Heavy breathing gave way to conversation. Mike reaches for amelia's hand Taking it in his amelia Gently squeezes Mike suddenly feels a tingling in his hand which started to run off his wrist and started to pull away Amelia tighten her grip Like a vice Her eyes turning into a dead stare. Mike started to panic. Amelia said it would be uncomfortable for only a moment. Then everything went black. When Mike woke up instead of flames, there was a thick blanket of snow covering everything. How long have I been out? Amelia's voice suddenly answered from behind a large tree, saying, for a season. Your transformation is now complete. You now serve me. Mike looked down at his feet only to see thick bark. Only then, realizing amelia was not behind the tree, amelia was the tree...🫨

  • @JoshuaPonce-qp4xs
    @JoshuaPonce-qp4xs Před 2 měsíci +1

    He has became in his storytelling from two years ago

  • @torianoobashango-el-thecos8573

    Dope!!

  • @avmelidor
    @avmelidor Před 7 měsíci

    Suspenseful ending

  • @bridgetteendsley9420
    @bridgetteendsley9420 Před 2 lety +2

    I was thinking perfect timing as well but for different reasons....relaxing before bed. Thank you 😜

  • @jamesross6459
    @jamesross6459 Před 2 lety +1

    Fucked up killing the dog twice.

  • @alexsummerRain
    @alexsummerRain Před 2 lety +1

    Excellent!!! I luv happy endings!!

  • @nevasoba5953
    @nevasoba5953 Před 2 lety +3

    I could listen to Juju read the phone book

  • @Rose2_007
    @Rose2_007 Před 18 dny

    As a dog owner this broke my heart 😭

  • @ChaosMaker6
    @ChaosMaker6 Před 2 lety +2

    Enjoying your content. Thank you 😉👍

  • @WALKUREX
    @WALKUREX Před 2 lety +11

    Love these rules stories. One suggestion, put the "list of rules" first in the title (ex: I fold a list of rules to survive in the look out tower left by a dooms day prepper from 'murica) wish you nothing but winz

  • @nathanavila5550
    @nathanavila5550 Před 2 lety +1

    The Best Channel on CZcams !!! You are a Amazing Story Teller 👏

  • @alexvarney3683
    @alexvarney3683 Před 4 měsíci +1

    Good story. I was hoping for a few more days of following the rules (maybe even writing some more new ones) to get more invested, otherwise good

  • @mattleofric1766
    @mattleofric1766 Před rokem +1

    My ending: They escape the forest and make it onto the main road onto a bus stop. They take the next available bus back into town, and on the bus ride back they quickly become attached to each other. After they get back to town, they take a plane far away from that place, get married in the suburbs near where his parents live, and raise a family of their own.
    The end.

  • @beccaboo3040
    @beccaboo3040 Před 2 lety +1

    Awesome thanks juju 👍😁

  • @JTMTTJ
    @JTMTTJ Před 2 lety

    Best dog

  • @eruiz1282
    @eruiz1282 Před 2 lety +1

    Your stories are the best.

  • @cherryclarke4704
    @cherryclarke4704 Před rokem +1

    JUJU Your the best l sub, b4 listening l love your stories your stories are amazing

  • @gabethegreat722
    @gabethegreat722 Před 2 lety +1

    TRUE ROMANCE - One of Tarantino's greatest movies of all time 👍

    • @erikc7267
      @erikc7267 Před 2 lety

      When Harvey Keitel told the story about the Sicililians and the Moors, I was no more good! Plus James Gandolfini was in this and he was truly menacing!!

  • @bubasa87
    @bubasa87 Před 2 lety

    Nice take on a "rules" story. That ending was kinda hype. 👍

  • @junelledembroski9183
    @junelledembroski9183 Před 2 lety

    Love the music at the end. I think he did all those thing and then epic battles the queen dying and seeing Alabama as Amelia holds him and cries and as she stops crying she becomes something else. She becomes The Ending.

  • @joshbotkin2547
    @joshbotkin2547 Před 7 dny

    So crazy I live 45 minutes from Roanoke Virginia 😂

  • @butchgarner3911
    @butchgarner3911 Před 2 měsíci

    a Hitchcock story...seen some of his movies but never dreamed i would hear one of his stories...

  • @anomaly2990
    @anomaly2990 Před 3 měsíci

    A bag of kibble for your dog for 8 weeks? You would need at least 60#

  • @krystian9186
    @krystian9186 Před 2 lety +1

    18:30 is this a dog sound from minecraft?

  • @criticalthot4179
    @criticalthot4179 Před rokem

    Wow .That was an amazing tale. I can't what to hear more from this writer. I have daydreams in my head. But I wouldn't know how to put them to paper. I guess there meant only for me. But I love story's. Stories like this amazing tale. It should be in a book . I listen to a story call The Edge of the universe.it was a amazing story as well. Please keep writing. You are amazing.

  • @7sevensevern
    @7sevensevern Před 2 lety

    Certainly the best on CZcams. Keep up the good work buddy!

  • @rogermilhoan6179
    @rogermilhoan6179 Před 2 lety

    Beautiful storys. I'm on the edge of my seat.

