So this borrows from movie Battleships (an old battleship turned museum fights invading aliens) and Star trek (senior officer dies(from radiation) by sacrificing himself to save the crew) did I miss any ?
Ok,we are under attack. Where the f*ck is the com to the earth fleet? What is there ETA to this sector? Its like the movie battleship where they have to grab a ww2 vessel to fight the ailian ship with no help from the main fleet. At least write in that the main force cant get there until x time.
I liked this one. Better than most of them that are all exactly the same...right down to names. Some of the really bad ones even have main characters change sex. All of a sudden Commander Hawkins (there is ALWAYS a Hawkins) is a female when it was "yes sir for the first hour. So this is ok.
Hmm, the admiral sacrifices himself in the radioactive core to save the ship and crew. I was waiting for someone to say, "the needs of the many...". There is a total lack of imagination here...No thumbs up for you!!!
you know what made me confused is the fact that we only hear about the few members, none of them died save the admiral so why does it keep saying "the crews we lost?"
It's becoming an annoyance that 2 words in particular can't seem to be avoided in these stories. Diverse and inclusion. The addition of these words in current stories give them the taint of modern politics and break the suspension of disbelief and submersion in the story.
I am in 45 seconds and already this screams "Battlestar Galactica".
That or Battleship, starring Rihanna
@@Justsomeguyyuyu my mind went to the thunderstruck scene at first few minutes
All the more impressive when you remember you can't hear screams in space. "0_o"
Not gonna lie, the ancient defense system "hidden" on the moon was hamfisted enough to kill it for me. Still leave a like for the solid work overall 👍
THIS IS MUCH MORE THAN JUST ANOTHER STORY , great job A Plus ++++ ,
Magic flagship, put itself back together after being blown to pieces. Wow!
DAMNED COMMERCIALS!!
When I hear multiple reminders of crewed by academics and retired military veterans in the first 16 mins. it's time to go.
Great short stories
Why did they not attempt to contact Terran command or the main military responsible for defense of the realm? I mean they will need help right?
Ground control would do that.
That was my first question. Wouldn't they send out a warning and sitrep
@@dwightehowell8179the admiral wouldn't take that for granted. Or the sitrep. He'd follow training
Great story.
Sounds alot like the Battlestar Galactica remake
good ... enjoyed the story.... after listening to many earth-minded writers ... name of writer plz ... thanks
So this borrows from movie Battleships (an old battleship turned museum fights invading aliens) and Star trek (senior officer dies(from radiation) by sacrificing himself to save the crew) did I miss any ?
Nope. Pretty much on the mark. Battleship was a cool movie.
Not to mention it looks surprisingly like an imperial star destroyer lmao
The planet Viridian 3 from Star Trek: generations
Go getem hawkins😊😊😊😊
I like it :) I have to ask, though... Is Artemis' voice devoid of emotion? I'm not ENTIRELY sure, yet. ;) :P
This guy's no Kirk that's for sure. Maybe a pickard lmao
Ok,we are under attack. Where the f*ck is the com to the earth fleet? What is there ETA to this sector? Its like the movie battleship where they have to grab a ww2 vessel to fight the ailian ship with no help from the main fleet. At least write in that the main force cant get there until x time.
Story is like a old battleship being reactivated.
I liked this one. Better than most of them that are all exactly the same...right down to names. Some of the really bad ones even have main characters change sex. All of a sudden Commander Hawkins (there is ALWAYS a Hawkins) is a female when it was "yes sir for the first hour.
So this is ok.
Also, it appears each story uuses the same names. Get more names to use!
Hmm, the admiral sacrifices himself in the radioactive core to save the ship and crew. I was waiting for someone to say, "the needs of the many...". There is a total lack of imagination here...No thumbs up for you!!!
you know what made me confused is the fact that we only hear about the few members, none of them died save the admiral so why does it keep saying "the crews we lost?"
USS, whatever
It's becoming an annoyance that 2 words in particular can't seem to be avoided in these stories.
Diverse and inclusion.
The addition of these words in current stories give them the taint of modern politics and break the suspension of disbelief and submersion in the story.
44 minutes of this shit??