There's something here, its just not quite at the surface yet. I like it a lot, but it needs like final touches. I'm a layman with music so I can't give advice, but I feel like with some slight arrangement, you could probably go more clearly for the vibe you're going for. Right now it feels like the song itself is confused on what vibe it's supposed to give. Is something lurking? Is the gloom this song is made for empty? Is it supposed to be such a thick gloom you're not sure if you're jumping at shadows or something is actually moving around in there? Hopeful to see future content though, you got something here.
sick art man
There's something here, its just not quite at the surface yet. I like it a lot, but it needs like final touches. I'm a layman with music so I can't give advice, but I feel like with some slight arrangement, you could probably go more clearly for the vibe you're going for. Right now it feels like the song itself is confused on what vibe it's supposed to give. Is something lurking? Is the gloom this song is made for empty? Is it supposed to be such a thick gloom you're not sure if you're jumping at shadows or something is actually moving around in there? Hopeful to see future content though, you got something here.