  • @richardsargent8347
    @richardsargent8347 Před 2 lety

    Awesome got used to ur voice now can't get enough lol ur the best

  • @CircleOfInevitability
    @CircleOfInevitability Před měsícem +1

    Sounds like all this happened because the mom was insane.

  • @Slim4eva
    @Slim4eva Před 2 lety

    Can't wait...thnx bro

  • @samratchakraborty1513
    @samratchakraborty1513 Před 2 lety

    This creepypasta gives some resident evil 4 vibes!!

  • @maynardskunk7612
    @maynardskunk7612 Před 2 lety +2

    Just found your channel a couple days ago, you have great stories that you pick. I also listen to Dr creepin and nature's temper. I don't think I can fall asleep without a creepypasta anymore. Keep up the great work and I hope that your channel grows

  • @danieltriplett2160
    @danieltriplett2160 Před 2 lety +1

    Hahaha Alabama.. true romance hahaha

    • @eric63377
      @eric63377 Před 2 lety

      There is no true romance sadly. I mean there is in movies 😑.

  • @richardsargent8347
    @richardsargent8347 Před 2 lety

    Great stories listened to everyone

  • @TimeMariner
    @TimeMariner Před 2 lety +2

    I made it about 10 sentences in....ima head on out.

  • @conniec2461
    @conniec2461 Před 2 lety

    Wow best one yet😊. But the ending..what does that mean?? Fire coming toward him...he needs to get to work to have his own ending🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️

  • @Undeadaccount
    @Undeadaccount Před 10 měsíci

    The author wanted to kill alabama like 3 times in the story 4 if you include the opening oh im not leaving without my dog

  • @sighthoundlady15
    @sighthoundlady15 Před 2 lety +1

    Dang I’m just sad about Alabama ☹️

  • @dragoshjs
    @dragoshjs Před 29 dny

    I’m not certain that people understand what WiFi is …

  • @fryzsolisgonzales762
    @fryzsolisgonzales762 Před 2 lety

    Hit that like you guy's this man fr deserve it lil 2sum 3sum likes is no bueno we gta support our guy

  • @cieranmckechnie209
    @cieranmckechnie209 Před 2 lety

    Love the stories keep it up ❤️

  • @kimdodson6089
    @kimdodson6089 Před 2 lety

    Ugh alabama! And no ending! Please tell me another will be coming please

  • @did_I_hurt_your_fee_fees

    The sound effects are getting a bit much but the story telling us great.

  • @bigcountrymountainman9740

    Hold on, if he got out , And now hes got to get to work On these things , what does that mean? Well, I know what it means that hes got to get to work on things but he said he made it out. Great story but I'm lost

  • @adamc9834
    @adamc9834 Před 6 měsíci +1

    Czech?

  • @beagleridge5695
    @beagleridge5695 Před 2 lety

    Why did the dog have to die

  • @MC-gt7xn
    @MC-gt7xn Před 2 lety

    ♥️ me some JUJU!!

  • @GR-bn3xj
    @GR-bn3xj Před 2 lety +1

    The first "list" story I loved. Not so much now.. the idea is way past its prime. You can only listen to so many of the same premise. This would have been good two years ago

  • @vincentbenites7514
    @vincentbenites7514 Před 2 lety +4

    And first like yay me...🍪 me

    • @eric63377
      @eric63377 Před 2 lety

      Hot 🍪's N🥛 for all of us in here.😋😊

  • @hennies9509
    @hennies9509 Před 3 měsíci

    Was he not given a weapon? How must he protect without that? This mans voice is not easy to follow, sorry, my friend.

  • @magicpyroninja
    @magicpyroninja Před 2 lety

    New series?

  • @vincentbenites7514
    @vincentbenites7514 Před 2 lety +3

    First

  • @angelaverbowski995
    @angelaverbowski995 Před 2 lety

    #529-☑️👍

  • @Jose_Cuevas
    @Jose_Cuevas Před 2 lety

    😀❤❤❤❤👍

  • @kristijensen7457
    @kristijensen7457 Před 3 měsíci

    28:07 my apologies but I don’t even watch movies where the dog dies. You really should include a caution or an advisory or something if the dog dies. We shouldn’t have to get triggered like this.

  • @jadele122
    @jadele122 Před rokem

    The rapture isn’t biblical. Lol

  • @debacofzomb9889
    @debacofzomb9889 Před rokem

    I dun like this story
    😭😭😭😭😞😞😭😭😭😭
    Seriously. This story sucks.
    You are awesome tho Juju.

  • @kevincaruthers5412
    @kevincaruthers5412 Před rokem

    You killed the dog.
    unsub

  • @talkingwithtangi2914
    @talkingwithtangi2914 Před 2 lety +1

    He has the best stories but I simply cannot get into the voice. It seems as if the words are inflated at the wrong time.

  • @donaldrouse3646
    @donaldrouse3646 Před 2 měsíci

    Hate it

  • @donaldrouse3646
    @donaldrouse3646 Před 2 měsíci

    This is bull

  • @edwinalvarez8754
    @edwinalvarez8754 Před 2 lety +1

    Why do you accentuate the end of every last word it's annoying